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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the

past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments.


Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people.

To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population


outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS- July, 2023

Balanced: Advantages and disadvantages are similar.

4 Ideas for an essay:

PESTHEL:

Advantages of Ageing Population:


1. New parents get support, and the grandchildren get unconditional love
from their Grandparents.
2. Values of sustainability will remain intact.

Disadvantages:
1. A lot of money goes in social security and social support.
2. Healthcare system gets overburdened.

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Nowadays, many individuals are battling chronic health issues from a


young age.

Why is this?
What can be done to address this issue?

IELTS- June, 2023

PESTHEL:

Why:
1. Stressful lifestyle.
2. Addiction to smartphones/lazy lifestyle.

What can be done?


1. Awareness about mental health issues should be spread and focus on
self-care.
2. Wellness should be made more affordable.
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5 Golden Tips that you need to follow:

1. Do not repeat words in a paragraph. (Diverse vocabulary)


2. Appropriate usage of a connectors.
3. Grammatical Range
4. Coherent.
5. Ideas should be COMPLETELY RELEVANT.
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Senior citizens play a vital role in the development of a society. Globally,
individuals are living longer than as compared to the previous
generations, and some believe that this creates challenges for the
administration while some opine that it is leaving a positive impact on the
world. This essay will discuss how the benefits and drawbacks of an old
population balance each other.

There are several advantages of having senior citizens live longer. To


begin with, the people who have become parents recently get a lot of
support to manage parenthood, and the grandchildren are able to get
the unconditional love from their grandparents. Nowadays, with the
rising work pressure, having such aid makes it convenient to raise a
child. Moreover, there are some great values about sustainability that the
younger generations can learn from the older ones. For instance, the
people who have lived long can help teach a lot about staying
resourceful and saving money for hard times. These factors impact the
society in a positive way.

However, there are certain issues that come up for the government
because of an ageing population. Firstly, a lot of money goes towards
social security and pensions which could have been spent elsewhere.
For example, a lot of western countries do not have enough taxpayers
because of which they are opening doors to immigrants to support
welfare of their people. Additionally, the healthcare system gets
overburdened because of the repeated visits of older people. The
chances of them getting sick are higher and hence, they visit the
hospitals often which makes it difficult to access these facilities for a
common man. These challenges can put a toll on the administration of
any country.

This essay has discussed the positive and negative aspects of


possessing a high number of senior citizens. To conclude, the
advantages and the disadvantages go hand in hand.

250 MINIMUM WORDS.


275-300.
Nowadays, many individuals are battling chronic health issues from a
young age.

Why is this?
What can be done to address this issue?

IELTS- June, 2023

PESTHEL:

Why:
1. Stressful lifestyle.
2. Addiction to smartphones/lazy lifestyle.

What can be done?


1. Awareness about mental health issues should be spread and focus on
self-care.
2. Wellness should be made more affordable.

Health plays vital role in everyone's life. A large section of the population today is
fighting with one or the other chronic disease at a very young age. This essay will
discuss the causes behind this problem as well some solutions to the same.

There are several reasons behind young people facing these health challenges. To
begin with, youngsters are leading a stressful lifestyle. They are facing a lot of
competition and lack of job opportunities, and because of this, their bodies feel
stressed resulting in the development of chronic diseases. Moreover, with the
modernisation of our way of living, everything has become easier and therefore it
makes us more lazy and comfortable. For example, one of the major causes behind
diabetes and high blood pressure is the lack of physical activity. These factors are
producing an unhealthy generation for the future.

Several solutions are there to avoid these health problems. Firstly, awareness should
be spread about different psychological issues that people face. The young people
should be taught on how to manage stress and cope-up with uncertain situations
with the help of scientific methods and techniques. There can be more informative
sessions, and the taboo associated with mental health should go away. Furthermore,
it should not be unaffordable for a common man to take care of his wellness. For
instance, the cost of healthy food options is way higher than unhealthy ones, and it is
not easy to afford a gym membership for everyone. Taking these steps will ensure
that we have a fit population.

This essay has discussed the causes behind youngsters falling trap to
lifelong diseases, and proposed certain solutions to avoid the same.
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