Professional Documents
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Chapter 5 - Writing Emails 1
Chapter 5 - Writing Emails 1
Exercise 1. Circle the letter of the opener that illustrates a direct opening. Write an
appropriate subject line for each opening paragraph.
1. An e-mail requesting information about creating a Facebook presence:
a. We want to start our business fan page on Facebook, but we are not sure how to ensure visibility and
participation, and we worry about the privacy risks and data safety. We have many questions and would
like information about Facebook and social media in general.
b. Please answer the following questions about creating a business fan page on Facebook and protecting
our network from intrusions and malicious attacks.
Subject line:
2. An e-mail announcing a new day-care program:
a. Employees interested in enrolling their children in our new low-cost day-care program are invited to
an HR orientation on September 15.
b. For several years we have studied the possibility of offering a day-care option for those employees
who are parents. Until recently, our management team was unable to agree on the exact parameters of
this benefit, but now some of you will be able to take advantage of this option.
Subject line:
3. An e-mail message announcing an employee satisfaction survey:
a. We have noticed recently an increased turnover among our sales staff. We are concerned about this
troubling development and would like to study its causes. We have hired an outside consulting firm to
gauge the attitudes of our salespeople in confidential qualitative interviews.
b. The consulting firm Strelitz & Kaus Research Associates will soon conduct in-depth qualitative
interviews to explore the satisfaction among our sales staff and recommend strategies to stem the tide of
recent departures.
Subject line: