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B1 : đọc hiểu đề + xác định dạng + xd vde cần bàn + đánh mẫu
Dạng 1: thuận lợi/bất lợi
Thuận lợi: positives = advantages = benefits = pros = good impacts
Bất lợi: negatives = disadvantages= drawbacks = cons = bad effects
AAA = do part time jobs with students = take part time jobs with students
Mẫu:

In modern life, AAA has become more and more + adj. Beside many advantages, there are still
some disadvantages of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of benefits of AAA as follows. The most important one is that SVO (ys 1).
Thêm ý bổ sung. Another point to consider is that SVO ( ý 2). thêm ý bổ sung. Last but not least,
SVO ( ý 3). thêm ý bổ sung. These are main positive effects of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO ( ý 4).
thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (ý 5). thêm ý bổ sung. These negative effects should be solved as soon
as possible.
To sum up, AAA not only brings some pros but also causes some cons. From my point of view,
………………đưa ra ý kiến/chốt lại vde.

B2: lập dàn ý (3 ý thuận lợi/2 ý bất lợi)


+ do part time jobs help me make some money
+ it help me have new friends
+ it help me widen knowledge about life
- spend a lot of time
-
B3: hoàn thành câu + thêm ý bổ sung
B4: kt bài + nộp bài

In modern life, doing part time jobs has become more and more popular. Beside many advantages, there are still
some disadvantages of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of benefits of doing part time jobs as follows. The most important one is that doing part time jobs
helps them make money to buy many things such as clothes, food, books and to travel to many places and pay for
their bills and most important, they can help their family. It is very wonderful.
Another point to consider is that taking part time jobs helps them have a lot of real experience and life skills from
that they can find a good job easily in the future and feel more confident to communicate with everyone. It is very
needful. Last but not least, doing part-time jobs helps them make new friends and meet many people, so they can
widen their knowledge and learn new things from their friends. It is very interesting. These are main positive effects
of doing part time jobs.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of doing part time jobs as follows. First and foremost, they don’t have
enough time to study so they can fail exams at schools, get bad results and feel worried. It is very serious. Finally,
they can feel tired and stressed because they can have bad problems in their work and work hard every day. They can
get sick. It is very dangerous. These negative effects should be solved as soon as possible.
To sum up, doing part time jobs not only brings some pros but also causes some cons. From my point of view, they
should do part time jobs to have real experience whether it is happy or sad it will help them learn many new things
that they have not learned in school.
+lập dàng ý
Doing part time jobs
Studying abroad with students
Using the internet
+
Constructing sky-trains above the city
+ limit traffic jams/ reduce a large number of cars, motorbikes on the street/ save time to move/ fast and modern
+ avoid traffic accidents/ feel safe when using/ suitable for student, old people/ wonderful
+ protect the enviroment/ decrease dust and smoke/ a good way to stop air pollution/ friendly with the air/ use the
electricity to operate
- spend a lot of money on constructing and repairing/ expensive
- feel uncomfortable when using with many people/ noisy and crowded
S can + Vo
It will help O Vo
It is very + adj

Using public transport


Doing unpaid work with young people
Homeschooling/ living in a small family (2 generation)
Living in the city

In modern life, Using internet has become more and more popular. Beside many advantages,
there are still some disadvantages of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of benefits of using internet as follows. The most important one is that using
internet can helps them widen knowledge. We can read books on internet.Moreover,we can
study english and things.Beside,we will give a lot of information on the world and explore the
world without having to go there.For example, we can explore Ha Long Bay on news specifically at
home.It is very wonderful. Another point to consider is that it is convenience.We can pay for
bill.Also,we can shop clothes and buy food,tea-milk.In addition,We can Last but not least, SVO ( ý
3). thêm ý bổ sung. These are main positive effects of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO ( ý 4).
thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (ý 5). thêm ý bổ sung. These negative effects should be solved as
soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA not only brings some pros but also causes some cons. From my point of view,
………………đưa ra ý kiến/chốt lại vde.

