TRINITY ISEH. Preparation for Extended Writing - Task 4
Look at the following question:
Write a review of a film you watched recently for your school magazine, Write approximately 150-180 words. Explain the storyline,
soy what you liked or distiked about the film and whether or not you would recommend people tc go and see it.
Read the example answer and the notes carefully
‘Give your chy In Paragraph 1, give |
| review a title basic information
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me of the directorial debut. This comedy movie, starring well-known child actor name, genre, dire
being Frankie Wright, is based loosely on a true story about a young boy called cast, storyline
) Jackson from the African Maasai tribe who goes to live with his aunt in ' =
—= New York, En Paragraph 2
describe the plot,
The story begins in Kenya, where Jackson’s mother and father are tragi- parradasrTéaveal
1 dont ave the ending,
to write about cally killed ina lion attack. Jackson's only surviving relative is an aunt who :
@ real film, You lives in the Big Apple. He has no choice but to leave Kenya for good and
an make the start anew life in America, But how will he cope? Tn Paragraph 3, say
story up. what was good or bad
However, about the film, Your
Although the film begins with a very sad event, once Jackson starts his
review can be posit
‘adventure in New York, it's just one laugh after another. The script is
right help you
negative or neutral
come up with
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Exercise 2
Now its your turn, Write an answer to the same question. Plan your paragraphs carefully before you begin and check your
answer at the end, as you've zlready been show.
‘There are many different types of review. Here are sample outline plans for some more.
Book
review
Paragraph 1: Give the name and author of book, genre and brief plot summary.
Paragraph 2: Describe the story but don’t reveal the ending.
Paragraph 3: Say what ycu liked or disliked about the story.
Paragraph 4: Say whether or not you'd recommend it and for whom.
Hotel
review
Paragraph 1: Give the name and location of the hotel and how long you stayed there for.
Paragraph 2: Describe it
{how it looks and its facilities).
Paragraph 3: Say what you liked or disliked about the hotel.
Paragraph 4: Say how much it costs, whether or not you think it’s good value for money and who
should stay there (e.g, singles, couples or families)
Product
Paragraph 1: Give the name (model, brand, etc.), brief description of product and how long you
used/tested it for.
Paragraph 2: Describe its appearance and function in detail
Paragraph 3: Say what you liked and disliked about the product and compare it with other simitar
products,
Paragraph 4: Say how much it costs, whether or not you think it’s good value for money and if you
would recommend it.
Restaurant
review
Paragraph 1: Give the name and location of restaurant and when you ate there.
Paragraph 2: Describe the rastaurant (décor, atmosphere, atc.) and your meal
Paragraph 3: Say what you liked or disliked about the restaurant and your meal.
Paragraph 4: Say whether or not you think it’s good value for money, if you would recommend it
land for whom (e.g. singles, couples, families) or what (e.g. parties, special occasions, romance, ete.)
destination
review
Paragraph 1: Give the name of the place, location and how long you were there for.
Paragraph 2: Describe the place and what there is to do there.
Paragraph 3: Say what you liked or distked about it,
Paragraph 4: Say whether or not you would recommend going there and for whom (e.g. singles,
‘couples or families) and how much it costs.
sparation for Extended Writing - Task 4