Professional Documents
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Date
I am writing
in connection with…
INTRODUCTION/ to complain about…/ to express my dissatisfaction with… to
OPENING PARAGRAPH draw your attention to…
I have to say that I was not at all satisfied with...
I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with…
(2-3 PARAGRAPHS)
I would like you to investigate this matter, and let me know your
decision.
I would like a full/partial refund as soon as possible.
Could you please arrange for me to receive a new
REQUEST FOR ACTION
(radio/CD, etc) or refund my money in full?
withholding the payment or We must insist on an immediate replacement/full refund.
Unless I receive the goods by the end of this week, I will have no
returning the goods. choice but to cancel my order.
-Replacement
-A change in procedure or
policy.
Pilar Martinez
23 St. Jose Street
28941 Madrid
18 Summer Street
00155 London
I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with your last letter with details of our rental conditions change
wich make our situation difficult.
To begin with, the last rent rise was three months ago and the new rise will mean we have to get one tenant
which is impossible, because my husband and I are expecting a son who will be born in March and we will need all
the bedrooms.
Added to all this, last month I wrote about the air conditioning unit. It does not work and the repair work has not
yet been carried out.
I would be grateful if you could arrange for the heating to be fixed within the next two days and I would
appreciate it if you could contact me on 003412344321 to discuss about the matter.
Respectfully yours,
(Signature)
Pillar Martinez
Date
"We have received your letter about the damaged goods you received."
"We are extremely sorry about it."
INTRODUCTION/
OPENING PARAGRAPH I have received your letter about the damaged shipment you
received through Air Mail and regret for the inconvenience
that it has caused you.
MAIN PART From your account of the problem, I am quite sure that
(State what exactly happened) your request for the $240 adjustment on the damage to the
5 boxes of premium Vases will be granted.
Specifying the figures or
amount of the claim or
adjustment being sought
(2-3 PARAGRAPHS)
I have just received your March 24 letter about the damaged shipment you received through Green Tree Freight
and regret the inconvenience that it has caused you.
From your account of the problem, I am quite sure that your request for the $240 adjustment on the damage to
the 2 crates of the $240 adjustment on the damage to the 2 crates of Valjean Cristal stemware will be granted. A
certain amount of breakage of this sort does unavoidably occur in cross-country shipping; I am sorry that it was
your company that had to be the one to suffer the delay.
I must remind you to keep the damaged crates in the same condition in which you received them until one of our
representatives can inspect them. That inspection should take place within 2 weeks.
If all is in order, as it sounds to be in your letter, you can expect the full reimbursement within 2 weeks after our
representative’s inspection. I hope this unfortunate accident will keep you from having merchandise shipped by
Green tree Freight in the Future.
Sincerely,
(Signature)