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By Karimah Nurlatifah………………………………………………….……….12
by Marwah ..........................................................................................................66
MADASARI
OKKY MADASARI
MADASARI
MADASARI
MADASARI
WOLLSTONECRAFT’S THOUGHTS
OKKY MADASARI
MADASARI’S ENTROK
BY OKKY MADASARI
MADASARI
MADASARI
OKKY MADASARI
ENTROK
by Nizar Ulhaq…………………………………………………………………413
MADASARI
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such as novels and short stories. Literary writers use several elements that
beautiful words to make their work sound pleasing and aesthetic. One
example is that there is advice about the life we live in different packaging
and then sent to literary connoisseurs. The word "literature" is often used
1988: 10).As for the function of literature, the classical opinion regarding
that literature has the function of utile et dulce (to teach and to delight)
(Ali Imron Al-Ma'ruf, 2017, p. 32) states that the function of literature is
didactic heresy: entertaining and teaching something. It is necessary to
deepen this literature in order to know what is meant by literature and the
evaluate literary works. In Indonesia, the term literary criticism and its use
only took place in the early twentieth century. The use of the term cannot
(Semi, 1989) said that literary criticism has three functions, including: (1)
To foster and develop literature. (2) To foster and appreciate culture. (3)
To bolster literature.
The novel Entrok tells the story of the lives of two women named
Sumarni or fondly called Marni and their biological child, Rahayu. As two
people who have blood ties, but there are differences found in each of
them. Marni is told as a woman who does not have the skills to read and
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she adheres to. The title of this novel attracts the attention of novelist
underwear. The beginning of this novel opens with the story of Marni
who has a simple desire, namely wanting to have Entrok because she has
grown up so that breasts also grow on her chest, besides that Entrok is
also used by her peers. However, in reality, the financial situation of her
family does not support Marni's wishes and she still tries to fulfill her
desires by doing various ways. As time goes by, Rahayu has grown up and
at that time she also realized that her mother was a moneylender and
because in her belief this was considered idolatrous. It seems that there
are several dominant themes that characterize the story of Marni and
telling in this novel feels local or beautiful because local sentences are
that happened decades ago and there are several social situations that
were revealed at that time and are still happening today. This is as if a
concern about the future picture that will or will still happen if in the past
there were issues such as politics and the arbitrariness of the rulers and it
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After reading and understanding the novel Entrok, The theory of literary
criticism that is the reference in this essay is Literary Decorum and The
enjoyment. This theory says that every lierary work must provide benefits
or a lesson after the literary work is read because it will provide values.
Utile et Dulce which means that a good literary work is a literary work
emotion), and tends to judge the value of the work according to its succes
in achieving that aim. The pragmatic approach of the reader plays the role
good or bad, worthy or not worthy, or not worthy. The work produced
by the author is fully the responsibility of the reader, while the author
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does not have the authority. It is the reader who determines every thing
atmosfered that built by Madasri which is affecting the feel of the reader.
―Ibu menangis dengan suara keras. Perdebatan tentang ke- yakinan kami selalu
berakhir seperti ini. Tangisan Ibu dan kebencianku yang makin bertambah.
Aku dan Ibu seperti makin menjauh. Bukan raga, karena aku dan Ibu bukan
orang
yang betah marah berlama-lama. Ibu memaki dengan suara tinggi saat marah, dan
diakhiri de- ngan tangisan. Aku tak mau kalah. Tapi pertengkaran kami tidak
berlanjut dengan tak saling bertegur sapa selama ber- hari-hari. Kami berbicara lagi,
it creates a fight between a daughter and her mother. This has more or
less effect on every reader who reads. Including the writer who was
affecting, and must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. And the
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writer feels that the two paragraphs above have succeeded in manifesting
what Horace wrote in his work. This quote has been able to affect and
‖Lha Bapak sama Ibu katanya mau ke pasar, kok malah ke sini?‖
‖Tadi dicegat pak tentara, katanya yang nggak ke sini ber- arti nggak patuh sama
negara. Ya sudah to... daripada dipen- jara, kami ke sini saja. Nyoblos, terus
bakulan di sini.‖
Sepertinya, pemilu memang memberi rezeki buat Ibu. Da- gangannya banyak yang
dibeli orang. Memang benar kata Bu Lastri. Pemilu memberi ketenteraman buat
As like the narration previously stated, it is true that when elections are
held, almost all activities carried out by local people who carry out
elections are temporarily suspended. But not for Marni and her husband.
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Madasari's creative writing style, she made the above incident an
between parties and their voters with the aim of making one party
become one of the elected parties. The writer considers the above as one
applicability to life.
‖Malam itu saya tidak pulang. Sambil ngisi waktu main kartu sama teman-teman
yang juga lagi mangkal. Ada enam orang. Mainnya di pangkalan pasar, tidak pakai
duit, wong kami nggak punya duit. Terus tiba-tiba mobil patroli datang. Empat
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orang berjaket hijau turun dari mobil. Kami semua disuruh naik ke mobil. Saya
gemetaran, terpeleset, eh, kaki saya ditendang. Di tengah jalan, saat mau ke markas,
mobil itu macet kehabisan bensin. Kami berenam disuruh mendorong sampai markas.
Di markas kami diberi pengarahan. Kami dilarang main kartu di pinggir jalan,
sekalipun tak pakai uang. Katanya itu mengganggu pemandangan. Setelah dapat
wejangan itu saya diizinkan pulang. Tapi pas mau pulang tiba-tiba... saya... mmm...
kentut. Tapi sumpah mati... saya tidak sengaja. Sudah saya tahan tapi nggak bisa.
Saya bukan mau menghina...‖ Mehong menangis lagi. Kentut itu begitu membekas
tenang lalu melanjutkan ceritanya lagi. ‖Lalu... petugas itu marah. Kami dibawa ke
Kali Manggis. Di pinggir kali kami dihajar... dipukul, ditendang... lalu disuruh
nyebur ke sungai... Saya kedinginan... Rasanya seperti masuk es... Wong tengah
As like the narration above, at that time, the author wants to maximize
the word "kentut" as a familiar word as well as a new thing. This word
resulted where when a villager who was caught peeing while being
being sentenced to soak in the river overnight. The writer puts his
position as a reader and considers that although the author may intend to
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However, in that case this is a bit too much, because if only the case was
replaced with a slightly more complex one, it would seem more realistic.
Horace may also judge this description as the author's authority to give
effect as Horace stated, that "In addition to using taste and care in
arranging words, you will express yourself most effectively if you give
2017, p. 73)
As the final effect and message of the novel, the writer can feel
what they feel when he see this case in perspective as a reader, namely
when they are carried away by the sad atmosphere built by the author of
Teja. Duka atas kematian Teja adalah duka atas hilangnya kebersamaan di hari-
hari yang telah lalu. Duka untuk Rahayu saat ini adalah duka atas hari-hari
panjang di masa yang akan datang. Kesedihanku kehilangan Teja adalah kesedihan
perempuan yang ditinggal mati suaminya. Dan kesedihanku kali ini adalah
kepedihan hati ibu yang akan melihat anak kandungnya sengsara sampai di akhir
hidupnya. Bukan hanya Rahayu yang telah mati sebelum kematian itu datang. Aku
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With the narration above, the reader can be influenced by touching
dictions about how it feels to lose someone dear to her, and how
everyone will face the end of her life. The author is able to create an
quote, "Only then, O Telephus or Peleus, will your misfortune affect me.
If your words are not appropriate, I shall laugh or go to sleep. Sad words
are appropriate to a sorrowful face; furious words are fitting to the angry;
gay jests to the marry; serious words to the solemn. (Nurrachman, 2017,
p. 75)
The writer concludes that there are certain effects and messages in
the Entrok Novel that follow Horace's rules: Utile et Dulce (to Teach and
conditions of election and crisis, the politeness can save yourself, and the
beauty of the atmosphere as a reminder that we love our loved ones while
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THE INFERIORITY OF WOMEN CHARACTER IN SOCIETY
In the entrok novel, It tells about the history of marni‘s family and
their social life in the society wit others. Marni has a husban and two
children. Marni is a good wife, she take after her children untul they got
mature and to be good person. Marni has good relationship with others
she tried to communicate with other well. She is the humble wife and
harwork person. Marni is a wife who can not read and always adore the
ancestors. In each night, she carried out her habitual adore under the tree
to worship on Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as her God. Not only she
carried out the ritual worship every night but also she tried to give some
ritual offerings to find out some idols through her praying under the tree.
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She never knows and sees God everywhere but she believes that God and
idol already listen on her hope and praying. She carried out her action and
adore on Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as the Great God who always
help and listen her praying and hope. By her adore and her ritual habit,
she tried to keep her family and live together with her family. She is the
hardwork wife to sell some foods and lends much money and property
including gold to people in her home town with certain interest based on
get a lot of money even lending with interest is a bad habit and prohibited
deeds by Islamic law but she carried out her bad habit because of her lack
of understanding on Islam even she did know the Islam she only knew
Mabah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as a God who answer her hope and
praying. In her social life, she alway communicate with people around her
hause well, She never did the bad action or evil action on her life she is a
good adore altough she adored on Mabah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as a
God who answer her hope and praying she did not believe and worship
in Allah because during her life she did not know Allah.
daughter to adore on idol or God under the tree. Rahayu as her daughter
follows her invitation to adore and pray on Mbah Ibu Bumi bapak Kuasa
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as a God who answer her praying and hope in her family life. Marni is the
traditional person who did not know the improvement era. When rahayu
join with her study at elemntary school, she studied religion to Pak Wiji as
―Musrik‖ in lifes. Such as adore to an idol, tree and giving ritual offerings
on God or idol. Rahayu focuses on Mr. Wiji speech about ally on Allah.
She remembers on her mother whom always carries out the ally worship
on diffrent God to Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa. She thinks that
mother‘s habit is a sin action and deed on Allah. She feels shame on her
friends because her mother always carries out the ritual offerings ong idol
or Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as a God. After going back from her
school, without thinking over, she throws out the ritual offerings foods
from special mother‘s room because her mother deeds are sin deeds on
offering foods outside, Tonah as the old sisters sees her deed, Tonah tries
foods from mother‘s room because it ritual symbol on God and their
mother will be angry to Rahayu. But Rahayu does not listen her advises
because her carrying out is a right deed on Islam. When their mother
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comes to her house, she saw some terrible ritual offering foods to out of
hause. She feels angry when those foods out site. She asks to Rahayu
about this situation, then Rahayu answer it has been done by her because
mother habit is a sin deed on Allah. Allah will be angry on her mother
about her bad habit to adore on different God. Suddantly, Her mother
cries and asks to Rahayu who is Allah because when Marni was born
introduced by her parents from right now till today to adore on Mbah
Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as her God and Idol to answer her hope, praying
and problem of life. Rahayu also cries because Rahayu‘s action is the right
easy life. Rahayu is the obey person and uses logical understanding on
every problem who resists the deviated deed on Allah and prohibited on
person who obey on Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as mother‘s God and
Idols. Rahayu is the new generation who think every think logically. This
ignorance to their sensation and only taught to look for happiness in love,
passion which lead them shamefully to neglect the duties of life basen on
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logical perseption.‖ (Nurachman, 2017) Marni believes in her faith on
Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as mother‘s God and Idols while Rahayu
believe that mother deeds to adore on Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as
the sin deeds on Allah. Both faith characters on God are different, this
when Rahayu continue to study to certain collage, she never went home
because she will not see the bad behavior carried out by her mother to
adore Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa as one God and Idol every night and
putting ritual offering foods on mother‘s room and under the tree. Both
beliefs are different they did not communicate well even her mother tried
to communicate with Rahayu well but Rahayu did not see her mother.
She studies and lives in certain collage and city to avoid from her mother
ritual offering habit till she find the comfortable heart in certain place and
situation. Marni and Rahayu, two people who have real bond between
mother and daughter but both of them becomes the strange people each
other for every year. In Marni‘s site, Rahayu is the person who has no
soul and spirit, but Rahayu said Marni as her mother is a sinner person
who carries out the bad ritual offering habits to adore on Mbah Ibu Bumi
Bapak Kuasa as her God and Idol. In each theri thought, there is no same
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In the other situation, Rahayu met with Kiayi Hasby, he tought
her the be good moslem and to be good person who associate and
Kiayi Hasby tought her manay benefit matters on her life. Rahayu
realized that if she forced to be admited her thinking and belief by others
incuding by her mother it will separate and make bad relationsship with
others including with her mother. She met with someone till got maied
with him and found good neighbour and friends but unfortunately her
friends got has been killed by the soldier from govermants becuase of the
false prediction that her friends is PKI. In this reason, some soldiers
executed her friends to shot them although her friends are not the
paradigm and her efforts but Kiayi Hasby forbids her to keep silent and
tries to cooperate with state soldiers and join with them because if they
tried to resist state soldiers the society around them will be killed by
them. The same case is faced by Marni as her mother to face some state
matters for her to be good person wheather on her spiritual or her social
life to face and communicate well. Kiayi Hasby is the humble person and
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tolerant person always teaches her to be better person to the future and
Kiayi Hasby suggests her to go home to live with her mother athough
between she and her mother have the different belief but he advises her
with Kiayi hasby is not condusive condition even some states soldiers
―PKI‖ members. So that why, she tried to go home and hurry up to meet
her mother because for some years she never met and communicated
with her mother. When she arrived in her villiage, she met her family
including her beloved mother. Marni as her mother is very happy to meet
Rahayu as beloved daughter both of them did not tell about different
believes even they respect and tolerant each other. In certain situation,
because Rahayu lost her citizenship identity card ―KTP‖, she tried to
make her citizenship identity card to her leader in their jome town. But
when Rahayu got her citizenship identity card ―KTP‖ she saw the
communist member ―PKI‖. She just aware on her society about the
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wrong policy and action which have been given to her friends from
certain town. But Rahayu and Marni acepted this condition. They think
that they can live together and develop and respect each other as a good
family.
The author presents this story well. It has spiritual and moral
social life with others. The process of good person on Rahayu was
Hasbi taugh her indirectly. From his teaching, she know how to
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ideologies such as the Indonesian Communist members ―PKI‖
and state soldiers who fight each other. Rahayu and Kiayi Hasby
other side, state soldier forced society and PKI to obey them
This novel does not tell clearly becuse the ending of the story
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outhor presented does not tell the description of Indonesian
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OKKY MADASARI
literacy means a person's ability to read and write. Often people who can
read and write are called literates, while people who cannot read and write
literacy also has similar meanings with learning and understanding the
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desperately need it as Mary Wollstonecraft says in introduction to
criticism book.
Related to women, we need to know that the thing that discusses the
Feminism, which has the meaning of the femina, has the meaning
the rights of women and men in all fields, in accordance with their
from the ideology of resistance, this indicates that in feminism there must
be action to free women from all injustice, so that feminism also has the
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meaning of intellectual movements that emerge and grow academically as
women because she does not want the dignity of women under the
auspices of men she also does not want women to rule over men, as she
said in the book 'A Vindication of the Rights of Woman' which is now
male companion, she will stop the advance of science, because the
Magetan, Okky Madasari. The first printed novel was published in April
opposed by Wollstonecraft.
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Wollstonecraft strongly opposed the uneducated and literary
novel that was in stark contrast to her theory. Since a woman will become
a mother, the mother is the first school for her children. If a woman is
literary and uneducated, what would be the fate of the children of future
generations if a mother were. It turns out that illiteracy not only exists in
the real world, but in the fictional world is even more cruel and more
tortured.
―…….. Apa yang masih dipikirkan seorang perempuan kere buta huruf
konon adalah bapakku, minggat entah ke mana. Sejak kapan dia pergi aku
juga tak ingat. Samar-samar aku hanya ingat Bapak meninggalkan kami
waktu aku pertama kali bisa mengangkat panci yang airnya mendidih dari
a result of illiteracy itself, marni lives on ignorance with the truth that
who are under-educated. People who lack education have trouble getting
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ahead in life, have worse health and are poorer than the well-educated.
(foor, 2013)
Mereka berdua, orang buta huruf yang hanya tahu pasar, harus tahu pemilu.
Mereka harus ikut, dan tidak salah pilih. Kalau bukan aku yang orang
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him, but at the same time does not get a school that causes him to be
of the surroundings.
This led to excessive oppression and extortion of marni because she was
‖Tadi dicegat pak tentara, katanya yang nggak ke sini ber-arti nggak patuh
sama negara. Ya sudah to... daripada dipenjara, kami ke sini saja. Nyoblos,
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thing that brings happiness, but rather blackmail on the basis of
protracted fooling.
Ibuku yang buta huruf dan aku yang anak sekolahan, semuanya seperti
kerbau dungu yang tak pernah tahu arah. Dan aku baru menyadarinya
I‘m as a reader who follows the instincts of the author drifts away
and greget sees the figure of marni who is fooled easily, fooled with long-
― Dia mengeluarkan selembar kertas yang aku tak mengerti sama sekali apa
strength, both mind and body, and to convince them that gentle
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and that the creature is merely the object of mercy, and the kind
of love her sister calls her, will soon become the object of
it was the woman herself who did not fight over her. He must be very sad
that his struggles have been wasted. I as a woman who fought to fight for
myself to be educated and literate was very disappointed, why the figure
of Marni in the novel entrok did not want to struggle in terms of literacy
even though the situation at that time was not like now that can be
literate anywhere and anytime. "Entrok" alone he can fight, why he just
― Anakku Rahayu sekarang sudah lulus SMA. Matur nuwun, Gusti, aku
yang buta huruf ini punya anak yang sekolahnya tinggi. Sama tingginya
dengan anak Pak Lurah atau anak priyayi-priyayi guru itu. Anakku, yang
orang-orang pintar itu. Ini semua karena berkatmu, Gusti, Mbah Ibu Bumi
That's the importance, and this is the benefit. Side effects in terms
of literacy, which will save us from the fooling of the world. Not
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necessarily in the realm of school, the figure of Marni who has a highly
educated child can be used as an effort in literacy. Asking his son to teach
him to learn to read is not something that should put prestige forward.
― Aku naik kelas dengan nilai paling bagus. Ibu tak pernah tahu angka,
apalagi nilai. Dia hanya mendengarnya dari Bu Lastri, guruku yang sering
dikabulkan oleh Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa. Ibu mengucapkan syukur.
Whether it's just in fiction, or in the real world there are people
gets from his defaults and loans to those around him. I think it's stupid,
every time he makes friends with money that his own brain doesn't see.
fooled by the world and all its contents, it will also be fooled by itself.
dan Kelurahan, sampai setoran untuk Partai. Aku juga nyumbang setiap
ada perbaikan masjid dan pembangunan langgar baru. Lha kok masih saja
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Fooled that drags on without end, I don't know when it will all
end. In palak subtly with very seducing language. The risk of becoming a
mother who lacks of education not only affects her child but has a greater
‖Ya buat keamanan di sini. Kowe bisa enak dagang di sini karena kami
semua yang mengatur. Kami semua yang meng-amankan. Kowe bisa dapat
untung, kami dapat apa?‖ tentara yang baru datang ikut-ikutan berbicara.
‖Iya, Pak. Maaf. Istri saya ini tidak paham. Maklum, kami orang buta
sisa itu. Malah enak, to? Kalian nggak perlu ke- luar duit.‖
Tentara-tentara itu mengambil dagangan Ibu. Masih ada empat ember dan
enam panci, semuanya ludes. Mereka juga mengambil setengah karung beras.
Bapak dan Ibu hanya diam tak berbuat apa-apa. ― (Madasari, p. 50)
Give up for the sake of the powerful because they want to take
refuge under the auspices of power with their illiteracy, pursued without
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Literacy is important to want men or women, so as not to be
fooled by the cruelness of the world and its contents. Especially the
woman who will be the first school for the next generation. To be
educated not only in the realm of school, for today can access anywhere
don't think we're changing for Wollstonecraft's sake, change the mindset
Feminism, which has the meaning of the femina, has the meaning of
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Feminism in the novel is opposed by Wollstonecraft with a marni
happened to marni, but make a life lesson so that we do not feel and do
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- Supposed to be a good one reading the title, but it's mistaken
- Less focus analysis
- Too many introductory paragraphs
- Having jumped-up ideas Linda Alfionita
- Some still retelling
- Some narratives and analysis are relevant with the theory, some others not
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- Lack of critical-analytical arguments
- Lack of theoretical supports/justification
- Lack of sources cited
- Be aware of some mechanic errors 65 = C 5D
BY OKKY MADASARI
beliefs and thought. It could be in the form of the plot, the characters
action or the way they choose the words or the narration. And more than
that, a good literary works should not only good at entertaining or at its
contextual quality, but also has to be good on the moral and social value
(Carr, 2005) not only pouring a bunch of human life experiences, but also
has to make the story good enough to affect the reader to feel, to
understand and to follow what they beliefs and thought with their words.
poem that: ―It is not enough for poems to be beautiful; they must be
affecting, and must lead the heart of the hearer as they will..‖ as his
thought that the poets should be able to keep the reader‘s mind all the
time.
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And to fulfil that mandate, a poet should also be able to pour their
thoughts, beliefs and imagination that could be from what they saw in
through the characters, plot, or the words that was narrated on the story.
―Literature adds to reality, it does not simply describe it. It enriches the
necessary competencies that daily life requires and provides; and in this respect,
In that way, they can share how they beliefs and feeling as the purpose of
their writing to the reader. But since there is no single ‗correct‘ or ‗true‘ in
reading a literature works, It‘s basic to think that people can always found
more than one value in one literary works, since they can approach from
the author itself can have more than one values or thought on the list.
Because they can put a lot of thoughts and wrap it into one form, named
literary works. In literature itself, the poet‘s thought and what they beliefs
were also often showed on the way the characters act. They can show it
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Talk about the poet‘s thought in their works, Entrok is quite
representative for the works that has strong aspect of values and thought.
What we can see clearly in the first glance was perhaps it‘s feminism
thought on it. Indonesia that has a various culture and beliefs (at the
young girl named Marni that has a wish to having Entrok1 but struggling
with her family poverty. That with a lot of efforts she finally make it, but
then she start to be greedy and want to having a lot of money. She keep
work hard and praying to ‗Nature‘ as most of what people believe in their
society to fight and change their social class, until finally she got her first
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regional language (Javanese) for women's underwear (bra)
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against any elements of transcendentalism. To be greedier and
―Pagi itu aku terbangun dengan kecewa. Segala keindahan dan kebahagiaan
itu kenapa hanya ada dalam mimpi? Aku ingin punya entrok berenda.
Entrok sutra bertatahkan intan dan permata. Aku ingin semua orang
kagum, menatapku dengan iri. Aku juga ingin ada orang yang membuatku
(Madasari, 2010a)
The quotation above shows how Marni being the opposite of the
only need at least one Entrok but then start to think one is not enough
start to think about what people say (as representation of society) toward
her.
life, she seems to realized what we call as the essential fact of life. After
suffering a lot of problem, about what she really need and what the most
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―Pikap itu sudah menjadi duit. Aku punya modal lagi untuk bakulan. Aku
tahu, delapan persen sudah tidak akan laku lagi. Biarlah, aku tidak akan
mencari untung banyak-banyak. Yang penting bagiku duit itu tetap bisa
lima persenan. Tentu saja tidak ada yang menolaknya. Kini aku kembali
mendapat tempat di pasar yang telah membesarkanku ini. Setiap pagi aku
datang kembali untuk mengambil cicilan orang-orang. Dua minggu sekali pada
aku tak punya pikap. Biarlah tebu-tebu itu hanya bisa dijual tak jauh lebih
mahal daripada singkong. Biarlah uangku hanya memberi untung lima persen.
Yang penting bagiku, selalu ada uang setiap aku ingin berangkat ke
Semarang. Yang penting bagiku, setiap hari aku punya sesuatu yang
2010b)
the thought that only need the essential facts of life. In this case, Marni
about what essential thing for life. It is her family, her one and only
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happiness, Rahayu her daughter. She start to think in way simpler, there is
What really matters is the true happiness. Something that you can not
gain with any materialistic and luxury stuff. It is the happiness from the
one you loved, to be by your side. She naturally think about her life in
different way, instead of being overcome with the mundane and chaotic
choices of her former life, she instead are given the opportunity to think
appreciate the things that we may not have noticed before. The trivial
things in life become the big things because they create some biggest
joys.(Alexander, 2014)
If we seek for the value of the story, as for some people living simplicity
in these days are sort of the important and necessary thing. From the
poet‘s perspective, Okky Madasari seems like putting that thought on her
Simbok. In the first chapter, Simbok appears a lot. I noticed, that at first
Simbok was like the representative of how the way living in simplicity
goes. She believe in thought that living in simple way with her poverty
was not a big deal. Not in ‗give up‘ way. But more like as long as we still
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live, we can eat and drink and health, that‘s enough. Proved by she‘s
response when Marni tell her that she want to have entrok:
kayak apa aku juga tidak tahu. Tidak pakai entrok juga tidak apa-apa.
Susuku tetap bisa diperas to. Sudah, nggak usah neko-neko. Kita bisa makan
From the dialog above, it proved how simple the way Simbok‘s life. and
also shows that she has been living in that condition for a long time, but
what she really do is just doing her best for life, be grateful for what she
already have and keep her soul to be close with nature and God:
―Nduk, terserah apa penginmu. Yang penting, coba nyuwun sama Mbah Ibu
Bumi Bapa Kuasa. Semua kejadian hanya terjadi kalau Dia yang
mata saling terpejam, kami diam beberapa saat. Saat itu angin seolah berhenti
2010a)
Entrok using multi perspective, with the creative and expressive word,
Okky Madasari can shows each character‘s thought clearly. Even it easy
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to tell that each characters has their own thought and beliefs. But how the
way the story lead us to the ending, tells us how the story end in a way so
that we can see the moral value on it. If we analyze it by that perspective,
we can see how at first Marni was so obsessed with worldly affairs,
thought that what society think about her is something we have to deal
What interesting about Entrok was, they can show more than one moral
value at once. In this analysis, the story tells us about living in simplicity,
about how living with only essential facts and need, and to be grateful
with it will be better than having a lot of extravagant things but has a lot
of consequence behind it. But in the other hand, the story also shows the
Entrok was not exactly has the same implementation as the real
transcendentalist like living far from the metropolitan life or live closer to
pikap. Biarlah tebu-tebu itu hanya bisa dijual tak jauh lebih mahal daripada
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singkong. Biarlah uangku hanya memberi untung lima persen. Yang penting
bagiku, selalu ada uang setiap aku ingin berangkat ke Semarang. Yang
penting bagiku, setiap hari aku punya sesuatu yang diharapkan. Harapan
which is refer to the return of Rahayu, was obviously shows how Marni
feel so grateful for the return of her daughter more than anything else.
She feels grateful for something that she never can tell it could be the
biggest joys in her life. More than all the luxury, social class and all her
thought, she has pass through a lot of struggle and problem. Which is
quite has the same process of how the way transcendentalist make up
their mind. When you have to see clearly what you really feel, what you
really need and found your answer as something that you thought as the
truth by your own mind and heart. If we analyze, we can see that Marni
did not make up her mind with any logical way. She just gave up all she
have to bring her daughter back by her side. She decide to do so as the
answer of what her heart and feeling say. As Emerson and Thoreau
interprets :
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―Transcendentalism took an individualistic approach that stressed
In the end, Entrok as the novel that shows the power (in woman
perspective) that give all her have to fought poverty, discrimination and
injustice with ‗that‘ way cannot be judged as the whole incorrect thing,
taught, not to live as people pleasure, not to letting society decide about
our life and decisions, to think clearly about our need and desire. More
specific, with the thought of living simplicity: to be closer with the God,
fulfil ‗materialist stuff‘, but instead to live in a life that concern about the
most essential thing of life and to be happy even about simplest thing as
your biggest joys. That is the transcendentalist element, the moral value
References:
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https://www.taylorfrancis.com/chapters/edit/10.4324/9780203796
146-39/simplicity-samuel-alexander
Carr, D. (2005). On the contribution of literature and the arts to the educational
137–151. https://doi.org/10.1080/03057240500127053
ed.).
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50 = D
- Truly an inconsistent discussion
- Such a misleading one; applying Aristotle's theory on plot should meet his
own standards
- Truly lack of critical analysis Linda Nurzannah
- There's no sources cited even one
- Poor composition: paragraphing, capitalization, punctuation, citation, 1195030129
references, etc.
5D
- There's no real references at all
- Some paragraphs are plagiarism suspected
DETERMINING THE PLOT IN THE NOVEL ENTROK WITH
ARISTOTLE'S THEORY
works such as poetry, novels, short stories, prose, and drama. This is one
of the lessons in criticism because it will find out more about what
literature is. Literature is a writing, and writing must use a pattern, in the
pattern there must be a text. Literature is also a word from the Sanskrit
"guidelines". Shastra comes from the basic words sas- or shas- which
the reader to enter into a story, criticism begins with innocent discipline,
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encounters occur which have textual and contextual aspects. By using a
there are three interrelated Terms: the first Theory, Approach, and
literary critics, and literary history. Theory is where this is usually done to
only a foothold where it only sees how theory in literature occurs), the
In criticism, one of the literary works here uses a literary work from
literary work starting from the storyline, plot, theme, linguistic rules to
the genre. Okky Madasari's novel, entitled Entrok, describes the struggle
now better known as a bra or bra, she tried to boost the existing social
order. According to Simbok, from quotation above we can see "Perempuan yaa
Marni rebel. He believes that women also have the right to be paid
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peeling the cassava and joined him. Little by little, Marni's money was
collected. Until finally, Marni was able to buy the entrok she wanted.
After that, Marni realized that if she didn't develop her business, she
would still be poor. Because of that, Marni took the initiative to start
basket ling. Every day, he buys some goods in the market, then sells them
by going around the village. In the end, Marni has managed to change her
life. He was also known as a wealthy skipper. Thus, Entrok tells how
women are just weak creatures. The proof, Marni managed to collect
money from work identified with the Adam nguli. In the end, Okky
managed to raise one side that women in Indonesia can struggle. Even
culture. And here, I will try to criticize deeper into what is Reaction and
namely Aristotle.
Theory poetry Aristoteles earlier works by him, for example physic and
metaphysics, contains important statement about art and nature that bear
practical art involving ―doing‖ from productive arts, including poetic, that
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involve ―making‖. Aristoteles Rhetoric has had a strong influence on
criticism, for many later writers have blurred or obliterated the distinction
even to the extent that in some cases poetic seems to have become a
beginning with epic and tragic drama. Our sense of Aristoteles method is
maker, and imitation is, in fact, a kind of making. In imitation the poet
discovers the ultimate from of an action. This is why, for Aristoteles the
diction, song, and spectacle, though these are all elements of tragic drama.
Literary art, along with the fine arts (all the productive arts), is thus an
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discussion of tragedy. Aristoteles attention to the poem as an object that
bringing about a catharsis or purgation of pity and fear has been of great
In the novel Entrok by Okky Madasari, there are genres, plots and
there are many tragedies that occur in each subtitle, the tragedies
contained in the Entrok novel are many, such as social conflicts, human
conflicts that occur in oneself and one's family. All conflicts or tragedies
that occur in the Entrok novel begin with an analysis of the storyline so
that it is easier for us to get what will be discussed in this analysis. Plot or
plot is a literary term used to describe the events that make up a story, or
the main part of a story. These events relate to each other in a pattern or
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plots in a novel, namely forward plots, backward plots and forward and
backward plots. And in the novel Entrok there is a forward plot in the
story.
The forward plot in the entrok novel has three stages such as the early
stage, the middle stage and the final stage. These three stages have stories
and conflicts that connect from one story to another, even though the
Entrok novel has subtitles which in my opinion are quite confusing, but
the neat writing and clear plot shows that the story in the novel is good.
In the early stages there is also from quotation above us can see ―Aku sudah
tidak lagi membagi waktu dengan bekerja di tempat Nyai Dimah. Simbok
diam saja, tak menanyakan atau melarang. Saat bersama, kami tidak
tentang upah yang kudapatkan dari nguli‖ In the quote above, it can be
seen that Marni is no longer working, so she said that she does not need
to divide her work time. Even though Marni used to be a cassava peeler
with Simbok as a market coolie. This is the initial stage of the forward
plot which in this Entrok novel is the story of the initial stage of the
conflict starting.
