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{GI Fea the rubric and thon the model Put the paragraphs Inthe correct or Here isan extract from an email you received from your English frend Olver 1m going awey to university in September and Pi be lving in ‘tive Hall of Residence. m 3 afraid that I'l be lonely and homesick. Have you got any advice? ‘white Olver an emallgiving him your advice (120-160 words) Hioliver, [A_}1) really hope tve helped you. Write and 2) tel me ‘hom you get on. [E[_]3)¥m 60 sorry you're worried about going avay to ‘Unweraiy. AS you know, Ii the same last year, 0 4) think ‘can help you. [EL] the fest thing you should do when you activa is to noduce youre to sero of the ether students in the Halls of Residence, 6) By doing this, you will make some new friends quchy and you wil have no time to feel alone, 7) 1 were you, If also join some university clubs and societies, £8) This way, yout have aot of fun wing some new activities ‘and you'll havo the chanes to mest siden that you have someting in common wih, toc. It you stil feel a ite homesick, dont forget tat this is normal and that 8) you ould always go home for a weekend. | di that all the time! Best wishes, Thomas Replace the words and phrases in bold in the model with ‘the ones in thelist below. + It you do tis +t might be a good idea to me know what happens * Then + it must be awful tobe + One thing you ean 2 » Another thing you ean do is + [hope Ive been of some hep. + I'm ony too glad to help ‘Some of the phrases in the extract below are too formal. Replace the phrases in bold with the more appropriate Informal ones in the ist. ‘Why don't you * Ike * be abe to give you some mare help ‘go to see a peycholegst + help « you're high up +I} were you Gi Writing An email giving advice Writing ‘SANSTORNING) Read the rubric, then look at the chart below and read the advice. Think ofthe expected results of each piece of advice. Write them inthe boxes. ‘Your Engish friend Suzy has sentyou an emal Here an extract from it ast started college and rm afraid of standing up in font of. the cass. Can you heb? Wit your emall giving Suzy Your advice (120-160 word). ‘advice 1 Expected resut By cong, Prepare your [= speech 1 1 ‘Advice? Expected result Practise in Tis way frontota |e a Use the ideas in the diagram ‘towrite your email. Folow the plan below. pa Suzy, Intoduction (Para 1) express sympathy & reasons forwning

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