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Student's Name: Do Phuong Anh - 18010306
Vu Ha Trang - 18010256
Conditions:
There will be automatic deductions of 10% for work, which is 10% over or under the
word limit.
Errors in referencing will result in up to 10% deduction of marks.
Plagiarism will be penalized with 0 (Zero). If permitted to resubmit, a maximum of
40% will be awarded.
Work not submitted on time without prior approval will be failed and a maximum mark
of 40% awarded for the resubmission.
OUTLINE
1. Introductory paragraph
Thesis statement: The assertion that the World Wide Web has had a significant
impact on the quality of students' assignments contains both positive and negative factors
that warrant thoughtful evaluation.
2. Body paragraph
* Paragraph 1:
Topic sentence 1: The World Wide Web, a circumstance that gives rise to various
adverse consequences for students' tasks.
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Plagiarism is not a new phenomenon.
Students easily copy and paste these references making them, intentionally or
not, engage in plagiarism. Students at Indonesian universities experience such
problems, IAIN Bone, as well. Based on the initial interview, NH, RR, WS (students
of Education Faculty) confessed that the instant way to make a writing assignment is
googling, copying, and combining some ideas from the internet.
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Claim 2: In addition to the magnitude of students' plagiarism in assignments, the
utilization of the World Wide Web (WWW) also precipitates their superficial research
Ground 2: :”The results of internet searches are also electronic, and students can
quickly copy and paste the information directly into assignments, papers, and other
documents” (as cited in Forsyth, et al., 2018) without properly understanding or critically
analyzing the content. Besides, due to time constraints and the vastness of online
resources, students may only skim the surface of a topic, leading to shallow and
incomplete research in their assignments (Forsyth, et al., 2018).
:”The results of internet searches are also electronic, and students can quickly
copy and paste the information directly into assignments, papers, and other
documents”.
(as cited in Forsyth, et al., 2018)
:”They also claimed that all these ways had been familiar and acceptable
methods to finish the bunch of assignments in a short time instantly.”
Warrant 2: With the pressure to complete assignments quickly, students may rely
on the most easily accessible sources instead of conducting in-depth research. This can
result in assignments lacking depth and nuance.
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Warrant 1+2: In conclusion, the World Wide Web's accessibility to vast
information can overwhelm students, tempt them to plagiarize, and encourage superficial
research, all of which can contribute to a decline in the quality of their assignments.
* Paragraph 2
Topic sentence 1: Conversely, the Internet has brought about positive changes in
how students approach assignments.
Claim 1: The internet enhances students' research with diverse resources and easy
access to information and course materials.
Warrant 1: The ease of finding diverse and up-to-date sources has the potential to
enhance the depth and breadth of their assignments. This increased access to information
fosters a culture of self-directed learning, empowering students to explore topics of
personal interest and expand their knowledge beyond the confines of the classroom.
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3. Conclusion
State opinion: The internet has facilitated the integration of multimedia elements
into assignments.
Final thought: This multimedia approach can enhance the quality of assignments by
making them more visually appealing and compelling, which is particularly relevant in
today's digital world.
READING DIARY
1. Reading material 1
Source: Akçapınar, G. (2015). How automated feedback through text mining
changes plagiaristic behavior in online assignments. Computers & Education, 87, 123–
130. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.compedu.2015.04.007
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feedback to students. A second analysis at the end of the semester assessed whether
students' plagiaristic behavior changed after receiving feedback.
The results showed a statistically significant decrease in plagiarism ratios after
feedback was provided. On average, the ratio of plagiarized posts decreased by 21.07%,
and 83% of students had lower plagiarized post ratios. Additionally, the number of
students who did not commit plagiarism increased by 42.37% after feedback was given.
The study demonstrates that automated feedback based on text mining can
effectively combat plagiarism in online learning environments. However, further research
is needed to validate these results, especially through controlled experiments with larger
samples. Additionally, optimizing text mining algorithms for efficiency could be
beneficial when dealing with a larger number of students and texts.
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Original text # 1:
1. Introduction:
Plagiarism is not a new phenomenon (as cited in Akçapınar, 2015); however, it has
become a problem that threatens online learning environments. The term digital
plagiarism is used to identify plagiarism in online learning environments (as cited in
Akçapınar, 2015). The most commonly used method for digital plagiarism is taking all
or some parts of an assignment from another resource on the internet by copying and
pasting text (as cited in Akçapınar, 2015).