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Still in the early stages of the forward plot in the Entrok novel, there is
a story. Where in this story is concerned with the relationship in the early
named Rahayu. Rahayu is the son of Marni in the story then continues
with the point of view of Rahayu, Marni's son. This is one of the quotes
that really introduces Rahayu to the main character in the Entrok novel,
Marni, the mother of Rahayu. In the story, Rahayu is still young but has
different views from her mother. From quotation above us can see ―Aku
masih tidak mengerti bagaimana Ibu masih saja telaten mengurusi receh-receh itu.
Sama tidak mengertinya, bagaimana Ibu tetap percaya pada arwah leluhur-
leluhurnya dan memberi mereka makan setiap hari kelahiran Ibu. Ah... kenapa
his mother, Marni, knows very well, Rahayu's son, who very clearly feels,
thinks and even says to his mother, what are the differences between him
differences in perspective and Rahayu also said very clearly to his mother
what they believed was very different. And in the early stages of this
forward flow, several small conflicts began to arise which could trigger
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other conflicts, even the biggest conflicts because of differences in
perspective.
Forward Path In the middle stage there are conflicts. In addition to the
debate between Rahayu and Marni which is not getting better, there are
also conflicts in society that are getting worse. The conflict occurred
and the soldiers who were in power there as shown in the following
Yang jelas, minggu depan ini giliran desamu yang dikeruk. Mesin-mesin
keruk akan mengangkat tubuh kalian semua. Kowe akan mati tertimbun
tanah sendiri. Atau kalau untung, bisa saja kalian selamat. Tapi tiap hari
itu seluruh pasukan akan ada di daerah ini. Kalian semua akan tertangkap.
Seumur hidup masuk penjara bersama orang-orang PKI itu. Kalian semua
sudah jadi PKI.‖ The quote above shows that community conflicts are
getting worse and worse. Starting from the community or local residents
tell other communities that they still had to leave the land that would be
tragedy that occurs in the novel Entrok where in the novel the people
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who remain firm with their stance will defend the land they occupy
despite the many threats that come with them. The people who remained
strong with their stance even when they were threatened they continued
to defend the land they occupied, even though one of the people was
labeled PKI. Until the soldiers would threaten residents who refused to
build reservoirs in their place and were labeled by the PKI, at that time
the PKI was the biggest enemy among the Indonesian people but they
still defended their land until they really made the soldiers angry and
furious because the people who very hard to set up. This is one of the
middle stages of conflict in the novel Entrok which makes a big tragedy
in the story and makes the story more interesting and becomes more
nearing the end of the story. Where in the plot or the end of this story the
tragedy occurs completely as in this quote where Marni's mother who just
married after the birth of the daughter Rahayu. From quotation above us
can see ―Mereka akan menikah pada hari kelahiran Rahayu. Menurut
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besarbesaran. Ada gambyong sampai pagi. Aku benar-benar mau mantu.
Orangtua belum lengkap hidupnya kalau belum mantu untuk anaknya. Ini
pernikahannya dengan Arab itu diramaikan. Lha ya iya, wong cuma jadi
istri simpanan. Tapi sekarang beda. Rahayu yang sekarang akan menikah
dengan jejaka. Dia akan jadi istri sah. Istri pertama" This is a tradition
expressed by Aristotle in the quote above that it is Rahayu who will marry
one of the carriage drivers' children as the first wife. It was also stated
that Rahayu began to obey her mother, following her mother's wishes.
However, at the end of the story, Rahayu does not marry Sutomo
because the future Rahayu finds out that Rahayu has been labeled a PKI.
The groom decided not to continue the wedding when all the
preparations were ready, the D-day had come. This made Marni very
shocked and ended up with mental stress. And this is a big tragedy for
Rahayu who has to take care of her mother who has a mental illness
because of the events experienced by her child Rahayu which makes her
very sad.
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The conclusion of the essay above is that in a novel or literary work
there must be a plot or plot that makes the story more interesting for the
plot, we will get a tragedy in the story. The tragedy contained in the
is told that Marni has a mental disorder because of the behavior Rahayu
did, but until the end of the story everything is explained by the story and
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https://jurnal.ustjogja.ac.id/index.php/caraka/article/download/4011
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- This is nice actually if you could be consistent with the discussion moreover
- Needs a real specific topic to guide the analysis
- Some still having retelling more than the real analysis Marsza Nurul Azmi
- Some narratives and analysis are relevant with the theory, some others not
- Needs more critical-analytical arguments 1195030131
- Still lack of theoretical supports/justifications
- Lack of other supporting sources
- Be aware of some mechanic errors: paragraphing, citation, punctuation,
capitalization, etc. 70 = B 5D
as well as intellectual and emotional supply for the reader. Literary works
values for the readers (Siswanto, 2008: 67). Through literary works, the
continue follow the storyline they conduct. One of the ideas is feminism.
social movements that can be carried out by both men and women
(Hidayati, 2019). Men and women must have the same position in society,
equal, the only difference is the biological aspect that is owned by men
and women.
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Readers can find a story with feminism tone in Entrok. Entrok is
Okky Madasari's first novel which was published in April 21st, 2010, as
Indonesian we must notice that April 21st is the day when we celebrate
Kartini Day. This novel centred the life of Marni, a woman who always
women are seen weak, in their work they can only peel cassava and are
paid again with cassava or another common job they can do is bakulan
(Madasari, 2010: 34). The character of Marni will be analysed using Mary
human life.
―Education thus only supplies the man of genius with knowledge to give
of ideas that develops along with us, and has a great effect on the moral
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before the body arrives at maturity can seldom be disentangled by reason
sakit panas dan tidak bisa ke pasar. Kalau Simbok tidak ke pasar, kami tidak
akan punya makanan. Dan laki-laki itu dengan seenaknya hanya menunggu
makanan. Dia seperti anjing gila yang marah saat kelaparan. Iya, dia memang
anjing gila. Hanya anjing gila kan yang menggigit istrinya yang sedang sakit. Saat itu
sesenggukan. Laki-laki itu pergi setelah menghajar istrinya dan tak pernah kembali
lagi.
Sejak itu aku hidup berdua dengan Simbok. Di gubuk reyot yang hanya berisi
menghabiskan hari. Simbok pergi ke pasar setiap hari masih gelap dan pulang ke
rumah saat siang sambil membawa bahan makanan. Akulah yang kemudian
Little Marni when she saw her abusive father, she could only stay silent
but as she grew older, she grew into a strong woman in living her life
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together with simbok. This is in a same boat with what Wollstonecraft said
that associations about habits that occur can affect our morals and ideas,
independent woman. In Madasari, 2010: She also seems has trust issue on
―Aku hanya dengarkan suatu hari nanti akan kualami. Takut kalau anakku
nanti mengalami seperti apa yang kualami, punya bapak tapi minggat. Punya ibu
Similar issue above does not only happen in novels or in other fictional
world, it is not uncommon case that there are of people who are afraid to
or feel poetically, they want fancy, and therefore fly from solitude in
search of sensible objects; but when an author lends them his eyes, they
can see as he saw, and be amused by images they could not select, though
want for themselves. No one knows what their heart wants for their
good. They should have known what they did not know.
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‖Kamu mau ngangkat apa, Ni?‖
‖Bukan, Kang. Bukan minta dibantu ngangkat. Aku mau ditolong, aku mau ikut
yang kuinginkan. Aku menunggu agak lama untuk mendapatkan jawaban yang
sebenarnya.
‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat. Sudah,
‖Aku kuat, Kang. Biasanya aku juga nggendong tenggok, nggendong goni. Bakul-
bakul itu juga banyak yang mengangkat sendiri dagangannya dari rumah ke pasar.
‖Tapi tetap nggak umum, Ni. Di pasar ini, nggak ada perempuan nguli.‖
‖Tapi aku mau, Kang. Aku butuh duit, Kang. Nggak mau lagi diupahi singkong.‖
‖Ya terserah. Kalau mau nguli ya monggo,‖ Kata Teja lirih (Madasari, 2010: 33-
34)
In the narration above, Marni intends to nguli so that she can get money
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the end, Marni keep nguli. Here again, Marni succeeded in breaking the
as weak and unable to do men's work. Whereas men and women should
have the same position and job, the only difference is the biological
Wollstonecraft that women have the right to do what they want to get
"Where love is duty on the female side, On theirs mere sensual gust, and
But one grand truth women have yet to learn, though much it imports
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Here Wollstonecraft stated that in a relationship women should not
will later become a husband because women should also think about
what their future will be, and we must not determine the nature of a
husband when he still being a lover that we may not see all his bad things
takut kawin. Lha buat apa kawin, kalau jadinya cuma sengsara. Inilah yang
kukatakan pada Teja waktu dia memintaku jadi istrinya. Dia melamarku di depan
pasar, saat matahari baru mengintip malu-malu, saat aku menunggu kedatangan
‖Kenapa, Ni? Kita saling cocok. Apa kamu tidak pengin punya suami, punya
Punya anak? Bagaimana jika aku punya anak nanti? Mau jadi apa anakku
nanti? Tukang kupas singkong atau bakulan keliling desa kalau perempuan? Anak
hati. Tak tega kusampaikan pada Teja, karena aku memang menyukainya. Aku
hanya dengarkan suatu hari nanti akan kualami. Takut kalau anakku nanti
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mengalami seperti apa yang kualami, punya bapak tapi minggat. Punya ibu tapi
expect. Marni indirectly has a thought like Wollstonecraft. She was still
young but when she got proposed she does not accept it immediately, she
thinks about it deeply even though she is truly loves Teja. In her early
teens she has thought about how her life would be if she married with
Teja, she worries about her future child, will they have the same fate with
their parents? she does not want it happens. Marni is a traditional woman
with modern thought, she is wise enough in her age. She is a visionary
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without love. But, when a sense of duty, or fear of
Chapter--and then acting the part which they foolishly exacted from their
Here Wollstonecraft states that men have more power to rule over
―‖Dasar Teja, lanangan nggak tahu diuntung. Susah payah aku cari duit, dia
Ibu sudah tidak lagi memaki Tonah. Kini dia mengumpat Bapak. Padahal orang
yang dimaki entah sedang di mana. Teja yang pemalas. Teja yang tidurnya seperti
kerbau. Teja yang hanya mau enaknya sendiri. Teja yang sekarang sedang gandrung
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If Wollstonecraft argues that men are superior and they can give variety
because of the education they earn, in Entrok men are seen as superior
because the concept of men that happen in their neighbourhood and they
are known as stronger than woman in physic and more powerful. Marni
So, no matter how strong Marni to fight against the stigma or gender
concept that exists in her living, she still has no desire to break loose
from Teja even though he has recklessly treated Marni. Marni could only
neglect her feelings towards Teja because she was too busy to only think
behaviour of her master who could not live without love and pleasure.
First, She is a brave woman when actually she is afraid that what she feels
in her family will happen in her new family but she continues to live her
women should have the opportunity to do and get what they expect and
Marni has the same thoughts with Wollstonecraft. In terms of love, the
woman should not be arbitrarily concerned with only love, they must still
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think about the future of their family. From here, Marni impresses the
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- Nice yet still having jumped-up ideas MARWAH
- Needs a truly specific topic to discuss
- Some also still having retelling than real analysis
- Needs more critical-analytical arguments 1195030132
- Some narratives and analysis are relevant with the theory, some others not
- Needs more relevant theoretical supports/justifications
- Needs more supporting sources 70 = B 5D
THOUGHTS
author and his idea. The idea that the author presents cannot be
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between men and women cannot balance. Justice in gender equality is still
women. In this book, Wollstonecraft also wrote that she wishes women
43). Entrok, written by Okky Madasari, offer some insight towards how
women can stand over themselves through Marni's ambition and how
society is not support her. Marni does have a lot of ambition, but she also
Entrok is a story about a women's struggle. Marni and Rahayu, the two
fight for different things: Marni fights for her own wellbeing, while
Rahayu fights for the wellbeing of others (in this case the villagers whose
the social order that occurred when Marni was born. Marni was told that
it was the work of women to peel cassava and that they were paid for it.
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Wollstonecraft also says that a long tradition of male writers has
"Ni, Kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat.
―Nduk, semua itu sudah ada jatahnya. Orang kayak kita bagiannya
ngoncek telo. Nguli itu berat. Sudah jatang orang lain.‖‘ (Madasari, 2010,
p. 34)
mother who is called Simbok breaks Marni's ambitions and perceives her
purchase an entrok, until she is able to purchase an entrok with the money
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"Hingga suatu hari, aku ingat aku belum membeli entrok. Kubuka
bumbung itu dan kuambil lima keping uang sepuluhan rupiah." (Madasari,
2010, p. 39)
At the time, it was extremely rare for women to be able and motivated to
pursue their ambitions, much less even succeed in doing so. I don‘t want
women to have power over men; I want them to have power over
dreams, but they couldn't achieve them, or even just talk about them and
feel no right, because they were still enslaved to a culture that applied
women whose only job was peeling cassava, and women should stay at
alone and pursuing her dreams without relying on others, including men.
Marni's desires and dreams remained until she was an adult, even after
she married and had more than enough money to live comfortably.
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―Aku juga kerja keras, memeras keringat, mengelilingi Pasar Ngranget dan
dari rumah ke rumah di desa-desa. Semua kulakukan hanya agar aku dan
keluargaku bisa makan, tidak merepotkan orang lain, dan punya kemuliaan
More than that, Marni has a desire to free other women for herself, she
wants women to be treated equally and paid the right amount without
besarnya sama, tidak lebih kecil hanya karena dia perempuan, lebih-lebih
hanya diupahi dengan telo. Tapi tak ada perempuan yang menebang tebu.
Tebu hanya menjadi jatah buruh laki-laki. Bagian buruh perempuan hanya
berapa uapah yang ia dapat. Paling-paling tak lebih dari tiga ratus sehari.
Sayangnya aku tidak menanam padi atau kacang. Kalau Mbak Ibu Bapak
untuk membeli tanah lagi yang akan kutanami padi dan kacang. Akan
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Despite all of Marni's hard work, she was eventually underestimated by
others in her own environment, and she was criticized for her hard-won
accomplishments.
"Ha ha ha…! Mau sedikit, mau banyak, namanya tetap pontang. Sampean
itu rentenir, lintah darat! Orang-orang seperti kalian ini yang bikin susah
sampean ngreteni duit. Itu dilarang agama. Kalian bikin sengsara banyak
Ya sudahlah, Yu. Duitmu di orang lain kan masih banyak. Tagih saja
2010, p. 84)
Marni has received the following critiques. Money lenders, the source of
by religion, and many other hate speeches that she receives. Her aim here
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the acts that she made. Even though previously they themselves begged
to lend money.
that she suffers, even though she merely wants to be an independent and
self-sufficient lady who wants to help others. She sets her dreams and
Wollstonecraft said that what the world is short of is not charity but
woman but also as a human being who in fact is looking for money to
make a living.
―Duh, Gusti, apa salah kalau aku mau cari rezeki, punya harta biar tidak
dihinahina orang? Aku kan tidak membunuh orang, tidak mencuri, tidak
mengambil upah buat tenaga dan modalku. Lha kok malah semua orang
―Lha kok yo masih ada saja yang bilang aku dosa. Yang dosa itu ya orang
kayak Mali itu, seharian tidur di langgar, istri dan empat anaknya tiap hari
kelaparan. Aku sering melihat istri dan anak Mali makan aking dicampur
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garam yang ditampah. Mereka duduk mengelilingi tampah dan makan
garam itu sudah luar biasa enaknya. Tapi inikan dulu. Zaman perang.
Zaman orang-orang bajunya dari goni dan mencari tikus sawah untuk
her own and be able to survive despite the numerous insults she suffers.
However, each character has their own set of pluses and minuses. Marni's
see things from all sides. And this also applies to Marni, Marni, who
ways because she could not see things from all sides.
Dari mana dia punya pikiran seperti itu? Bagaimana bisa dia berpikir aku
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―Sajen, pesugihan, tuyul, Gunung Kawi, selama bertahun-tahun orang-orang
Singget telah menjadikan itu semua sebagai cerita yang disebarkan dari
121)
―Tak masalah kalau semua orang omong aku memelihara tuyul atau cari
pesugihan, tapi aku selalu sakit ketika yang omong seperti itu anakku
sendiri. Dan ini telah berulang keali terjadi. Hanya karena rasa kasih,
ikatan ibu dan anak, yang membuat rasa sakit dan benci ini selalu kembali
Marni has been accused of maintaining tuyul and pesugihan for years, and
even her own child says the same thing to her. Marni is fully aware of
what she is doing; tuyul has no idea what she is doing, so how can she
keep tuyul? Marni has the right to speak up, to explain why something
isn't true, why something that has been talked about for years isn't true.
However, it was the lack of education upon her that made her unable to
defends himself, he will lose again because of the ignorance he has. Only
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that education deserves emphatically to be termed cultivation of the mind
herself.
literature, people divide into two classes: women who peel cassava and
males who chill it. In truth, both men and women are entitled to the same
order of the period, despite having to deal with numerous challenges, and
the most of which were resisted by those around her itself. On the other
great degree, by opinions and manners of the society they live in. Marni's
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As a result, we, particularly women, must be able to stand alone and
generations.
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https://doi.org/10.1016/j.sbspro.2014.10.285
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MADDASARI
Literary works can represent many things, including cultural, religious and
social. One of the social issues that is always relevant to the times is the
women since long time ago has been being underestimated in many
fields. Women, didn‘t get the rights they deserve. Instead they get unfair
and arbitrary treatment from men for instance the act of violence. That's
men.
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Even though the feminist movement has spread all over the world, but
environment until today. Not only in the real world, the issue of violence
Yes it is indeed that the main theme of the Entrok novel, is not about
them, it is about Marni and Rahayu. The title itself; Entrok is a symbol of
Wollstonecraft Theory.
―From the tyranny of man, I firmly believe, the greater number of female follies
proceed; and the cunning, which I allow makes at present a part of their
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character, I likewise have repeatedly endeavoured to prove, is produced by
Those three people that i mention above is a proof of how the tyranny of
man can make women weak. The word weak here means that they
receive an unfair, rude and arbitrary treatment from men but they can‘t
fight the man back. In this case, Wollstonecraft stated that the long
sedang sakit panas dan tidak bisa ke pasar. Kalau Simbok tidak ke pasar,
kami tidak akan punya makanan. Dan laki-laki itu dengan seenaknya
hanya menunggu makanan. Dia seperti anjing gila yang marah saat
kelaparan. Iya, dia memang anjing gila. Hanya anjing gila kan yang
menggigit istrinya yang sedang sakit. Saat itu aku sangat ketakutan.
laki itu pergi setelah menghajar istrinya dan tak pernah kembali lagi."
Simbok; Mother of Marni, which is the main character in this novel. How
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the father character hit and beats his wife confirms Wollstonecraft's
opinion that not only through feeling that women is being humiliated,
they also get humiliated through brutal indulgences and violence by their
control his desire and emotion. In this case, the father character prove
that the statement above is right cause he turned into an "anjing gila" and
‗attack‘ his wife when he was hungry, when his wife can't fulfil his desire.
―The virtues of a husband are thus thrown by love into the background, and
gay hopes, or lively emotions, banish reflection till the day of reckoning comes;
and come it surely will, to turn the sprightly lover into a surly suspicious
supposing the rake reformed, he cannot quickly get rid of old habits. When a
sentiment and taste varnish the enormities of vice, and give a zest to brutal
indulgences; but when the gloss of novelty is worn off, and pleasure palls upon
the sense, lasciviousness becomes barefaced, and enjoyment only the desperate
effort of weakness flying from reflection as from a legion of devils. Oh! virtue,
thou art not an empty name! All that life can give- thou givest!‖
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If we examine more closely using Wollstonecraft's theory, why Simbok
gets harsh treatment from her husband but does not fight back and tend
―The severest sarcasms have been levelled against the sex, and they have been
ridiculed for repeating ‗a set of phrases learnt by rote,‘ when nothing could be
the same rights as men, especially in the field of education, they will
women will not be willing to accept for granted harsh treatment from
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their mind that men and women are equal. Regarding my analysis above, I
―Were women more rationally educated, could they take a more comprehensive
not having a chance to grow in society and they claimed that women are
―….and that their ‗highest praise is to obey, unargued‘- the will of man…..‖
The reflection of the statement above can be seen from the narration
"Suatu hari, suami Bu Jujuk pulang saat Bu Jujuk untuk kesekian kalinya
Jujuk langsung menghapus air matanya, lalu buru-buru masuk rumah. Dari
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luar kudengar umpatan-umpatan suami Bu Jujuk. ‖Istri nggak tahu diri!
Tak ada jawaban dari mulut Bu Jujuk. Lenyap semua umpatan yang
Yes Indeed, there is no physical violence shown in the scene above, but
the rude attitude and harsh words of Pak Jujuk attacked the wife's psyche
and it could also be called as violence cause it shows the very poor
160).
Besides juju and simbok, there were actually several unnamed women
who were also victims of male tyranny. How they are treated rudely, do
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If we look at the setting of the place, both simbok, bu jujuk and the other
where the patriarchal tradition is still thick (Irma Sakina & Hasanah,
Lastly, the character who get violence act that is shown in this novel is
Ndari. She‘s just an innocent 12 year old girl who was being made as the
object of sexuality by her own uncle. Not only once Paklik force his will
on his niece (the first time was when she was told to massage his back)
―Lalu kejadian itu terus berulang. Dua hari sekali atau kadang setiap hari.
yang masih berumur dua belas tahun itu meringis kesakitan. Paklik-nya
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malam. Laki-laki itu kembali melakukannya di saat darah haid deras
I'm sure the narration above can make anyone who reads got a
and more than heinous. It is so clear that Ndari is seen as the mean of
that she is his niece, without thinking that she's just an innocent little girl.
This act of violence in form of rape is disgusting and against human right
the feminists.
act where women are constantly being viewed as lesser than men, and
those acts are the reason that causes the feminism movement raise with a
hope that someday the patriarch can be erased so women can get their
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As plato stated in his mimetic approach that literary work is an imitation
so those acts shown in this novel could be really happened in real life.
―But, we shall not see women affectionate till more equality be established in
society, till ranks are confounded and women freed, neither shall we see that
by ignorant or vitiated minds; nor will the important task of education ever be
properly begun till the person of a woman is no longer preferred to her mind.
For it would be as wise to expect corn from tares, or figs from thistles, as that
158).
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Aura Semesta.
Irma Sakina, A., & Dessy Hasanah Siti, dan A. (2016). MENYOROTI
http://www.jurnalperempuan.org/blog2/-akar-
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SUBORDINATION OF WOMEN THROUGH COLLECTIVE
In social life there are always forms of agreement embedded in the social
This is not born just like that but develops over time even though all
social agreements that are born of course start from the dominance
power in it, so that the agreement that is present can be called a winning
Departing from this opinion, there is a potential gap that is built up due
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should take care of the household and in this case it often happens to
literary work, it should also be realized that cultural or literary texts are
works is that when the researcher found out after carefully and
thoroughly reading the novel Entrok by Okky Madasari. A novel that tells
having an 'entrok' or bra after seeing one of her friends who uses it, but
because of her family's poor condition, her dreams must be put aside for
more important things, although this did not dampen Sumarni's intention
to have it, so that she joined the market with her mother only to find out
another fact that in the market women who work are not paid with
money, the story continues until finally Sumarni can fight for her fate to
live, marry, and have a child which also takes the reader on another series
of events.
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In looking at women's subordination through collective ideas in this
novel, the researcher will use an expressive approach. This approach was
that:
―‖Ini entrok,‖ kata Tinah. Di Kali Singget, saat kami mandi, Tinah menunjukkan
entrok-nya. Ada dua segitiga yang bisa menutup gumpalan dada. Ukurannya pas
dan agak menekan. Entrok itu menekan dada Tinah sehingga tetap kencang, tidak
nglawer-nglawer, meskipun dia berlari kencang atau melompat. Aku juga ingin
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but just as she said this to the Simbok character, he was immediately hit
by a sense of inferiority from herself when faced with the fact that she
―Entrok memang terlalu mewah untuk aku dan Simbok. Apa yang
masih dipikirkan seorang perempuan kere buta huruf dengan
tanggungan seorang anak selain hanya makan? Suaminya, yang
konon adalah bapakku, minggat entah ke mana. Sejak kapan dia
pergi aku juga tak ingat. Samar samar aku hanya ingat Bapak
meninggalkan kami waktu aku pertama kali bisa mengangkat panci
yang airnya mendidih dari pawon.‖ (Madasari, 2021: 18)
Sumarni's sense of inferiority is so strong, even the researchers see that
because it shows that women's goals or dreams are so low due to their
education that they are afraid to dream of others or because only from
berkelana. Apa lagi kalau bukan ke mimpiku. Aku harus punya banyak uang
untuk membeli banyak entrok, yang berenda dan yang berhiaskan emas permata.‖
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making their own choices due to lack of education, stated in Nurrachman
(2017)
the collective idea that society has so that it can be internalized to them.
yang kuinginkan. Aku menunggu agak lama untuk mendapatkan jawaban yang
sebenarnya. ‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan
kuat. Sudah, perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong.‖
also expressed by another character that women's duties are nothing but
light work such as peeling cassava, cooking, and selling. It can be seen
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and is agreed upon by the audience to the point that their position is
weakened not only in terms of job restrictions but more than that in
terms of wages given because in this novel there are no women who are
only occur in the economic sphere as happens in the market, but in the
household realm there is an incident where the wife is forced to obey her
husband.
――Suamiku itu lho, Ni. Dia gendakan sama kledek. Sudah lama, Ni. Tapi aku
diam saja. Aku nggak mau ribut, nggak mau cari masalah. Tapi aku nggak kuat,
Ni. Hatiku diiris-iris.‖Tangis Bu Juju meledak. Hanya kami berdua yang ada di
There was also an incident at the Ngranget market where there was a
verbal and physical fight between Yu Parti and Yu Yem because Yu Parti
knew that her husband had married Yu Yem who was as old as her first
child, and one of Yu Yem's words was quite interesting to show the
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―Yu Yem, yang terlihat takut, terpancing dan mulai marah. Dengan suara tak
kalah kencang, dia membalas kata-kata Yu Parti. ‖Enak saja, nyebut aku sundal.
Sampeyan sendiri yang tidak bisa ngladeni suami. Bukan salahku kalau suami
And before that incident Yu Parti had said something that both
―Yu Parti bukan tidak mengetahui hal itu. Kata Nyai Dimah, Yu Parti pernah
apa-apa.‖‖
Then, after the fight at the market stall, Yu Parti was brought home by
his husband without resistance and without anger, even though in truth
the cheating party was the guilty party, but in this case Yu Parti more
blamed and cursed Yu Yem as his mistress. The behavior shown by the
two women is indeed irrational and even makes it natural for men to have
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with sense? When do they, with their superior powers and
advantages, turn from the person to the mind? And how
can they then expect women, who are only taught to
observe behaviour, and acquire manners rather than
morals, to despise what they have been all their lives
labouring to attain?‖ (Wollstonecraft on Nurrachman,
2017:136)
In addition, the powerlessness of women in making their own choices is
knowledge, even though the person she marries is the man she loves, but
she herself said that she was not ready to advance to marriage due to
side, the irony is that this culture is no longer questioned or even resisted
but has been taken for granted by women, as revealed by Johnson (2004).
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opinion, or that men never oppose it. If a society is
oppressiv, then people who grow up and live in it will tend
to accept, identify with, and participate in it as "normal"
and unremarkable life. that's the path of least resistance
‖(Johnson, 2004:26)
When this culture of patriarchy and subordination is continuously
gender equality is getting smaller, because every time women carry out
the slightest resistance, they are immediately denied and turned off, even
oppression will come not from the side of men but also from other
women who have been brainwashed to obey the agreements that has
says she wants to be a labourer in the market, that kind of thinking will
society through debilitating agreements that also limit them from claiming
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their own rights and choices, especially without realizing that the female
character in this novel is only formed to be a wife for take care of the
Feminine Mystique (1964) "for women, in all the columns, books and
movements from each individual, but in the end when faced with a large
audience who stems it completely, the journey will be very difficult, and
such patterns are instilled by Okky Madasari in this Entrok novel, she
Reference:
Education.
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Johnson, A. G. (2004). Patriarchy, the system. Women‘s lives: Multicultural
perspectives, 3, 25-32.
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WOMAN IS NOT A BODY WHICH ONLY WAITING TO DIE IN
The problem upon woman in society we live in is not simply in within from
the woman itself. More and beyond the iceberg it was structured and
Guo that “patriarchy is a social structure in which males are the primary
authority, political leadership, and other aspects of life. where males in the
family have power over women and children household” (Guo, 2018) which
substitutes in culture which hold the power to create what woman or how
proposal statement can be seen in every product of its such as symbol, norm,
stereotype, even government policy, and so on. In vivid instance such as the
where woman do difficult manually labor, the RUU PKS in Indonesia which
is hanged and is still being debated even though it is critical needed, and the
disgusting jargon where woman only live at bed (kasur), kitchen (dapur),
and very detrimental for woman, if there is no movement and people who
fight for the equality. As considered for the fundamental gender problem in
“The sexes were not equal; they were complementary. That was the way of
Nature, and the new socio-political order should not go against its will.
(Valcárcel, 2002).
slavery, to first impressions, has a more beneful effect on the female than the
for equality in society which in the end of the day it is called as feminism as
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Following this issue upon woman, a novel by Okky Madasari has certainly
mother and daughter who has conflict of belief. The story also remains the
strugle of Marni and other woman in gaining her equality starting from the
Thus, to criticize the woman persecution through this novel, this study will
judgment in the perspective of the reflection from real life, based on the
representation of the world and human life, and the primary criterion applied
from the narrative of Marni since a young girl who has will to buy entrok, as
quoted below.
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“Teja terbahak-bahak mendengar permintaanku. Sungguh bukan jawaban
seperti itu yang kuinginkan. Aku menunggu agak lama untuk mendapatkan
nguli.
Nggak akan kuat. Sudah, perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja.
Ngupas singkong.”
the unfair system of work that woman was persecuted by irrelevant opinion,
fictive, and untrue where woman is already domesticated by its form to only
work in light work and most importantly it was said by Teja as a young man.
fulfilling the needs of life from being paid. This is corelates with
conspires to twist into all their habits of thinking, or, to speak with more
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themselves” (Nurachman, 2017). Thus, in act a little for the right of herself
as human being Marni as young girl was precluded sharply by its fact as girl.
In second representation is more severe where this was not only the main
character yet has vivid violence upon woman for having partner in unfair
Dengan suara tak kalah kencang, dia membalas kata-kata Yu Parti. ”Enak
saja, nyebut aku sundal. Sampeyan sendiri yang tidak bisa ngladeni suami.
Yet the representation of man namely Pak Suyat and womans Yu Parti and
Yu Yem privilege is very turn upside down here just like nothing to do, or in
other word has no certain impact to the man while in fact each character has
“Yu Parti bukan tidak mengetahui hal itu. Kata Nyai Dimah, Yu Parti
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ya nggak apa-apa.” Pak Suyat memang tetap kembali ke kandang. Tapi
tidak lagi setiap hari. Entah ke kandang mana dia pulang saat tak bersama
Yem. Pak Suyat menggilir mereka. Jika hari ini bersama Yu Parti, besoknya
pasti pulang ke rumah Yu Yem. Kabar Yu Yem telah menjadi gendakan Pak
woman is constructed socially to cannot have a choice her will and wish in
husband. This regarded by Wollstonecraft that “But one grand truth woman
have yet to learn, though much it imports them to act accordingly. In the
lover the husband, even supposing him to be wise and virtuous, cannot long
stuffs. Pre assumption is because they have not enough education and the
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Moreover, in the next quotation of Entrok is a vivid a persecution by the
other words the provided answer only for woman in dealing something is
affirmative.
