BAHASA INGGRIS

TUGAS 2

NAMA : MUH ERWIN

NIM : 050338064

1. Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3.

 The first part includes "Dear Vincent Prasad," which serves as the opening greeting of the
letter and functions as an introduction to the recipient. This is the section where the
sender mentions to whom the letter is addressed.
 The second part begins with "It's not just her technical skills that impress me." This is
part of the letter's content that contains the recommendation and an explanation of why
Ashley Singer is considered suitable for the Junior Data Analyst role with Clouddatanow
Tech. It includes an explanation of Ashley's skills and positive qualities.
 The third part is the signature and closing of the letter. It includes "If you need more
information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact me," offering additional
information, and "Sincerely," followed by the sender's name, Rachel Gomez, and her
position as a Senior Project Manager. This is the concluding part that signifies the letter's
courtesy.

2. Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas.

 Spelling and grammar errors: The use of "u" instead of "you" in the sentence "Thank u
for your letter" is a spelling error. The sentence "I look forward to receive your order"
should be "I look forward to receiving your order" to correct the grammar.
  Lack of punctuation: The sentence " Thank you for your letter dated July 4th inquiring
about our latest catalog, price list, and payment terms?" should end with a question mark
to indicate that it is a question.
 Informal language: The use of "Thank u" instead of "Thank you" is informal and not
appropriate for a formal business letter.
 Missing information: The letter does not include a proper greeting or salutation, which
is an important part of a formal business letter.
 Lack of clarity: The sentence "Kami berharap Anda akan menemukan harga dan syarat
yang kami mampu" is not clear and could be improved by specifying what the company
hopes the recipient will find satisfactory.

3. Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda.

Dear Professor Allen Smith,

I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your participation as a speaker at our
international seminar. Your presentation on the latest developments in your field was
insightful and informative, and it was a great honor to have you as one of our
distinguished speakers.

Your contribution to the seminar was invaluable, and I am confident that the attendees
found your presentation to be both engaging and informative. Your expertise and
experience in the field were evident, and your insights were greatly appreciated.

Once again, thank you for taking the time to share your knowledge and expertise with us.
Your participation helped make the seminar a great success, and we hope to have the
opportunity to work with you again in the future.
Sincerely,

Muh Erwin