This poem reflects on a past relationship that has ended, leaving the speaker feeling distant from who they used to be but still close to the person they used to know. The speaker describes memories of their time together through imagery of a garden, watered by tears at night, and signs of the other person still lingering like the scent of freesia in their hair. While questions remain unanswered, the poem expresses how the relationship reached a threshold and place of abandonment.
This poem reflects on a past relationship that has ended, leaving the speaker feeling distant from who they used to be but still close to the person they used to know. The speaker describes memories of their time together through imagery of a garden, watered by tears at night, and signs of the other person still lingering like the scent of freesia in their hair. While questions remain unanswered, the poem expresses how the relationship reached a threshold and place of abandonment.
This poem reflects on a past relationship that has ended, leaving the speaker feeling distant from who they used to be but still close to the person they used to know. The speaker describes memories of their time together through imagery of a garden, watered by tears at night, and signs of the other person still lingering like the scent of freesia in their hair. While questions remain unanswered, the poem expresses how the relationship reached a threshold and place of abandonment.
========= (this) was left behind... after the feathers you arrived in pleated the dew heavy grass beneath morning's sun-bleached dress again - ignoring all the questions i asked.
You - were my mirrored Soul
but after that clamor died Distant smoke just lied about that yawning hole...
- in this ridiculously turquoise sea
- beneath these impossibly Azure skies
i describe this to myself...
the distant boy i never knew distant from who I am now yet somehow close to you
Now wayward garden
wends the vine and roots and Heart into this song i only barely hear now about that missing & ...most costly part
Now only watered by eyes
- late at night steeping this pillow ...or my dreams (whether dreams are wrong ...or right)
(They never tell me what they mean...)
but reach some threshold -- it would seem
there at the abandoned place
where you lay your head ...your fingers tangled signing thin air
(and scent of Freesia - in your hair)
- still confusing everything i ever said =====================