Teja untuk mengawiniku pada Simbok. Malam itu, di belakang rumah, saat
kuulangi permintaanku pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa, Simbok berbisik
pelan,”Nduk, anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya anak. Kalau
sudah ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa kualat, jadi perawan tua.”
(Madasari, 2010).
This can be seen and justified clarification where Okky Madasari is very
woman and woman itself. the answer has no room to say the opposite
request. As regarded Wollstonecraft consideration that “in the fact the female
point of view, the free will as woman is die, stolen, and raped, woman here
by the narration of “Kalau sudah ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa
kualat, jadi perawan” (Madasari, 2010), it is also show that woman pride is
determined by the virginity, not her quality of self like thinking, emotion or
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The next persecution comes up from the state apparatus role which has the
norm to be wise and can be relied on to solve the conflict fair. Yet here is
berdua, to. Dan namanya laki-laki kan biasanya yang mencari semuanya.
Lagi pula kalau sudah untuk anak kan sudah tidak ada masalah. Wong kita
hidup memang mau bikin mulia anak-anak kita,” Pak Lurah masih
diurus negara malah jadi repot semuanya,” kata Pak Lurah mengakhiri
This reflection is showing persecution upon woman was done state apparatus
which is officially as the government face to serve and help people as the
independent with the accusing that all wealth is only come from man hands,
second persecution is Marni as the people of the state was abused to accept
all the unfair offers. This is the most broken hearted of woman where all
hopes are gone even officially. This presentation is also emerging the
consideration that “for they then perceive that is only through their address to
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(Nurachman, 2017). The rejection of Marni to this persecution from state
apparatus was double damaged by the cultural reference of Jawa which state
by Pak Lurah as the inevitable culture and must be obeyed no matter what
“Ini tidak adil, Pak. Aku yang mengumpulkan semua harta ini. Kok bisa-
bisanya dibagi dua begitu saja tanpa bertanya ke aku? Orang ini yang tidak
pernah ngerti susahnya mengumpulkan barang dari sedikit, enak sekali tiba-
tiba dapat jatah yang sama dengan anakku. Apanya yang adil, Pak Lurah?”
”Ya memang begini ini adatnya orang Jawa. Namanya suami-istri itu cuma
satu. Sampeyan tidak bisa bilang ini yang mencari sampeyan. Ini yang punya
kalian berdua. Lagi pula orangtua mencari harta itu kan buat anak. Jadi kalau
This imitation constantly portraying the persecution upon woman was forced
emerging culture and race, those are made woman is cursed even if they are
not born yet from the womb of Javanese woman as her mother and the
second insight of the problem is upon the problem where woman is not being
treat as human being yet merely as instrument, facility, and rudely as a tool.
“Dari hari ke hari, aku merasa kami semakin dekat. Bukan, bukan dekat
yang seperti itu. Ini kedekatan yang tak tampak, yang hanya diketahui kami
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berdua. Saat aku memandangnya, sambil menyimak ceramahnya, aku selalu
tersenyum. Lembut dan tipis. Hanya aku yang bisa mengetahuinya. Hanya
beberapa detik, namun selalu berulang. Dan aku merasa kian hari kami
The narrative representation here showed that woman in fact through Okky
respect what is love and the nature of love itself and show as the expectation
Rahayu gross wishes, this can be more clarified following the causality of
(Madasari, 2010).
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This admiration from the eyes of Rahayu is preserving the blind spot where
woman cannot see the actual need of seeking real partner, this could be
Wollstonecraft to the woman situation in her era that “Could these girl have
been injured by the perusal of novels? Almost forgot the shade in the
(Nurachman, 2017).
affirmative and opposite, state apparatus, traditional vogue of java, the right
to get her financial independent, and the unconsciousness in viewing man, all
those are dominated and constructed by man in every system of life. Yet here
as final words this study declare to all devil form domination in persecuting
woman, woman is human as its nature not a body which only waiting to die
in the hands of man. Woman will fight, all woman around the world
REFERENCE
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Abrams, M. H. (1999). A Glossary of Literary Terms (7th ed). Boston:
Thomson Learning.
Aura Semesta.
Publication.
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social impulses give birth to various kinds of life activities, such as social,
economic, political, ethical beliefs, and others. So, this social impulse
ultimately encourages the creation of literary works that inevitably fight for
these various forms of social activity. Authors or writers are the creators of
because good literature is literature that is written with full honesty, clarity,
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able to remind, awaken, and return humans to the proper path, namely the
and customs of that era and literary authors are part of a society or place
values that live and develop in the midst of society because the novel is
never separated from the socio-cultural system that surrounds it. Thus, a
literary creation generally has a certain mandate. That is, the author tries to
activate the reader to accept his ideas about various aspects of life. Likewise,
Talking about the author's position, the researcher in this essay will analyze a
novel entitled Entrok Kaya Okky Madasari. It is undeniable that the author
has certain aims and objectives in making literary works. Literary works are
made in such a way as to spread the values that the writer wants to spread.
1950. As we all know that at that time, Indonesia was not doing well. There
are countless conflicts scattered all over. The power that exists in this novel
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is described as oppressive power to innocent people, the state misinterprets
the independence of its own nation because there are too many conflicts,
especially in this novel it raises the dark history in Indonesia, namely about
This novel was published in 2010, it means the author has a certain intention
in creating the Entrok novel. There is something that Okky wants to convey
literary works lies in that, consciously and unconsciously, the reader will be
made to think again about what has passed. In this case, the author has a kind
of principle in making a story. I don't know what the background behind the
author is, but what is certain is that the work created by the author is a social
“literary works are the media used by authors to convey their ideas and
In addition, literary works can also reflect the author's views on various
the text to the reader is a description of various social phenomena that have
occurred in society and are presented again by the author in different forms
and ways. In addition, literary works can entertain, increase knowledge and
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enrich the reader's insight in a unique way, namely by writing them in
narrative form. So that the message is conveyed to the reader without the
But literature is complex. The meaning of the story in a work of fiction can
determine the main theme of the story or major theme (meaning: the main
based on the facts that exist as a whole to build the story. Hill in Pradopp
states that “literary works are a complex structure, so to understand the need
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which are strongly influenced by the content of literature as a document of
the times. So that literary research has pragmatic value that will be useful for
academic task, but must also be able to provide enlightenment for the
related in it. So, the function of literary research will be a medium for readers
to understand the content of the story and the meaning in the text written by
the author.
Based on the opinion that has been mentioned above, the researcher in this
in literary studies that focuses on the study of the expression of the author's
expression of the author's life. So that the basic assumption of this essay can
prove that Okky Madasari uses literary works as a tool in his political
alignment.
Moreover, the author depicted its expression trough the power of describing,
portraying a complex scenery how politic event may leads such a massive
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crowd. This also can be claimed that the author promotes the thought about
literacy and political attitudes in an Indonesian state are still low, it show
how sentiment to them who not take its right to vote in the election.
keramaian yang ada di sana. Katanya pemilu itu sama ramainya dengan
gambyong, juga banyak pedagang keliling. Balai desa sudah ramai. Ada
penjual arum manis, balon, bakso, dan cendol. Di halaman balai desa dibuat
tiga kamar dari tripleks. Orang-orang berdiri mengular di pintu tiap kamar.
Following from this the author is simply wants to tell that election day can
be a party for people and warn that it can be so sentimental during the event.
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Moreover, the author feeling is exposed to”Cik Lien” character that the
“Aku tak tahu apa itu kelenteng. Cik Ellen sepertinya mengerti
leluhur. Mereka menyimpan abu nenek moyang dalam guci yang disimpan di
kelenteng, lalu berdoa di sana. Sejak goro-goro PKI, orang tidak boleh lagi
The author feeling in this narration is nothing but its interaction trough
reality and its creative skill to draw such confusion idea. This claim is
regarded to Wordsworth who said that“It means that literary woks the
process of creativity to response the interaction from the emotion and the
nature that made the feeling exist cause the object excites the feeling
strongly”(Nurachman, 2017).
freedom of speech and expression, this politic is very cruel. The author
whorules the state. This also contain the testimonial from the author which
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be discussed. Moreover, this is related with the consideration about the
menyebutnya golongan PKI. Tikno masuk penjara dan tak pernah kembali
sampai sekarang. Istri dan anaknya sejak itu kere. Tak ada yang mau
memberi pekerjaan, karena mereka keluarga orang PKI. Istri Tikno, Yu Nah,
tak pernah bisa ikut nderep, padahal itulah satu-satunya yang bisa
dikerjakan. Semua orang yang punya sawah menolaknya. Pernah dia datang
ke rumah ini, minta bekerja membantu Tonah. Tapi aku tak mau, takut
The next author projection is quite unseen but in deep understanding, it can
be identified a natural order where human is can very easy to pick a side,
easy to belief, and easy to force their belief to other by promoting every day.
It just like how boring Bu Lastri telling her admiration about the army, and
selalu menjaga kita. Orang-orang yang selalu memberi kita rasa aman.
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kehebatan Partai Beringin. Bapak tidak ada bedanya dengan tentara-tentara
itu. Kami tiba di rumah saat malam telah larut. Tak ada lagi orang lalu
ayam”(Madasari, 2010)
Moreover this show that the author may warn through its wise understanding
to stop, in other words the author tends the novel as a tool to tell about the
human is very political creature but once also withing is telling people to be
normal about it. This is very amazing of how the author namely Okky
Madasari promoting the natural order that human is political creature and the
truth that human is easy to belief. This is term is such an immortal pattern
which made this novel will durable because take the theme as intemporal
occupations are more easily comprehended; and are more durable; and lastly,
because in that situation the passions of men are incorporated with the
As a result , this essay claimed that author use this novel as a tool to convey
its political view which emerged from author’s experience, ideology, feeing,
and belief trough the scenery in the novel, characters and their experiences,
that author interest to dislike about tyrant, intolerance ideology, and forcing
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- What do you want to discuss actually?
- What theory do you want to use/apply actually?
- Too many introductory paragraphs Name: Moch Alif Yasin M
- Tooooooo many unnecessary informations
- Truly lack of real analysis
- There's no real analysis based on the theory of criticism learned in the class NIM: 1195030137
- Truly an inconsistent discussion
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about 6 million years ago, when the common ancestor of modern
(Wunn, 2000)
Pancasila which reads "ketuhanan yang maha esa" which indirectly obliges
determined without any reason, because religion itself has a function for
society. It unites people through their shared values, beliefs and practices.
many cultural norms. The third and last function of religion to the society
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is it offers the people a comforting self. They find strength and comfort
simple as just wanting to feel the benefits, many other factors are taken
good and bad things, usually containing orders about carrying out good
things and staying away from bad things. Then there are also guidelines
for living in personal and social life. On the basis of religion, many
well.
Rescuer, religion functions as a savior for people who carry out all
that is commanded by religion and stay away from all things that are
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prohibited by religion. The savior function in religion is even very broad
in scope, covering two realms, namely during the world and in the
afterlife. Most people want to follow a religion because they are afraid for
their safety in this life after death, because humans tend to be afraid of
can carry out all that is commanded by religion and stay away from all
teachings are binding on their adherents. These norms and rules can be a
will become one on the basis of faith because they have the same way of
after being chased by the Quraish infidels. Based on Ibn Katsir's notes in
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Bidayah wa al-Nihayah, Utsman bin Affan and his wife Ruqayyah were
perform the pilgrimage for those who can afford it. In ancient times, the
people who were able to perform the pilgrimage were only those who
lived around the Arabian peninsula, while those who were far from
Mecca would not be able to perform the pilgrimage. For this reason,
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Sublimatif function, in God's view through religious teachings, it is
taught that every thing that is done by humans if the intentions are good
Islam, if the work has good intentions and good practice, then it is worth
worship.
started by the American literary critic, T.S. Eliot, in 1938. It relates literary
works to evangelical values and the practice of using literary works in the
religious practice of the people Christian. The study released by T.S. The
the majority of citizens Muslims, has also developed a study that connects
Tapi aku tetap percaya, seberat-beratnya yang kualami, Mbah Ibu Bumi
Bapa Kuasa tetap akan memberi nikmat, sesuai apa yang selalu kuminta setiap
tengah malam. Memang salahku, tidak pernah meminta diberi ketenangan hidup,
dihargai, dan disenangi orang lain. Aku hanya minta diberi kemudahan rezeki, bisa
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menyekolahkan anak setinggi-tingginya, menebus penyesalan orangtuanya yang
seumur hidup hanya menjadi orang bodoh, tak pernah kenal huruf. (Madasari,
2010)
Marni feels safe, and can go through all the trials because Marni believes
Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa will still give her favors even though there is no
evidence that everything Marni can come from Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa.
Koh Cayadi menawari Ibu untuk ikut dalam ziarahnya pada Jumat Legi
yang jatuh minggu depan. Ibu langsung menyetujuinya. Mereka kini telah menjadi
them immediately close and trust each other. Koh Cayadi did not even
memasrahkan diri pada jalan kebenaran. Semuanya sama, tak ada yang ingkar, tak
ada yang berdosa. Kami semua belajar dan berlomba-lomba untuk mendapatkan
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surga. Di tempat inilah, aku seperti tengah mencuci segala dosa masa laluku,
memohon ampun karena tak bisa membawa orangtuaku sendiri, orang-orang yang
that was much different. Because Rahayu wants to learn about religion
here and with the support of the pesantren environment which is thick
with Islamic nuances, Rahayu also becomes a pious person. This rahayu
transformative function.
Based on the following fragment of the story the writer will look
for the form of reality of religious life in the novel which is the writer find
it related to the real life. The approach that will be used in analyzing
representation of the world and human life, and the primary criterion
6,7)
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Because there are various religions in this world. Disputes over
family, when there is one family member who does not follow in the
be gossiped about by the big family. But from a religious perspective, his
family doesn't want him to be a lost person and then be punished by God
because basically all religions say that religion is right while other religions
are wrong.
Relating to Emerson statement ―For all men live by the truth and
politics, in labour, in games, we study to utter our painful secret. The man
is only half himself, the other half is his expression.‖ (Nurrachman, 2017)
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In professing a religion, parents should not force their beliefs on
choose their own religion, but because they are afraid of being punished,
parents should give a good understanding that the religion they profess is
true. Parents must seduce as best they can so that the child is lulled by the
beauty of the religion they profess, not by coercion because the religion
Aku masuk kamar, menunggu Ibu pulang dari pasar. Sampai kudengar
teriakan Ibu dari kamarnya. Dia memanggil Tonah, bertanya ke mana tumpeng dan
panggang di kamarnya. Aku keluar kamar. ‖Aku buang. Itu sirik, dosa. Ibu tidak
beragama,‖ kataku sambil menangis. ‖Kata siapa aku dosa?‖ ‖Kata Pak Waji,‖
jawabku sambil terus menangis. Ibu makin marah. ‖Nduk, Rahayu! Ibumu tidak
membunuh, tidak mencuri, tidak menipu orang. Aku memanggang ayamku sendiri.
Membuat tumpeng dari berasku sendiri. Apa dosaku?‖ (Madasari, 2010, p. 57)
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context of good things, getting closer to God and not harming others,
was still wrong from the point of view of other religions, especially Islam
Tapi tak pernah kami membahas hal-hal yang berat seperti ini. Agama?
Apa agamaku? ‖Katanya ya Islam, Koh. Sama seperti orang-orang.‖ ‖Aku Kristen.
Ditulis di KTP. Sama seperti orang-orang.‖ Kami diam. Tak ada suara. Aku
masih tidak mengerti kenapa Koh Cayadi tiba-tiba menanyakan hal ini. ‖Tapi
sampeyan selamatan, Yu?‖ ‖Lha iya, Koh. Biar tercapai apa tujuannya. Biar
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Marni and Koh Cayadi don't even believe in the religion written
on their IDs. Marni and Koh Cayadi just go with the flow, have a clear
all the teachings of their religion. People whose IDs have a clear religion,
in fact, their attitude does not reflect that they are religious people.
people who still worship nature and their ancestors because they really
trust their parents and there are also many parents who are disappointed
because their children have different beliefs from those they hold. This
novel gives an example of the wrong way of solving the case of religious
Reference
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Surahmat. (2017). Sastra Agama teks, spiritualitas, dan keindahan. Semarang:
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ENTROK
―if a painter should decide to join the neck of a horse to a human head, and to lay
many-coloured feathers upon limbs taken from here to there, so that what is comely
woman above ended as a dark, grotesque fish below, could you, my friends, if you were
poety to be? Is it alright if a poet have their freedom on their works and
literary works?
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Talking about literature, for sure, it can not to be inextricable on the
Warren (1963:22) stated that the term literature seems best if we limit it
of facts, it is not just the collection of real events though it may happen in
the real life. Literature can create its own world as a product of the
(1981:307) says that " literature is a uniquely human activity, born of man's
will evoke an art entity that consists the values as the prior statement. It is
consequently go straight with Edgar Allan Poe argument, that said the
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Consecutively, Horace by all his wisdom informed us the same theory as
brief in what you say in order that your readers may grasp it quickly and
retain it faithfully. Superfluous words simply spill out when the mind is
than let solve the earlier question. As Horace said ‗to please should
idea about propriety that fit the rendering of a character, idea, and speech,
or scene. The goal of Decorum is to retain its unity; as the story goes on,
must be dealt with in the proper diction, metre, form, and tone. Farcical
should intone with the elegance and dignity commensurate with their
rank. For that purpose, as Horace said, the author must measure his
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ability before it turns into a progression of literary works. Briefly, each
―You who write, take a subject equal to your powers, and consider at
length how much your shoulders can bear. Neither proper words nor
lucid order will be lacking to the writer who chooses a subject within his
omitting many points for the moment. The author of the long-promised
Okky Madasari's novel Entrok tells the story of a patriarch's life through
the eyes of Sumarni and her daughter Rahayu. They were impoverished at
the start of the story, and it happened when Rahayu was child, but
Sumarni was able to change her fortune for the better after a difficult life
battle, as proven by their next event, in which they had a huge amount of
money and were able to send Rahayu to education. Rahayu is a little girl
and cultural issues. Sumarni was raised to worship the earth's mother and
father, not other gods, and despite not having studied, she possessed
rational reasoning. Rahayu, who was educated and taught Islam, has more
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modern ideals, while her mother, Sumarni, had not known Islam since
despite of the contents and the theme that presented at its narration,
―The tragic fear and pity may be aroused by the spectacle; but they may
the better way and shows the better poet. The plot in fact should be so
framed that, even without seeing the things take place, he who simply
hears the account of them shall be filled with horror and pity at the
incidents; which is just the effect that the mere recital of story in Oedipus
and how it should flow wade through the plot. Regarding to Madasari‘s
as it quoted below;
―Lima tahun aku menunggu hari ini datang. Pagi-pagi aku sudah mandi lalu
berdandan. Hari ini aku akan lahir kembali. Aku akan kembali menjadi manusia
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yang punya jiwa. Tidak hanya raga kosong yang menunggu kematian. Hari ini
sedikit dosaku akan tertebus. Utangku memang tak akan pernah impas. Tapi
Lima tahun ini, kulakukan segalanya untuk membuatmu kembali merasa berarti.
Setiap pagi aku mengajakmu menyusuri jalanan yang telah puluhan tahun
kaulewati. Agar kau kembali ingat kau adalah manusia hebat yang telah
illustrated above, the diction and how the regret afterthought was told
throughout the narration, the writer suggests that as Literary Decorum was
applied in it, considering the atmosphere and the tone of its manner of
As in accordance of Aristotle,
of incidents arousing pity and fear. Such incidents have the very greatest
effect on the mind when they occur unexpextedly and at the same time in
2017: 54).
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―Entrok memang terlalu mewah untuk aku dan Simbok. Apa yang masih
dipikirkan seorang perempuan kere buta huruf dengan tanggungan seorang anak
selain hanya makan? Suaminya, yang konon adalah bapakku, minggat entah ke
mana. Sejak kapan dia pergi aku juga tak ingat. Samar-samar aku hanya ingat
Bapak meninggalkan kami waktu aku pertama kali bisa mengangkat panci yang
sakit panas dan tidak bisa ke pasar. Kalau Simbok tidak ke pasar, kami tidak
akan punya makanan. Dan laki-laki itu dengan seenaknya hanya menunggu
makanan. Dia seperti anjing gila yang marah saat kelaparan. Iya, dia memang
anjing gila. Hanya anjing gila kan yang menggigit istrinya yang sedang sakit. Saat itu
sesenggukan. Laki-laki itu pergi setelah menghajar istrinya dan tak pernah kembali
instance, not far from the first quoted narration, there are more ‗pity‘ that
song (music), of which the first two are primary. Focusing on how
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Madasari intend to twist the character‘s destiny, by impoverished her. As
entrok, since it is a fancy matter, the baneful Marni that day was recalling
her memory on her father on old days. Where there is only suffering and
violence she may hear and see. By the detailed narration and how the plot
of every aspects that story had even started from the first line of writing.
And if it does not done correctly, as he ask at the very first, ―could you, my
―if your words are not appropriate, I shall laugh or go to sleep. Sad words
are appropriate to a sorrowful face; furious words are fitting to angry; gay
2017: 75).
As a finale, the writer had like to bring out the ultimate course of tragedy,
to face with his daughter, with their own each ethical claims on what they
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―Anakku Rahayu sekarang sudah lulus SMA. Matur nuwun, Gusti, aku yang
buta huruf ini punya anak yang sekolahnya tinggi. Sama tingginya dengan anak Pak
Lurah atau anak priyayi-priyayi guru itu. Anakku, yang orangtuanya buta huruf
semua, malah lebih pintar dibanding anak-anak orang-orang pintar itu. Ini semua
Lima ekor ayam telah disembelih. Tonah akan memasaknya menjadi panggang yang
enak. Dia juga akan membuat lima tumpeng dan kulupan. Malam ini aku mau
selamatan. Mengucapkan terima kasih atas kelulusan Rahayu, juga untuk kirim
doa agar setelah ini jalannya juga dilancarkan. Dia mau kuliah, mau jadi sarjana.
Pangestune, Gusti, biarkan aku yang pertama kali menyekolahkan anak sampai
sarjana di Singget ini. Tapi kenapa anakku itu semakin menjauh dariku?‖
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‖Apanya, Bu, yang disyukuri? Lulus SMA itu biasa. Nggak usahlah bikin
‖Yuk, jangan kurang ajar kowe! Ingat siapa yang membuat kamu seperti ini!‖
‖Siapa, Bu? Siapa? Bukan arwah-arwah itu yang membantuku. Semuanya karena
‖Yuk... Yuk... kok tega kowe ngomong kayak gitu ke ibumu ini. Ibumu yang
Aku tak mampu menahan air mata. Hatiku sakit. Sudah bertahun-tahun, Yuk.
Apa aku yang salah kalau sejak lahir aku nggak kenal Gusti Allah? Apa aku
yang salah kalau dari dulu aku hanya tahu bagaimana berterima kasih pada
leluhur? Selama bertahun-tahun, setiap hari aku menghindari omongan seperti ini.
Hanya supaya tak ada pertengkaran antara aku dan anakku satu-satunya ini. Tapi
sekarang dia malah terang-terangan membuat hatiku sakit. Justru di saat aku begitu
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―Although the structure of such a conflict has been variously formulated,
collision between agents who hold to different but often equally valid
(Gellrich, 2014).
In the last, from the entire description and prove above it might be
Reviewed from the appliance of plot and character, primarily, is the very
aspects and it keep literary works proper to their each genre and forms.
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Gellrich, M. (1984). Aristotle's Poetics and the Problem of Tragic
Aura Semesta.
Gramedia.
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- Such an inconsistent discussion 1195030140
- Which theory is actually wanted to use? Horace? Aristotle? Wordsworth?
Emerson?
- Be consistent with the topic and the theory used 5D
- Lack of real critical analysis
- Lack of relevant theoretical justification/supports
- Such a poor composition, esp on the cited narratives. 60 = C
EMERSON‘S TRANSCENDENTALISM IMPLEMENTATION ON
author's reaction to the environment and life. As a result of all that has
been mentioned previously, literary works are miniatures of life with all
its problems (Nurholis, 2019: 182). The author's themes, ideas, and ideas
are sourced from people's lives. The adoption of the social life of the
community in the form of literary works also raises the problems and
work, readers require something that move them on and able to capture
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their concerns. In literary terms, borrowing Aristotle idea—readers need
literary work, not something that is only identical to real life, which does
not always correlate to reality. Literary works can show the significance of
what happened at the time, both good and terrible, and readers may gain
In case there are any collision course on both literary works as social
reflection as its nature, and the usage of imaginative way as its method on
counterthesis are Horace's dulce and utile: poetry is sweet and useful.
basis of function than on that of nature. The view that poetry is pleasure
Once again, as a mixture of both side literary works require both utile and
dulce; literary works as the reflection of vibrant and dynamic social life
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and imaginative language as the way to deliver it to readers. As Horace
said, ―He who combines the useful and the pleasing wins out by both instructing and
delighting the reader.‖(Nurrachman, 2017: 82). Yet, the writer does not
intend to bring out the theory on this study as the guidance of reference
literary works.
was coincide with the Kartini Day on 21st of April, despite of its multi-
colonial era in Singget, a village where the story lives. Departing from her
fate by breaking through old norms and prejudicial dogma in its society
Even though the story with the characterize tends to portray a feminism
spirit, yet it is not the focus which will be studied on this essay. The
writing will take a zoom in closer to how Marnirun her beliefs on her
ancestors worship throughout the novel. The writer suggests that as the
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stated (Nurrachman, 2017:202), it depicts a basic theory of
―Simboktakberkataapa-apalagi.Diamalahmengajakkukeluarrumah, duduk di
atasbatu di
bawahpohonjambu.Harisudahgelap.Embusananginmembelaitengkuk.Bunyijangkrikd
siapuntukbangunsaatayamjagoberkokok.
cobanyuwunsamaMbahIbuBumiBapaKuasa. SemuakejadianhanyaterjadikalauDia
yang menginginkan.‖Simbokmenyuruhkumemejamkanmata,
lalumengucapkanpermintaankudalamhati.Simboksendirijugamemejamkanmata.Deng
jangkrikdankatakmenghentikansemuaocehannya.
SekadarmengikutiperintahSimbok, kuucapkanpermintaankudalamhati,
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memilikiseperti yang dimilikiNyaiWedana.Biarnggakpernahngrepoti orang lain.‖
Permintaanitukuulangiterus,
sampaiSimbokmenyentuhbahukudanmengajakkumasukrumah.‖ (Madasari,
2010:42).
who branding a literary flow with a vision to have kind of unity with
nature which will encourage the more feeling on poet by the support of
that phenomenon. This thoughts of idea, which will lead us into the
Emerson‘s Transcendentalism.
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Indonesian cultures, ancestors were the preeminent spiritual authorities.
that led from primeval, mythical times to their immediate forebears. Since
day situation. A person not only owed his or her ancestors for his or her
very existence, but also hoped for their protection and help in everyday
life. This had its more precarious side, however: it was the ancestors who
and punish social offenses; it was mainly the ancestors who had to step in
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―Ibujugarajinselamatan.Seminggusekali, setiapharikelahirannya,
diamenyembelihayamuntukdipanggang.Tonahmembuattumpengkecil,
danjenangputih.Ibumemanggilbeberapatetanggalaki-laki.MbahSambong,
SeusaiMbahSambongmembacaujub,
yang dimasaksetiapharikelahiran.
Ibumenyimpansatutumpengdanpangganglagilengkapdenganuborampe-nya di
Keesokanharinya, Ibuakanmengeluarkantumpengdanpanggangitu.
56).
As it is narrated above, the habitual things that Marni always did related
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‗sacrificed‘ at behalf of her wealth in order to fulfill the worship activity,
―For all men live by truth and stand in need of expression. In love, in art,
secret. The man is only half himself, the other half is his expression.‖
(Nurrachman, 2017:205).
did back then is give an implication as result. For the thought that has
This part is supported by the next act that Marni has done on spending
ancestors, she was kind of exaggeratly excited as she trusts, more noble
places she visited and more act of worship she done, she gain more
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―KohCayadimenceritakansalahsatukebiasaankeluarganya yang
diyakiniterbuktimembantukelancaranusahamereka.Sejakbertahun-tahunlalu,
tepatnyasaatiamasihkanakkanak di Surabaya,
menziarahinya.
Ibumendengarkansemuaitudenganantusias.Iasangatpercayaupayabatindiperlukanuntu
kmembantuseseorangmencapaikemakmurandankejayaan.
SelamainiiahanyamengenalMbahIbuBumiBapaKuasa.
Upayabatinnyabarusebatasmemohon di tengahmalam,
membawapanggangkemakampenguasadesa, danselamatansetiapharikelahiran.‖
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his own conscience and "do his own thing" in order to truly be a man.
right.
―These are the voices which we hear in solitude, but they grow faint and inaudible as
we enter into the world.Society everywhere is in conspiracy against the manhood of every
one of its members. Society is a joint-stock company, in which the members agree, for
the better securing of his bread to each shareholder, to surrender the liberty and culture
of the eater. The virtue in most request is conformity. Self-reliance is its aversion. It
loves not realities and creators, but names and customs.‖ (Emerson, 1841).
Later on, throughout the novel, OkkyMadasari showed readers how form
―Malam pun
datang.Senyapdandingin.Pesareanitutampaksepertimakampadaumumnya,
makammenghadapmakamEyangSujodanEyangJugo.Takadasuaraapa pun,
tengahmelakukanperjalananbatinkealamantahberantahmenemuidewapemberiberkah.
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KepadakuIbubercerita,
malamitusepertinyamemangmalamkeberuntungannya.Diahanyabisatirakat di tempat
banyakterdapatpohondewandaru. Dalamperjalananbatinnyamenemuidewa,
Diamerasakanadaanginberembuslembutmengenaimukanya.Bukanangin yang
pangkuannya.Ringansekalidannyaristakterasa.Ibumenyentuhbendaitu,
terasakering.Dialalumembukamatadanbetapagirangnyasetelahtahuitudaundewandaru.
her own belief, it was a hereditary which comes from Simbok, nevertheless
it everlasted even though there were a lot of pressure from society she
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implementation. Especially, for her acts on practicing Emerson‘s ‗Self-
Reliance‘. From Entrok, readers may see from the character that really
relied on her mind and belief, a most priviledge thing which a living
freedom.
References
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- Still having some retelling rather than pure analysis
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- Be aware of some mechanic errors
Literature has always been an art form that has always been revered for its
strength. The word "literature" itself comes from the Latin, "Litteraturae"
meaning is the imagination still imaginative which can be defined that the
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said by (Dobbie, 2012) which states that, "Literature is taken to be
mimetic, reflects and presents the truth about life and humans. the
condition." Surely poets imitate not only concrete things, even abstract
into nature as Plato said "Plato says that all art is mimesis by nature; art is
an imitation of life. He believed that 'ideas' were the ultimate reality. Art
imitates ideas and thus imitates reality.‖ (Team, 2012) poets imitates
essay that talks about women's lives in a patriarchal world. Since the 18th
century, the views of men and women have been different. Men are
due to the culture that arises from the association of patriarchal ideas that
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―The association of our ideas is either habitual
once taken in, they lie by for use, till some fortuitous
Nurrachman, 2017)
that men and women have different positions, men are in a better
position than women who are only satisfied. The existence of these
Researcher can find topic that are closely related to feminism in literature,
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written by a women, this novel story presented the subordination idea of
bin Syueb and the construct of patriarchy itself, other case is Nuraeni
can't choose her own desire to marry, at the age of sixteen she marry
Komar who almost thirty but nuraeni easily agreed to the matchmaking
because all she knew was that the tradition was one thing that was true
and matchmaking was what young women were waiting for the most at
her village while she didn't know that it cause by patriarchy's social
construction.
