writing A proposal Jean write a proposal. 1 SPEAKING Workin pairs. Think back to your frst day at ‘school. What were you anxious about? How might your | Writing Strategy i schoolhave made your fst day easier? | proposal follows clear structure. thas title and four paragraphs each with a sub-heading, ‘The head teacher of your schools concemed about the {paragraphs states the purpose ofthe proposal length of time it takes new students tointegate. She has } paragraph 2: gives background information invited you tosend ina proposal explaining why integration Paragraph describes the exiting problems i takes 0 long, suggesting what could be done to speed up F oragraph:suggestsimprovements tote mace. } the process and saying how your suggestions might affect ‘isc insTeStOnee ool COMO 3 Read the Writing Strategy. Then study the structure in the proposal. Work in pairs to think of an alternative title and 2 Read the task above and the proposal below. Answer the alternative sub-headings. questions. 1 Inwhich paragraphs arethe three elements ofthetask 4 KEY PHRASES Complete eightof the phrases with the included? words below. Then complete the remaining phrases with 2 How are the recommendations in the proposal different words from the proposal in exercise 2. from your ideas? Do you agree with them? aim focus implemented ought proposal recommend aus survey Geectapapee A warmer welcome The main" of this proposalisto ths" isintended to Introduction In this proposal, | will inthis proposal wl present some ofthe acuties Background infomation Te ude fein eget a cu echool, make Comments made during® soups show that Some recommendations as to Mow te stuaten coudbe |? from suggests that improved, and explain what effect the improvements may Following a® of it was revealed that. rave onthe est ofthe school oonmariy ‘Making recommendations and suggestions current situation Ther__ tobe Feecack fom stuns nt the school suggests that tse peer ess is sheer size rather daiing a frst. The mjory comme |_| Fpatecommendation from surrounding villages, so few of them have friends at Unless these ideas are ™ _ itis unlikely tho school on heal. Most meron geting ost nc wae ic ee ee sore ait to not being falar wth th layout of ho bein school unt wel eo the fst tem. ithese® are carried out Keyneeds tobe addressed —____| theta teachers cncemedabout the numberof cases "New students should have access to a plan of ourschool | GFulvingin your school. She has invited youto sendin ‘before term starts, It would also help if they could meet a proposal explaining why bullying occurs in the school, ‘some existing students. Moreover, the classrooms in the suggesting what could be done to stop it and saying how your ‘school nead to be better signposted so that new students. suggestions right affect the rest of the school community. ‘can find ther way around more easly. Reccemenetetiont 5. Read the task and follow the instructions below. | would tke to suggest the following: 1 Undertine the thee elements ta be included inthe propesal. Ree ee by 2 Brainstorm three answers foreach ofthe elements. nia, saaxses Sa etNReT OY suet 3. Writea paragraph plan forthe proposal ed Sate Fon ery 4 Choose a tte and sub-headings foreach paragraph. ‘ Apian of the school should be made available to new | 6 Now write your proposal (220-260 words) Use your nates students either on our website or on the fst day. from exercise. ‘ Sgns should be put up throughout the school, indicating ‘the location of aiferent areas, This would benefit al the ‘school community, not onty newcomers. Hf these recommendations are carried out, the integration ‘of new students is bound to be smoother. ‘CHECK YOUR WORK & Haveyou ‘© written 220-260 words? «followed the structure in the Writing Strategy? * induded phrases for writing proposals? Unita Parners CEL