In modern life, constructing sky-trains above the city has become more and more +
popular. Beside many advantages, there are still some disadvantages of this trend that I will
discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of benefits of constructing sky-trains above the city as follows. The most
important one is that constructing sky-trains above the city can help us limit
traffic jams. We can reduce a large number of vehicle on the street so we can
save time to move. It is very fast and modern. Another point to consider is that we can
avoid traffic accidents so we will feel safe when using. It is suitable for student and old people. It
is very wonderful. Last but not least, using sky-trains can help us protect the environment
because it will decrease dust and smoke. This is a good way to stop air pollution in big city. These
are main positive effects of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO ( ý 4).
thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (ý 5). thêm ý bổ sung. These negative effects should be solved as
soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA not only brings some pros but also causes some cons. From my point of view,
………………đưa ra ý kiến/chốt lại vde.
In modern life, AAA has become more and more popular. Beside many causes, there are still some
solution of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of benefits of AAA as follows. The most important one is that children often eat
unhealthy food. For example they often eat fast-food such as sweet cakes, candies snacks, pizzas
and so on. Beside that, they drink very soft drinks such as Pepsi, Coca, milk tea and so on. This
causes of gain weight easily. It is very dangerous. Another point to consider is that they don’t do
exercise and play sports every day. Beside that, they don’t like taking part in outdoor activities
with their friends. So they become lazy and inactive. Last but not least, These are main positive
effects of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO ( ý 4).
thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (ý 5). thêm ý bổ sung. These negative effects should be solved as soon
as possible.
To sum up, AAA not only brings some pros but also causes some cons. From my point of view,
………………đưa ra ý kiến/chốt lại vde.

Đề obesity in children

In modern life, obesity in children has become more and more popular. Beside many causes,
there are still some solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of overweight as follows. The most important one is that children often
eat unhealthy food. For example they often eat fast-food such as sweet cakes, candies snacks,
pizzas and so on. Beside that, they drink very soft drinks such as Pepsi, Coca, milk tea and so on.
This causes of gain weight easily. It is very dangerous.Another point to consider is that they don’t
do exercise and play sports every day. Beside that, they don’t like taking part in outdoor activities
with their friends. So they become lazy and inactive. Last but not least, they often have many bad
habits. For example, they sleep too much and get up late. They often eat too much before going
to bed and watch TV while eating. Beside that, their parent don’t have enough time to care and
cook for them. These are main factors of obesity in children.
On the other hand, there are some ways of overweight as follows. First and foremost, children
need to limit eat unhealthy food and do exercise or play sports every day to have good healthy.
Secondly, they need change bad habits. For examble they shouldn't sleep too much and get up
late. Finally, their parent should spend more time to care and cook for them. These useful
methods should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, obesity in children has some reasons, but we still have many solutions to solve it.
From my point of view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways
for it.

Mẫu dạng 2

In modern life, AAA has become more and more + adj. Beside many causes, there are still some
solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of AAA as follows. The most important one is that SVO (1). thêm ý bổ
sung. Another point to consider is that SVO (2). thêm ý bổ sung. Last but not least, SVO (3). thêm
ý bổ sung. These are main factors of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some ways of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO (4). thêm ý bổ
sung. Secondly, SVO (5). thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (6). thêm ý bổ sung. These useful methods
should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA has some reasons, but we still have many solutions to solve it. From my point of
view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways for it.
Đề: brain drain: chảy máu chất xám
S = graduated students = talented people = educated people = they
O = them
+tìm việc tốt/ có lương cao
Find good jobs/ have a high salary/ improve their lives/ help their family
+làm việc trong mt tốt: công nghệ hiện đại/ máy móc chất lượng/ nâng cao vốn ngoại ngữ
Work in the good environment in developed countries with modern machines, high quality technology/ learn foreign
languages
+có nhiều cơ hội gặp nhiều ng giỏi