There is also other close relationship between the phenomena that occur
in the other novel yang menjadi objek kajian kali ini, the title is Entrok by
social construction, similar to the title Entrok or Bra, this story begin with
she often calls Simbok, are poor people, this can be seen from the
condition of their house and her mother's job as a cassava peeler. One
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day he saw a friend wearing an entrok, at first Sumarni did not know
what her friend was wearing, after her friend explained it was an entrok
or breast holder to hold her chest. Sumarni, who saw this for the first
time, immediately wanted it but because she was a poor, she could not
ask her mother or the person she often called Simbok. As a result, as in
her previous daily routine, Sumarni went to the market with Simbok but
this time she did not help Simbok for peeling cassava, but she wanted to
become a labour because labour were a man's job at that time and were
paid money, while cassava peeler, which incidentally was a woman's job at
that time, was only paid for cassava. The story continues on the life of
Sumarni who struggles through her faith such as working, getting married
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repeating ‗a set of phrases learnt by rote,‘ when nothing
Nurrachman 2017)
women are caused by the lack of education women receive in their life.
She also argued that subordination exist with the gap of knowledge and
Lagi pula tak banyak pedagang yang butuh buruh seperti Nyai
the reward for women working there is food or goods not with money,
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habitual slavery, to first impression, has a more baneful effect on the
female than the male character, because bussiness and other dry
2017)‖
Worse than that, even when women try to increase their bargaining price
(Madasari, 2010)
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Teja who underestimate Sumarni by laughing out loud and calling
twist into all their habits of thinking, or, to speak with more precission, of
(Nurrachman, 2017).
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This shows that Simbok's desire for approval for the marriage of her
namely
case where uneducated woman tend to pursue what they love while
neglecting their duties, this case was also happened with Sumarni by
Simbok. In the sequel, Teja becomes a bastard who only cares about his
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‖ Dasar Teja, lanangan nggak tahu diuntung. Susah
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the desperate effort of weakness flying from reflection
and in this case Teja showed this side to Sumarni by cheating with
mistress.
More than that, Sumarni's bad faith marrying a rogue man continues
when Teja's or her husband dies, his death not only brings sorrow but
also disaster. For Sumarni, Teja's death makes him have to deal with what
ndak tahu Teja punya anak.‖ ‖Ya, Bu. Kami tidak pernah
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bagaimana aku tahu ini memang anaknya Teja?‖ (Madasari,
2010:190)
husband as a lover;
2017).
Later, Sumarni had to fight to defend her property; her screams, her
marriage with Teja is not her fault but the association of cruel ideas,
Simbok as her mother who abandoned her mind and her condition as a
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Boston: Wadsworth.
Yogyakarta: Garudhawaca
Semesta.
PUBLICATIONS.
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MADASARI
In many literary works, the social issue that thrive in society sometimes
become the discussion that the author put on it. The authors put the
issue to acknowledge the readers to fix that problem and to invite the
readers to find the solution so the social life will be better. One of many
appear because of the inequality between the men and women in public
men but equal. Both men and women must have the same right. In many
Among many theories about feminism, here we will take one theory by
of The Rights of The Women‖ at the late 19th century. In his homeland
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England, Wollstonecraft saw that women is not as free as men to do
various things. She saw that women is an oppressed because the women
is not allowed to get the same education as men. The people thought that
women is only a passion satisfaction so the women in that era got their
no any women who want to change their life. This is what Wollstonecraft
criticized about the women in her era. She wanted women get the same
right as men, she wanted the women get the same education as men so
they can develop themselves and do many things not only a passion
satisfaction. And she didn‘t want men ruling about everything, she want
Okky Madasari. This novel is tell the story about two women Sumarni
and rahayu, mother and daughter. It tells us how they facing their life
with their own way. Both of them has different point of view about life
where Sumarni the mother still believe in ancestral spirits because she
never school and Rahayu the daughter believes in Islam because she
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school. And of course this novel has a feminism issue. The inequality
―Aku tak bicara tentang entrok kepada Simbok. Aku hanya berkata ingin
From this narration that told by Sumarni, we know that women has
different treatment where women only paid by food and men paid by
money. What I got from this scene is women described as if their job is
only take care of household things. Food is one of the stuff that should
people think that job should only do by women. This is scene is same
with what Wollstonecraft saw about the women in her age where women
only doing their work in their house such as cooking, and cleaning. It
seem in that era in Singget, the village where Sumarni Lives, that thought
where women only paid by food has been embedded in their thought
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―Pernah suatu kali kuberanikan diri meminta upah uang pada Nyai
Dimah, tapi langsung ditolak oleh Nyai Dimah. Kata Nyai Dimah, ia
tidak mampu mengupahi uang. Lagi apula di pasar ini semua buruh
ask to paid by money after she has finished spilling cassava, her request is
rejected by Nyai Dimah and wherever she ask to paid by money she will
be rejected because all women just paid by food. We can say that peeling
food is a women job and kind a women‘s skill so the paid is women paid,
food.
sepuluh singkong. Aku berpikir upah yang didapat Teja, si kuli pasar,
setiap hari. Teja mendapat satu rupiah untuk setiap barang yang
sudah mendapat sepuluh rupiah. Lima hari bekerja, uang Teja cukup
untuk membeli satu entrok. Kenapa aku tidak bekerja seperti Teja?‖
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It is definitely that women cannot working like men. Sumarni cannot get
money by doing the women job. It is obvious made her irritated by this
culture and this same as Wollstonecraft did in 19th century in her country.
She want to brake the idea that applied in that time where women not
allowed to study and learn the science in school just like the men did. In
Sumarni case maybe it is not school matter but about the job where
women cannot do the men job even if they able to do that. This is the
brake this inequality and show the people that women also has right to do
‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat.
dari rumah ke pasar. Hanya priyayi-priyayi saja yang nggak kuat ngangkat
goni.‖
‖Tapi tetap nggak umum, Ni. Di pasar ini, nggak ada perempuan nguli.‖
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In next conversation between Sumarni and Teja, it shows us that Teja
confirm that nguli the job that require strength and physical is not
common for women even if Sumarni able to do that. This is what makes
nguli become the men job and no women doing that job. This idea has
been embedded in everybody‘s mind. And men also believe that women
are weak confirmed from Teja‘s Words. That is another reason why
women cannot nguli. But that is not true because Sumarni said that she
can do that, she can pick weight stuff. From this I think that women
weakness is not naturally but it is made by the culture and tradition and
It same with Wollstonecraft‘s era where the idea that women only a
passion satisfaction for men has been embedded in everybody‘s mind and
the women admit it so women only learn how to satisfy men and bring
them a happiness. And because that idea has been embedded, no women
try to break that idea even if they do that it will benefit them, the women
could go to school and learn what men do and become anything not only
job it will benefit them they will get money to buy anything.
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‖Bukan masalah kuat-nggak kuat, Nduk. Ini masalah ilok-ra ilok—pantas-
This conversation between Sumarni and her mother show us why women
cannot nguli just like men it because does not look good if women nguli.
This reason that make women only paid by food. In Wollstonecraft case,
the women not allowed to study in school because their job only in home
and make a happiness to the men so what for studying in school if their
job only in home. This is everybody‘s thought in that era. In Sumarni case
maybe until now it still apply that everybody think women is not look
good nguli but I think there is no harm if women nguli if they want
Simbok berbisik pelan, ‖Nduk, anak perempuan itu harus punya suami,
punya anak. Kalau sudah ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa
men, if they are not marry they will get bad luck and hard life because
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they will not have income for their life. If we see to this novel yes,
women will not have income because their job is restricted, there are
‖Seret ya seret, Ndan. Cuma setoran buat sampeyan aja yang nggak boleh
‖Lha ya iya. Ini kan buat keamanan sampeyan dan keamanan lingkungan.
Iya, to? Kalau bukan kami, siapa lagi yang ngatur!‖. (Madasari, 2010. p,
52).
From this scene when Sumarni is asked money by the soldiers for the
willing to give her money to those soldiers because she did not know that
about the different between men and women. If men think with their
women think with their heart because they just study at home reading
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some romance novels. Sumarni did not study in school so she did not
know many things and just give her money to those soldiers.
school as well as men do so women can think with their logic and they
―Kita dulu kerja memeras keringat seharian, diupahi telo, bukan uang,
2010. p, 102).
besarnya sama, tidak lebih kecil hanya karena dia perempuan, lebih-lebih
From this narration seems like Sumarni happy because she has succeed in
her business and got a lot of money. In this narration also show us that
Sumarni want to make equality between men and women by pay the
women as much as the men do, not by food or other stuff. From this
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narration we know that both Sumarni and Wollstonecraft wanted the
rumah. Mau beli dagangan atau minta utangan. Lalu sambil lirak-lirik
This scene is when Amri, and Rahayu came from Yogya to Singget. In
this scene women described as Wollstoncraft said that they are thinking
with their heart, all inside their mind is just love. It seen when the women
will happen if women think with their heart not their logic.
‖Ini untuk kami semua. Lha aku malah rela mengorbankan anakku.
sampeyan, apa yang sudah sampeyan lakukan? Prek! Kyaimu malah pamit
This scene is actually a vile and barbaric act. In this scene a father willing
daughter body to them just to stop what will the soldiers do next day.
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This is confirm that women is a desire object, a passion satisfaction just
What I got from Entrok is inequality between men and women is came
from the culture and tradition for example men believes that women is
weak and cannot do the job that require strength but it is not true,
women could do that if they want just like Sumarni did when she nguli in
Ngranget store. That weakness does not come naturally but made by the
Reference
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Muhammad Bukhari M. H.
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GENDER DISCRIMINATION IN ENTROK NOVEL BY
OKKY MADASARI
the ideas and feelings, actions and also works that are the results created
(Koentjaraningrat).
values.
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These values, for example, men as the head of the family bear the
understand the real concept of gender, even from other women who
conservative environment who have felt that they have an important role
does not have to be seen from the side of women as those who ask for
and want "equality" while men are the givers of "equality". Gender in
If gender issues are still viewed from a conservative side, gender equality
joint effort between men and women. Men must take part in efforts to
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Entrok by Okky Madasari is a novel about a patriarch's life, as told
from the perspective of Sumarni and her daughter Rahayu. At the start of
the story, they were poor people, and it happened when Rahayu was
younger, but after a difficult life fight, Sumarni was able to alter her fate
for the better, as evidenced by their next scenario, in which they had a lot
of money and were able to send Rahayu to school. Rahayu is a little girl
who despises her mother because they hold opposing views on matters
like as religion, economy, and culture. Rahayu, who was educated and
taught Islam, has more modern ideas, but her mother, Sumarni, had not
know Islam since she was a child, Sumarni was raised to revere the earth's
mother and father, not other gods, yet despite not having studied, she
possessed rational reasoning. Of course, there are many twists and turns
Magetan named Marni and her daughter, Rahayu. Marni is a strong village
she and simbok wrestled with the market for money, helping peel cassava
to manners. He was jealous of the cool man. They are not paid with
cassava like she and simbok, but with money. She wants to earn money
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too, so she can buy entrok (bra). When expressing her desire to join as a
the porters like a man, of course Marni had met resistance from simbok.
He said it was not good for women to do men's work. In fact, Marni
Marni started to become the first and only female porter at that time.
This novel does not end with Marni's story, Okky Madasari writes this
novel using two points of view. The first point of view he took from the
character Marni as the main character, and told the life of Marni. She still
tells the same life, but she takes this second point of view from the point
In writing this Entrok story, the author uses the first person point of
view or 'I'. However, what is different from the use of Entrok's point of
view is that the main character with 'I' is not just one character, but two,
namely Marni and Rahayu. In other words, this novel tells the story of
writing, it is felt that these two characters present the story in their own
style. The diction, language style, and point of view used are different
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The discrimination experienced by Marni's character as a woman
can be seen when she really wants to get money to buy entrok. She made
various efforts until she was against her nature as a Javanese woman to be
able to fulfill her desire. This can be seen in the following quotes.
Aku tak bicara soal entrok kepada Simbok. Aku hanya berkata ingin
membantunya mengupas singkong, siapa tau bisa dapat uang. Simbok berkata, aku
dengan bahan makanan. Beda dengan kuli laki-laki yang diupahi dengan uang.
(hlm. 22)
The quote shows the injustice between women and men, namely in
Aku terdiam setengan kecewa. Tapi aku tetap memaksa ikut ke pasar. Aku
bilang pada Simbok, tak apalah kita kupas singkong diupahi singkong. Paling
tidak kalu ikut membantu, singkong yang kita bawa pulang bisa semakin banyak.
Gaplek yang kita punya bisa makin banyak. Kita bisa makan lebih banyak dan
jadi kenyang. Simbok mebiarkan aku ikut ke pasar. Aku berpikir bagaimana
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The quote shows Marni's disappointment when she wants to go to
work but is not allowed by her Simbok. Simbok Marni advised that
women work in the market to trade or help out in the market such as
sepuluh singkong. Aku berpikir upah yang didapat Teja, si kuli di pasar, setiap
hari. Teja mendapat satu rupiah untuk setiap barang yang diangkatnya. Kalau
sehari dia bolak-balik mengangkat sepuluh kali, dia sudah mendapat sepuluh rupiah.
Lima hari berkerja, uang Teja cukup untuk membeli satu entrok. Kenapa aku tidak
The quote shows when Marni got tired of working peeling cassava
and only got cassava. Marni thinks of working as a coolie like Teja so she
can earn money. Teja laughed out loud at my request. That's not really
the answer I wanted. I waited quite a while to get the real answer.
―NI, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak ada yang akan
kuat. Sudah, perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong. (hlm.
34)
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The quote shows that the locality of women working is only as a
cassava peeler. This can be seen when Teja laughs at Marni who wants to
―Aku kuat, Kang. Biasanya aku juga nggendong tenggok, nggendong goni.
Bakul-bakul itu juga banyak yang mengangkat sendiri dagangannya dari rumah ke
market.
―Nduk, semua itu sudah ada jatahnya. Orang kayak kita bagiannya ngoceki telo,
―bukan masalah kuat—nggak kuat, Nduk. Ini masalah ilok-ra ilok pantas
The quote shows when Simbok Marni refused his son to become a
or in Javanese it is ora ilok. From this quote, it can be seen that the
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Pagi itu kami berangkat ke pasar, tanpa menyinggung rencanaku nguli.
Simbok sudah yakin aku tak akan melakukan hal yang ra ilok. Padahal dalam
hati aku tetap bertekad akan nguli. Akan ku tinggakan Simbok saat dia sibuk
mengupas singkong-singkong Nyai Daimah. Aku akan pergi sebentar. Setiap selesai
ngangkat barang, aku akan kembali sebentar mengupas singkong. Simbok lalu akan
The quote shows when Marni was eager to get money to buy
This shows Marni's resistance to the locality of Javanese women who can
Aku tertawa dalam hati saat mendengan nasihat Mbah Noto. Memang benar,
di pasar ini tidak ada perempuan yang nguli, pekerjaan berat yang menggunakan
tenaga besar. Di pasar ini, buruh perempuan mengerjakan pekerjaan yang halus dan
enteng, seperti mengupas singkong, menumbuk adi, atau menumbuk kopi. Tapi coba
mengerjakan semua pekerjaan yang ada, mengambil air dari sumber dengan
menempuh perjalanan naik-turun. Berat satu jun yang berisi penuh air sama saja
dengan satu goni berisi singkong. Tidak ada laki-laki yang mengambil air, katanya
itu urusan perempuan. Yang jelas lebih enak nguli daripada ngambil air. (hlm. 37).
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The quote shows when public protests began to occur when they
saw Marni, who was a woman, had to be a coolie in the market. This is an
itu memanggilku. Inilah kiranya orang yang akan pertama kali memberiku uang
(hlm. 38).
The quote shows that it is very clear that none of the women
worked as coolies in the market, because this was related to ilok-ra ilok
which meant it was inappropriate for a woman to work hard like a coolie.
Daimah. Melihatku nguli, Nyai Daimah menyapa setengah mengejek, ―Wah, dapat
duit ya sekarang‖. Sementara Simbok hanya diam, pura-pura tidak tahu (hlm. 38)
The quote above shows the treatment from around Marni that puts
her down when she sees her working in the market because the work she
mengupaih mereka dengan uang sebesar buruh lelaki. Upah yang besarnya sama,
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tidak lebih kecil hanya karna dia perempuan, lebih-lebih hanya diupahi telo. (hlm.
103)
The quote shows when Marni, who has been successful, wants to
equalize women's wages with men's wages, namely both being paid
dilancarkan, aku punya duit untuk membeli tanah lagi yang kutanami padi dan
kacang. Akan aku pekerjakan perempuan-perempuan itu dan kuberi upah tak
The quote above shows that the women at that time were given
wages that were far from the income of their husbands. Marni prays to
her ancestors that she will be given sustenance to buy land so that women
can also work in the fields and earn money, no longer working and
especially in work. Women are too limited, which is certainly unfair when
done, for example, women only get wages for food ingredients, not
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Barker, C. (2016). Cltural Studies. Yogyakarta: Kreasi Wacana.
Pustaka Pelajar.
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- Lack of focus
- lack of consistency
- Some still merely retelling Muhammad Fajar Ismail
- Some narratives and the analysis made relevant with the theory
used, some others not
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- Lack of relevant theoretical supports/justifications
- Be aware of mechanic errors: paragraphing, citation, punctuation,
capitalization, etc 65 = C V-D
Literary works, there are many literary works that exist in our lives with
various different genres, and of course literary works have its beauty and
lessons that can be applied in our life, for the example is literary works
their book entitled Revisi Politik Perempuan (2003:34) she stated that
that occurs both in the family, at work, and in society as well as conscious
actions against men. Whom Both men and women to change the
literary works, because in some places there are still those who apply a
tradition occurs because women are still shackled by the tyranny of men.
As Wollstonecraft stated out that, the beginner and the trigger of female
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In addition, Mary Wollstonecraft has also discussed feminism in her work
discussion, Mary wrote that the woman was not weak, but it's all because
Women didn't get an education and given a cultural pattern that make
the culture blinding the society where Sumarni lives. It happens because
of the old tradition implying that women are not worthy to earn money
Entrok tells many story, from the ancestor to the main character about
how the life without education which bring them to the conflict to their
and they are all submissive to men, and men seems dominate their lives.
And all of this explained and written by Mary Wollstonecraft that a long
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tradition of men is contributed to make "weak-characters" of women
written that Pak Suyat even he is an old man and not rich, he could stop
two women that having great anger and also after that no one blame Pak
Suyat after what his done for having mistress, and his wife and his
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mistress still love this old man and submissive to him. Even also Yu Parti
and Yu Yem are women who still can get money frome their business,
and for Yu Parti, her food stall (pecel) isn't belonging to Pak Suyat at first.
―Yu Parti berjualan pecel di pasar ini sejak belum bertemu Pak Suyat. Mereka
bertemu saat Pak Suyat mulai nguli di pasar ini. Sejak menikah, Pak Suyat
berhenti nguli dan membantu istrinya berjualan pecel. Mencari daun untuk
pincuk dan membuatkan kopi untuk pembeli. Pecel itulah sumber penghasilan
mereka.‖ (Madasari, 2010, p. 28).
And then, because men are better in the story, having mistress isn't
―Yu Parti bukan tidak mengetahui hal itu. Kata Nyai Dimah, Yu Parti
pernah berkata, ‖Namanya juga laki-laki. Asal mbaliknya tetap ke kandang
ya nggak apa-apa.‖.‖ (Madasari, 2010, p. 27).
Okky Madasari recounts the figure of Bu Jujuk, the wife of the sub-
district office keeper, Pak Jujuk. In the middle of the story chapter 2, Bu
Jujuk is told as a woman who only could cry when scolded and share her
sad story about her husband to Sumarni because she can do nothing."
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Dia tak mungkin bercerita ke tetangga-tetangganya, malu. Kalau dipendam
terus, lama-lama makan hati. Bu Jujuk memilihku. Barangkali karena aku
sudah dipercayai, atau mungkin hanya sekadar karena aku bocah ingusan yang
tidak mungkin bercerita kepada siapa-siapa.
‖Suamiku itu lho, Ni. Dia gendakan sama kledek. Sudah lama, Ni. Tapi aku
diam saja. Aku nggak mau ribut, nggak mau cari masalah. Tapi aku nggak
kuat, Ni. Hatiku diiris-iris.‖
Tangis Bu Juju meledak. Hanya kami berdua yang ada di rumah itu.
Tentu tak ada yang bisa kukatakan pada Bu Jujuk. Menikah saja aku belum,
apalagi tahu bagaimana rasanya suami punya gendakan. Tapi Bu Jujuk
memang tak pernah bertanya padaku. Setiap ceritanya hanya ditutup dengan
tangisan. Begitu terus berulang kali.
Suatu hari, suami Bu Jujuk pulang saat Bu Jujuk untuk kesekian kalinya
menceritakan lakon Pak Jujuk dan kledek gendakan-nya. Bu Jujuk yang tak
menyadari kehadiran suaminya terus menumpahkan perasaan sambil menangis.
Semuanya langsung berhenti saat terdengar teriakan suaminya. Bu Jujuk
langsung menghapus air matanya, lalu buru-buru masuk rumah. Dari luar
kudengar umpatan-umpatan suami Bu Jujuk.
‖Istri nggak tahu diri! Kerjaannya rasan-rasan14 terus!‖ Tak ada jawaban dari
mulut Bu Jujuk. Lenyap semua umpatan yang sebelumnya dikatakan padaku.
Bu Jujuk kembali ke dunianya, dunia yang penuh kepatuhan dan ketakutan.‖
(Madasari, 2010, p. 46-47).
submissive to his husband even after what her husband have done for
having a mistress. Regadless of her position, women hve the right thing to
fight the injustice of being betrayed of their married and those who
betraying their partner life, have no right thing to angry and even more to
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As Marry Wollstonecraft said, It is not uncommon for a society's old
villages and are still shackled by a patriarchal conscience, which still lacks
men and women cannot balance. Justice in gender equality is still less
‖Aku kuat, Mbok. Lha wong kita tiap pulang dari pasar juga nggendong goni.
Malah jaraknya jauh, naik-turun.‖
‖Bukan masalah kuat-nggak kuat, Nduk. Ini masalah ilok-ra ilok—pantas-
nggak pantas. Nggak ada perempuan nguli.‖ (Madasari, 2010, p. 35).
And now, here the main female character in this story chapter 2,
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She is the woman who fight for feminist and ignore the culture that stop
‖Nduk, entrok itu mahal. Mbok mending duitnya buat makan,‖ kata Paklik.
‖Wong aku nggak pernah pakai entrok juga nggak apa-apa,‖
kata istrinya..‖ (Madasari, 2010, p. 19).
From the context above, it seems the place & times setting are from
who have husband that still working for money couldn't buy another
entrok, and also cassava as the main food because rice is also expensive
and only for rich people. And it's the reason why injustice of women are
something common because they have no right thing to do for their life
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And it is confirmed by Rousseau that women no need to be
are born is only for biological and sociological needs for men, and the
to a man.
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―Ia Nduk, anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya anak. Kalau sudah
ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa kualat, jadi perawan tua.‖
Aku tak membantah omongan Simbok." (Madasari, 2010, p. 48).
Hari itu, Teja pulang ke rumah Simbok. Jadilah kami tinggal bertiga di gubuk
itu. Simbok memasang papan yang membagi gubuk kami menjadi dua bagian.
Bagian depan dari pintu masuk sampai cagak, menjadi tempat untukku dan
Teja. Simbok menempati bagian sisanya, yang dekat dengan pawon."
(Madasari, 2010, p. 48).
In the end, although Sumarni afraid and don't want married, she still
can't reject the culture and tradition, which having husband is a great
oppertunity and if she reject the proposal marriage, she will got karma.
From the story above The tradition from an old tradition are the factor
because they are not allowed to do much. The role of parents is also
the culture and traditions which also made the women became that
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way. As Wollstonecraft said, the mind is not gendered. The role of
References
Semesta.
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- Too many introductory paragraphs
- Too many unnecessary informations
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- Too many narratives quoted yet lack of real analysis
5D
- Lack of relevant theoretical supports/justifications
60 = C
- Use the references to support the analysis, not only to be cited in the
introductions
- Be aware of some mechanic errors
Since literature is derived from the Latin littera, which has meaning ‗a
(1996 : 15), the criteria of matter than can be mentioned as literary works,
were honestly ideological; the values and ‗tastes‘ of particular social class.
the entities, literary works may have done great communication and
commentary on the reality of human being and their interaction for many
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centuries. This connection, later, probably has aroused another approach
creations may have portrayed the part of society dimension through the
media.
order to amuse and gain reader‘s gaze on the topic that presented in the
literature, the authors must encourage their ‗creative power‘ so that the
be affecting and must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. As people's
faces smile on those who smile, in a similar way they sympathize with
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As he loved the way Wordsworth‘s put beauty on poet by the movement
stated,
―more then one rejoinder declared that the importance I here assigned to
creative effort of the human spirit over its critical effort.‖ (Nurrachman,
2017:226).
aroused the nature, and left the society behind. On Arnold‘s thought,
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literary works suppose to able maintain both of powers; critical power
‖Wordsworth holds the critical power very low, infinitely lower than the inventive; and
he said today that if the quantity of time consumed in writing critiques on the works of
others were given to original composition, of whatever kind it might be, it would be
much better employed; it would make a man find out sooner his own level, and it
would do infinitely less mischief. A false or malicious criticism may be much injury to
the minds of others, a stupid invention, either in prose or verse, is quite harmless.‖
set out the story around Sumarni, a woman who has been lived among
patriarchal society. Set place in Singget, Sumarni whose really eager to have
educational woman, who urges to prevail on her destiny when she step
on at her life little by little, she already meets the obstacles; from the
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cultural view on working woman, the unreasonable claims on her belief,
The large picture above, may implied how many multi layer issues that
has put focus on the Matthew Arnold‘s Critical Power, the writer intend
to dissect and identify some narration that related towards the theory.
This profound research will deliberately use objective approach thal also
tends to judge the value of the work according to its success in achieving
that aim.
disinterested. The critic must be from the ―interests‖ which in any way
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the law of its own nature, which is to be a free play of the mind on all
attached to them quite sufficiently, but which criticism has really nothing
of take review on the characters, the writer would like to try to assert and
it is related issue and quite compatible with the real society events.
outlook, people tend to prepossess the negative idea about the person at
commentary.
Orang-orang bilang, Ibu memelihara tuyul. Makhluk halus berkepala gundul yang
bisa membuat orang yang memeliharanya kaya. Setiap malam tuyul keluar rumah,
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Kata mereka, ‖Bagaimana mungkin Marni kere bisa jadi sekaya ini kalau tidak
punya tuyul?‖ Bagaimana orang yang dulunya makan saja tidak bisa sekarang
punya rumah megah, roda empat, dan berhektar-hektar tanah kalau bukan karena
tuyul?
kamar mandi. Rumah kami terdiri atas empat bangunan rumah Jawa. Satu
bangunan untuk tamu, kami menyebutnya omah ngarep. Di belakangnya ada omah
mburi, tempat kami biasanya tidur bersama di atas tikar, padahal ada dua kamar
di sana. Keluarga ini memang tidak terbiasa tidur di kamar. Begitu juga aku.
Kamar-kamar itu hanya untuk menyimpan berbagai barang. Selebihnya, itu hanya
mengikuti model bangunan yang kata orang bangunan modern. Di sebelah omah
mburi ada dapur besar dengan empat pawon. Di depannya ada bangunan yang kami
sebut toko. Di situ Ibu biasa menaruh semua barang dagangan yang dijualnya di
individual manner, and then it will used to earn what the perpetrator
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Begitu tentara-tentara itu pergi, Bapak dan Ibu bertengkar hebat.
‖Kamu jangan seenaknya, Ni. Mau kamu dicap PKI, dipenjara kayak Pak
Tikno?‖ ‖Halah! Aku bukan PKI! Aku cuma mau cari makan. Tidak mencuri.
Tidak merampok. Apa aku salah? Terus mereka seenak udele meras orang. Dulu
‖Tapi mereka petugas, Ni. Orang yang mengamankan kita!‖ ‖Hasyah! Prek!‖
‖Kowe prak-prek-prak-prek terus! Mau nanggung kalau kita nanti dicap PKI?
Mau kalau nanti kita semua dipenjara?‖ ‖Terserah! Yang penting aku bukan
PKI.‖ Hari itu berakhir dengan pertengkaran antara Bapak dan Ibu. Pertengkaran
After this event, in sequel, other things occurred with similar substance.
The different is, it comes from a matter of leaders echelon. Which in this
case, the form of the deeds occured in form of pressure that injured the
private rights that people should have. It showed, that the depiction of
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Keesokan harinya, pagi-pagi sekali, saat aku belum berangkat sekolah dan Bapak-
Ibu belum berangkat ke pasar, Pak RT datang ke rumah kami. Dia datang
mengenakan sarung yang digunakan tidur, dengan mata yang masih merah menahan
kantuk. Pak RT menyapa Bapak dan Ibu yang tengah bersiap-siap di depan pintu
‖Yu Marni, Kang Teja, kemarin ada komandan mampir ke rumah saya. Katanya
habis dari sini. Komandan bilang... emmm... sampeyan tidak tahu pentingnya
keamanan.‖
‖Ya bukan begitu, Pak RT. Saya itu cuma bingung, wong saya tidak punya musuh
‖Itu sudah normal, Yu. Sudah aturan negara, semua orang harus menjaga
‖Ya saya agak berat to, Pak RT. Wong saya kerja meras keringat siang-malam
buat cari makan. Ini bisa bangun rumah kayak gini dari mengumpulkan sedikit
demi sedikit.‖
‖Huss, Ni! Maaf, Pak RT, memang Marni nggak ngerti apa-apa soal keamanan.
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Bapak memotong jawaban Ibu.
‖Ya sudahlah. Itu urusan kalian. Saya cuma mau meng ingatkan, kita butuh
tentara. Mereka itu yang bisa buat kita aman. Saya tidak mau gara-gara kalian,
ada goro-goro di kampung kita. Kalian ingat to, kejadian Tikno? Gara-gara orang
yang sakpenake dewe seperti dia, orang sekampung direpotkan. Sekarang malah
anak-istrinya keleleran, kita juga yang repot. Saya tidak mau kejadian seperti itu
Bapak mengiyakan dengan lirih, nyaris tak terdengar. Ibu hanya mengangguk lemah.
Tak ada bantahan dari mereka berdua. Pak RT pamit pulang. Bapak dan Ibu
every author‘s works. They were expected to be able to bring out the
transcendent and neglect the real life, because society is essentially part of
―Presently these new ideas reach society, the touch of truth is the touch
of life, and there is stir and growth everywhere; out of this stir and
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society—considerations which are apt to become too abstract and
life and the world before dealing with them in poetry; and life and the
modern poet, to be worth much, implies a great critical efford behind it;‖
At final, as it has been described and explained throughout the novel and
theories, it can be concluded that; the society which has been depicted in
References
Abrams, M. (1979). The Mirror and the Lamp: Romantic Theory and The
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Eagleton, T. (1996). Literary Theory: An Introduction. London: Basil Blackwell
Gramedia.
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- Lack of focus
Name: Muhammad Ichsan Shaefulloh
- Jumped-up ideas
- Some analysis are still irrelevant with the theory used
- Lack of real critical analysis Student‘s ID: 1195030147
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- Inconsistent sources/references Class: 5D
- Be aware of mechanic errors
OKKY MADASARI’S ENTROK: A BAD CONTENT NOVEL
that tells conflicts of actors so that there is a change in path or fate of the
Laelasari and nurlaela, ―novel is long prose essay that contains a series of
stories of a person‘s life with the people around him by highlighting the
Literary works are closely related to the social life of society. This
is because literary works are the result of the author's imagination and
reflection on social phenomena that occur in society and are poured into
Dr. I made Suarta and Kadek Adhi Dwipayana (Suartata & Dwipayana,
the author which departs from the social problems of society. From the
explanation above, we know that literary works are based on reality and
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can‘t be separated with reality. it is called mimetic. Mimetic is a word that
2018), stated that there are some functions of literature and one of them
education tool.
words and in action, writer should provide good action only and
implicitly and literary works are such great tools for teaching
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children because Literary works are believed to be capable of being
Plato states that the beginning is the most important part of any work,
especially in the case of a young and tender thing; for that is the time at
which the character is being formed and the desired impression are more
expected to contain something good so that they can give good impact
for reader especially for children and expected to avoid bad things.
