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Imre Eigerman - H Argument Essay
Imre Eigerman - H Argument Essay
Imre Eigerman
Mr.Smith
Junior ELA
6 November 2023
immerse themselves in the online world, often entranced for hours at a time. Since the start of the
21st century, the internet has taken over society worldwide, with 65.7% of people in the world
being internet users, which is 5.3 billion people. Naturally this means kids are using the internet
exponentially more as well which has led to consequences. The effects on adolescents due to the
increase in the use of the internet is often viewed as a positive because of the advancements in
education, however in reality the intensification of internet usage has had a negative effect
overall on adolescents due its detrimental effect on the health of kids, both physically and
mentally.
The increased use of the internet by kids and teens has led to a decrease in their overall
physical health. In the modern day, there are higher obesity rates in children because of the
amount of time spent on technology. This relationship between amount of screen time and
increased rates of child obesity is explored by the National Library of Medicine “Obesity is one
of the best-documented outcomes of screen media exposure. Many observational studies find
relationships between screen media exposure and increased risks of obesity”. (National Library
of Medicine) Because kids spend so much of their day sitting or lying down while on their
screens they aren't being active and therefore burning much less calories than they are eating
each day. Therefore, they are gaining weight, because they are in a calorie surplus. While kids
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do need to be in a calorie surplus because they are growing at a rapid rate and need to gain
weight, nonetheless, the physical inactivity caused by excessive technology use will make them
gain much more weight in body fat rather than in muscle, healthy tissue or stronger bones that
would be created from physical activity. To these ends, because the amount of time kids are
spending on screens has increased over the past couple decades, kids are not spending as much
time being active as they used to. This is highlighted by Outside Magazine “One billion fewer
hikes, climbs, rides, and other outdoor excursions in 2018 than in 2008. Even kids are staying
inside. Children took part in 15 percent fewer outdoor activities in 2018 than they did six years
before.” (Outside) Because of the increased time kids spend online they spend less time being
active and playing sports, so their physical health decreases. The detonation of internet and
screened technology usage by youths has had a detrimental effect on their physical health, due
The expansion of the internet in the 21st century has caused the mental health of teens to
decline because of the rise of social media, and hence cyberbullying. Social media makes teens
feel bad about themselves, because they are in a constant state of comparison with influencers
and other kids their age, making them feel less attractive, talented, and interesting, as stated by
Dr. Don Grant ``-social media and teens using these platforms for comparison have a big
People may claim that if teens are being upset by their social media then they will just get off it
and this is true in some cases since some teens are able to recognize the negative effects their
social media is having on them and take a break from it or quit entirely, even so, for most teens,
they cannot just quit social media even if it is making them feel bad, because they are addicted to
it, and/or don't recognize that it is impacting them negatively. In addition to social media being
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an adverse factor of the internet, cyberbullying; the use of technology like social media to harass,
threaten, embarrass or target a person has also been a detriment to the mental health and
wellbeing of adolescents. Research from the Pew Center expands upon this belief, stating that
“While bullying existed long before the internet, the rise of smartphones and social media has
brought a new and more public arena into play for this aggressive behavior”. (Pew Research
Center) Cyberbullying is very harmful to teens because the bully can hide behind a screen,
sometimes often without the victim even knowing who they really are. In addition, cyberbullying
can occur anywhere, meaning that teens can even experience bullying from places that feel safe
like their own homes. This barrage of mal-intended actions online can cause teens to develope
anxiety and depression which can even lead to suicide in some cases. Development of social
media and its booming popularity in teens has led to the consequence of it damaging the mental
wellbeing of teens.
A common viewpoint in opposition to the fact that social media and similar technologies
have been detrimental to adolescents both physically and mentally is is that the internet helps
kids learn and therefore overall the internet has benefited the youth positively. The internet has
led to more programs and applications that help kids learn, which is made apparent by how “87%
of parents of online teens believe that the Internet helps students with their schoolwork and 93%
believe the Internet helps students learn new things”’. (Pew Research Center) It is true that the
internet has helped further education, making it more accessible and more personalized for the
needs of the individual, however, this benefit is completely outweighed by the drawbacks of the
internet. Furthermore, the internet has made all kinds of school work more easily accessible from
home, and some believe there is no downside to this, however they would be misled to believe
this. School being more easily accessible from home has led to changes in policy from schools.
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One being replacing snow days with online classes. “In 2022, the New York Board of Regents
authorized the state’s public schools to teach remotely instead of canceling class on snow days”.
Instead of being able to go outside and enjoy the snow, kids who attended these schools instead
had to sit behind a screen all day long and attend virtual classes. This was not beneficial to these
students whatsoever because it is not healthy to sit at a computer for hours on end, not to
mention for kids that age who need exercise. Therefore it is not logical to claim that the internet
has been beneficial to adolescents since not only has it created major detriments to their health,
but also what are believed to be the positive effects by some are not even completely positive.
The internet has reshaped the world and how it is experienced, even more so for the
young generation who has and is growing up in it, but in truth it has done more harm than good
because of how it has had a detrimental effect on the health of adolescents. The internet may not
be negative in its entirety but its negative effects on the juvenile population have been a rising
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