2. Reading material 2
Source: Forsyth, R., Aleksieva, L., & Yovkova, B. (2018). The impact of technology
on cheating and plagiarism in the assessment – The teachers’ and students’ perspectives.
Nucleation and Atmospheric Aerosols. https://doi.org/10.1063/1.5082055
The study involved 100 teachers and 239 students from Sofia University. Teachers
had varying levels of experience in education modes, with most having strong experience
in face-to-face mode (74%). Only 32% of students had all tests and exams conducted
online, but around 70% had been assessed online in various forms.
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Both teachers and students reported instances of cheating and plagiarism, with
teachers observing more in face-to-face exams and students in online submissions.
However, there was no conclusive evidence that the internet increased cheating attempts.
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Original text # 1:
The results of internet searches are also electronic, and students can quickly copy
and paste the information directly into assignments, papers, and other documents (as
cited in Forsyth, et al., 2018).
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Internet search results, being electronic, can be easily copied and pasted into
assignments and papers by students. Some researchers doubt the internet's role in
plagiarism increase; McCabe notes a decrease, while Davies and Howard find no
empirical evidence for it (Forsyth, et al., 2018).
Original text # 2:
The advent of social media, Wikipedia and collaborative websites allow students to
easily access a wealth of information in a matter of seconds. The ubiquitous ownership
of mobile devices provides unlimited opportunities of students to easily take and store
pictures or documents of course materials”
Social media, Wikipedia, and mobile devices have enhanced students' ability to
engage in academic inquiries with unprecedented thoroughness and precision (Forsyth, et
al., 2018)
3. Reading material 3
Source:
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While prior research has explored plagiarism, this study focuses on the relationship
between students' understanding of plagiarism and their actual involvement in it,
specifically in Islamic higher education.
Using a survey-based approach, this research gathered data from 1,286 students at
IAIN Bone, revealing that most students are familiar with the term "plagiarism" but lack a
deep understanding. Many incorrectly believe that paraphrasing without proper citation is
acceptable and that proper citation allows them to copy and paste without consequences.
Regarding students' experiences, a significant number admit to committing plagiarism
despite recognizing it as unethical. Reasons include easy access to digital information, lax
rules, laziness, and a lack of understanding. In conclusion, this study underscores the
importance of educating students about plagiarism and promoting awareness to combat
this academic misconduct effectively.
Glossary:
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with standards or
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particular subject,
situation, or topic.
Original text # 1:
Original text # 2:
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Students easily copy and paste these references making them, intentionally or not,
engage in plagiarism. Students at Indonesian universities experience such problems,
IAIN Bone, as well. Based on the initial interview, NH, RR, WS (students of Education
Faculty) confessed that the instant way to make a writing assignment is googling,
copying, and combining some ideas from the internet. They also claimed that all these
ways had been familiar and acceptable methods to finish a bunch of assignments in a
short time instantly.
VERSION 1
In accordance with the remarkable advancement of technology, the World Wide Web
has proven to be one of the richest libraries where a wealth of information can be
gathered. As a result, it is regarded as a tool that can assist a large number of students in
completing their assignments. The assertion that the World Wide Web has had a
significant impact on the quality of students' assignments contains both positive and
negative factors that warrant thoughtful evaluation.
The World Wide Web, a circumstance that gives rise to various adverse
consequences for students' tasks. One of the negative aspects of the WWW's influence on
students' assignments is plagiarism. Plagiarism is not a recent phenomenon (Ercegovac &
Richardson, 2004) known as "digital plagiarism" (Kauffman & Young, 2015). It involves
copying from the internet or from peers, and many college students engage in it (Sisti,
2007; Stephens, etal., 2007), posing a serious concern for both educational institutions
and society (Batane, 2010). In the context of academic dishonesty in higher education, it
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often occurs in assignments like papers, research reports, and essays. This issue isn't
limited to Indonesian universities, such as IAIN Bone. In an interview, Education Faculty
students admitted to rapidly completing assignments by copying and merging online ideas
(Forsyth, etal., 2018). The Internet's impact on student assignments has fueled widespread
plagiarism, transcending borders and affecting academic integrity. Both students and
institutions need to prioritize ethics in the digital age.