However, there are still many literary works that contain bad things or
inappropriate things that we can find today and one of them is a novel
novelist that was published in April 2010 on Kartini's Day. This novel is
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the first novel of Okky Madasari and is inspired by life experiences that
“Ide novel ini lahir dari keluarga besar saya di Magetan, tempat
(Madasari, 2010).
Entrok is a novel set in the time of new order that tells a story of 2
This story begins with sumarni, a poor girl who has desire to buy an
entrok for herself but she doesn‘t have money. For this reason, Sumarni
determines to work as cassava peeler like her mother so that she can get
money and buy an entrok but in reality, she doesn‘t earn money. Instead,
she gets cassavas. She begins to work as a porter to earn money and
break a stereotype that porter job is only for men and finally, she can buy
an entrok.
is something that is not good because it can produce a bad impact on the
censorship of the writers the writers of fiction, and let the censors
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receive any tale of fiction which is good, and reject the bad‖. Censorship
language and maybe lead to a vulgar one, sexual content, violence. The
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“Di rumah, Simbok biasa mengumbar
Sumarni is a girl who has just grown up and is in her puberty. One of
explicitly in literary works. Besides that, Okky also wrote about Marni
comparing her breasts with her mother's breasts and also told about her
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narratives written by Okky are very likely to make the reader imagine
something sexual and this can have a bad impact on readers, especially
phare or sentence such as “dada Simbok yang besar, kendor, dan menggelantung
In this novel, Okky also presents sexual activity as Sumarni and Teja are
getting married. Okky describes the sexual activity between Sumarni and
―Menangis & Tertawa‖ and even though Okky doesn‘t present it very
vulgar, it still can make the reader imagine something sexual and still have
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tertawa penuh kemenangan. Aku
Yem and Yu Parti. Even though the fight between Yu Yem and Yu Parti
is not too dangerous because it‘s just by pulling hair but still it is not
appropriate to show it explicitly on the novel and it also can cause bad
impact on reader. So, this must be censored and this also contains a harsh
seluruh los.
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Jadilah dua perempuan itu saling menjambak.
There are also other violence shown in this novel. Amri is trying
these scenes can also make readers think that being a soldier
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perut. Aku sudah tidak tahan...”Berhenti...
(Page 148)
(Page 154).
beaten, kicked are things that are not very good to be presented in
namely silencing.
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kerusuhan. Tak ada sedikit pun yang
(Page 161)
Amri, Rahayum, Iman, Arini, and Taufik are fighting for justice
words, sexual activities and silencing and all the contents of this
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bad literature because good literature is a literary work that
readers.
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REFERENCE
2(1).
http://conference.unsri.ac.id/index.php/SNBI/article/view/1301
KARAKTER. 10.
Rajawali Press.
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Muhammad Ilham Akbar
- Having more retelling than real analysis
- Having some jumped-up ideas
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- Needs more real critical-analytical arguments
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- Still lack of relevant theoretical justifications/supports
- Inconsistent references
- Be aware of mechanic errors 60 = C
ENTROK AS THE WOMEN’S IMAGE OF FEMINISM
BY OKKY MADASARI
both aesthetic and socially relevant. Wellek (1993: 3), stated that
the author's desire to express his or her existence through the expression
from the expression of the sediment of experience that has existed in the soul of the
author in a deep way through the process of imagination‖ (Aminuddin, 1990: 57).
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In literary criticism those are opinion that supported by evidence in
Literary criticism that also includes about work‘s discussin content and
upgrade ideas with the other and gained by research. There is not
literary work is one that is able to leave the viewer with a statement and a
general feeling. In this case, readers can enjoy a literary work while also
gaining valuable knowledge from it. As a result, the reader will be satisfied
with literature if they can obtain both of these topics. As wisely told by
William Wordsworth, who advised that ―For all poetry, good poetry is a
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Issues arising from gender differences resulting in a societal appreciation
which primarily affects women. This is a serious issue. It's possible that
this is due to the negative stereotype that women are weak. Feminist
person who fight for gender equality in social context, economic context,
a long term and achievement of their specific and practical action (Guo,
2019).
women are still enslaved by male tyranny, this tradition severely restricts
female follies are from the tyranny of man‖ (Wollstonecraft, 1792, p. 160). In her
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book 'A Vindication of the Rights of Woman,' Mary Wollstonecraft also
women to achieve gender equality. Mary also stated in this book that
in her feminist strategy: "What nonsense!" Not only Rousseau but also most of
the male writers who have followed in his footsteps have argued that the whole tendency
of female education should be directed toward one purpose: to make women pleasing to
continiously with the novel that will be criticized. Entrok novel written by
woman, came from a low-income family. When Marni, who lives alone
with her mother or simbok, reaches puberty, she has issues. Something
was growing in her chest, namely enlarged breasts, she felt mringkili
which made her unable to move freely. Marni, like her cousin Tinah,
wants entrok (BH or bra). However, at the time, entrok was a luxury item
with a high price tag. Simbok, whose daily wages consist solely of cassava,
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about how to get her to have encroachment as a result of her desire,
shape:
―Aku masih sangat muda.‖ And in line ―Saat tinggiku sudah sepundak Simbok
dan tangan kananku bisa meraih kuping dengan mudah. Saat itu aku menyadari
ada sesuatu yang berbeda di dadaku. Ada gumpalan yang lembut dan terlihat
menyembul dari balik baju yang kupakai. Simbok bilang aku sudah mringkili.
Kataya itu hal biasa yang akan dialami semua perempuan. Kataya mringkili adalah
salah satu tanda aku sudah bukan anak-anak lagi. Aku bandingkan dadaku
dengan dada Simbok yang besar, kendor, dan menggelantung seperti pepaya. Kata
Simbok saat bayi aku selalu mencari-cari dadanya yang kewer-kewer2 itu‖
has been thinking about this. Starting when Marni joined Simbok and
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Marni had a stronger desire to work. She was willing to work as a butler,
which was traditionally a man's job. Marni was dissatisfied with her job as
‖Bukan, Kang. Aku nggak disuruh Nyai. Aku yang butuh bantuan, Kang.‖
‖Bukan, Kang. Bukan minta dibantu ngangkat. Aku mau ditolong, aku mau ikut
‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat. Sudah,
‖Aku kuat, Kang. Biasanya aku juga nggendong tenggok, nggendong goni. Bakul-
bakul itu juga banyak yang mengangkat sendiri dagangannya dari rumah ke pasar.
‖Tapi tetap nggak umum, Ni. Di pasar ini, nggak ada pe-rempuan nguli.‖
‖Tapi aku mau, Kang. Aku butuh duit, Kang. Nggak mau lagi diupahi singkong.‖
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‖Nggak ada caranya. Asal ada tenaga saja. Kamu tunggu di sini kalau ada orang
yang butuh,‖ kata Teja sambil menunjuk kuli-kuli lain yang bergerombol di bangku
Okky Madasari describes Bu Jujuk, the wife of Pak Jujuk, the sub-district
when scolded and share her sad story about her husband with Sumarni
Aku, yang baru anak ingusan ini, hanya mengiyakan permintaan Bu Jujuk. Lagi
pula Bu Jujuk tidak butuh apa-apa dariku, hanya minta didengarkan. Dia tak
makan hati. Bu Jujuk memilihku. Barangkali karena aku sudah dipercayai, atau
mungkin hanya sekadar karena aku bocah ingusan yang tidak mungkin bercerita
kepada siapa-siapa.
‖Suamiku itu lho, Ni. Dia gendakan sama kledek. Sudah lama, Ni. Tapi aku
diam saja. Aku nggak mau ribut, nggak mau cari masalah. Tapi aku nggak kuat,
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Tangis Bu Juju meledak. Hanya kami berdua yang ada di rumah itu.
Tentu tak ada yang bisa kukatakan pada Bu Jujuk. Menikah saja aku belum,
apalagi tahu bagaimana rasanya suami punya gendakan. Tapi Bu Jujuk memang
tak pernah bertanya padaku. Setiap ceritanya hanya ditutup dengan tangisan. Begitu
Suatu hari, suami Bu Jujuk pulang saat Bu Jujuk untuk kesekian kalinya
menceritakan lakon Pak Jujuk dan kledek gendakan-nya. Bu Jujuk yang tak
menghapus air matanya, lalu buru-buru masuk rumah. Dari luar kudengar
‖Istri nggak tahu diri! Kerjaannya rasan-rasan14 terus!‖ Tak ada jawaban dari
her husband, despite what her husband has done for having a mistress.
Regardless of their position, women have the right to fight injustice when
their marriage is betrayed, and those who betray their partner life have no
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As Marry Wollstonecraft said, ―It is not uncommon for a society's old traditions
to have a significant influence on women's position. Women being a weak character due
control over some women's lives, and they are still shackled by a
2014, p. 237).
She aspires to improve the current social order. "Women work peeling
cassava and are paid for cassava," Simbok says. Marni, understandably,
became enraged. She believes that women, like men, have the right to be
paid.
― Aku kuat, Mbok. Lha wong kita tiap pulang dari pasar juga nggendong goni.
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Paying no heed to Simbok's words, Marni stopped peeling the cassava
and joined him. Little by little, Marni's money was collected. Until
finally, Marni was able to buy the entrok she wanted. After that, Marni
realized that if she didn't develop her business, she would still be poor.
Therefore, Marni also took the initiative to start bakulan. Every day, he
buys some goods at the market, then sells them by traveling around the
village. In the end, Marni has managed to change her life. He was also
According to the story cited above, women are born solely to meet the
‖Kenapa, Ni? Kita saling cocok. Apa kamu tidak pengin punya suami, punya anak
seperti Tinah?‖
Punya anak? Bagaimana jika aku punya anak nanti? Mau jadi apa anakku nanti?
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keliling desa kalau perempuan? Anak laki-laki ikut bapaknya nguli?
The role of parents is also very influential, the old rules, usually more followed by
Women are only able to surrender to the situation because they are not
speak up her minds. this case is similar with the case in Mary
She says that ―woman have to learn in choise of husband should by theirselves and
dispel the stereotype that women are helpless creatures. Marni was able to
collect money from work associated with Adam, as proof. Finally, Okky
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Despite the fact that women like Marni try to break the patriarchal
culture as individuals.
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References
Semesta.
Duman, F. (2012). The Roots of Modern Feminism : Mary Wollstonecraft and the
http://hhh.gavilan.edu/kwarren/LitCrit.html
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70 = B
- Supposed to be a good one reading the title, yet still I'm mistaken
- Less focus analysis
- Still having jumped-up ideas
- Too many introductory paragraphs
- Some still retelling than real analysis
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- Some narratives and analysis are still irrelevant with the theory used
- Needs more critical-analytical arguments 1195030151
- Needs more relevant theoretical justifications/supports
- Be aware of mechanic errors: paragraphs, capitalization, punctuation, 5-D
citation, etc
BY OKKY MADASARI
The most important thing is how literature can sustain itself so as not
all the potential in his work, such as being able to accept reality, think
achieve it. Moses, Plato, and Milton in Emerson's book interpret that:
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―That they set at naught books and traditions, and spoke not what men but what
they thought. A man should learn to detect and watch that gleam of light which
flashes across his mind from within, more than the lustre of the firmament of bards
and sages. Yet he dismisses without notice his thought, because it is his.‖
(Emerson 1841)
they often apply these ideas in their works through characters, plots, and
Where people can believe in themselves to step on the goals they want to
change that can be regulated by itself and nature does everything with its
own hands, and does not leave other people to be able to baptize it, but
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Entrok tells the story of a woman's struggle, starting with Marni who
wanted to have Entrok which is now better known as a Bra or Bra. Marni
Simbok‘s opinion ―Perempuan yaa hanya bisa bekerja mengupas singkong dan di
upahi dengan singkong‖ With those words, Marni rebelled and believed
herself that women deserved to be rewarded with money, not only men.
Don't pay attention to what Simbok says, Marni stopped peeling cassava
and went over to Teja to join her coolies. While working, little by little
Marni earns money and collects it. Finally, Marni was able to buy the
entrok that she really wanted. Thus, Marni also took the initiative to
support her family by bakulan, if she does not expand his business then
she will remain poor. Every day Marni buys things at the market and then
goes around the village to sell them. Until finally, Marni has managed to
change her life, and is known as a rich skipper. Behind its success is
thanks to the help of Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa. Therefore, Marni
never left the ritual of prayer and offerings to "Her God". After Marni
married Teja, they had a child named Rahayu. In her growth Rahayu
became a smart child, and she learned about religious knowledge, but
from her intelligence Rahayu stated that her mother was a sinner because
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her mother had believed in Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa. Meanwhile,
Rahayu believes that only Gusti Allah has the right to be worshiped. The
feud is getting hotter, even Rahayu hates her mother openly. Until we
As has been told above. I will begin to analyze the human beliefs they
dengan puas dan penuh semangat. Bahagia, hanya karena aku mempunyai
harapan lagi. Hari itu waktu seperti berjalan lambat. Sudah tidak sabar
rasanya untuk kembali ke pasar, nguli, dan mendapat upah. Aku akan segera
menolaknya. ‖Nduk, semua itu sudah ada jatahnya. Orang kayak kita
bagiannya ngoncek telo . Nguli itu berat. Sudah jatah orang lain. ‖Aku kuat,
Mbok. Lha wong kita tiap pulang dari pasar juga nggendong goni. Malah
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The quote above, shows positive beliefs in individuals. Marni, who is
known as a villager and has a poor family, is very confident and persistent
that she can achieve what she wants with her hard work. As mentioned
(Emerson 1841) ―that though the wide universe is full of good, no kernel of
nourisihing corn can come to him but through his toil bestowedon that plot of ground
which is given to him till‖ . Likewise with confidence, it does not mean that
feel capable and believe that she can do it because of the experience,
achievements, and hopes that are in her. For every form of image there
will be an expression and there is no body without the spirit or with its
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For, of the soul, the body form doth take,
rambut Yu Parti yang tergelung. Yu Parti menjerit, kali ini jerit kesakitan. Tapi
dia tetap tidak mau kalah, rambut Yu Yem yang tergerai sampai pinggang
Teriakan dan makian silih berganti keluar dari mulut kedua perempuan itu.
misalnya, orang yang sudah dianggap sesepuh karena paling lama berjualan di
pasar ini, hanya bisa berteriak meminta Yu Parti dan Yu Yem menghentikan
apa yang dilakukan. ‖Gusti! Sudah, Yu. Sudah. Sabar!‖ teriak Nyai Dimah
berulang kali. Namun, entah karena teriakan Nyai Dimah yang terlalu lirih
sehingga tidak terdengar atau memang Yu Parti dan Yu Yem yang sudah tidak
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The quote above shows the belief in two perpetrators with a problem
that can be handled with each wish. Like the case, Yu Yem and Yu Parti
quarreled over one issue, causing a fight between them. They have no
definition, but they are ordered by nature with a life force that they feel
them feel satisfied and don't care about the people around them. As
―Were to see through the eart, so the poet turns the world to glass, and shows us
all things in their right series and procession. For through that better perception he
stands one step nearer to things, and sees the flowing or metamorphosis; perceives
that thought is multiform; that witin the form of every creature is a force impelling
it to ascend into a higher form; and following with his eyes the life, uses the forms
which express that life, and so his speech flows with the flowing of nature‖
him, there are also quotes that are familiar to the public, namely:
melakukan apa yang telah sejak dulu dilakukannya. Melanjutkan apa yang
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yang dia percaya. Sementara aku, hari demi hari mendengar apa yang dikatakan
Pak Waji tentang dosa dan neraka. Tentang cara berdoa yang tak pernah
dikenal Ibu sepanjang umurnya. Aku dan Ibu seperti berada di dunia yang
berbeda. Tentu saja duniaku yang benar. Aku mendapatkannya di sekolah, yang
kata Ibu sendiri tempat kumpulnya orang pintar. Siapa yang lebih benar, Pak
Waji yang guru terpelajar atau Ibu yang tidak mengenal satu huruf pun?
Aku tak pernah lagi berdoa di bawah pohon asem saat tengah malam. Aku juga selalu
menolak makan panggang dan tumpeng yang dibuat untuk selamatan. Ibu tak pernah
lagi membangunkanku saat tengah malam. Aku tahu Ibu marah, tapi kami tak
worship to each of His Gods, as well as rules that are indeed related to
culture and connect humans with the order of life from the worldview.
Likewise, God and the universe are like spirits that can run continuously
in a person's life. Rahayu who believes in Islam always believes that only
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worshiping the gusti of Allah is right, as well as Marni who believes that
only Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapak Kuasa who believes in her presence and
helps in every situation. As said (Nurrachman 2014, 205) the poet is the
sayer, the namer, and the represents beauty. He is a sovereign, and stands
on the centre. For the world is not paintedor adorned, but is from the
beginning beautiful; and God has not made some beautiful things, but
beauty is the creator of the universe. Therefore the poet is not any
(Emerson 1841) that ―Trust thyself: every heart vibrates to that iron string. Accept
the place the divine providence has found for you, the society of your contemporaries, the
connection of events. Great men have always done so, and confided themselves childlike
to the genius of their age, betraying their perception that the absolutely trustworthy was
seated at their heart, working through their hands, predominating in all their being.
And we are now men, and must accept in the highest mind the same transcendent
destiny; and not minors and invalids in a protected corner, not cowards fleeing before a
revolution, but guides, redeemers, and benefactors, obeying the Almighty effort, and
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called truth. And if the heart says for sure then that's called self-reliance.
at the time when Marni and her daughter Rahayu have differences in
religious beliefs between them. Like a philosophy that says that God and
the universe are like spirits that can run continuously in a person's life.
beliefs that cause each of them to be firmly clean for what they consider
work. Just as Emerson quotes : ―Nothing can bring you peace but
yourself. Nothing can bring you peace buth the triumph of principles‖.
(Emerson 1841)
References
https://archive.vcu.edu/english/engweb/transcendentalism/auth
ors/emerson/essays/selfreliance.html.
Semata, 2014.
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Talking about literature, it can not be separated from the face of society.
public is a one thing that intertwined and emerged on its surface. Surface,
literary creations are separated of social surroundings, but the imagery can
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The content that literature carry on its writing might be used to preserve
lie down beneath its surface. Appeared as its nature, literary works
which the conceptual faculty can be used to describe and understand it.
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goes on, imaginative has it aim. It encourage to have it Catharsis.
discharge of emotions such as pity, sadness, and terror via the viewing of
healing and rejuvenation. Aristotle, the Greek philosopher, was the first
―The tragic fear and pity may be aroused by the spectacle; but they may also be aroused
by the very structure and incidents of the play-which is the betterway and shows the
better poet. The plot in fact should be so framed that, even without seeing the things
take place, he who simply hears the account of them shall be filled with horror and pity
at the incidents; which is just the effect that the mere recital of the story in Oedipus
does not use Aristotle's theory. The statement above is only to emphasize
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Consequently, this writing will take focus on engaging identification on
characters in Entrok.
concerns that run throughout the tale, Entrok offers a story about Marni,
Singget, the village where the story takes place. She began to improve her
fate by breaking through outdated rules and unfair notions in its society
Set out with the tale of woman‘s life, indeed this novel was contained by
that the characters had lived in. Since Mary Wollstonecraft‘s Vindication of
the Rights of Woman (1792) well deserves its rank as the first great feminist
In Entrok, the writer found interesting topic on our main characters as the
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content of how the assessment of love and the way it wade through the
this hypothesis, the author will condemn the actions of Okky Madasari's
variables that are unrelated to the literary work being researched. To put
readers may see the first spark of affection regarded to her dream. In
page 40,
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―Sorot mata Teja tidak sama dengan Tinah, perawan-perawan itu, atau pedagang-
penyesalan karena tidak memiliki apa yang kupunyai. Tapi Teja lain.
Pandangannya... aku tak tahu seperti apa... tapi membuatku bahagia sekali. Sorot
It may seem at first, the scene of it may presumably kind of sweet and
tender since it was visualized by the narration. Later on, the reality on the
story that related to Wollstonecraft‘s idea of love may prevail one by one.
―Kutinggalkan Teja yang masih berdiri di tempatnya. Entah apa yang masih
laki yang baik. Mau menolong orang kapan saja. Tanpa pamrih. Diam-diam
sebenarnya aku suka padanya. Aku teringat mimpiku malam itu. Tentang sorot
matanya yang membahagiakan, yang membawaku ke tempat yang begitu indah. Ah,
Tapi aku tak sepenuhnya menyukai Teja. Aku juga membencinya. Benci atas
mengubah hidupnya. Apakah Teja tak pernah bermimpi saat tidur? Apakah dia
tak pernah membayangkan punya emas dan berlian? Tidakkah ada rasa malu jika
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sampai tua dia akan terus nguli seperti bapaknya? Relakah dia kalau nanti
woman, who put contrast on major fate of woman around the society,
the character may figured out that it does not enough to make a
relationship that demand modal while they unlikely well enough to build
an household.
This consciousness that Marni had, presumably is the effect on how she
feels unwealthy and unable to have something she want while she did not
―Entrok memang terlalu mewah untuk aku dan Simbok. Apa yang masih
dipikirkan seorang perempuan kere buta huruf dengan tanggungan seorang anak
evidenced by the sentence above. The fact that Marni's mother couldn't
read was proof enough that she didn't go to school. This is apparently
what failed to create the ideal concept of love in the home, trapping him
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in the habitual slavery described by Wollstonecraft in her work. The
―Love is, in a great degree, an arbitrary passion, and will reign, like some other
stalking mischiefs, by its own authority, without deigning to reason; and it may also be
easily distinguished from esteem, the foundation of friendship because it is often excited
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that roughly encourage Marni to get married with Teja, despit of her
Marni, who was pushed into marriage with Teja without Simbok's or her
untuk mengawiniku pada Simbok. Malam itu, di belakang rumah, saat kuulangi
permintaanku pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa, Simbok berbisik pelan,‖Nduk,
anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya anak. Kalau sudah ada yang
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―Aku tak membantah omongan Simbok. Tak mengiakannya. Tapi hanya tiga hari
setelah itu, kami telah berada di rumah Kamituwo.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 48).
It‘s quite enough for the evidence that the concept of love that Marni
women.
―Tapi cerita-cerita itu juga menimbulkan ketakutan. Takut pada laki-laki, takut
kawin. Lha buat apa kawin, kalau jadinya cuma sengsara. Inilah yang kukatakan
pada Teja waktu dia memintaku jadi istrinya. Dia melamarku di depan pasar, saat
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matahari baru mengintip malu-malu, saat aku menunggu kedatangan petani yang
‖Aku belum mau kawin, Kang.‖ ‖Kenapa, Ni? Kita saling cocok. Apa kamu
tidak pengin punya suami, punya anak seperti Tinah?‖ Punya anak? Bagaimana
jika aku punya anak nanti? Mau jadi apa anakku nanti? Tukang kupas singkong
atau bakulan keliling desa kalau perempuan? Anak laki-laki ikut bapaknya
The quote above, has showed the readers that despite of Marni‘s
mind than on the will. When the ideas, and matters of fact, are once taken
in, they lie by for use, till some fortuitous circumstance makes the
information dart into the mind with illustrative force, that has been
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―Malam ini, tidur tak lagi sekadar rutinitas penutup hari, melainkan saat pelepasan
Aku kesakitan, dia kegirangan. Aku mengerang, dia senang. Aku menangis, dia
tertawa penuh kemenangan. Aku menerawang dia telah pulas.‖ (Madasari, 2010:
48-49)
The marital life of Marni and Teja appears to be hollow. Marni's negative
narrative expression suggests that she does not like it. Sexual activity that
should be filled with love is depicted solely as an outlet for Teja's lust;
―'Where love is duty, on the female side, 'On theirs mere sensual gust and sought with
which unfair and quite prejudicial, not only for Marni, as well for any
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considered as unhealthy relationship, since it is a certainty one-sided and
get biased by the nature of its marriage, which is not including Marni‘s
References
Abrams, M. (1979). The Mirror and the Lamp: Romantic Theory and The
Libertarianism. org.
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evoke beauty with language tools. Literary works are beautiful writings
aesthetic. Literary works become a place for writers to share their views,
being a guide to the truth because good literature is literature written with
the proper path, namely the path of truth in carrying out life's tasks.
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to the rules and customs of that time, literary authors are also part of
Literature has existed for a long time, from ancient Rome to the present,
Western Europe from the late 17th century to the late 18th century (this
proponent, Voltaire, was more militant and less optimistic, they launched
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Gibbon and political writers Thomas Paine and William Godwin, and in
Itsna Hadi Saptiawan, 2007: 95) say that emancipation is more in control
that has the same goal, namely definition, building, achieving gender
often prioritizes the point of view of men than women, women are
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equal to men. Feminist is not about resistance to men, but about
If all this time it is considered that men who substitute readers and
that women also have views and hopes for the experience of their
and Suharto quoted from Iqbal) is like a quilt that is sewn and formed
from square pieces of cloth on the bottom covered with soft cloth. This
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Like in the novel "Entrok" by Okky Madasari, this novel emphasizes the
Marni is an illiterate woman who wants to fight for her future life to be
better than her life when she was a child. She is a woman who is
oppressed and has limited mobility in her life because she is a woman.
Marni in the novel ―Entrok‖ is one of the victims of the New Order era
perception of the people of Singget, Central Java, which said that heavy
work and high wages were the rights of men, women who existed at that
men.
Seeing from the background that has been described above, the author is
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Mary Wollstonecraft is a British writer, philosopher, and advocate for
many works, from novels to history books and even behavioral books.
Women, was a call for better education of women and a call for reason to
The ideas in her book were truly revolutionary at the time and caused
tremendous controversy. In her book, Mary says that she wants women
to have a high rationality that can equalize women's rights with men, and
To analyze the theory in a literary work requires the right approach, the
where this literary work represents the truth of the real life of women at
1. ―Ni, Kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat.
(page 36)
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2. ―Bukan masalah kuat-nggak kuat, Nduk. Ini masalah ilok-ra ilok __
main character cannot take a job that pays money, this is because
Javanese culture upholds ―ilok-ra ilok‖. At that time, The injustice against
women is very clear, men get money in the form of money while women
are only paid by cassava. Where men seem to have superior power than
women.
occurs naturally because Marni is against the existing culture. But also this
is proof that Marni can fight the feminism that is happening around her.
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Kita dulu kerja memeras keringat seharian, diupahi telo, bukan uang, hanya
In this quote, Marni proves that she can equalize the wages or rights she
wants with men's wages. This is what Mary means, Mary wants every
Tejs untuk mengawiniku pada Simbok. Malam itu, dibelakang rumah, saat
berbisik pelan ―Nduk, anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya
anak. Kalau sudah ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa kualat, jadi
perawan tua.‖
their opinions and suffer from the choices that others have made for
them. This quote is very representative of most women today who are
6. ―Kenapa, Ni? Kita saling coocok. Apa kamu tidak pengin punya suami,
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7. ―Sejak Rahayu tinggal di Jogja, rumah iini terasa sepi. Teja makin sering
keluar malam. Aku sudah malas bertanya atau menegur‖ (page 127)
mukanya penuh bedak dan gincunya merah. Duh, Gusti, matanya dan
These three quotes show very clearly about the superiority that men have,
they do arbitrary things to women. They want to get a good return while
in their likings. And still to deny them the unctrolled use of reason.
When do men /all-in love with sense? When do they, with their superior
powers and advantages, turn from the person to the mind? And how can
they then expect women, who are only taught to observe behaviour, and
acquire manners rather than morals, to despise what they have been all
their lives labouring to attain? Where are they suddenly to find judgment
his manners, of which they are made critical judges, are rebuffing and his
conversation cold and dull, because it does not consist of pretty repartees,
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continuance, we must, at least, have our curiosity excited by khowing, in
some degree, what we admire; for we are unable to estimate the value of
9. ―Tiba-tiba aku menyesal kenapa aku hanya punya satu anak. Coba kalau
aku punya dua, atau empat seperti Tonah, pasti rumah ini menjadi ramai ...
Dulu, waktu Rahayu masih SD, Pak RT dan Pak Lurah menyuruhku ke
kantor desa. Semua perempuan yang sudah menikah dan punya anak
katanya harus ke sana. Ya sudah, nggak tahu ada apa di sana, daripada
buat masalah sama aku datang ke sana. ... mereka menyuruh orang-orang
ikut KB. Katanya biar desa tidak tampak sumpek..‖ (page 128)
In the long quote, Marni's regret can be seen who had to follow orders
from the government for family planning or KB with the lure so that the
family planning or KB. In this case, women are cornered because until
though men also take part in it. This happens because of the superiority
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10. ―Tiap Jumat pagi, saat kami semua baru saja selesai salar Amri bergegas
sebelumnya, aku telah memasukkan tiga baju putih panjang ke tas itu.
Lalu pada Senin pagi, bunyi motor yang sudah kunantikan itu terdengar.
guru-guru lainnya. Kucium tangannya. Lalu kubawa jaket yang baru saja
masuk ke- las. Setiap minggu, semuanya berulang dalam urutan yang pernah
berubah. Dalam kedamaian dan keikhlasan yang sama. Tak adakah yang
In this long quote, Rahayu looks very happy to live her day as the second
wife of an ustadz. They got married of their own choice, they had
thought carefully about what they would do. This happened because
Rahayu was a woman who was highly educated at one of the universities.
Rahayu prioritizes rationality and the right to his own choices. And this is
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Were woman rationally educated ould they take a more comprehensive
view of things, they would be contented to love but once in their lives;
and after marriage calmly let passion subside into friendship-into that
tender intimacy, which is the best refuge from care; yet is built on such
pure, still affections, that idle jealousies would not be allowed to disturb
the discharge of the sober duties of life, or to engross the thoughts that
From the analysis that has been done by the author, it can be concluded
able to fight for their rights and position in gender equality rationally.
Women have the right and must get an education or at least learn to
make themselves able to think rationally so that the life that women lead
References
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Nurrachman, D. (2017). Introduction to Critisism. Bandung: Pusaka Aura
Semesta.
Mandey, W.A. (2019). Cerminan Feminisme Dalam Novel The Best Of Me
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https://www.dictio.id/t/enlightenment/155674
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MADASARI
According to Semi (Semi, 1984) Sebagai karya kreatif, sastra harus mampu
keindahan manusia. Di samping itu, sastra harus pula mampu menjadi wadah
transmitting literary ideas. Of course, the novel raises the issues that
symbolize the writer's thoughts that are incorporated inside it. Feminism
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Feminisme itself in Cambridge (Cambridge Dictionary) has
meaning as ―the belief that women should be allowed the same rights, power, and
opportunities as men and be treated in the same way, or the set of activities intended to
women and men to rectify this condition. (Ilyas, 1997) Literary criticism
examine literary works by tracing the ideologies that shape them and
pointing out the differences between what the work says and what
the awareness of both men and women to fight for equal rights and
women who are too precious in their sentiments and advocates for
women to have the same feelings and rights as men. (Nurrachman, 2017,
hal. 132).
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According to Mary, the old tradition of male writers has a very big
surprising, when we consider what a determinate effect an early association of ideas has
on the character, that they neglect their understandings, and turn all their attention to
not be separated from the lack of education for women in that century,
which was created by the patriarchal society that existed at the time.
―Were women more rationally educated, could they take a more comprehensive view of
woman," rather than merely a doll and a toy for men. (Arivia, 2003).
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Okky Madasari's novel Entrok narrates the story of the world
woman's battle against her fate to break free from the weak perspective of
that by employing these two alternating points of view, the reader would
and Rahayu are mother and child figures with extremely different origins,
Marni as a mother who cannot experience education, and Rahayu, her son
distinct.
