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Here isan extract from an email you received from your
English frend Olver
1m going awey to university in September and Pi be lving in
‘tive Hall of Residence. m 3 afraid that I'l be lonely and
homesick. Have you got any advice?
‘white Olver an emallgiving him your advice (120-160 words)
Hioliver,
[A_}1) really hope tve helped you. Write and 2) tel me
‘hom you get on.
[E[_]3)¥m 60 sorry you're worried about going avay to
‘Unweraiy. AS you know, Ii the same last year, 0 4) think
‘can help you.
[EL] the fest thing you should do when you activa is
to noduce youre to sero of the ether students in the Halls
of Residence, 6) By doing this, you will make some new
friends quchy and you wil have no time to feel alone, 7) 1
were you, If also join some university clubs and societies,
£8) This way, yout have aot of fun wing some new activities
‘and you'll havo the chanes to mest siden that you have
someting in common wih, toc. It you stil feel a ite
homesick, dont forget tat this is normal and that 8) you
ould always go home for a weekend. | di that all the time!
Best wishes,
Thomas
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‘the ones in thelist below.
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me know what happens * Then + it must be awful tobe
+ One thing you ean 2 » Another thing you ean do is
+ [hope Ive been of some hep. + I'm ony too glad to help
‘Some of the phrases in the extract below are too formal.
Replace the phrases in bold with the more appropriate
Informal ones in the ist.
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rubric, then look at the chart
below and read the advice.
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of each piece of advice. Write
them inthe boxes.
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extract from it
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the cass. Can you heb?
Wit your emall giving Suzy
Your advice (120-160 word).
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plan below.
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Suzy,
Intoduction
(Para 1) express sympathy & reasons
forwning