A visit to a Wise Woman

• Use the check list below to help plan your story

• The more you write about the aspects mentioned in the check list below, the higher
the mark you can gain
• Use full sentences, paragraphs, interesting vocabulary
• Check your grammar & punctuation
• You will have home learning time to prepare for this at home
• You will then sit the task in class. You can bring in notes from home but will not be
able to use your device on the day
• You will be handwriting your task in class

What you have done: Achieved Partially

achieved
You have written a story about a journey to visit a wise woman
You have asked her the single most important question about life
You have said how you decided what question to ask her and
why this question is important to you
You have included your own experiences & feelings
You have included the response the wise woman gave
You have included religious beliefs or ideas

Possible Mark
Mark
A well written story clearly showing the reason(s) for the visit to the 17-20
wise woman, a distinct, well thought & relevant question asked as
well as a personal, clear response to the question. Your writing is
logical, grammatically accurate & well structured.
A generally well written story showing the reason(s) for the visit to the 13-16
wise woman, a distinct & relevant question asked as well as a clear
response. Your writing is largely logical, grammatically accurate &
well structured.
A partially well written story showing the reason(s) for the visit to the 7-12
wise woman, with a relevant question asked as well as a general
response. On the whole your writing is logical, grammatically
accurate & structured.
A limited story showing the reason(s) for the visit to the wise woman, 1-6
with a question asked, &/or a personal response to the question.
Some of your writing is logical, grammatically accurate & structured.
Nothing worthy of credit 0

• I am pleased with my work because…

• Next time I need to focus on…