Bentuknya kayak apa aku juga tidak tahu. Tidak pakai entrok
juga tidak apa-apa. Susuku tetap bisa diperas to. Sudah, nggak
(hal. 17)
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The dialogue excerpt above is the beginning of the debate in this Entrok
novel, Marni, who wants to utilize Entrok since her chest has begun to
Teja, si kuli pasar, setiap hari. Teja mendapat satu rupiah untuk
Lima hari bekerja, uang Teja cukup untuk membeli satu entrok.
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money; why doesn't she labor like Teja to earn money to purchase
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Gender inequalities are highlighted here, with males viewing
women as weak and incapable of doing the labor that men perform.
pakem yang sudah tidak bisa dibantah lagi. ‖Bisa kualat kalau
since they believe women are not as strong as males to work as coolies,
but Marni now has to deal with society's unwritten custom or societal
conventions that assume women work like men. Things that are
But, in the end, Marni was able to overcome all of the challenges.
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strong goals. This also shatters the viewpoint of women who have
notions based on the moment, which might alter depending on the mood
the same as Teja, but Marni has tremendous hopes and ambitions to alter
her fate, even though it began because she wanted to acquire Entrok.
Teja, aku juga bukan siapa-siapa. Hanya anak wong kere, yang
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hari ini. Tapi aku menyimpan harapan dan mimpi. Setidaknya
sakit panas dan tidak bisa ke pasar. Kalau Simbok tidak ke pasar, kami tidak
akan punya makanan. Dan laki-laki itu dengan seenaknya hanya menunggu
be meek and obedient to her husband at all times, accepting his severe
treatment without protesting. When Marni saw this, she knew she
couldn't rely on anyone for her fate; she needed to be able to stand on her
Hari itu aku sadar, tak ada seorang pun yang bisa kuharapkan untuk memberi apa
terpaku akan urusan cinta dan menjadi budak dari cinta itu sendiri. Dalam
tidak terlalu jatuh dan diperbudak oleh laki-laki. Seperti pada kutipan di
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bawah ini. Pada akhirnya Yu Parti tetap harus membiarkan suaminya,
Yu Yem, yang terlihat takut, terpancing dan mulai marah. Dengan suara tak kalah
kencang, dia membalas kata-kata Yu Parti. ‖Enak saja, nyebut aku sundal.
Sampeyan sendiri yang tidak bisa ngladeni suami. Bukan salahku kalau suami
‖Dasar sundal, perebut suami orang.‖ Yu Parti mulai kehilangan kesabaran. (hal.
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similar to what Rousseau and many male writers in general started, that
(Nurrachman, 2017).
Kata Simbok, kalau aku minum kunir tiap hari, perutku tak akan sakit lagi saat
keluar darah nanti. ‖Biar singset juga. Kamu perawan sekarang, jadi dagangan,‖
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Tidur kini menjadi simbol bagaimana pencapaian manusia
satisfaction.
men who use their brains to put words together in order to craft
seductions and jokes that attract women. They are particularly skilled at
‖Kalau kita di Jakarta, Ni, hidup kita bakal enak. Kita jadi
orang kota, punya duit banyak, mau beli apa-apa tinggal tunjuk.
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Kowe ndak usah lagi ke pasar, aku juga gak perlu panas
Ya seperti ini salah satu yang kusukai dari Marijo. Saat dia
Marni, who is portrayed as a strong lady, favors realism over her feelings
has the ability to make Marni forget her senses for a short period of time
and force her to express her emotions in the manner of 18th century
ladies.
Dua hari sekali atau kadang setiap hari. Ndari tidak hanya
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Laki-laki itu tak peduli. Tapi siang ini Ndari mengubah sendiri
Cukup. Apa yang telah terjadi tak boleh diulangi lagi. Laki-
fellow woman, determined to aid her pupils with all her heart in order to
obtain justice. Rahayu urged that the perpetrator of the sexual harassment
pulang dan untuk menikah. Aku akan tetap di desa ini. Demi
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Rahayu can once again demonstrate that she can choose logic over the
feminism of the two main female characters, Marni and Rahayu. It started
with Marni who had aspirations to have an Entrok, thus requiring her to
join in the work and justify all means so that it could be realized even
though she had to go against the unwritten tradition norms that existed in
called one of the feminists in this Entrok novel. If her mother struggles
gender inequality, then Rahayu fights for the rights and upholds the
sexually harassing Ndari, who was a minor. Rahayu fights for this
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HUMAN NATURE AND SOCIO-CULTURAL IN NOVEL
writing. According to Sumardjo & Saini, ―Karya sastra adalah sebuah usaha
merekam isi jiwa sastrawannya. Sastra adalah bentuk rekaman dengan bahasa yang
akan disampaikan kepada orang lain‖. Literary work itself can reveal a
the author hears or reads. Out of so many, there are literary works in
which describes human nature. The idea of beauty and of a human nature
perfect on, all its sides (Arnold, 1869: p. 23). This is also stated by
objek sastrawan sebab manusia merupakan gambaran tingkah laku yang dapat
dilihat dari segi kehidupannya. Tingkah laku merupakan bagian dari gejolak jiwa
sebab dari tingkah laku manusia dapat dilihat gejala-gejala kejiwaan yang pastinya
berbeda satu dengan yang lain. Pada diri manusia dapat dikaji dengan ilmu
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pengetahuan yakni psikologi yang membahas tentang kejiwaan. Oleh karena itu,
karya sastra disebut sebagai salah satu gejala kejiwaan‖ (Ratna, 2004: 62).
contains cultural values that have been created by the author through
The object studied is not far from the characters and characterizations
conflicts that human have experienced in real life. Based on this, literary
daily life is novel. Yudiono (1986: 125) conveyed that, ―Novel merupakan
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jenis sastra yang sedikit banyak memberikan gambaran tentang masalah
masyarakat yang melibatkan penulis dan pembacanya‖. There are many novels
in Indonesia that tells humans life. The novel Entrok by Okky Madasari
is one of the reflection of the social life. Politics, economy, belief, and
knowledge are the basis of this novel. Also the cultural elements, where
of behaving, thinking and feeling that are shared by most people and are
Arnold (1869: p. 8) stated that there is a view in which all the love of our
neighbor, the impulses towards action, help, and beneficence, the desire
for stopping human error, clearing human confusion, and diminishing the
sum of human misery, the noble aspiration to leave the world better. As a
especially for the closest one. In the novel Entrok there are the behave,
the actions from one of the main character, Rahayu, who tell her parents
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―Kata Pak Waji, guru agamaku di SD, Ibu berdosa. Di depan kelas
dia berkata, ibuku tak beragama. Ibuku sirik. Masih menyembah
leluhur, memberi makan setan setiap hari. Pak Waji juga bilang
ibuku punya tuyul. Aku malu dan marah. Begitu sampai di rumah,
aku masuk ke kamar Ibu. Kuambil baki berisi tumpeng dan
panggang itu lalu kubuang di halaman belakang rumah. Tonah
yang melihatku berteriak-teriak. Dia ketakutan. Takut pada Ibu,
juga takut kualat pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa. Aku masuk
kamar, menunggu Ibu pulang dari pasar. Sampai kudengar teriakan
Ibu dari kamarnya. Dia memanggil Tonah, bertanya ke mana
tumpeng dan panggang di kamarnya. Aku keluar kamar. ―Aku
buang. Itu sirik, dosa. Ibu tidak beragama,‖ kataku sambil
menangis.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 75)
For all of her life, Rahayu‘s mother, Marni has been asking or
still exist here. Tylor in (Harvey, 2005: 6) stated that animism represented
she told her that what she has been doing is wrong. Nyuwun from the
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pada Ibu dan Bapak. Mereka berdua, orang buta huruf yang hanya
tahu pasar, harus tahu pemilu. Mereka harus ikut, dan tidak salah
pilih. Kalau bukan aku yang orang sekolahan, siapa lagi yang akan
memberitahu mereka?‖ (Madasari, 2010: 61)
Here we can see that Rahayu does not want her parents to choose
the wrong choice, so that they are not labeled as PKI─―[…] Jangan lupa
yang gambarnya pohon. Kalian bukan PKI, to?‖ (Madasari, 2010: 85).
From the two quotations above, it can be seen that there is the difference
between the parents and the child. The child understands knowledge
There is a good human nature, but there is also a bad one, the
quotation as follow:
How can a father sacrifice his daughter just like that? His daughter
is a school girl but she has to do such thing for everyone‘s safety. Not
only the father, but the people who use her also a bad people. The last is
the quotation shows a good human nature, but on the other side it is also
bad, as follow:
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―Ha ha ha...! Mau sedikit, mau banyak, namanya tetap potang.
Sampeyan itu rentenir, lintah darat! Orang-orang seperti sampeyan
ini yang bikin susah orang banyak.‖ ―Lho, Ndan. Wong saya itu
malah mau membantu orang. Mereka butuh pinjaman uang, ya
sudah saya kasih. Kalau mereka butuhnya panci, ya saya juga
dagang panci.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 70)
lending a money. But to give loan interest to them is bad. This act is also
Joubert in (Nurrachman, 2017: 233) said that force and right are the
governors of this world; force till right is ready. […] The way in which for
us it may change and transform force, the existing order of things, and
become, in its turn, the legitimate ruler of the world, will depend on the
way in which, when our time comes, we see it and will it. Therefore for
impose it upon us as ours, and violently to substitute their right for our
villagers and the authorities who act arbitrarily is depicted in this novel.
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―Pak Tikno sekarang ada di penjara. Tentara menahannya sejak
enam bulan lalu. Gara-garanya, Pak Tikno menolak memberikan
kebunnya yang hanya sepetak pada tentara. Tentara ingin
membangun gardu di kebun itu. Katanya untuk pos keamanan.‖
(Madasari, 2010: 63)
Pak Tikno does not afraid of the soldiers, he sticks to his stance in
order to protect the inherited land. He can be labelled as the
nonconformist, who deviate from the applicable rules, or being called
PKI. The term ―nonconformist‖ was used first in criminal acts after the
Restoration of the monarchy (1660) and the Uniformity Act (1662) to
describe the convent (place of worship) of a congregation that had
separated from the Church of England. As written in (Arnold, 1869: 202)
Nonconformist is not in contact with the main current of national life.
Another example of the villagers who against authorities is Wagimun, the
quotation as follow:
―Sampeyan kira aku bertahan di sini karena harta? Harta yang mana,
Kang Lurah? Sawah sudah dipatok, mau makan saja susah. Tinggal
rumah dan tanah ini saja yang punya saya. Ini juga sebentar lagi
dikeruk seperti itu.‖ ―Lho... lha kowe juga sudah tahu ini nanti
bakal dikeruk semua. Ya sudah mau apa lagi? Yang penting
sekarang semuanya selamat. Ingat anakmu, Mun... Masa semuanya
mau terkubur di sini?‖ ―Ya, kalau memang sudah nasib kami
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terkubur di sini... saya ikhlas... yang penting tidak malu sama
leluhur...‖ (Madasari, 2010: 218)
Just like Pak Tikno, Wagimun does not want to leave his house, he
feels that the things left only the house. He chose to be buried with his
house rather than having to leave it. Something that we have to fixed in
sidedness, and incompleteness is what they most suffer from. They have
follow the applicable rules. People who follow the rules either they really
feel the rules are good or because they are afraid for being punished. The
―Lha Bapak sama Ibu katanya mau ke pasar, kok malah ke sini?‖
―Tadi dicegat pak tentara, katanya yang nggak ke sini berarti nggak
patuh sama negara. Ya sudah to... daripada dipenjara, kami ke sini
saja. Nyoblos, terus bakulan di sini.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 62)
―Tapi nanti kalau balik lagi diberi saja, Bu. Jangan cari penyakit.
Jangan sampai kita nanti kayak Pak Tikno,‖ jawab Bapak dengan
muka ketakutan. Ibu diam tak menjawab. Tapi aku bisa melihat
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raut mukanya berubah begitu mendengar nama Pak Tikno disebut.
Ia juga ketakutan. (Madasari, 2010: 63)
From the quotations above we can tell that Marni and Teja are
afraid of the authorities. Rather than oppose the army, it is better to just
do what they want.
feeling which make the peculiar dignity, wealth, and happiness of human
nature (Arnold, 1986: 12-13). As the author mention earlier, this novel
has cultural elements in it, which is the culture in Desa Singget. The
―Kata Simbok, kalau aku minum kunir tiap hari, perutku tak akan
sakit lagi saat keluar darah nanti.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 33)
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―Paling depan terlihat seorang laki-laki berpakaian seperti pemain
ketoprak dengan baju warna hijau mencolok dan hiasan kepala
warna emas. Dia menjadi cucuk lampah, pemandu langkah orang-
orang yang ikut dalam iring-iringan. Cucuk lampah menari-nari
dalam setiap langkahnya, mengikuti irama gamelan dari bagian
belakang iring-iringan. Di belakang cucuk lampah ada empat laki-laki
mengusung tandu. Mereka berpakaian jawa, beskap dengan kepala
ditutup blangkon. Tandu itu dihiasi dengan janur dan melati, persis
seperti tandu pengantin. Tapi yang ada di dalam tandu bukan
manusia, melainkan dua tebu yang juga dihias dengan kantil dan
melati. Itulah Temanten Tebu.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 104)
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There are many cultures that mention in the novel, from Javanese
to Chinese. The writer of the novel writes it by her own experience as she
is a Javanese.
the processes of this life. One of the literary work which has element of
culture is novel. The Entrok novel is a great work that portray human‘s
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Ratna, N.K. (2004). Teori, Metode, dan Teknik Penelitian Sastra. Yogyakarta:
Pustaka Pelajar. p. 62
Alumni. p. 125
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man has different and superior position front of woman even in power,
However, this novel shows feminist against patriarchy but still consist
association of ideas. Her thinking ―Education thus only supplies the man of
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genius with knowledge to give variety and contrast to his associations; but there
is a habitual association of ideas, that grows "with our growth," which has a
great effect on the moral character of mankind; and by which a turn is given to
the mind, that commonly remains throughout life. ‖ (Nurrachman, 2017: 134-
any education whereas woman will be the first teacher for her child then
that men have more chance than woman which refers to patriarchy
justifies the major of one group such power can occur between groups
are feminists who oppose all forms of injustice against women. Feminist
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through woman‘s right and interest (Milleniawati, 2019). Also, based to
and willed (Prawira, 2018). The rejection of ideas begin with her will to
have some Entrok ―Paklik yang duduk Bersama istrinya tertawa terbahak
mendengar kata-kataku. Sama seperti reaksi Simbok saat aku minta entrok.
‗Nduk, entrok itu mahal. Mbok mending duitnya buat makan‘ kata Paklik‖
(Madasari, 2010: 19). From the quote sugge sts that Marni did not have
the opportunity to buy the entrok she wanted. which leads to a woman's
inability to give up before taking action. but this did not dampen his
desire and give more motivation in. She started to follow his mother to
the traditional market and pay attention to the people around her. She
found the way by her observation, ―Kenapa aku tidak bekerja seperti Teja?‖ It
means that Marni wants to work earning money as Teja do. Indirectly
refers to gender equality toward feminism that woman works like a man.
ada perempuan nguli. ada-ada saja. Nggak akan kuat. Sudah, perempuan itu kerja
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yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 34). There are two
interpretation that female can not work like men, connotates woman is
social in Singget ―Mbah Noto hanya mengingatkanku untuk tidak terlalu ngoyo
dan tahu diri. Katanya sudah dari sononya tenaga perempuan itu kecil dan tidak bisa
carrying sacks in the market ―Berat satu jun (wadah air dari tanah liat) yang
berisi penuh air sama saja dengan satu goni berisi singkong. Tidak ada laki-laki
yang mengambil air, katanya itu urusan perempuan. Ya jelas lebih anak nguli
daripada ngambil air. Nguli diuppahi duit, sementara mengambil air tidak pernah
Marni was thinking more critically than before which proving woman are
able to think critically and more rationally with the present the thought
‗better work as nguli than carrying water‘. Marni one step more ahead.
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―Wah, sudah kaya kamu sekarang, Ni. Sudah punya modal. Tidak nguli
lagi sekarang?‖ (1) ―Ah, wong sampeyan tiap hari nerima duit kok. Tinggal niat-
nya bagaimana to….‖(2) (Maddasari, 2010: 44) For quote (1), Teja noticed
Marni and acknowledge her efforts which indicates that Teja claimed that
woman are able to work and same chance of gender in economic and
―Siapa yang masih memilih jauh-jauh berjalan ke pasar kalua ada yang mengantar
rationally thinking, and ductile fir woman. In context marrying, Teja asks
Marni to marry with him and have a child like Tinah (Marni‘s childhood
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hiding hopes for her child like her who should work in childhood age
―Tukang kupas singkong atau bakulan keliling kalua perempuan? Anak laki-laki
ikut bapaknya nguli?‖ (Maddasari, 2010; 47). From the way Marni struggle
experiencing the same thing is a very deep and critical decision. This is
Marni still yearns for love ―Pandangannya… aku takt ahu seperti apa… tapi
indah, megah, dikelilingi taman bunga.‖ (Maddasari, 2010:41). His dream leads
She adding that woman should controlled her love sensational which
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towards imaginations. Cause it will referring to ―how foolishly and
because they act incompatible with the values prevailing in society and the
experiences gained. This also relates to stories about "gendakan" that are still
being carried out by the Singget community. Therefore, the importance of self-
control and emotions about love. ―Dan biarkan saja aku menikmati malam ini.
Mengulang apa yang kami lakukan tadi malam. Merasakan lagi nikmat dan
bahagia yang kami cicipi dalam gelap desa ini. Kyai Hasbi bergerak lebih cepat
dan tangkas sekarang. Tidak ada ragu dan malu seperti sebelumnya. Sepertinya
dia sudah yakin aku juga menginginkannya. Dia bergerak cepat mencumbu bibir
dan dada. Gusti, aku hampir lupa kalau laki-laki ini tiga puluh tahun lebih tua
dari aku‖ (Madasari, 2010: 249 - 250). Which makes Marni as an 18th
independence year, the hierarchical level still views men as rulers, leaders,
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Patriarchy is opposed through the characterization of Sumarni as the
tenacity for Marni herself. From his thoughts on how to make money, he
led to success which indirectly led to the feminism movement. Where the
movement is fighting for the rights and opportunities for women. but in
her case, she is categorized as feminism for the individual. This can be
factors and cultural communities that still have illicit relationships which
are the benchmarks for the value of love. So in practice, love is still a
common thing and the practice of sexual relations in the 19th century.
References
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Okky Madasari (Kajian Psikologi Sastra). Jurnal Ilmiah FONEMA :
https://doi.org/10.25139/fn.v1i1.1092
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WOLLSTONECRAFT’S FEMINIST THEORY AGAINST OKKY
MADASARI’S ENTROK
that has been used to differentiate the roles, actions, mindset, and
Even before applied in the context of literary works, it is also being used
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include (1) each and every critical analysis written by a woman, regardless
something like a man's book which then continues to treat this certain
(3) any criticism written by a woman about a woman's book but rather
about female authors in broad sense (Kolodny, 2017). The different kinds
of studies should include under those same last two broad headings have
helped us better define the portrayal of and attitudes forward into female
expressed throughout literary works thus far has been only what they
factors, individual personal skills and abilities and opportunities, and also
some case scenarios, might very well rule the country a limits of
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particularly concerned that, because the concept of something like the
(if it has already been acknowledged what so ever), and because other
groups within the women's liberation movement are all still trying to
discuss this same relationship among both human physiology and societal
forced to put up with the potentially futile public discussion over genetic
differences.
decades. Women are an intriguing subject that they usually always offer
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Entrok's novel, set in the Madiun between 1950 and 1999, tells the story
have entrok. Sumarni's life revolves around struggle, hard effort, as well as
provide us the readers with information and insight into life at the
grocery shopping at the market because she really wanted to have entrok
this analysis by tracing the gender inequality that they naturally through
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the power imbalance between men and women (Sultana, 2010). As a
organizations and actions within which males govern, oppress, and take
rejects gender essentialism (the belief that men and women are
(Walby, 1990)."
how to set up or sit at the dining room table. Its aim was to abolish the
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indoctrination system that rendered men and women prisoners of one
other's cruelty, rather than just the moral companions they were intended
to be. Before declaring a war against patriarchy, she already had published
Rights of Man, she went beyond her Dissenter friends, whose views
Parents supplied toys and mirrors to young females while enabling young
before morals, and an understanding of life, before they can have, from
reflection, any connection with the big ideal shape of human behaviour,'
behavior that education created between both the sexes. Women learned
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to think and portray themselves as weak and submissive, which made
them more desirable to males. She also points out in chapter 6 of her
book that what individuals learn when they are young is seldom
unlearned later in life, especially if they are not taught how to challenge it.
She discusses how, as children, women are told to admire dashing but
inequity concerns will always exist. This issue is one of the main problems
Entrok occur in various aspects life. Girls are dominated by their family
members since they are perceived as a weak creature. One of the most
wants to work and become a porter in the traditional market. She was
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dari rumah ke pasar. Hanya priyayi-priyayi saja yang nggak kuat
ngangkat goni.‖
From the quote above, it can be seen that the workload is made into a
rule and a habit that cannot be broken, women have been allotted to peel
cassava and men nguli. Marni felt that the distribution was unfair and that
women were ready to do heavy work and were able to use force. In the
novel, it is stated that every day women fetch water from a river that is far
away and have to carry heavy loads. That part really speaks volumes that
women actually can do what men do. Another narrative that shows how
―Nduk, semua itu sudah ada jatahnya. Orang kayak kita bagiannya
ngoceki telo, nguli itu berat. Sudah jatah orang lain.‖ ―bukan masalah
kuat—nggak kuat, Nduk. Ini masalah ilok-ra ilok, pantas nggak pantas.
When Simbok rejects her kid willing to work as a porter, as seen in the
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in the area is extremely limited. This proves that Wollstonecraft's theory
unable to do the job just because she is a woman. In addition, the quote
above proves that women do not have many choices in life, even to work,
besarnya sama, tidak lebih kecil hanya karna dia perempuan, lebih-lebih
The quote shows when Marni who has been successful wants once
equalized women's wages with men's wages, that is, equally paid money is
getting paid just by a cassava is not enough and it does not represent
the mind tend to dull the emotions and sever bonds that harm reason.
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―Nduk, anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya anak. Kalau
sudah ada yang melamar tidak boleh ditolak, bisa kualat, jadi perawan
tua." Aku tak membantah omongan Simbok, tak juga mengiyakan. Tapi
The quote above shows that Marni cannot express her opinion in
always accept men's proposals even though women want to reject them.
This problem gives the assumption that women cannot express their
cultural norm that women must accept a man's proposal. This indicates
that before becoming husband and wife, men already have the privilege
very weak and their hearts are soft, and their minds are short, besides
having soft feelings that make women considered unable to make firm
of her own, and no rights to her children in the eyes of the law.
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In conclusion, the depiction of gender discrimination, particularly
time, a woman, particularly a Javanese woman, did light labor and was
solely responsible for the kitchen. Marni's heavy job, such as becoming a
porter, is against nature and improper. Women are also treated unfairly
system. That is why she campaigned for women's right to education, also
was arguing that they were largely responsible for the teaching of the
young.
References
Kolodny, A. (2017). Some Notes on Defining a " Feminist Literary Criticism ".
75–92.
Penerbit Garudhawaca.
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https://books.google.co.id/books?id=tDUtDQAAQBAJ&printsec
=frontcover#v=onepage&q&f=fals
Analysis.
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- State the specific topic what is this about and be consistent with it
- Still having jumped-up ideas
- Some narratives and analysis are relevant with the theory, Natasya Mega Putri
some others not
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- There's still an inconsistent references
- Be aware of mechanic errors: paragraphing, citation, punctuation, VD
capitalization, italicization, etc
―In the fact the female mind has been totally neglected‖ (Nurachman,
2017). That words were came out from 4 century ago, but why that fact
movement is based on the fact that human when they born has no choice
relation and its activities in life has the area to be discussed in the first
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sexuality does not determine the limitation access, chance, and choice to
live the life in society. But the fact is not so humble as I said in this
and other aspects of life. where males in the family have power over
appeared in literary work, this because literary has the capacity to reveal
everything and imitate the reality, no matter what, even the immaterial
reference from ―the nature of literature does present a large part of life,
while real world life is a social condition of society‖ (Rene Wellek &
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This humble essay, therefore, will analysis the portrayal of feminist
2010 by Okky Madasari. This novel was being chosen because it contains
novel. As modest synopsis which follow this interest that the story tells
about Marni as a young girl who possess and obsess about bra or entrok in
java language, following her ambition to have fulfil her needs by working
as a merchant by walking around, and day by day she succeeded with the
addition job as moneylender, the story also moves in the story about
PKI sympathizer.
use literary criticism and approach. In this gold opportunity, I will use the
or representation of the world and human life, and the primary criterion
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The first movement is played by Sumarni in the novel where she manages
to fight the common view of women who can't work as casual laborers,
―Teja melihat, dan langsung berdiri menghampiriku. ‖Nyi Dimah mau ngangkat
apa?‖ ‖Bukan, Kang. Aku nggak disuruh Nyai. Aku yang butuh bantuan, Kang.‖
‖Kamu mau ngangkat apa, Ni?‖ ‖Bukan, Kang. Bukan minta dibantu ngangkat.
Aku mau ditolong, aku mau ikut nguli kayak Kakang.‖ Teja terbahak-bahak
Aku menunggu agak lama untuk mendapatkan jawaban yang sebenarnya. ‖Ni,
kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat. Sudah,
perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong.‖ ‖Aku kuat, Kang.
Biasanya aku juga nggendong tenggok, nggendong goni. Bakul-bakul itu juga banyak
saja yang nggak kuat ngangkat goni.‖ ‖Tapi tetap nggak umum, Ni. Di pasar ini,
nggak ada perempuan nguli.‖ ‖Tapi aku mau, Kang. Aku butuh duit, Kang. Nggak
mau lagi diupahi singkong.‖ ‖Ya terserah. Kalau mau nguli ya monggo,‖ Kata Teja
lirih. ‖Caranya gimana, Kang?‖ ‖Nggak ada caranya. Asal ada tenaga saja. Kamu
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tunggu di sini kalau ada orang yang butuh,‖ kata Teja sambil menunjuk kuli-kuli
From here I can see, the novel imitates in reality where feminist
2020, they are individually use what they can to act feminist movement.
Starting from that this imitation is the fight against the stupid idea which
female than the male character, because bossiness and other dry
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The next feminist movement which imitates from society in the novel is
ho Marni keep going on to fight what she belief right, even at the end was
―The severest sarcasms have been levelled against the sex, and they have
been ridiculed for repeating ‗a set of phrases learnt by rote,‘ when nothing
could be more natural, considering the education they receive, and that
―Ibu tidak dapat menutupi kejengkelannya. Dia sudah tahu orang-orang ini hanya
mau meminta uang. Padahal, bagi Ibu, setiap sen uangnya didapat dengan kerja
keras, dan hanya akan digunakan untuk hal-hal yang menurutnya berguna.
Tentara-tentara itu sudah sampai di puncak amarah. Bapak yang selalu takut pada
tentara, seperti biasanya, langsung menengahi. ‖Mohon maaf, Ndan. Istri saya ini
memang tidak tahu mana yang benar mana yang salah. Maaf, Ndan. Beribu maaf,
Ndan. Monggo datang lagi saja minggu depan, Ndan. Nanti kami siapkan jatah
buat keamanannya.‖ ‖Hei, Kang! Kowe kok kurang ajar begitu! Kami ini petugas.
Ke sini bukan mau minta jatah. Kami hanya mau menjaga keamanan!‖ kata
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Sumadi dengan keras. Jarinya menunjuk-nunjuk muka Bapak. Bapak pucat pasi,
But Marni as the imitation of feminist will never silence when she faces
the subordination of her subject. This fight is to end the circle that
―Begitu tentara-tentara itu pergi, Bapak dan Ibu bertengkar hebat. ‖Kamu jangan
seenaknya, Ni. Mau kamu dicap PKI, dipenjara kayak Pak Tikno?‖ ‖Halah!
Aku bukan PKI! Aku cuma mau cari makan. Tidak mencuri. Tidak merampok.
Apa aku salah? Terus mereka seenak udele meras orang. Dulu ngambil panci.
Sekarang datang minta duit!‖ ‖Tapi mereka petugas, Ni. Orang yang
nanggung kalau kita nanti dicap PKI? Mau kalau nanti kita semua dipenjara?‖
Despite this imitation referring about political issue, here I see Marni is
struggling to fight what her truth that she is not pro on Indonesia
Communist Party. That is a grand truth. From here, I could say that
Marni is not blinded by her husband where many woman are majority
blinded by her husband, throwing away her mind and truth as subject
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being, as warned by Mary Wollstonecraft that ―for they then perceive that
is only through their address to excite emotions in men, that pleasure and
assets to start a family and live as a marriage couple with Teja, shortly
Sumarni is being realistic to decide, The imitation from Sumarni even did
not judge any physical or social class about Teja, yet she question
feeling about couple, such as popular term in relationship like bucin, cinta
mati while her partner is a playboy and crock for example. This related to
Mary Wollstonecraft about the truth lof love relationship and it decision
to live as couple ―But one grand truth woman have yet to learn, though
even supposing him to be wise and virtuous, cannot long remain. Were
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woman rationally educated, could they take a more comprehensive view‖
―Kenapa, Ni? Kita saling cocok. Apa kamu tidak pengin punya suami, punya anak
seperti Tinah?‖ Punya anak? Bagaimana jika aku punya anak nanti? Mau jadi
apa anakku nanti? Tukang kupas singkong atau bakulan keliling desa kalau
tersimpan dalam hati. Tak tega kusampaikan pada Teja, karena aku memang
menyukainya. Aku hanya takut kalau cerita-cerita yang setiap hari ku dengarkan
suatu hari nanti akan kualami. Takut kalau anakku nanti mengalami seperti apa
yang kualami, punya bapak tapi minggat. Punya ibu tapi bodoh dan melarat.‖
(Madasari, 2010)
As the end of this humble essay. I will conclude and suggest that feminist
but the challenge is everywhere even the man of the loves one can be on
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feminist imitation is that Marni stick to defend what is the truth about the
Finally, the suggestions from this genuine essay are that woman as the
dealing with extreme man domination and more structural, deeper, and
not even felt and unseen. Therefore, I hope, the imitation in literary
works shall more beyond than reality to trigger and gain the
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- What do you want to discuss actually? What reality?
- There's no specific topic to discuss
- There's no specific theory chosen to be applied
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Then, the poets and all artists are imitators (Nurrachman, 2017). Quoted
tool to convey ideas, a reflection of the reality that exists in society, or the
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influenced by the concept of ideas (Sanjaya, 2017). Plato said that the
world of ideas is the world of the Divine. Plato's view then concludes that
what is beautiful is the truth, because the true truth only exists in God's
world. The truth of reality always refers to the world of God (Muzakki,
2011). On the other side, quoted from Aristotle (in Aminuddin, 2004)
argues that mimesis is not just an imitation, not just a portrait and reality,
but has gone through the inner personal awareness of the author. The
The novel is one of the literary works. The story that showed in a
that reflected the world and reality. Okky Madasari wisely describes reality
through her novel. Okky said that the ideas of the novel are from her
family in Magetan. Okky indirectly said that the novel idea comes from
the life around her. The setting of the novel is about the life of Marni and
her daughter Rahayu. Okky also nicely packs several social realities in her
could see the reflection of realities, including the social reality that
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appears in Java‘s people. Here is the writer would be quoted and analyze
Besides that, there are also some changes in her, especially the upper
Saat itu aku menyadari ada sesuatu yang berbeda di dadaku. Ada gumpalan
yang lembut dan terlihat menyembul dari balik baju yang kupakai. Simbok
bilang aku sudah mringkili.
Aku membuka kainku lalu menunjukkan noda-noda merah itu. Ada yang
kering, ada yang masih basah. Simbok melihatnya, lalu tertawa.
‖Ini bukan mau mati, Nduk. Ini tandanya kamu sudah anak perawan.
