Engels Taal & Tekst II, part 1

Editing: language exercises

Read the following excerpts and assess whether the underlined part is correct or not. If the
underlined part is not idiomatic, what should you write instead? (Try to only change what
is underlined; do not rewrite the entire sentence.) What tools did you use to evaluate the
original, and to find and check your corrections? List them and/or include screenshots of
your searches.

Sentence 1

In a few days’ time, an organic store chain approached me. They wanted GR’EAT Granola in
their stores. From there, the snowball effect took place and by Christmas, I was requested in
15 stores.

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?

Sentence 2

Ask yourself this question: do you complete your passion for nice clothes?

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?

Sentence 3

Q: What is your style?

A: To be honest, I am scared of having a signature style because I am afraid of being pushed
into a certain box.

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?

Sentence 4

Working late hours or double shifts affect studies in a great way and sometimes can lead to
big-time failure.

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?

Sentence 5

Exam instructions:
- Clearly write your name, first name and student number on each sheet
- Write readable
- Only use official exam paper

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?

Sentence 6

Chewy dates with almond butter, chocolate, sea salt and granola.
The perfect snack for big cravings – dates will bring you the energy you need to keep up with
your day!

Is the underlined part correct or not?

If not, how should you rewrite this?

What tools did you use to check and rewrite?