Solutions:
The government -- have some laws to protect worker/ attract talented people
-- encourage people to work for their own country
Companies -- improve the salary/ have modern machines/ train and support graduated students
Love their country/ feel proud of their own country

In modern life, brain drain has become more and more serious. Beside many causes, there are
still some solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of brain drain as follows. The most important one is that graduated
students can find good jobs and have a salary. So they can improve their lives. Beside that, they
can help their family. It is very wonderful. Another point to consider is that they can work in the
good environment in developed countries with modern machines and high quality technology.
Besides, they can improve their foreign languages. Last but not least, they can have many
opportunities to meet professional co-workers. Besides, they can have new relationships. It is
very interesting. These are main factors of brain drain.
On the other hand, there are some ways of brain drain as follows. First and foremost, The
government should have some laws to protect workers. So they can attract talented people.
Besides, the government can encourage people to work for their own country. Secondly,
companies should improve the salary and buy more modern machines to attract graduated
students. Finally, graduated students must love their country and feel proud of their own country.
These useful methods should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, brain drain has some reasons, but we still have many solutions to solve it. From my
point of view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways for it.

Đề overpopulation
In modern life, overpopulation has become more and more serious. Beside many causes, there are still some
solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of overpopulation as follows. The most important one is that they don’t have enough
knowledge about the family planning. They have children without having careful plans.It is very bad.

In modern life, AAA has become more and more + adj. Beside many causes, there are still some
solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of AAA as follows. The most important one is that SVO (1). thêm ý bổ
sung. Another point to consider is that SVO (2). thêm ý bổ sung. Last but not least, SVO (3). thêm
ý bổ sung. These are main factors of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some ways of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO (4). thêm ý bổ
sung. Secondly, SVO (5). thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (6). thêm ý bổ sung. These useful methods
should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA has some reasons, but we still have many solutions to solve it. From my point of
view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways for it.

Đề deforestation - chặt phá rừng


Chặt cây: cut down trees
Phá hủy: destroy
+bán
Make money from cutting down trees and selling wood/ trees and wood are very expensive/ become richer quickly
+xây nhà
+mở rộng đất
Need more land to build houses, open new farms,

In modern life, AAA has become more and more serious. Beside many causes, there are still some
solutions of this trend that I will discuss all of things in this essay.
There are a lot of reasons of AAA as follows. The most important one is that some people want to
make money from cutting down trees and selling wood because trees and wood are very
expensive. So they become richer quickly. Another point to consider is that they need more land
to do many things. For example they need cut down trees to build houses, zoo, parks, factories
and so on. Besides, they Last but not least, SVO (3). thêm ý bổ sung. These are main factors of
AAA.
On the other hand, there are some ways of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO (4). thêm ý bổ
sung. Secondly, SVO (5). thêm ý bổ sung. Finally, SVO (6). thêm ý bổ sung. These useful methods
should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA has some reasons, but we still have many solutions to solve it. From my point of
view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways for it.
Dạng 3 hậu quả/giải pháp
- problem = effects = impacts = influences = consequences (hậu quả)
Mẫu dạng 3

In modern life, AAA has become more and more + adj. Beside some problems, there are
still some solutions of this trend and I will discuss all of things in this following essay.
There are some bad effects of AAA as follows. The most important one is that SVO (1). bổ
sung ý. Another point to consider is that SVO (2). bổ sung ý. Finally, SVO (3). bổ sung ý.
These are main impacts of AAA.
On the other hand, there are a lot of solutions of AAA as follows. First and foremost, SVO
(4). thêm ý bổ sung. The second one, SVO (5). Thêm ý bổ sung. Last but not least, SVO (6).
thêm ý bổ sung. These useful methods should be done as soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA has some influences, but we still have many ways to solve it. From my
point of view, this is a big problem that we should work together to find suitable ways for
it.
Deforestation
+ it will causes some problem about the environment, special air pollution
- air pollution has become more and more serious
- it will affect to our health directly
-we can have some diseases about lung, even lung cancer
+ the animals will die if we are deforestation
- we won’t have enough
Air pollution
- it will affect to our health directly
- it is very dangerous
+ our life will be affected seriously
- we can feel uncomfortable when we go out
- dust and smoke will make us can’t see everything

