Report: E-mail - André Domingues -A wildlife tour

E-mail - André Domingues -A wildlife

tour
by Débora Ikegami

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953 188 11 45 sec 1 min 26 sec
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Score Writing Issues

77 15 4 11
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Writing Issues
2 Clarity
2 Wordy sentences

4 Correctness
1 Punctuation in compound/complex
sentences
1 Comma misuse within clauses

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2 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)

Unique Words 52%

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Report: E-mail - André Domingues -A wildlife tour

E-mail - André Domingues -A wildlife

tour
Dear Les,

I am very glad to hear you are coming to Brazil in the Summer. As you know,
here in Brazil there are many beautiful places to visit, but the best place to go
in the Summer is the Brazilian northeast.

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In order to see wildlife and beautiful scenery, I would advise you to visit Barra
Grande, a region in Bahia State. It is a place where you can dive to observe
corals, and if you have luck, you can see turtles and dolphins. You should book
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a hotel a few months before you go, because in the Summer, Barra Grande is
visited by a lot of tourists.

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If I were you, I would rent a 4WD car since roads there are very rustic, actually,
it is the best way of getting around. I also think the best idea would be to hire a
local guide, once he knows the best places to visit. And of course, make sure
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that you have a sunscreen in your carry-on.

I hope these pieces of advice help you and you have a great time here in Brazil.

Best wishes, André.

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1. In order to → Wordy sentences Clarity

To

2. go, Punctuation in compound/complex sentences Correctness

3. , in Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

4. the roads Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

5. , actually, Wordy sentences Clarity

6. a sunscreen Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

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