Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Week 1
Option 2: This activity is a version of option 1, but it helps add a bit of fun and humor and ensures that students
have something unique or interesting to share with the class.
Introductions
For this activity you will interview one of your classmates then introduce him/her to the class.
Find out the following about your partner:
Your partner’s name
Your partner’s year in school (first, second, etc.)
Your partner’s hometown
Your partner’s major
And then, choose ONE of the following questions for your partner to answer:
If you could have an endless supply of any food, what would you get and why?
What is one goal you’d like to accomplish during your lifetime?
When you were little, who was your favorite cartoon character and why?
What is the most embarrassing CD you own?
If you could visit any place in the world, where would you choose to go and why?
What’s the weirdest thing you’ve ever eaten?
Tell us about a unique or quirky habit of yours.
If you had to describe yourself using three words, they would be…
Option 3: In this activity, students introduce themselves with the usual name, hometown, and academic interest
information, but they also offer the class one true statement and one untrue, and the class has to try to identify
which is which. Was this girl really born in a submarine, or did she just date Lance Armstrong’s nephew? Let the
fun begin!
Day Two Ice Breaker
Choose one of these questions to write about in your notes. Keep your hand moving.
What was a treat for you where you were a kid? Why?
What is one food that will always have a possitive association for you? Why?
What food do you miss now that you're at college? Why do you miss it?
Share one of your responses with someone that you didn't chat with yesterday. Write down
one thing that your partner talked about that you can relate to.
EXPAND THE
CONVERSATION: apply
critical reading strategies,
understand the rhetorical
situation of the
communication, search for
points of controversy,
disagreement, uncertainty,
etc...try to find an "in" into
the conversation
Colorado State University
Principles of Community
The Principles of Community support the Colorado State University mission and vision of
access, research, teaching, service and engagement. A collaborative and vibrant community is
a foundation for learning, critical inquiry, and discovery. Therefore, each member of the CSU
community has a responsibility to uphold these principles when engaging with one another
and acting on behalf of the University.
Inclusion: We create and nurture inclusive environments and welcome, value and affirm all
members of our community, including their various identities, skills, ideas, talents and
contributions.
Integrity: We are accountable for our actions and will act ethically and honestly in all our
interactions.
Respect: We honor the inherent dignity of all people within an environment where we are
committed to freedom of expression, critical discourse, and the advancement of knowledge.
Service: We are responsible, individually and collectively, to give of our time, talents, and
resources to promote the well-being of each other and the development of our local, regional,
and global communities.
Social Justice: We have the right to be treated and the responsibility to treat others with
fairness and equity, the duty to challenge prejudice, and to uphold the laws, policies and
procedures that promote justice in all respects.
Choose one of the quotes you highlighted for homework and answer the following questions in
reference to that quote:
What is the speaker referring to here?
What reaction did you have to this? Why did you react this way? How is this sentiment
similar to your own ideas? How is it different?
Share your thoughts and ideas with a partner you haven't had a chance to chat with yet.
1. Hartke makes the argument that food can bring a community together and create a sense of
community. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
2. What specific connection is Chris Offutt making with food? Can you think of other examples
that fit with this connection?
Sharing Annotations
Directions: Work with a partner and discuss the following questions about your annotations
for the two assigned articles:
How did you decide when to annotate in the margin?
Where did you ask a question? Give a reaction?
Thesis: A sentence (or two) that clearly states the author’s main argument.
Reasons or Key points: Key points the author makes to support the thesis. Sometimes but not
always, they are “because” statements.
Evidence: Proof that supports the author’s reasons and thesis (e.g. facts, statistics, examples,
expert opinions, quotes, paraphrases, etc.).
Thesis, Reasons, Evidence Example
3-Pass Reading
3-Pass Reading
First Pass
Read all the way through for comprehension – your purpose is to understand the thesis
and key points of the text.
Second Pass
Read to understand the perspective/context of the author
o E.g. institutional association, roles, apparent values and beliefs, perspective, bias,
etc.
Third Pass
Read to analyze the construction of the text (evidence selected, organization, tone,
register, etc.) AND how these observable elements of the writing reflect the combination
of main point (first pass) and context (second pass).
Week 2
WTL: "Fighting Food Insecurity on Campus"
1. What is one point or idea that Nellum made that resonated with you? What do you think
this is?
2. What effect did using "three pass reading" have on your understanding of the text as a
whole?
3. When thinking about writing situations, what are some things that we need to consider,
based on your reading from the JtC?
After looking closely at the image above, think about these three
questions:
What is going on in this picture?
What do you see that makes you say that?
What more can you find if you look at the smaller details in the picture?
What questions might you ask to better understand what's happening?
How does reading the caption and learning its back story (i.e.
CONTEXT) help you see the image differently?
Closely Reading an Image: Option 2
After looking closely at the image above, think about these three
questions:
What is going on in this picture?