Overpopulation
- it will affect to our health directly
- we can’t find jobs and make money
- we must solve financial problems
- it is very bad
+ we must face some problems such as environment, education, healthcare, food, living places
- some people won’t have enough living places and food, specialty countryside, , remote areas
- children can’t develop perfectly
Obesity in children
+ it will effect to children health
- children can
Dạng 4 nguyên nhân/ hậu quả

In modern life, AAA has become more and more + adj. Beside some reasons, there
are still some problems that I will discuss all of things in this following essay.
There are a lot of reasons of AAA as follows. The most important one is that SVO
(1). thêm ý bổ sung. Another point to consider is that SVO (2). thêm ý bổ sung.
Finally, SVO (3). thêm ý bổ sung. These are main factors of AAA.
On the other hand, there are some bad problems of AAA that I will discuss below.
First and foremost, SVO ( 4). thêm ý bổ sung. The second one, SVO (5). thêm ý bổ
sung. Last but not least, SVO (6). thêm ý bổ sung. These bad effects should be
solved as soon as possible.
To sum up, AAA not only has some causes but also several bad influences. From my
point of view, S need to think carefully before S make a decision to have suitable
plans for it.

Đề having children after 35 years old with women

+ want to have more opportunities = chances to develop themselves/ want to have a successful
career in their work/ spend most time improving their skills and studying many new things/
necessary for them/ decide to study abroad in developed countries/ work in a big company and
have a good position in society
+ hope to make a lot of money to do many things that they like/ for example/ travel to many
countries in the world/ buy something for them such as beautiful clothes, a house, a car, and so
on/ enjoy their lives
+ don’t want to have children early/ need to spend much time taking care of their parents/ if…get
married and have a baby soon/ can’t visit their parents/ make them unhappy
- will affect their health seriously/ feel tired and stressed after having children/ have some
problems with their health/ get sick easily/ bad
- will affect their beauty and their body/ don’t feel confident to meet everyone
- must spend a lot of time taking care of their kids/ as a result/ can lose their job or can’t go to
work and make money/ face their financial problems
- don’t have time to do something that they like/ can’t go out with friends/ stay at home during
the day/ boring
Bài làm

In modern life, having children after 35 years old with women has become more and more
popular. Beside some reasons, there are still some problems that I will discuss all of things in this
following essay.
There are a lot of reasons of having children after 35 years old with women as follows. The most
important one is that women want to have more chances to develop themselves. Besides, they
spend most time improving their skills and studying many new things. It is very necessary for
them. Another point to consider is that they hope to make a lot of money to do many things that
they like. For example they want make money to travel to many countries in the world. Last but
not least, they don’t want to have children early. If they get married and have a baby soon, they
won’t have enough time to take care of their parents. These are main impacts of having children
after 35 years old with women.
On the other hand, there are some bad problems of having children after 35 years old with
women that I will discuss below. First and foremost, having children after 35 years old with
women will affect their health seriously. They feel tired and stressed after having children and
have some problems with their health. It’s very bad. Secondly, it will affect their beauty and their
body so they don’t feel confident to meet everyone. Finally, they must spend a lot of time taking
care of their kids as a result they can lose their job or can’t go to work and make money. These
bad effects should be solved as soon as possible.
To sum up, having children after 35 years old with women not only has some causes but also
several bad influences. From my point of view, women need to think carefully before they make a
decision to have suitable plans for it.

