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Diagnostic Story
Diagnostic Story
Katherine Wymer
Furuness
PCA
22 January 2024
Once upon a time, there were three college roommates who were the greatest of friends.
They knew each other inside and out and weren’t afraid to share their thoughts with each other,
no matter what they were. One day, the girls were sitting in their dorm room working on various
assignments. Maddie sat on a lawn chair, hunched over her textbook because she refused to wear
her glasses, while Lacy put away her laundry to avoid her computer science project. Lin, the
third roommate, sat on the orange patchwork quilt on top of Lacy’s bed and stared at an empty
page on her journal. She was supposed to be writing a short story, but after twenty minutes of
sitting there, she had yet to come up with anything she found worthy enough to write down.
“Did you guys ever get irrationally afraid of Bloody Mary when you were a kid?”
Maddie blurted out, apparently not as enraptured in her book as she looked.
Lin and Lacy, of course, agreed because what child wasn’t deathly afraid of Bloody
Mary? The idea of an evil spirit who would appear in your mirror if you chanted her name was
Lacy claimed she had been deathly afraid she would somehow accidentally chant Bloody
Mary’s name in front of a mirror until one day, she just did it. She had decided to put an end to
her fears and see if the myth was true, and to her luck, it turned out to be just that: a myth.
Because she knew how much this alleviated her stress, she brought Maddie in front of the full
length mirrors by her closet and challenged her to chant Bloody Mary and to see that she had
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been worried about nothing all this time. It took some time to convince her, but eventually
“Bloody Mary. Bloody Mary. Bloody Mary.” Maddie held her breath. After a couple
seconds, she sighed with relief and started to laugh at herself, turning around to look at her
friends.
But as soon as she turned away from the mirror, her roommates screamed. There in the
mirror, a hand was reaching out to grab Maddie’s shoulder. Maddie quickly backed away and
turned back around to face the hand coming out of the mirror.
“Don’t kill me Bloody Ma-,” She started, but as she took a closer look at the spirit’s face,
she stopped in shock. This wasn’t the Bloody Mary of the myths she had heard about all her life.
“Hey Maddie, can you take out the trash?” In place of Bloody Mary, the girls’ dreaded