What do you see that makes you say that?
What more can you find if you look at the smaller details in the picture?
What questions might you ask to better understand what's happening?
Updated: April 8, 2016
This week’s image comes from the March 25, 2016 “The Week in Pictures” slide
show on the Lens blog. The original caption reads:
Heiner Goebbels’s staging of Louis Andriessen’s “De Materie” arrived in the vast
Drill Hall of the Park Avenue Armory on Tuesday, with dozens of sheep from the
Pennsylvania countryside that are among the cast.
In “A New Breed of Opera Diva: Sheep,” Michael Cooper reveals more about the
animal stars of the opera:
The unlikeliest stars of New York’s spring opera season were raised humbly in
rural Pennsylvania on pop and country-western music, but they are already
showing prima donna tendencies. Not only did a whole new dressing room
have to be built for them backstage, but it also had to be soundproofed and
kept fully stocked with their favorite snacks: grain and a hay mixture of
timothy, orchard grass and red clover.
The scene-stealers in question are the 100 sheep that appear in an eerie,
endearing section near the end of Heiner Goebbels’s dreamlike staging of Louis
Andriessen’s “De Materie,” a Dutch avant-garde work from 1988 being
performed in the cavernous Drill Hall at the Park Avenue Armory through
Wednesday.
…
How does reading the caption and learning its back story (i.e.
CONTEXT) help you see the image differently?
Purpose
Rhetorically Analyzing Cereal Boxes Handout
Analyzing Cereal Boxes with the Rhetorical Situation
In composition, we use the word “rhetoric” in a wide sense. In this class the definition of rhetoric
will be using language (or other communication strategies) to achieve a purpose with an audience.
Directions: In your groups, fill out the grid below for the cereal box assigned to your group.
Cereal box
Dialogue Prompt
1. Given that one important element of this class is the sharing of ideas, what idea
sharing formats have you preferred? Why?
2. What, if anything, do you find to be most challenging about whole or small class
discussions? What has kept you from participating in conversations?
3. What conditions or circumstances do you feel are important in order to allow for
healthy and robust conversations?
4. Are there any further guidelines you think we need to add to those we came up with
last week? If yes, what are they?
5. Out of this list, which do you prefer during open-full class discussion:
* cold calling
* writing to a prompt and then discussion
* working in groups and then sharing out
* working with a partner and then sharing out
Effective Summaries
Rhetorical Summary Writing
A general academic summary’s purpose is: To offer a condensed and objective account of the main ideas
and features of a text; to demonstrate your accurate comprehension of a text. The audience is academic,
and so they’ll have certain expectations of an effective summary.
Publication information
o Be sure to be specific about who the audience is and what feature of the text you analyzed
to determine that audience.
Key points should be broad so that you don’t get weighed down in detail
100% objective (no opinions or reactions)
Good paraphrases
Attribution
1. What is the main argument that Choi is making in “What Americans Can Learn from
Other Food Cultures”?
2. Who do you think is her intended audience? Are you part of that audience?
3. What are some of the foods that you consider comfort food? Why do you consider
them comfort food; that is, what memories or feelings are connected to that food?
I. Publication Info
a. Author:
b. Article Title:
c. Publication:
d. Date of pub:
II. Rhetorical Situation
a. Author (any appropriate background, affiliations, etc.)
b. Intended Audience
i. Rhetorical feature(s) used to identify intended audience
c. Purpose
d. Context
e. Genre/Text
III. Main Point/Thesis/Argument/Claim
a.
IV. Key Points
a. 1st Key Point (KP1)
1. Evidence for KP1
Week 3
Quoting and Paraphrasing Notes
Quoting Directly
Quoting directly means taking a specific statement or passage made directly by an author and including it,
word for word, in your work. The words you quote are original to the author you are quoting and are not
taken from any other source.
You may NOT rephrase the statement or passage; simply copy it into your document exactly as you found it,
punctuating it with quotation marks.
Pick quotes that are memorable either because of the author’s word choice or tone. Do NOT quote
because you are unsure of what a sentence means.
Paraphrasing Source Material
Paraphrasing restates ideas and information found in source material. It requires that you fully understand
the contents of the passage enough to explain or reiterate them in your own words while retaining the
meaning intended by its original author.
Author Tags:
o Whether you are quoting or paraphrasing, it is always important to be abundantly clear as to whose ideas you
are representing.
o Any time you’re borrowing someone else’s ideas, you need an author tag before the quote (Author name +
Verb) and a parenthetical citation after the quote (page#).
Edmundson states, “To get an education, you’re probably going to have to fight against the institution
that you find yourself in—no matter how prestigious it may be ” (18).
Edmundson believes that attaining a worthy education comes from the individual’s tenacity rather
than the brick and mortar building at which they attend classes (18).
