eee ea a eel i iene eveloping an argument < Dread partofthe iat drattofa student's answerto wee Inyour English class, you have been talking about the growing problem of childhood obesity, partly due tn young paaple eating tan muich junk fond Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view. Essay question ‘Some dactors feel that fast food restaurants should be banned from opening near schools. Whyis this the case? Do you agree? Notes Write about 1 fast food / obesity 2 convenience your own idea In order to tackle the growing problem of childhood obesity, doctors are now recommending that all fast food restaurants be banned from opening near schools. This is because eating juuk food regulatly is very unhealthy; especially for young people, @ A Giet of fish, chips, burgers and fried chicken may sound very appealing, but it can cause abesity ar other health- related issues. Itis not surprising, therefore, that the medical profession is requesting that fast food restaurants should not be located near schools. Currently, buying junk food is far too convenient for many pupils and when they finish school, often hungry, 2) Istrongly agree with this recommendation given by doctors, as it is very tempting for Pupils to buy junk food after school. What's more, there is a need for education. Nutrition lessons in school would help young people become more informed about the food they choose. Similarly, (3) In Writing Part 1 itis important to ‘expand on the points you make, by giving supporting statements or ‘examples. © Ada the sentences or clauses (A-F) to the correct partof, the essay (1-3). There are three extra sentences which donot match. A. itisvery easy for them to buy|unk food fram the local fast food shop B therefore, the problem of obesity would get worze © cooking lessons would also develop this awareness D_ which makes it difficult for them to make healthy decisions E_ who are stillin the process of growing and developing F they go home and have their dinner Medical matters 45