Conversely, the Internet has brought about positive changes in how students
approach assignments. The internet enhances students' research with diverse resources
and easy access to information and course materials. The internet has revolutionized
students' access to diverse educational resources, making research more efficient. It
enables exploration of academic materials, including scholarly articles, research papers,
and multimedia content, enhancing research capabilities. Social media, Wikipedia, and
mobile devices further facilitate information access. This transformation has empowered
students to engage in academic inquiries with unprecedented thoroughness and precision.
The ease of finding diverse and up-to-date sources has the potential to enhance the depth
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and breadth of their assignments. This increased access to information fosters a culture of
self-directed learning, empowering students to explore topics of personal interest and
expand their knowledge beyond the confines of the classroom.
REFERENCE
EDITING CHECKLIST
Name of Partner: Group 1: Mạc Thị Ánh Tuyết- Lê Thị Quỳnh Anh
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Checking Writer Partner Evidence
effectiveness
Introductory
paragraph
1.Do the
yes
building sentences
provide adequate
background
knowledge on the
topic?
Body paragraphs
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in each body sentence for the part of positive
paragraph directly effects of WWW
and adequately
support the topic
sentence?
Concluding
paragraph
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effective final thought? stating opinion => advantages
or drawbacks overweight?
Language
2. Could hedging
language be added?
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assignments.
This issue isn't limited
to Indonesian universities,
such as IAIN Bone.
…
8. Is any language no
subjective?
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outside sources citation when using quotes
cited properly? (direct citation)
“digital plagiarism”
“The results …documents”
Grammar,
punctuation, spelling,
capitalization
Grammar:
Article: the
exploration
Punctuatation:
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Forsyth et al.
Reipetition:
a weath of
information => a vast
amount of information
Overall:
The essay is well-written and grammatically correct. There are a few minor errors,
which I have noted and corrected in the essay.
The essay is well-organized and provides a balanced overview of the positive and
negative impacts of the World Wide Web on students’ assignments.
VERSION 2
In accordance with the remarkable advancement of technology, the World Wide Web
(WWW) has proven to be one of the richest libraries where a wealth of information can
be gathered. As a result, it is regarded as a tool that can assist a large number of students
in completing their assignments. The assertion that the WWW has had a significant
impact on the quality of students' assignments contains both positive and negative factors
that warrant thoughtful evaluation.
The World Wide Web, a circumstance that gives rise to various adverse
consequences for students' tasks. One of the detrimental effects of the WWW's influence
on students' assignments is plagiarism. Plagiarism is not a contemporary issue known as
"digital plagiarism" (Akçapınar, 2015, p.4). It involves copying from the internet or from
peers, and many college students engage in it, posing a serious concern for both
educational institutions and society (Akçapınar, 2015). In the context of academic
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dishonesty in higher education, it often occurs in assignments like papers, research
reports, and essays. This issue isn't limited to Indonesian universities, such as IAIN Bone.
In an interview, Education Faculty students admitted to rapidly completing assignments
by copying and merging online ideas (Forsyth, et al., 2018). The Internet's impact on
student assignments has fueled widespread plagiarism, transcending borders and affecting
academic integrity. Both students and institutions need to prioritize ethics in the digital
age.
Conversely, the Internet has brought about positive changes in how students
approach assignments. The internet enhances students' research with diverse resources
and easy access to information and course materials. It enables the exploration of
academic materials, including scholarly articles, research papers, and multimedia content,
enhancing research capabilities by Social media, Wikipedia, and mobile devices further
facilitate information access (Dewantana & Hasanah, 2022). The internet has played a
crucial role in enhancing and continues to enhance students’ academics. The potential for
enhanced depth and breadth in assignments arises from the ease of finding diverse and up-
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to-date sources, fostering a culture of self-directed learning that empowers students to
explore personal interests and expand knowledge beyond the classroom.
REFERENCE
2. Forsyth, R., Aleksieva, L., & Yovkova, B. (2018). The impact of technology on
cheating and plagiarism in the assessment – The teachers’ and students’
perspectives. Nucleation and Atmospheric Aerosols.
https://doi.org/10.1063/1.5082055
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