In a summary, author tags can get repetitive! Some ideas for adding variety …
The author then points out …
He cites a study in which …
o Any time you’re using/reporting the author’s ideas, whether it’s a quote or a paraphrase.
Are the author’s words so precise that to put them in my own words would change their meaning?
Are the author’s words so concise that I would need twice as many words to paraphrase the passage? 1
Paraphrasing shows that we have listened to the conversation and can put it into our own words. In summary, you
should paraphrase when it’s the idea, not the tone or exact wording, that you’re trying to get across.
1 These ideas are taken from Spack (2007). Guidelines: A Cross Cultural Reading/Writing Text. (3rd Ed). New York, NY: Cambridge.
1. Make sure that you use your own words to explain what the author is saying (e.g. use synonyms).
2. Try to change the structure of the sentence so that it is different from the original (e.g. switch from
active to passive voice).
4. Keep the tone of the writing the same (e.g. do not make the writer sound angry if he does not sound
angry in the original).
5. Attribute the information to the original author by using an author tag (e.g. Edmundson argues).
6. Include the page number in parentheses after the paraphrased text (If there’s a page number; some
electronic sources may not).
Example
Original Text: “If you want to get a real education in America you’re going to have to fight […] To get an
education, you’re probably going to have to fight against the institution that you find yourself in – no matter
how prestigious it may be” (Edmundson, “Who Are You and What Are You Doing Here?”, pg. 18).
Plagiarized paraphrase: Edmundson believes that if you want a real education, you have to work hard.
Inaccurate paraphrase: Edmundson believes that institutions put up a fight against their students because they
don’t value their students’ education (18).
Better paraphrase: Edmundson believes that attaining a worthy education comes from the individual’s tenacity
rather than the brick and mortar building at which they attend classes (18).
Practice
Directions: Paraphrase the following sentence in the space below.
Original: “Concern springs from a number of things: steep rises in fees, increases in the levels of debt of both
students and universities, and the declining quality of graduates” (The Economist, “Higher Education: Not What
It Used to Be”).
Paraphrase: ____________________________________________________________________________
Now, see if you succeeded in making your paraphrase different in words and structure.
1. Draw a rectangle around any words that are the same in the original text and your paraphrase.
2. Circle synonyms that you used in your paraphrasing and the original.
3. Underline phrases/ideas that you changed in order. For example, if you moved the idea about “quality
of graduates” to the beginning of your paraphrase, underline this idea.
Did you underline anything? If not, see if you can move around the order of ideas.
One useful technique is to read the passage carefully several times to identify its main points; then set
it aside. Try re-writing the main points in your own words without looking at the original. In other
words, explain it to yourself.
When finished, set the draft aside and move on with the rest of your writing, or to some other activity.
Turning your attention to something else puts distance between yourself and the original passage, it
clears your head so to speak.
When you return to it, you will have a fresh perspective. Your recollection of the exact words being
paraphrased will have faded to some degree and it will be easier to focus on your own language
choices and sentence structure.
Workshop Expectations
Workshop Expectations
(Adapted from Richard Straub’s “Responding – Really Responding – to Other Students’
Writing”)
1) How to See Yourself
As a responder, not an evaluator
As a “friendly reader”
Straub says, “Point to problems and areas for improvement but do so in a
constructive way. See what you can do to push her to do even more than she’s
done and stretch herself as a writer.”
2) What Are Your Goals?
The task is simple, says Straub… “You’re there to play back to the writer how you
read the paper; what you got from it; what you found interesting; where you were
confused; where you wanted more. With this done, you can go on to point out
problems, ask questions, offer advice, and wonder out loud with the writer about
her ideas.”
3) How to Get Started
Review the assignment and the criteria (i.e. the rubric)
Consider “the writer’s interests and aims”
What are the rhetorical features and concepts we’ve been discussing
throughout class?
What “stage of drafting” is the piece in?
4) Comments: The What, the Where, & the How
What to address in your comments: “Try to focus your comments on a couple
areas of writing,” says Straub. In other words, use the hierarchy of rhetorical
concerns to determine what is most pressing to address and address one or two
of the most crucial areas.
Where to put comments: Writing margin comments as well as endnotes and
connecting the two can be extremely helpful for the writer. Since multiple people
may be marking on the same draft, you might jot your name down in parenthesis
next to your comment.
How to sound: “Sound like you normally sound when you’re speaking to a friend
or acquaintance,” Straub says. “Not like a teacher. Not like a judge.”
How much to comment: Instead of making brief statements, Straub says, explain
what you mean and explain why you’re saying what you’re saying. Don’t be “short
and sweet;” Straub says. “Be specific!”
5) Presenting Comments
A1
Sample – Strong
In Higher Education Today’s article “Fighting Food insecurity on Campus,” published in 2015
Christopher Nellum argues that food insecurity on college campuses is a critical problem that needs to be
addressed. Nellum supports this point by reporting that the demographic of college students have largely
changed over the years. When referring to today’s college student, Nellum writes, “they tend to be older, first
generation, from lower income and communities of color.” The author concludes that these students are more
likely to have difficulties paying for college. In addition to the changing identity of the “traditional college
student,” the author cites research which shows a dramatic increase in campus based food pantries. As stated by
Nellum, The College and University Food Bank Alliance reports that there are “almost 200 food banks and
pantries that primarily serve college students across the nation,” which is a direct response to the increasing
prevalence of this problem. Ultimately, Nellum emphasizes the growing need for post secondary leaders to
Nellum’s purpose is to raise awareness in order to shed light on the issue of food insecure college
students. This article was clearly written for college administrators, as many of the solutions present in this
article directly involve government programs, such as the Higher Education Act, that can directly assist students
in need.
A1 Sample – Low
Published by Higher Education Today in June 2015, this article, “Fighting Food Insecurity on Campus”
by Christopher Nellum discusses how today’s college students are unable to access nutritional food due to the
significant rise of the cost of tuition plus the general increase in the cost of goods and services. The author
speaks for malnourished college students as he backs up his claims with outside sources, like Feeding America,
which is a “nonprofit network of food.” They help give support to millions of people who struggle finically
balancing their education expenses and money for food forcing individuals to skip meals leading to the rise of
food insecurity. An additional key point talked about is the decrease of state funding and the growth of campus
based food pantries. Resources and support to the food banks provided by the College and University Food
Bank Alliance (CUFBA) helps fund these food pantries. To fix these issues, Nellum believes there are multiple
solutions to lower the food insecurity among these college campuses. He states that, “… the Higher Education
Act (HEA) presents an opportunity to rethink not only issues related to college financing and affordability, but
financial aid and its ability to adequately to cover living expenses,” and not just college expenses. Financial aid
should take in account the cost for food, living and transportation for student rather than just student academic
expenses. The purpose of this work is to inform other people about how food is an issue for college students,’
but there are resources and solutions on how to end the financial and hunger crisis many students face daily. The
audience that this article is intended for are policy makers, post secondary leaders, and researchers since they
Read your peer’s summary portfolio and consider the questions below. Write your ideas on the summaries
(not on this sheet). Please make sure that you are respectful and your comments are as helpful as you can
make them. Remember to provide a range of praise, questions, and suggestions.
1. Does the writer introduce the title of the article (in “quotations”), the author’s first and last name, the
date it was written, and where it was published (in italics)?
a. Is this formatted correctly? Make any necessary comments about how the writer could improve
this information.
2. Does the writer include the rest of the rhetorical situation: genre, purpose, and audience?
a. Is it clear HOW the writer has determined the audience based on the features of the text
and/or its publication?
3. Does the writer introduce the thesis of the article? Is the thesis accurate, complete, and clearly
stated?
a. If you see any ways this could be improved, write some comments.
4. Does this introductory section flow well? Can you make any suggestions about how this could be
better organized?
a. If the writer has missed some points, please advise them to look for other points.
a. Check the reading and underline any issues that you see.
8. Do you see any details that you think are extra and should not be included? Mark these.
9. Do you see any words or phrases that could be interpreted as opinion? Make a note of these.
10. Does the writer use frequent and varied author tags? How could these be improved?
11. How is the summary organized? Does it flow together well? Could ideas be connected more with
transitions?
A1 Outcome Activity
Activity Option #1
Task For Students:
In small groups, take 5 minutes and put Outcome #1 (“Exhibit a thorough understanding of audience, purpose,
genre, and context that is responsive to the situation.”) in your own words. I want you to put the outcome in your
own words because research shows that we get better at comprehending a new idea or sentence if we can put it in
our own words. Rely on your paraphrasing skills from A1 to help you. Make sure to take notes, as you will use those
notes at the end of the semester when you write your portfolio.
For the instructor:
While students are in small groups, wander the classroom listening and helping groups put Outcome #1 in their
own words. After small groups have finished, come back together as a class and take 5 minutes to ask small groups
to report their phrasing and sentences. Write keywords or phrases on the board that help students grasp outcome
#1. Then ask students for examples of how they met Outcome #1 in A1.
Activity Option #2
Task For Students:
As a class, take 5 minutes and discuss what it means to “Employ Rhetorical Knowledge.” In your discussion, talk
about how you employed your rhetorical knowledge in A1 when evaluating and analyzing sources. Make sure to
take notes, as you will use those notes at the end of the semester when you write your portfolio.
For the instructor:
While students are partnered, wander the classroom listening and helping them understand what it means to
employ rhetorical knowledge. After small groups have finished, come back together as a class and take 5 minutes to
ask groups to report their ideas. Try to get everyone to talk about, even briefly, audience, purpose, genre, and
context.