Sudah bukan bocah. Sudah bukan bocah.‖ (Madasari, 2010)
From the novel quotes above, it can be seen that every woman who
happened to herself when she entered puberty. In the quote above, it can
be seen that her mother, who had experienced this, told Marni about
Next, the writer chooses one of the realities, namely social reality.
One kind of social reality is working. People generally start their activities
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in the morning to work. The purpose of work is to earn salaries to meet
Aku dan Simbok bukan satu-satunya orang yang menyusuri jalanan pagi ini.
Di depan kami, di belakang, juga di samping, perempuan-perempuan
menggendong tenggok menuju Pasar Ngranget. Kami semua seperti kerbau yang
dihela di pagi buta, menuju sumber kehidupan. (Madasari, 2010)
experiencing puberty, Marni needs a lot of new things for her life and one
of them is an entrok or a bra. Entrok was not an easy item to get at that
society. Society tends to conclude that any heavy work is only suitable for
men.
‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan kuat.
Sudah, perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong.‖
(Madasari, 2010)
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do heavy work, such as nguli. She should do women's work, in this case
peeling cassava.
as well as in the case of proposals. The myth says that if a girl is proposed
to by a boy and then it is rejected and does not get their soul mate then
creates the perception that if the girl refuses the first proposal it will be
must accept and then marry. Marriage is one of the social realities where a
From the quote above, Simbok, Marni‘s mother still believes that a
woman who refuses a proposal will difficult to find a mate. So that, Marni
could not refuse Teja's proposal. After that, they are having a marriage.
because a woman must have a husband and have children. The quote
something, they tend to ask the Almighty. like that in reality, apart from
trying to make ends meet, one will pray to the Almighty to make things
easier.
Dulu sekali, aku juga melakukan apa yang Ibu lakukan. Ibu
membangunkanku, lalu kami berdua duduk di bawah pohon asem. Kata Ibu
itu namanya berdoa, tirakat. Ibu mengajariku untuk nyuwun. Katanya, semua
yang ada di dunia milik Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa. Dialah yang punya
kuasa untuk memberikan atau tidak memberikan yang kita inginkan.
‖Nyuwun supaya jadi orang pintar. Bisa jadi pegawai,‖ kata Ibu. (Madasari,
2010)
namely Rahayu and her mother Marni about how Marni's character
guides Rahayu to ask for her wishes. This often happens in the real world,
where people will pray to worship and ask for their wishes to come true.
Rahayu memilih kuliah di Jogja. Orangtuanya yang tidak tahu apa-apa hanya
menyetujui. Aku dan Teja sudah cukup bahagia hanya dengan melihat anak
kami satu-satunya akan berangkat ke kota untuk kuliah. Dia nanti akan
pulang menjadi sarjana. (Madasari, 2010)
From the quote above, the social reality of school can be seen.
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character Marni in the novel Entrok who wants her son to become a
scholar.
a deep heartache then crying is one way out. a mother has so much love
for her child when she finds out her child hates her so much, she will feel
Aku tak mampu menahan air mata. Hatiku sakit. Sudah bertahun-
tahun, Yuk. Apa aku yang salah kalau sejak lahir aku nggak kenal Gusti
Allah? Apa aku yang salah kalau dari dulu aku hanya tahu bagaimana
berterima kasih pada leluhur?
Selama bertahun-tahun, setiap hari aku menghindari omongan seperti
ini. Hanya supaya tak ada pertengkaran antara aku dan anakku satu-
satunya ini. Tapi sekarang dia malah terang-terangan membuat hatiku sakit.
Justru di saat aku begitu membanggakannya.
Tak masalah kalau semua orang omong aku memelihara tuyul atau cari
pesugihan, tapi aku selalu sangat sakit ketika yang omong seperti itu anakku
sendiri. Dan ini telah berulang kali terjadi. Hanya karena rasa kasih, ikatan
sebagai ibu dan anak, yang membuat rasa sakit dan benci ini selalu kembali
mengendap. (Madasari, 2010)
illustrate how great a mother's love for her child is in the real world. It
doesn't matter if the whole world hates a mother like Marni, but if her
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A mother's love is unquestionable. Despite having conflicts with her
daughter, her heart will never be able to lie that she also loves her. A
mother will still worry about her child if something bad happens to her
even though she is neglected by her child. As can be seen in the quote
below.
Rahayu Ningsih. Ada rasa getir saat mendengar nama itu. Rasa kecewa
seorang ibu yang telah diabaikan anak kandungnya bertahun-tahun lamanya.
Tapi juga ada rasa haru. Haru karena rindu. Dan ketika nama itu
diucapkan seorang yang tak kukenal, ada rasa kecut sekaligus takut. Berita
buruk apa yang hendak mereka katakan? (Madasari, 2010)
heart melts when hearing the name of her child. Marni, who is
disappointed with her daughter, Rahayu, is still excited to hear the news
of her daughter.
she had to lose the precious things in her life. Because for a mother her
From the quote from the novel above, we can see how much
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things in her life, Marni is willing to do it for the sake of meeting her
child. Marni was happy as long as she could meet her son. The quote is a
reflection of how much a mother's love for her child is in real life.
of real-world life. the writer finds a real-life relationship with the novel
Okky Madasari by citing several narratives in the novel, then identifies the
social aspects that exist in literary works, and finds the relationship of
social aspects in literary works with social aspects that exist in real life.
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- Nice and interesting discussion actually, I like the topic you choose to discuss
- Yet some still got random thoughts Nilam Salsabila Surya
- Just avoid some unnecessary statements as an effect of random thoughts
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will permanently remember what happened at that time, and will most
product that has its own, independent existence and exists as a complete
platform (Gora, 2015). Seeing the same, it is quite evident how a novel
Entrok depicts the narrative of women in the established order who still
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have the same social symptoms as now, where they have been compelled
Marni who became one of the many women whose lives are filled with
tales that confine the mind that should be free. Okky Mandasari depicts
how and why the character Rahayu, who now is more educated than his
order for them to have the same rights in the private and public realms as
men, but with women's reason (rationality) since doing so. In plenty of
other regards, this style of feminism strives for women to attain legal,
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order to enhance knowledge creation for women so that women's
the term feminism derives from the word femme, which means
feminism as an equal and fair movement between men and women in all
society, both at home and in the workplace. Thus, the two points of view
that works for women's rights and eradicates anything that oppresses
women. This is due to the fact that violence and injustice are on the
increase in many regions of the world. In truth, many women have been
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his analysis that women are purposefully supplied with narratives packed
with romantic notions, restricting the mind with information, such that
their logical thinking talents are buried so deeply that they are no longer
human beings with that side. Women are purposefully designed to have
political plan to reduce women's positions in the social order. It's similar
―Ya, kami memang sedang pengajian. Tak pernah ada larangan untuk
mengaji dan beribadah. Juga tak ada larangan untuk tertarik dengan
seseorang kan, meskipun dia sudah beristri?‖
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‖Bu... nggak bisa, Bu. Kami nggak mau ramai-ramai. Yang penting sah
agama saja. Yang penting kami tidak dosa, Bu. Nggak usah ramai-ramai,
Bu...‖
‖Sudahlah, pokoknya kalian diam saja. Biar aku dan bapak-mu yang
ngurus semuanya.‖
‖Bu, Amri sudah punya istri...‖
―Pernikahan kami hanya akan pernah ada bagi mereka yang percaya. Tak
ada surat, tak ada gambar, tak ada perayaan‖.
Men and the patriarchal culture have invaded women's brains to the point
that women who have been imprisoned by this heinous system believe
that their lives are merely to meet the standard of life of men. Men,
according to Nurrachman (2017: 137), believe that women are a source of
beauty that men cannot live without. Women are like glass glasses, statues
posed with typical masculine decorum. Furthermore, this becomes a
realization for women; that his life is spent seeking it. Nothing would
make her happier than to be recognized as a lady deserving of praise for
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her beauty and romanticism. They are shown imaginations that are
shaped by their own emotions.
What the character Kyai Hasbi stated to Rahayu is a depiction about just
how men may exploit women's emotions and the ability to get him to
the offer as you can see. Worse, this idea is connected with religion, and
their gender. Men can become religious leaders, and they frequently
conduct religious studies that include both men and women. Men can
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also be seen to be leaders because they perceive women's IQ is inferior.
how they begged the wife of a recently departed colleague to marry him,
A man's persona like this might simply persuade a lady to agree with just
thinking and deciding for themselves. Men believe that women's lives are
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hingga mengerti bahasa selain yang ada di kitab dan selain yang setiap hari
mereka gunakan.
women's strengths by marrying them. What guys seek from women might
Khadijah for her independence and commercial acumen, but they dislike
praised in such an Islamic community, but she does not enjoy it when she
than males. This has been my bewilderment and concern, if the Muslim
whether it is just a stale fiction with no adoption of any essence for life. Is
story has frequently been offered at every chance for Islamic religious
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As a result, this will always be a battle between women who just want to
obey the system that punishes them and those who choose to be free.
Dengan hati hancur, kutemui perempuan dan laki-laki se-tengah baya itu.
‖Saya istri sah Amri,‖ kataku kepada me-reka.
‖Itu istri Amri. Itu anaknya.‖ Laki-laki itu menunjuk perem-puan dan
anak laki-laki yang duduk di sebelah tubuh Amri.
‖Amri tak pernah bilang dia menikah lagi,‖ jawab perem-puan itu.
When you fulfill men's desire to control women, women really get
nothing. This remark may be examined further to see how Rahayu feels,
who has been severely damaged. But, once again, women who are
feel bad when they resist. The problem that complicates matters more
than anything is how this patriarchal way of life is maintained not just by
men who are eager for adoration, but also by women who become the
monster's story are women who fall into the trap of being fooled and
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Mojok.
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awareness by both women and men which is then manifested in actions with
covers various fields of life, including education, economics, social, culture, and
Vindication of the Right of Woman, Mary Wollstonecraft argues that men and
women both have the same mindset, so they should both get equal rights and
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treatment. Viewed from a historical point of view, this liberal feminist
rights with men. The unfortunate thing about this manifesto is that many
people do not know what feminism is, many people actually misunderstand the
Entrok novel by Okky Madasari is a novel that contains the life journey
of two women from different generations, namely Marni and Rahayu. Okky
Madasari herself is a woman born in Magetan. Entrok is her first novel, which
was printed on April 21, 2010, taken from the Javanese language Entrok means
brassiere. In this novel tells the struggle of two feminists who are trying to
achieve justice and equality between men and women. If we look at history
there are many feminists struggles in Indonesia, some of the famous feminist
figures in Indonesia are Raden Ajeng Kartini, L.A Lasminingrat, Raden Dewi
movement in the Western world which is rooted in the struggle for equal rights
for women. The struggle to eradicate gender subordination began in the late
following John Stuart Mill's The Subjection of Women, and American female
writer Margaret Fuller wrote Women in the Nineteenth Century. The suffrage
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movement (women in England in the early 20th century who demanded
development and movement in theoretical criticism and study that took place in
the late 1960s and since then this feminist criticism has been increasingly
'conspiracy' with its patriarchal attitude and male interpretation in literature and
literary criticism. This feminist criticism attacks the record of the value of men
in literary works by offering a critique of male authors and the role of men in
ideas and views about the basic nature of women and how women feel, think,
and act and how women in general respond to this life and existence. This
feminist critique questions the prejudices and prejudices against women that are
shaped by men. This feminist critique does not in the slightest allow the
soul of a feminist, but people at that time did not know the term feminist or
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equality between women and men. in this novel too depicted the figure of
Marni who always tries to realize all her wishes with her hard work, as well as
her daughter, Rahayu, she also has a passion who is the same as her mother in
fighting for equality and justice for all the people, but there is quite a difference
between the two of them. One of which is Rahayu is too easy to judge
something, such as when he judges that his mother is a sinner for worshiping
addition, this novel also shows a lot of inequality between genders, such as
when working in the market, female workers are only paid for food, while male
workers are paid money, as if female workers will not need anything else but
food. In this novel, it is described how very important the role of men in a
leadership is, there are no women who have positions, women only follow what
men say. Because of the thick patriarchy in this novel, we can see how unfair
the life lived by women at that time. as we know at that time are the years after
independence, the author argues that this happened because men felt that they
had succeeded in resisting the invaders with their hard work, while women who
were considered as 'weak creatures' were only objects that had to be protected
at that time, besides that this could also be because of the influence of the
Netherlands or Japan were led by a man. Things like feminism at that time were
the market to get paid money. Marni‘s mother this is violated nature because
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she thought that menial work like that was only done by men, also the case with
Teja who was Marni's husband, before they got married, Teja also had forbade
Marni to be a coolie with him. even though behind that all women are also able
to do the same work as men do, even much better. like when Marni was selling
around with her husband, namely Teja. Marni always thinks how to get money
in a faster way, while her husband only helps Marni carry her wares, as if there
is no desire to provide for his wife, because most men have big egos in this
matter, many men feel lose their self-esteem when he has to live from the
results of his wife's sweat. but what Teja does is different, this proves that not
all men have a patriarchal spirit which must always be above women. Apart
from feminist issues, this novel also describes the many inequalities that
occurred at that time. The struggle of women in gender equality is also not only
happening in Indonesia, many countries are still struggling to fight for the rights
of gender equality. In one of the books the author reads, namely A Feminist
her difficult times when fighting for gender equality, one simple example that
men are more valued than women is when Chimamanda gave parking money to
the parking guard, but the parking guard actually thanked the man who was
with Chimamanda, and not only that Chimamanda also had an argument with
his male friend when he was a teenager, they argued about something and there
he still maintained his opinion, then his friend named Okolama said that he was
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There are still many people's misconceptions about women who try to equalize
themselves with men, they think that it is inappropriate, violates nature, violates
There are too many things that limit women from getting to the things they
then the struggle of women in equality must never be extinguished, and This
the figure of Marni succeeded in leading herself, even her husband, to success
where success here according to Marni is measured by how much wealth she
has. Marni was even able to pay the men to work in her fields, and this was a
matter of pride for her, because in her childhood she was underestimated by the
And then when the president's leadership changed many social problems
as they are willing to pay. It just shows them as criminals in the name of the
state, and when they easily judge someone as PKI when their requests are not
obeyed, this actually makes people's lives difficult and like there is no difference
with the colonial period, it's just changing people. In addition to social
problems that occur because of the authorities, social problems also occur
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still occur a lot until now. Although Indonesia is known as a friendly country,
likes to help others, the fact is that in neighborly life, the opposite is true. In
this novel it is described that people will not help if no feedback they receive.
And even though we have done good to our neighbors, it is not necessarily that
the neighbors will respond by being kind, on the contrary they even talk about
bad things about people who help them. In my opinion, Marni's character in
this novel is quite good, even though she gets a lot of slander from her
neighbors, she still wants to help her neighbors who are in trouble even though
it's not free. Things that happen in the novel Entrok are still happening in
men in their families with patriarchal thoughts. In addition, those who have
patriarchal thoughts are also strongly against what is called feminism, many
think that feminism means opposing men and means women can live alone
without men. people with patriarchy usually don't like to be rebutted when it
comes to gender issues. Then the problem of officers who become criminals in
the name of the state, this still happens a lot today, not a few officers who
abuse their power. There has also been a lot of bad news lately, there have been
many cases of rape against women, such as the one that occurred in West Java,
where unscrupulous Islamic School teachers raped their students. This make
people angry because the authorities are very slow in handling this case, but the
social media, where rape cases like this can be quickly identified by the
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community quickly and in this way the community can demand the authorities
to quickly follow up on the case. Different from the past, in the novel Entrok
depicts the figure of Rahayu who is the daughter of Marni, when she tries to
uncover the truth to the public, she did not get any response from state officials
and instead got into trouble, besides that the witness of the incident was found
dead with stab wounds, this was really ironic because Indonesia at that time was
not truly independent, people were still being colonized by the nation itself. The
problem of injustice between men and women is also still a problem until now,
there are still many men who think that women do not need higher education
because in the end women will only serve their husbands and take care of their
her child, so that a much better generation of the nation is formed, such as a
quote " providing education to men will create a great person, and give
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works are not part of society, but social images can be fully conveyed
through stories. This is because the literature can contain ideas that might
events. Then Wellek and Warren (1990: 109) have the same concept as
The characteristics of literary works are imaginative. But even so, it can
also explain the fact of life or reality in the real world in an imaginary way.
reality with the intention that humans better understand and can properly
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The use of imaginative depictions in this literary work is not without
work. Readers want something beautiful in a literary work and not the
literary works can show the meaning of what happened at that time, both
bad and good, so readers can see events by reading a literary work
that "it is not enough poems to be beautiful; they must be affecting and
must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. As people's faces smile on
those who smile, in a similar way they sympathize with those who weep.‖
this study the author does not use Horace's theory. The statement above
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The inner experiences described by Imron as well as the effects and
lead the heart described by Horace can be found in almost every literary
diction presented by the author. For example, when the author narrates a
Such things are what the author finds in the novel Entrok by Okky
Madasari. In general, the novel tells about the struggle of women against
several female characters in the novel Entrok come from men. It can be
said that men are told to be the dominant class in society. Entrok presents
two narrative stories from different characters. The first is from the point
of view of Marni, who is a woman who was born during the colonial era
so that her life can be said to be difficult. Marni at the beginning of the
story has the dream of having an entrok or a bra in Javanese. At that time
the bra was considered a luxury that only the aristocrats had. Marni's
desire finally led her to try to work in the market, starting from cassava
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peelers to goods transport workers. With the efforts she lived, Marni was
finally able to improve her life little by little. She also met Suteja, who
became her husband when he was a porter at the market. After getting
married, Marni and Suteja started a new business, trading vegetables and
Unlike Marni, Rahayu, who is Marni's son, can be said to have a better
life. He was born into the wealth of the already successful Marni. But the
conflict that Rahayu experienced was with her mother because she had
the assumption that her mother was just an infidel (animist), which was
The conflict in the novel Entrok, as the title used by the author, tells
more about the domination of men over women, so that it intersects with
the struggles of women that the author is trying to build. Even though
the struggle as far as the writer sees it is only based on equality in society,
both in economic and social terms. But there is one thing that some
female characters miss in this novel, which is about love. The women in
the novel, although very loudly defending equal rights, are not yet rational
enough in terms of love. They are still "fooled" by something that only
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To see the lack of understanding of love by women, the writer uses
understood by women. So armed with this theory, the author will criticize
1979: 3-29).
After reading the novel Entrok, the writer then finds an outline of the
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contradictory. In the following, the author will describe the concept of
love through the quotes contained in the novel in the quotes below.
abandoned by her father when she was little. And the reason is a trivial
thing is because his wife is sick and there is no food available at home. In
a marriage, life should be filled with love and compassion, not anger. But
physical needs are not met, and one partner leaves the other, it means
that their marriage is not based on love, only the fulfillment of desires.
things are related to each other. Because education in practice can affect
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―Entrok memang terlalu mewah untuk aku dan Simbok. Apa yang
masih dipikirkan seorang perempuan kere buta huruf dengan tanggungan
seorang anak selain hanya makan?‖ (Madasari, 2010: 18)
A little mention about education, Marni's mother is indeed someone
who does not go to school, it can be proven from the quote above. The
inability to read was enough to prove that Marni's mother did not attend
school. This is what presumably failed to build the ideal concept of love
following quote.
―Love is, in a great degree, an arbitrary passion, and will reign, like some
other stalking mischiefs, by its own authority, without deigning to reason; and
it may also be easily distinguished from esteem, the foundation of friendship
because it is often excited by evanescent beauties and grace …‖
(Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2017: 137)
The writer feels that Wollstonecraft in the quote above inserts a little
satire for the understanding of love. That the concept of ideal love is not
―Malam ini, tidur tak lagi sekadar rutinitas penutup hari, melainkan
saat pelepasan seluruh keinginan dan kepemilikan. Tidur kini menjadi
simbol bagaimana pencapaian manusia dalam mendapatkan apa yang
diinginkan.
Aku kesakitan, dia kegirangan. Aku mengerang, dia senang. Aku
menangis, dia tertawa penuh kemenangan. Aku menerawang dia telah
pulas.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 48-49)
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In the novel quoted above, it can be seen that Marni and Teja's
married life seems empty. Sexual activity that should be filled with love is
does not like it. John Dryden also quoted this incident directly by
Wollstonecraft.
―'Where love is duty, on the female side, 'On theirs mere sensual gust and
sought with surly pride‖ (Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2010: 138)
But even so, Marni still did not ask for a divorce with Teja, not for
reasons of love, Marni did not believe or did not know about love, as he
said directly.
―Apa itu cinta? Prek! Cinta itu kan omongan orang-orang zaman
sekarang setelah menonton TV. Mereka Cuma ikut-ikutan ngomong,
padahal juga nggak tahu apa itu cinta.‖
―Aku tidak minta pegat karena tidak mau semua yang sudah kumiliki
ini dibagi dua. Kok enak banget. Semuanya ini aku yang kerja keras, aku
yang mikir semuanya,‖ (Madasari, 2010: 114-115)
The only reason Marni didn't get divorced was not because of love,
but because she didn't want the property she had to be divided equally if
they divorced. Marni thinks that so far, she is the one who works hard, so
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―Iya, Pak. Maaf. Istri saya ini tidak paham. Maklum, kami orang buta
huruf. Jadi kami harus membayar uang keamanan berapa, Pak?‖
―Tentara-tentara itu mengambil dagangan Ibu. Masih ada empat ember
dan enam panci, semuanya ludes. Mereka juga mengambil setengah jaring
beras. Bapak dan Ibu hanya diam tak berbuat apa-apa.‖ (Madasari, 2010:
65)
The two quotes above refer to the incident when Marni had her goods
taken by the army. Even though in reality Marni had protested against the
soldiers who were about to take her wares, it was just a futile act. Teja
immediately interrupted Marni's protest with his male power and then
states that the superior nature of men tends to never listen to women's
―When do men /all-in-love with sense? When do they, with their superior
powers and advantages, turn from the person to the mind? And how can they
expect women, who are only taught to observe behavior, and acquire manners
rather than morals, to despise what they have been all their lives labouring to
attain? Where are they suddenly to find judgement enough to weigh patiently
the sense of an awkward virtuous man, when his manners, of which they are
made critical judges, are rebuffing and his conversation cold and dull, because
it does not consist of pretty repartees or well-turned compliments?‖
(Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2017: 136)
What kind of marriage is based on male authority? Wouldn't a
marriage base on love listen to each other? I don't see this in the married
life of Teja and Marni. Even Marni, who has logical arguments, doesn't
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get a sound that is rational enough for Teja. That's what happens if the
concept of love is not built in a marriage. What will happen in the end is
From some of the quotes that the author has described above, it can
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85 = A Nisa Nurjannah
and life are results in literary creations. As a result of everything that has
all of its flaws. The incorporation of communal social life in the form of
literary works also produces societal obstacles and problems that are
according to (Wellek, R., & Warren, 1989), but social pictures can be
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contain concepts that can be used to create particular social dispositions
and presents the truth about life and humanity‖. the condition, the
Surely, poets imitate not just real objects, as (Abrams & Harpham, 1999)
exist in nature, as Plato stated: "Plato states that all art is mimesis by
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just as we can find an understanding of feminism throughout Mary
Men and women have had opposing viewpoints since the eight-teenth
superior.
purport of those books‘, she exclaims, tends to ‗degrade one - half of the
(Nurrachman, 2017).
and women are not equal when it comes to measure social positions.
quoted below,
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―The association of our ideas is either habitual or instantaneous, and the
mind than on the will. When the ideas, and matters of fact, are once taken
in, they lie by for use, till some fortuitous circumstance makes the
information dart into the mind with illustrative force, that has been
(Nurrachman, 2017))
in the novel Entrok are perpetrated by men. It may be claimed that men
are shown as the dominant social class. Entrok tells two stories from the
perspective of Marni, a woman born during the colonial era, whose life
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transport worker. Marni was ultimately able to change her life slowly but
surely as a result of her efforts. She also met Suteja, who became her
new business after getting married, traveling around the hamlet trading
Marni. He was born into the already prosperous Marni family. Rahayu, on
the other hand, had a problem with her mother because she assumed her
beliefs.
After attentively reading the novel, the writer discovered parallels in the
The conflict in the novel Entrok, as the author's title suggests, is primarily
attempt to depict women's hardships. Even if, in the writer's opinion, the
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socially. However, there is one aspect of this tale that some female
characters overlook: inferiority. The women in the narrative are not yet
sensible enough in terms of it, despite their outspoken support for equal
rights. They are still driven astray by something that is only visible from
the outside.
Marni is the subject of the novel's first inferiority issue. Her figure can be
the incentive for women working there still is food or goods rather than
cash. This also makes Marni an inferior figure because her work is similar
the female than the male character, because bussiness and other dry
― Nyai Dimah memang benar. Kepada siapa pun aku bekerja di pasar ini, aku
akan diupahi dengan bahan makanan. Lagi pula tak banyak pedagang yang butuh
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The suffering is extended, when Marni try to raise her bargaining power
yang kuinginkan. Aku menunggu agak lama untuk mendapatkan jawaban yang
sebenarnya.‖Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli. Nggak akan
kuat. Sudah, perempuan itu kerja yang ringan-ringan aja. Ngupas singkong.‖
‖Aku kuat, Kang. Biasanya aku juga nggendong tenggok, nggendong goni. Bakul-
bakul itu juga banyak yang mengangkat sendiri dagangannya dari rumah ke pasar.
Hanya priyayi-priyayi saja yang nggak kuat ngangkat goni.‖ (Madasari, 2010)
Teja, who dismisses Marni by laughing aloud and labeling her as weak, is
From this narration, then comes the irony which occurred in Marni‘s
incentive, and women which actually has done many similar deeds as
men, in terms of particular job as a housewife. But did not earn anything
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―Aku tertawa dalam hati saat mendengar nasihat Mbah Noto. Memang benar, di
pasar ini tidak ada perempuan yang nguli, pekerjaan berat yang menggunakan tenaga
besar. Di pasar ini, buruh perempuan mengerjakan pekerjaan yang halus dan enteng,
seperti mengupas singkong, menumbuk padi, atau menumbuk kopi. Tapi coba lihat,
Mereka harus mengerjakan semua pekerjaan yang ada, mengambil air dari sumber
dengan menempuh perjalanan naik-turun. Berat satu jun yang berisi penuh air sama
Tidak ada laki-laki yang mengambil air, katanya itu urusan perempuan. Ya jelas
lebih enak nguli daripada ngambil air. Nguli diupahi duit, sementara mengambil air
everything conspires to twist into all their habits of thinking, or, to speak
with more precission, of feeling, receives new force to begin to act a little
education is, when Marni was forced to being married with Teja while at
prior statement she was unable to see the future prospects of being in
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―Tapi cerita-cerita itu juga menimbulkan ketakutan. Takut pada laki-laki, takut
kawin. Lha buat apa kawin, kalau jadinya cuma sengsara. Inilah yang kukatakan
pada Teja waktu dia memintaku jadi istrinya. Dia melamarku di depan pasar, saat
matahari baru mengintip malu-malu, saat aku menunggu kedatangan petani yang
membawa berbagai sayur-sayuran. ‖Aku belum mau kawin, Kang.‖ ‖Kenapa, Ni?
Kita saling cocok. Apa kamu tidak pengin punya suami, punya anak seperti
Tinah?‖ Punya anak? Bagaimana jika aku punya anak nanti? Mau jadi apa
anakku nanti? Tukang kupas singkong atau bakulan keliling desa kalau
untuk mengawiniku pada Simbok. Malam itu, di belakang rumah, saat kuulangi
permintaanku pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa, Simbok berbisik pelan, ‖Nduk,
anak perempuan itu harus punya suami, punya anak. Kalau sudah ada yang
Aku tak membantah omongan Simbok. Tak mengiakannya. Tapi hanya tiga hari
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The reality that Marni faced, is parallely go straight with Wollstonecraft
stated.
―The severest sarcasms have been levelled against the sex, and they have
been ridiculed for repeating ‗a set of phrases learnt by rote,‘ when nothing
could be more natural, considering the education they receive, and that
their ‗highest praise is to obey, unargued‘- the will of man. If they be not
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In the next stage, as a husband, Teja no longer had any reasoning on what
‖Dasar Teja, lanangan1 nggak tahu diuntung. Susah payah aku cari duit, dia
malah enak-enakan kelonan sama kledek.‖ Ibu sudah tidak lagi memaki Tonah.
Kini dia mengumpat Bapak. Padahal orang yang dimaki entah sedang di mana. Teja
yang pemalas. Teja yang tidurnya seperti kerbau. Teja yang hanya mau enaknya
sendiri. Teja yang sekarang sedang gandrung dengan kledek...‖ (Madasari, 2010)
arbitrarily husband,
―The virtues of a husband are thus thrown by love into the background,
and gay hopes, or lively emotions, banish reflection till the day of
reckoning comes; and come it surely will, to turn the sprightly lover into a
fostered. Or, supposing the rake reformed, he cannot quickly get rid of
old habits. When a man of abilities is first carried away by his passions, it
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is necessary that sentiment and taste varnish the enormities of vice, and
give a zest to brutal indulgences; but when the gloss of novelty is worn
off, and pleasure palls upon the sense, lasciviousness becomes barefaced,
reflection as from a legion of devils. Oh! virtue, thou art not an empty
name! All that life can give- thou givest!‖ (Nurrachman, 2017).
considered at inferior position rather than men. Its fact affected the
whole life of women, as readers may seen through Entrok, that hardship
References
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Nurrachman, D. (2017). Introduction to Criticism. Bandung: Pustaka Aura
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mistaken for that
- This is good actually; good in terms of the interesting ideas NISRINA AZMIL MUNA
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- This is also having inconsistent references: you didn't cite the
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- Be aware of mechanic errors 75 = B 5D
Mother is the first love of the children, she will always do the best for
serenity, interest, strength, and so on, for her children. The role of
mother is very close to the children, she always be with them in all phases
educated them, protected them, and give them all her affection. However,
mother is also an ordinary human who has feelings and can be hurt,
especially by the one whom she loves, her children. She hurts, but she will
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keep in her heart, because her affection and love for her children are
greater than her hurt. Likewise in the novel Entrok by Okky Madasari,
was hurt by her daughter, Rahayu. She was hurt by Rahayu‘s words, she
felt that her daughter did not respect her hard work and sacrifice, Rahayu
also did not respect to Marni‘s faith, but it did not make her to stop
heart, so that she only kept it in her heart. She was hurt, but she could
not.
and do the best for her children. But sometimes, there is also exists the
opposite of it. Children do the best for making their mother proud in
education and so on, but the mother did not respect it and even she will
hurt the children heart by her words. In other case there is a mother who
injures their children violently, or she does not give the full rights to the
without caring about her children. At this time, there are so many cases
like that. The reasons which probably happen are because they do not
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The critical theory used is the theory stated by Horace, it is Utile et
Dulce which means that a good literary work is a literary work that
contains elements of fun and benefits. Further than that, Horace said in
―The aim of the poet is to inform or to delight, or to combine together, in what he says,
both pleasure and applicability to life. In instructing, be brief in what you say in order
that your readers may grasp it quickly and retain it faithfully. Superfluous words
simply spill out when the mind is already full. Fiction invented in order to please
―Selama bertahun-tahun, setiap hari aku menghindari omongan seperti ini. Hanya
supaya tak ada pertengkaran antara aku dan anakku satu-satunya ini. Tapi
sekarang dia malah terang-terangan membuat hatiku sakit. Justru di saat aku begitu
membanggakannya. Tak masalah kalau semua orang omong aku memelihara tuyul
atau cari pesugihan, tapi aku selalu sangat sakit ketika yang omong seperti itu
anakku sendiri. Dan ini telah berulang kali terjadi. Hanya karena rasa kasih,
ikatan sebagai ibu dan anak, yang membuat rasa sakit dan benci ini selalu kembali
mengendap.‖
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From the quotation above, it proved that the aim of Entrok is to
inform about the affection of mother is real and she will always loves her
children. There is also a little delight for readers when read it, especially
who has become a mother, because they will feel supported and corrected
from it. It is also applicable to life and will be useful for the readers‘ life
because every literary works are definitely provides some messages in it.
