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2023) 163/B2 level, grade A, 30/32

Email-correction
Hello,

I'm also really exited for about the fact that I will stay at you.

I think it is better for us to relax at home on the first evening as because I don't
really like rock music.

I have hurt hurted my foot while I was running and now I can barely walk so I
don't think it is a good idea to go climbing.

I have a question, can I bring my cat, because my parents will be out of town and
nobody will be able to take care of it?

Your really close friend,

Razvan

Story-correction
The Arrival

As the plane flew lower, Lou saw the golden beaches of the island below. He
was amazed of by the beautiful island that slowly emerged appeared. When the
plane got below the clouds, Lou realised how big the island actually was is. At the
airport Lou went to get his luggage and then he ate a sandwich that was really
tasty good. When he got to the hotel, he went in his room, left his baggage there
and then immediately imedieatly went to play outside. He played outside until it
was pitch black. He went to eat because beacause he was were really hungry and
then went to sleep. Overall it was a good day for Lou but that was just the start of
his adventures on this really big island.

Remember-your story should be about 100 words-NO LESS! It can be more,

like 110-115, but NO LESS!
Use- Past tense
Structure your story-Introduction, content, ending/conclusion

He opened the eyes in amazement, it was so beautiful. As he was flying for

the first time by plane, he was very excited about the whole experience. On
landing he was waited by his friends. They headed afterwards to the turtle centre.
One week of new experiences was waiting for Lou. He had applied to the
turtle centre to volunteer. Barely he arrived to the camp that, together with his
friends, went to see the turtles at the sunset. When they approached, they saw
something unique. Hundreds of turtles were slowly emerging from the sea and
heading to their night refugees.
Lou realised those would be memories that he would keep for the rest of his
life. He even thought to become a marine biologist/conservationist.