In modern life, having children after 35 years old with women has become more and more popular. Beside some
reasons, there are still some problems that I will discuss all of things in this following essay.
There are a lot of reasons of having children late as follows. The most important one is that women want to have more
chances to develop themselves. Besides, they spend most time improving their skills and studying many new things.
Another point to consider is that they hope to make a lot of money to do many things that they like. Last but not least,
they don’t want to have children early. If they get married and have a baby soon, they won’t have enough time to take
care of their parents. These are main impacts of this trend. On the other hand, there are some bad problems of having
children late that I will discuss below. First and foremost, having children late will affect their health seriously. They feel
tired and stressed after having children and have some problems with their health. Secondly, it will affect their beauty
and their body so they don’t feel confident to meet everyone. Finally, they must spend a lot of time taking care of their
kids as a result they can lose their job or can’t go to work and make money. These bad effects should be solved as soon
as possible.
To sum up, having children late not only has some causes but also several bad influences. From my point of view,
women need to think carefully before they make a decision to have suitable plans for it.

Dạng 5: Prefer A to B
In modern life, some people prefer to A other people like to B
From my point of view, I would rather A than B because of some following reasons.
There are some main reasons for my choice of AAA. The most important one is that
SVO(1). thêm ý bổ sung. Another point to consider is that SVO(2). thêm ý bổ sung.
Last but not least, SVO(3). thêm ý bổ sung.
However, it can’t be denied that there are some advantages of BBB. First and
foremost(4),SVO. Thêm ý bổ sung. Secondly, SVO(5). thêm ý bổ sung.
In short, AAA is adj , while BBB is adj . From my point of view, the most important
thing is whether they feel comfortable or not as well as it depends on the king of
lifestyle people have.

Đề 1 eating

AAA = eat at food stands or restaurants


+ enjoy good services/ watch beautiful views, good music, fresh air/ help us feel
pleased and happy
+ save time/ don’t need to cook and clean up/ suitable for busy people
+ choose and enjoy our favorite food/ invite our friends to famous restaurants
BBB = prepare and eat at home
+ save money/ go to the market and cook for our family/ cheap
+ keep healthy/ choose and buy clean food to cook/ feel safe when eating/ protect
our health
+ have more cooking skills/ cook well/ feel confident/ learn new dishes by cooking
shows on TV
+ feel warn when eating with our family/ talk and share many things with family
members

Đề 2
AAA

In modern life, Having children after 35 year old with women has become more and
more popular. Beside some reasons there are still some problems that I will discuss
all of things in this following essay. There are a lot of reasons of having children late
as follows. The most important one is that they want to have more opportunities.
Besides, they want to have successful career in their work. They spend most time
improving their skill and studying many new things. In addition they want to keep
weight because when they are beautiful, they will better confident.It very necessary
with them. Another point to consider is that they hope to make a lot of money to
do many things that they like. For example they can travel to many countries in the
world. They enjoy their lives. Last but not least, they don’t want to have children
early.They need to spend much time taking care of their parents. In fact if get
married and have a baby soon.They can’t visit their parents. That make them
unhappy. These are main factor of this trend. On the other hand, there are some
bad problems of having children late that I will discuss below. First and foremost,
they will effect their beauty and their body. Secondly, they don’t have time to do
something that they like. They can’t go out with friends. Finally they must spend a
lot of time taking care of their kids is very boring. these bad effects should be solved
as soon as possible. To sum up, Having children late not only has some cause but
also several bad influences. From my point of view, they need to think carefully
before they make a decision to plans for it.

Dạng 6: Agree or disagree -- Câu in đậm

It is thought by some people that ……..câu phát ngôn...... There are numerous
reasons why I strongly agree/disagree with this opinion, and I will explain some
following things in this essay.
The most important one is THAT ..... SVO ...... Thêm ý bổ sung. Another point to
consider is that ……SVO……Thêm ý bổ sung.
Besides, ……..SVO……Thêm ý bổ sung. Last but not least,…..SVO…..Thêm ý bổ sung.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, I completely agree/disagree with
that idea. From my point of view,……………………………

Câu 1: A mobile phone should be banned at a primary school or not

+ don’t study hard/

Câu 2: children, especially girls do not need to cook and do housework more

Câu 3:

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