Okky was also brief in instructing it, so that the readers can grasp it in
one time.
in the practical question of how the poet may delight and instruct an
Okky also used the appropriate vocabulary and diction in her writing
she described her work in some Singget words. She also used appropriate
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According to Horace in Nurrachman‘s book, ―poetry is like
painting in that some works are best viewed up close, some farther away,
some in the shadow, and some in the light.‖ In Entrok, we can also view
it in close when we see the pure script of the novel, the quotation I
brought, it can bring the perspective out. Besides, we can also view it in
understand the reason why Rahayu did it because we will try to be further
looking to it. Furthermore, we can also view it in the shadow or the light,
we will look for the real reason and evidence why the problem happen,
we will bring it into our deep mind and heart. That is poetry is like
painting.
Entrok, Okky try to convey something she want or wish. She speaks for
women‘s rights, she gave all stories in Entrok all she wanted, she had a
However Horace also stated that the poetic license or the freedom
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Okky can be said that she would have a privilege to do something they
wish or she would have the poetic license if she includes the five special
standards to Entrok.
write, take a subject equal to your powers, and consider at length how
much your shoulder can bear. Neither proper words nor lucid order will
between mother and daughter, also the women rights. Because she is a
mother and woman, she experienced it in her life, further than that, the
write it may be the same, also the respect to the mother and women
rights are not too good. Besides, she used the proper words to express
her feeling because she chose the right subject within her power.
really hurt the readers‘ heart. She good at chose the proper words and she
did it.
The second standard is novelty. Horace said that you will express
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of a skilful setting. Okky made it in the sentence ―Hanya karena rasa kasih,
ikatan sebagai ibu dan anak, yang membuat rasa sakit dan benci ini selalu kembali
The third standard is suitability. Horace said that both comedy and
tragedy have adopted this meter as best fitted for dialogue, able to drown
out the noise of the audience, and suitable for action. It means that the
poetry have to adopted material which best fitted for dialogue in it so that
it can suit to the audiences or the readers. Also it applied to Entrok, the
word and everything in it is suitable for its genre. The moan of the
best fitted when put together, like Horace said in Nurrachman‘s book
and must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. If you wish me to weep,
you must first feel grief yourself. Likewise the topic above, I cried and felt
sad when I read it. Okky succeed to convey the sadness she has to the
readers. She leads the heart of the readers. The other topics in Entrok also
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succeed making the readers feel the same with the role or figure of the
novel.
writing the source and fountain is wisdom. Okky used the wisdom for the
source and fountain of the novel, it is proved with the wisdom of the
mother‘s act to her daughter. Even though her daughter did not listen to
her words and respect her, she was always wise. She continued to work
hard and even harder for making her daughter successful after getting a
higher education. If we look further, we can also see the wisdom of her
daughter, Rahayu. She tried to protect her mother from getting lost in her
religion or faith, and she tried to avoid talking to her mother so they do
not fight.
fault. She acted like she did not respect her mother. But according to
Horace in his work, you have enough judgment and good sense not to do
it. It means that the readers have their own judgment and good sense, so
that they can filter what they can practice in their own life. But the
readers cannot judge the writer or the poets if the story is not what the
readers want, because the poets have the rights to do something in their
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works such as sadness, pain, happiness, pleasure, and so on. It is stated by
Horace in his work that you must allow poets to have the right and ability
figures in the story. She destroyed Marni with the act of Rahayu which
did not respect her. Besides, the conditions and all struggles that Marni
got was destroyed her and it is the rights and ability of the poets to
In the end, Marni and Rahyu were reunited because the bond
everything for our life, and the children will always be thankful to their
The Entrok novel also gives us the lessons which we can apply in
our life, because the novel is one of literary work which created by the
poets, and according to Horace that the aim of the poet is to teach and to
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Nurrachman, D. (2017). Introduction to Criticism. Bandung: Pustaka Aura
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Rizky, A. & Larasati, AY. (2020). ―Konsep Horace Dalam Novel Laskar
Pelangi Karya Andrea Hirata Kajian Kritik Sastra.‖ Jurnal Ilmiah Pend.
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- Less focus analysis
- Too many introductory paragraphs Nizar Asy Syauqi
- There's no specific topic to discuss
- Having jumped-up ideas
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- Some narratives and analysis are relevant with the theory, some others,
mostly, not
- Romanticism is not simply related to that feeling 5D
- Lack of critical analytical arguments
- Lack of relevant theoretical justifications
- Be aware of mechanic errors: paragraphing, capitalization, citation, etc 65 = C
HOW ROMANTICISM WAS IMPLIED THROUGHOUT ENTROK
BY OKKY MADASARI
aesthetic value becomes the benchmark for the beauty of the literary
works.
exists in the form of 'ideas' and that artists are imitators of that idea,
―Plato has Socrates locate reality in what are called ideas or forms rather
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than in the world of appearances or phenomena experienced through the
(Nurrachman, 2017:12).
coincide with the content of its value. From that statement, some early
On that certain period, which stated under early enlightenment and early
romantic era, the idea about it became massive and became mainstream
since the problems of human life are no longer only about art and
language, but involve the lives of many people, talking about economics,
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politics, and humanity. The changes caused by the industrial revolution,
the human heart yearning for simplicity, with which there will be a sense
of connectedness with nature. Which means that life like that will last a
―He approaches the idea of a poem by first discussing the idea of a poet: ―a man
speaking to men: a man, it is true, endowed with more lively sensibility, more
enthusiasm and tenderness, who has greater knowledge of human nature, and a more
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imagination. Beauty will be seen in how a poet is able to image something
through the glass, what is invisible but can be felt, beyond the reach of
the senses, which can only be accepted by the feelings of the heart.
This will later become the writer's reference in writing his critique of
Entrok, as given the title by its author, is Madasari's first published novel.
Published in April 2010 to coincide with Kartini's Day, the book tells
stories about women's lives. Marni, a woman who lived during the
colonial era before independence, had to feel the bitter reality of life for a
woman in her day. The fact that a woman can only be paid food for the
work she does, in a narrow context makes this woman break the social
society at that time for women, in order to fulfill her desire to have an
This book has in its way of speaking, has various layers of conflict with
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What the author tries to focus on in this writing, related to the
the main source of the element of beauty in this flow, the experience of
(Nurrachman, 2017:146).
On the first chapter of Entrok, we will find the undefined opening on the
book which quite unrelated to the next chapter of it. But, consequently it
monologue.
―Lima tahun aku menunggu hari ini datang. Pagi – pagi aku sudah mandi lalu
berdandan. Hari ini aku akan lahir kembali. Aku akan kembali menjadi manusia
yang punya jiwa. Tidak hanya raga kosong yang menunggu kematian.‖ (Madasari,
2010:11)
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The way rahayu talked about life and death on it, was how the author try
to express the character‘s feeling of reborn and become ‗life again‘ which
―Hari ini sedikit dosaku akan tertebus. Utangku memang tak akan pernah impas.
Tapi setidaknya biarkan aku membuatmu sedikit saja bahagia. Lima tahun ini,
kulakukan segalanya untuk membuatmu kembali lagi merasa berarti. Setiap pagi
aku mengajakmu menyusuri jalanan yang telah puluhan tahun kau lewati. Agar kau
kembali ingat kau adalah manusia hebat yang telah mengalahkan kerasnya nasib.‖
(Madasri, 2010:11)
The course of intention that Rahayu tried on his mother in this narration
implied that by bring back the feeling of walking on the same street and
repeat the similar experience which she has done in entire her mother‘s
More specific events on how romantic way was told on Marni‘s life
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When the plot was going far backward on little puberty Marni
experienced her rejection by her uncle, while she tried to kind of asking
‖Aku tak langsung ke rumah, tapi mampir ke sungai tempat aku dan orang – orang
Kutumpahkan rasa kecewa dan amarah ke dasar sungai. Kulihat arus membawanya
pendengaranku. Makin terdengar sayup , ada suara yang tidak bisa didengar, tapi
hanya bisa dirasakan. Suara yang mengajakku berlari ke pasar, mendatangi penjual
The feeling that Marni expressed here was the same way on how
Unusual.
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expression of her disappointment and sadness by throw out the nature on
its place settings, and the way she carry the character feeling throughout
Marni contemplated her sorrow and then drag her to encourage herself
Romanticism afterby.
―Aku mengikuti suara itu. Kususuri jalan yang biasa dilewati Simbok setiap hari.
Kalau simbok biasa melewati jalan ini di pagi buta lalu pulang saat matahari
sepenggalah, kini aku melaluinya saat matahari tepat di atas kepala.Terik. Kaki
Pasar Ngranget ada di desa lain. Untuk ke sana aku harus berjalan kaki melewati
tiga desa, lewat jalanan naik -turun yang penuh batu dan debu. Aku tiba di pasar
How Marni intends to follow the whisper to the market, despite of her
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This part as well, was succeed to give readers a good description on a
point of view that Wordsworth desired on. The humble and rustic life.
―Humble and rustic life was generally chosen, because, in that condition, the essential
passion of the heart find a better soil in which they can attain their maturity, are less
under restraint, and speak a plainer and more emphatetic.‖ (Nurrachman, 2017:
149)
role in a bigger frame while the story goes on throughout the years where
the main caharacters spent most of their life in that village. Singget
represents a sort of thing that keeping the characters connected with its
implicit power of tight-knit that implied on how the place was described.
―Masuk di Bandongan, makin tak berbekas sisa kemajuan Magelang. Desa ini tak
ubahnya seperti Singget. Sawah dengan padi menguning yang siap dipanen
membentang luas. Rumah gedek di mana – mana. Di jalanan beberapa anak yang
seharusnya sekolah tampak sedang memanggul rumput, apalagi kalau bukan untuk
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Throughout this event, Rahayu experienced the place that she has been
entered was just similar like the place she was grew up, Singget. The
harvest paddyfield, and kids that were carrying wild grass instead of go to
school.
―…because the manners of rural life germinate from those elementary feelings, and,
from the necessary character of rural occupations, are more easily comprehended, and
are more durable; and, lastly, because in that condition the passions of men are
2017: 149).
However, since the story used ‗rural life‘ as its place settings, the
―This perfection comes from form which, by giving shape to things, reveals their beauty.
Switch over from the rustic and rural things, hereover the author was
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Rahayu—daughter of Marni, located on the third chapter, Tuyul – tuyul
―Aku dan Ibu seperti makin menjauh. Bukan raga, karena aku dan Ibu bukan
orang yang betah marah berlama – lama. Ibu memaki dengan suara tinggi saat
marah, dan diakhiri dengan tangisan. Aku tak mau kalah. Tapi pertengkaran
kami tidak tidak berlanjut dengan tak saling bertegur sapa selama berhari – hari.
Tapi di dalam hati, kami seperti dua manusia yang sedang berjalan di tebing tinggi,
di mana masing – masing berjalan hati – hati. Sedikit salah langkah, kami akan
jatuh ke dasar jurang. Tapi, toh, bagaimanapun kami saling berhati – hati,
the exploration that Okky Madasari did in this part of story, is go hand in
on the quote above and the way its conflict happened were attached
parallely with ‗the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings‘ that has been
Ballads,
―For all good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings; and though this be
true, poems to which any value can be attached were never produced on any variety of
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subjects but by a man who, being possessed of more than usual organic sensibility, had
From all the theories and the quotes which has been consecutively
described above, it can concluded that, there are some narration that
to the nature around them and how much their feeling were influenced
by it. There are many Wordsworth‘s vision as well, on how nature and
bloodline and reality bonded Marni and Rahayu that lead them on every
events, it can not be denied that the effect of nature and feeling will
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Nurholis. (2019). Prose: The Short Fiction. Bandung.
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REPRESENTATION OF MALE SUPREMACY IN OKKY
MADASARI‘S ENTROK
Although literary works are not part of society, stories can effectively
specific social events, this is the case. Then there's Damono's notion,
which is shared by Wellek and Warren (1990: 109). They mention that
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lie beneath society's surface. Literary works, by their very nature, have
evolved into a type of social institution that uses language as its platform.
Nonetheless, the author's goal is not solely his or her own; there is, of
must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. As people's faces smile on
those who smile, in a similar way they sympathize with those who weep.‖
they guide the heart, may be found in practically every literary work.
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pleasant work if the reader has an internal experience or remembers
Sort of things are what the writer figures out throughout the story
It may be claimed that men are shown as the dominant social class. The
first is from the perspective of Marni, a woman who was born during the
colonial era and has had a rough existence. Marni's dream at the start of
worker. Marni was ultimately able to change her life little by little as a
result of her efforts. She also had the opportunity to meet Suteja. Here is
primarily about men's supremacy over women, merging with the author's
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attempt to depict women's challenges. Even if, in the writer's opinion, the
theory in her work entitled A Vindication of the Rights of Woman which was
the literary work being researched. To put it another way, the objective
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After reading the novel Entrok, the writer then finds an outline of the
following, the author will describe the concept of love through the quotes
fight that happened. Because of male, two women fight each other. Then
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Di tengah kepanikan, tiba-tiba seorang laki-laki tua muncul dari kerumunan
penonton, mendekati dua perempuan yang sedang pada puncak amarah. Tubuh laki-
laki itu kurus, dengan tinggi di atas kebanyakan laki-laki di pasar ini. Seluruh
rambutnya putih, begitu juga kumis tipis yang melekat di wajahnya. Ketika berjalan,
punggung laki-laki itu melengkung, entah karena usia atau karena badannya yang
terlalu tinggi. Laki-laki itu Pak Suyat. Suami Yu Parti sekaligus Yu Yem. Laki-
laki yang menjadi sumber perkelahian dua pedagang Pasar Ngranget. ‖Ti, sudah, Ti.
Sudah!‖ Pak Suyat meraih tangan kiri Yu Parti yang sedang menjambak rambut
Yu Yem. ‖Sudah, ayo pulang!‖ Pak Suyat menarik tangan istrinya. Yu Parti yang
sebelumnya kelihatan penuh semangat, kini lemas tanpa tenaga. Ditariknya tangan
Meanwhile two woman was fighting, the source of problem whose the
husband of both women is coming, and stop the fight just by nothing.
Without any sorry, he just came and didn‘t solve the real issue.
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This kind of thing is alluded to by Wollstonecraft in the following
quote.
quoted things are related to each other. Because education in practice can
Yu Parti dan Yu Yem seolah telah lupa mereka harus berbagi suami.
Yu Parti seperti tak ingat lagi, suami yang sebelumnya hanya miliknya,
kini juga telah dimiliki orang lain. Yu Yem pun seperti tak peduli lagi
bahwa di depan orang banyak dia pernah disebut sundal dan perebut
suami orang. Meski Yu Parti dan Yu Yem saling tak bertegur sapa sejak
peristiwa itu, di Pasar Ngranget ini mereka masing-masing menjalani
kehidupan dengan semangat yang sama, dengan gairah mencari uang
sebanyak-banyaknya. Di pasar ini, Yu Parti dan Yu Yem menjadi
manusia seutuhnya, tanpa harus diembel-embeli suami. Madasari, 2010:
27)
This is what presumably failed to build the ideal concept of love in the
following quote.
―Love is, in a great degree, an arbitrary passion, and will reign, like some
other stalking mischiefs, by its own authority, without deigning to reason; and
it may also be easily distinguished from esteem, the foundation of friendship
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because it is often excited by evanescent beauties and grace …‖
(Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2017: 137)
The writer feels that Wollstonecraft in the quote above inserts a little
satire for the understanding of love. That the concept of ideal love is not
life seems just an formal deed. Married couple activity that should be
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filled with love is depicted only as an men dominance over woman, who
don‘t cares what they do, they have responsibility towards their wife.
―'Where love is duty, on the female side, 'On theirs mere sensual gust and
sought with surly pride‖ (Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2010: 138)
―Apa itu cinta? Prek! Cinta itu kan omongan orang-orang zaman
sekarang setelah menonton TV. Mereka Cuma ikut-ikutan ngomong,
padahal juga nggak tahu apa itu cinta.‖
―Aku tidak minta pegat karena tidak mau semua yang sudah kumiliki
ini dibagi dua. Kok enak banget. Semuanya ini aku yang kerja keras, aku
yang mikir semuanya,‖ (Madasari, 2010: 114-115)
Marni didn't get divorced because she didn't want their
possessions to be shared evenly if they divorced, not because she
was in love. Marni believes that because she has worked hard thus
far, he is the one who deserves to own all of his fortune.
―Iya, Pak. Maaf. Istri saya ini tidak paham. Maklum, kami orang buta
huruf. Jadi kami harus membayar uang keamanan berapa, Pak?‖
―Tentara-tentara itu mengambil dagangan Ibu. Masih ada empat ember
dan enam panci, semuanya ludes. Mereka juga mengambil setengah jaring
beras. Bapak dan Ibu hanya diam tak berbuat apa-apa.‖ (Madasari, 2010:
65)
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The two quotes above refer to the incident when Marni had her goods
taken by the army. Even though in reality Marni had protested against the
soldiers who were about to take her wares, it was just a futile act. Teja
immediately interrupted Marni's protest with his male power and then
states that the superior nature of men tends to never listen to women's
―When do men /all-in-love with sense? When do they, with their superior
powers and advantages, turn from the person to the mind? And how can they
expect women, who are only taught to observe behavior, and acquire manners
rather than morals, to despise what they have been all their lives labouring to
attain? Where are they suddenly to find judgement enough to weigh patiently
the sense of an awkward virtuous man, when his manners, of which they are
made critical judges, are rebuffing and his conversation cold and dull, because
it does not consist of pretty repartees or well-turned compliments?‖
(Wollstonecraft in Nurrachman, 2017: 136)
What kind of relationship is built on male dominance? Wouldn't a love
marriage listen to each other? This does not appear to be the case in Teja
and Marni's marriage. Marni, who is a logical thinker, can't come up with
a sound that is rational enough for Teja. That's what occurs when a
marriage isn't based on the foundation of love. In the end, it will all come
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The society of male superiority experienced by various characters in the
story is in accordance with what Wollstonecraft concentrates on in her
essy, as evidenced by several of the passages mentioned above. In the
end, many women's marriages are not founded on love, making
matrimony just a satisfaction of sensual cravings or even a fulfillment of
societal stigma.
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values contained in it, besides that these values are a benchmark for
function said by Edgar Allan Poe who said that the function of literature
2007: 31) From the quote above, it can be said that the author of a work
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having a positive effect on human life. (Esten, 1978) The readers could
entertainment value in the work. The author‘s method for delivering what
they have to the reader contains so much value that we can apply to our
enjoy as readers. This is the job of literature. Utile et Dulce means that we
can obatained the teach value in the literature, Johnson stated that poetry
is the unity pleasure and truth, which mean that we can enjoy the
it through an event or depiction of a story and then the reader reads it,
such as when we read his work, for example, in Tere Liye's novel Tentang
Kamu, which tells the story of Sri Ningsih's life struggles of having
nothing to success, at the end of the story, it is told that she died, but her
death was still useful for people who had helped her life because she left a
large legacy and indeed the inheritance was intended for people who had
helped her life. From the depiction of the story we can take a teaching
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value, while to achieve the teaching value we also enjoy the plot it is in
accordance with Utile et Dulce where we can take the teaching from the
incident and enjoy the work from the plot. Larasati and Rizky explained
that Dulce is the esthetic way from the plot or the figurative language.
from the perspective of Sumarni and her daughter Rahayu. At the start of
the story, they were poor people, and it happened when Rahayu was
younger, but after a difficult life fight, Sumarni was able to alter her fate
for the better, as evidenced by their next scenario, in which they had a lot
of money and were able to send Rahayu to school. Rahayu is a little girl
who despises her mother because they hold opposing views on matters
like as religion, economy, and culture. Rahayu, who was educated and
taught Islam, has more modern ideas, but her mother, Sumarni, had not
know Islam since she was a child, Sumarni was raised to revere the earth's
mother and father, not other gods, yet despite not having studied, she
possessed rational reasoning. Of course, there are many twists and turns
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Entrok by Okky Madasari is also inseparable from the Utile et
judge the value of the work according to its success in achieving that aim.
order for readers to be taught and entertained the writer must "take a
subject equal to your powers", and consider at length how much your
shoulders can bear. Neither proper words nor lucid order will be lacking
to the writer who chooses a subject within his powers. The excellence
and charm of the arrangement, I believe, consists in the ability to say only
what needs to be said at the time, deferring or omitting many points for
the moment. The author of the long promised poem must accept and
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―Lima tahun aku menunggu hari ini datang. Pagi-pagi aku
sudah mandi lalu berdandan. Hari ini aku akan lahir kembali. Aku
akan kembali menjadi manusia yang punya jiwa. Tidak hanya raga
tahun kaulewati. Agar kau kembali ingat kau adalah manusia hebat
The quote above tells about regret, about trying to atone for
first lesson, this is in accordance with what Horace said, illustrated that
its consist the ability to say what must be said about the depiction of
intro story can also be obtained from the depiction of different points
of view about the two main characters in this story, such as the parts
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―Aku bilang, ‖Aku berdoa lima kali sehari. Itu cara yang
benar, bukan dengan cara yang dosa.‖ Ibu marah. ‖Aku nyuwun
pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa Kuasa sejak lahir. Aku tidak
itu Gusti Allah, Bu. Bukan Mbah Ibu Bumi,‖ kataku dengan suara
anak sebesar kamu, Nduk, aku tidak pernah tahu Gusti Allah.
Mbah Ibu Bumi yang selalu membantuku. Mbah Ibu Bumi yang
dewandaru dari Pesarean Gunung Kawi. Tapi kan daun itu hanya
orang lain, dan punya kemuliaan dalam hidup. Lha kok yo masih
ada saja yang bilang aku dosa. Yang dosa itu ya orang kayak Mali
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itu, seharian tidur di langgar, istri dan empat anaknya tiap hari
means about how the author manifests the ideas he gets. This is also in
accordance with the quotation above which separates the two points of
view, this is judged as a work based on conscious, which makes this work
contrasting two different thoughts. We can also take the message from
judge a difference first because being different does not mean harming
others..
The next lesson, can also be taken from several characters who are
present in the story of entropy, there are many characters who are present
who also make the story of Entrok a praiseworthy, but not only good
the point is for contrasting as well as the axis or fuel for the story.
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Mukaku terasa panas. Mataku memerah, air mata berdesakan ingin
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story, we can get a lesson from the quotation above about someone who
easily judges others without paying attention to the feelings of the other
person. The incident and description also provided consolation for the
―it is not enough for poems to be beautiful; they must be affecting, and
must lead the heart of the hearer as they will. As people‘s faces smile on
those who smile, in a similar way they sympathize wih those who weep. If
you wish me to weep, you must first feel grief yourself.‖ (Horace in
Nurrachman, 2017)
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Further, in the story of Entrok we can feel a more intense affection.
‖Tidak sengaja, Pak. Saya sudah tahan, tapi ndak bisa,‖ jawab
Amri memberi isyarat agar jangan sampai suara tawa kami terlalu
(Madasari, 2021)
―Siapa yang kedinginan?‖ terdengar suara dari arah dua orang itu. Kini
kami tahu enam orang lainnya berendam dalam sungai. Dalam dingin
di depan batu besar itu. Sekarang baru kami sadari ada bayang-bayang
enam kepala di sungai itu. Lalu sekarang ada bayangan tangan yang
back laughter as well as the way the soldiers scolded the pedicab driver
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who farted in front of them was enough without showing any expression
from them according to Rahayu's point of view because the incident was
night and dark. Furthermore, the story continues in the incident that six
pedicab drivers there were punished by entering the river, only on the
basis of farting. We can feel the anger here at the arbitrariness of the
apparatus
In this part there are also good writing rules, a simple storytelling
style but full of meaning, familiar material such as the behavior of the
accordance with what Horace said.; ―For me, the ideal of poetic style is to
mould familiar material with such skill that anyone might hope to achieve
the same feat. And yet so firmly would the material be ordered and
interconnected (and such is beauty that one may draw out in that way
from the familiar) that he would work and sweat in vain to rival it.‖
moral messages by showing two different points of view of the two main
course, this work can also win the hearts of readers, Okky Madasari as the
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author can give pleasure to readers because of the plot or description of
delight. Okky Madasari and her work are in line with the goals of the poet
according to Horace who said that aim of the poet is to inform or delight,
life‖ furthermore, he said that "he who combines the useful and pleasing
Nurachman, 2017)
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Johnson, S. (2006). Lives of the poets. V. I. New York: Clarendon Press
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AN UNDERSTANDING OF THE POSITION AND STATUS OF
The term woman is given to a girl who has reached a certain age.
she is 20-40 years old, she can be said to be an adult woman, while if she
with beauty, have an attraction with their beauty. However, this cannot be
women, there is a view that women are weak creatures who have many
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―Rousseau, whom Wollstonecraft otherwise admires, suggest that woman
should exercise cunning and coquetry to make herself ―a more alluring object of
Not a few women are always seen as weak and life depends on a man. But
also not a few women who try to fight these views, and this is what is
The issue of feminism has been widely discussed in several works, one of
her writings, she explains at length about the character, role and education
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and violence. The following are the characters and characteristics that
―Pasar ngaret ada di desa lain. Untuk kesana aku harus berjalan kaki
melewati tiga desa, lewat jalanan naik turun yang penuh batu dan debu, aku
tiba dipasar saat matahari sudah bergeser ke barat.‖ (Madasari, 2010: 20)
The story quote above is a quote from Mirna, she is the main character in
this novel who has a brave, decisive, and hardworking character. Marni is
the main character who raises feminist issues the most, she always tries to
prove that women also deserve to have a decent education and job.
―Nduk, semua itu sudah ada jatahnya. Orang kayak kita bagiannya
ngoncek telo. Nguli itu berat. Sudah jatah orang lain.‖ (Madasari, 2010:
34)
In the quote above, there is a mbok character who is the mother of mirna
and is a hard worker who works in the ngaret market, she has good
―Tidak, pak,‖ jawab bapak cepat. ―Bukan begitu maksudnya. Nanti kami
sediakan duitnya. Dua atau tiga hari lagi sudah bisa diambil, pak,‖ kata
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The quote above is a quote that shows one of the characters named Teja,
―aku malu dan marah. Begitu sampai di rumah, aku masuk ke kamar ibu
kuambil baki berisi tumpeng dan panggang itu lalu kubuang di halaman
ketakutan. Takut pada ibu juga takut kualat pada Mbah Ibu Bumi Bapa
This quote describes one of the characters, the only child from mirna
beliefs, but at the end of the story, after several incidents, Rahayu
Putih, mata lebar, alis tebal, dan hidung yang mancung agak besar, selalu
memakai baju putih dan seringkali celananya diatas mata kaki, terutama
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saat ada pengajian. Semuanya terlihat serasi dan pas.‖ (Madasari, 2010:
137)
―Marijo adalah pegawai bagian pembayaran dipabrik gula. Saat ada tebang
The quote above is one of the quotes that describes Marijo's character as
time Marni was left by her first husband Tejo, Marijo has a good
experienced a decline in effort he left Marni just like that without news.
have arbitrary characteristics towards women, Marni and Rahayu are one
of the victims. There are so many incidents in this novel that show how
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―Aku kuat, Mbok. Lha wong kita tiap pulang dari pasar juga nggendong
goni. Malah jaraknya jauh, naik-turun‖, ―bukan masalah kuat ngga kuat,
Nduk. Ini masalah ilok ra ilok- pantas nggak pantas. Nggak ada
The quote from the novel above illustrates that the gap in the degrees of
higher degree than women, this seems to have been widely recognized by
many people, as well as by Marni's mother in this Entrok novel, said ilok
there are still many people who think like this. Therefore, feminists are
also becoming more widespread because of cases like this, like what
Marni did.
―Ni, kamu ada-ada saja. Nggak ada perempuan nguli, nggak akan kuat.
coolie, but because this work is usually done by a man, so his mother said
so, besides that because women are widely known as someone who is
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weak and cannot work like a man. This assumption seems to have stuck
―Mbah Noto hanya mengingatkanku untuk tidak terlalu ngoyo dan tahu
diri. Katanya sudah dari sononya tenanga perempuan itu kecil dan tidak bisa
Tapi coba lihat, begitu buruh-buruh perempuan itu sampai dirumah. Mereka
harus melakukan pekerjaan yang ada, mengambil air dari sumber dengan
menempuh perjalanan naik turun. Berat satu jun yang berisi penuh air sama
saja dengan satu goni berisi singkong. Tidak ada laki-laki yang mengambil
air, katanya itu urusan perempuan. Ya jelas lebih enak nguli daripada
In the long quote, it shows the reality that men don't hear, and it seems as
if the blind don't see that the fact is that women are able to do their jobs,
but injustice still happens, in this quote it can be seen how a woman does
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more work without pay. while the men only get cool jobs but earn
enough money.
―Aku sudah tidak lagi membagi waktu dengan bekerja di tempat Nyai
Dimah. Simbok diam saja, tak menanyakan atau melarang. Saat Bersama,
kami tidak pernah menyinggung urusan nguli. Simbok juga tidak pernah
bertanya tentang upah yang kudapatkan dari nguli‖ (Madasari, 2010: 39)
women and men. Feminism fights for the humanity of women, fights for
quote above shows how Marni fought for her rights as a woman. In
women are not weak creatures who are considered unfit to work like
men, she proves that by working as a nguli even though she is the only
dilancarkan, aku punya duit untuk membeli tanah lagi yang kutanami padi
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upah tak kurang daripada yang diterima suamisuami mereka.‖ (Madasari,
2010: 103)
The quote above shows how the position of women is below men in
terms of economy, they get lower wages than their husbands, Marni as a
feminist pleads with her ancestors so that she gets more sustenance so
―Entrok memang terlalu mewah untuk aku dan simbok. Apa yang masih
This quote shows that women will be inferior if they are not educated,
this is said by Marni, that yes, someone who is illiterate so that it is only
worth thinking about eating, he feels unworthy and will not be achieved if
discussed among outsiders, because not a few when women are educated
―Not only Rosseau but also most of the male writers who have follewes in his
footsteps have argued that the whole tendency of female education should be
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In this case, it seems as if everything women do is aimed at serving men,
―This habitual slavery, to first impressions, has a more baneful effecton the
female than the male character. Because business and other dry employments of the
understanding, tend to deaden the feelings and break associations that do violence to
business, work or other things. Indirectly, this injustice can turn off
very often, this happened in addition to rahayu and also mirna, but many
―Yu Parti yang sebelumnya terlihat begitu semangat, kini lemas tanpa
In the quote above, it tells about yu party and yu yem, yu yem is an affair
with yu party's husband. a long time later the husband from the yu party
came and pulled him, this is where the yu party's powerlessness emerged
as a woman even though she was a victim, she obeyed orders and
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instructions from her husband without scolding and being annoyed at her
husband.
―Ini anak Kang teja bu, kata ending sambil menyentuh kepala anak itu.
―Diam au tahu bapak nya siapa, ya saya bawa kesini to, wong ini dalah
sulastri, then suddenly brings a small child and says that he is the son of
Tejo. What's worse is that he asked for an inheritance for his son, isn't
this unfair, that Marni is a hard workers who managed to buy rice fields
and others using their own sweat, which even her husband has been
―Bukan berebut suami tapi semua ini bersumber dari laki-laki. Apakah
The quote above illustrates how tired Marni is with her position as a
woman, injustice has hit her successively, starting from Tejo, who is like a
parasite, living, eating, living and others, then at this time he always gets
Tejo, to even if he dies, it still ruins his life. Even this also happened to
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―Orang tua Amri membawa mayat anaknya Kembali ke padang.
apakah aku setuju atau apakah aku menginginkan hal lain. Arini yang
husband Amri, but it was even more painful because her husband's body
was brought by her mother and also his first wife, they didn't even glance
adalah sebuah konsep yang mengisahkan harga diri pribadi dan harga diri
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In this quote it can be concluded that women deserve to have equal
degrees, look for jobs that they can afford, have the freedom to choose
everything they want, that women are not fully servants for their
husbands.
References
Gender, 362.
Semesta.
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