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Summer is still a little way off, but the word [spring] doesn’t quite fit
anymore.
“──♪ ──♪”
I don’t know what genre it is, but I just know she’s in a good mood.
Inside my room. Staring at the ceiling, which has finally begun to look
familiar, I ruminate in my mind about a fact that I have almost forgotten.
It has already become a part of my fashion when the sunlight shines and
emits a bewitching, dull glow, symbolising our relationship.
“Lunch is ready. Are you still working?”
Konata smiles thinly at my comment and replies with words that look like
posters from a soba restaurant.
The drawing tablet that I usually do for work is moved to the corner of the
room and the folding table that is propped up against the wall is taken out.
As I lay out the cushions for her and myself, I go through my thoughts.
I suddenly realised.
“……Yes, it is.”
Although they are chopsticks, they are fan goods, so in terms of practicality
they are a delicate item. The chopstick handles are bumpy and difficult to
hold due to the design of the sword hilt and embedded jewels. The sharp tip
of the blade and the belly of the sword are too unbalanced, especially at the
end of my chopsticks.
Still, I swallow down the words and nod my head and begin to eat.
‘But I had to admit, Konata is ominous and terrifying. But it’s also true that
I was in a slump and thanks to her I’m able to draw comics again….’
The fact that she has been stalking me all this time is worrying.
But I can’t deny that I feel an equal amount of gratitude and affection for
her.
At the very least, I like her to the extent that I’m reluctant to report the fact
that I’ve been confined and make her a criminal.
‘But I might ask her to take off the choker for now. It’s summer, and I’ll give
her a good reason, like it’s steaming or something.’
I think about it while slurping the sweet and sour noodle noodles of chilled
chinese noodles.
“Hey, Konata…”
While stabbing the cherry tomatoes of the chilled chinese noodles with my
chopsticks, Konata suddenly mutters something those words.
“I’m not talking about the protein, I’m talking about the image. The way it
feels when you touch it, the way the red liquid comes out of it, it’s like
human flesh.”
Konata chews the cherry tomatoes.
With that being said, the cherry tomato suddenly looks like a human head.
I myself asked her to put it back on, even though she took it off once.
This was before I knew that she was a stalker, but I can’t pretend that she
didn’t say those words.
If I say now that I want to take the choker off, she will think that she is
inadequate in taking care of me and will be offended.
If that happens, I can’t deny the possibility that I myself will end up like
that cherry tomato.
So it is concluded.
“Osomatsusama.”
“Because Konata only takes a bath after me. It’s not good if you’re going to
take a late bath. It’ll affect your body tomorrow.”
She has been out of school but has recently started attending high school
again. She should lead a regular life as much as possible to keep that good
situation.
“Then, I’ll wash your back. I’m going to wash up, so please wait a
moment.”
“No, I’ll do it myself. You’re doing a lot of housework and it’s good
enough.”
Usually, she will force her way into the bathroom and try to wash my body.
A bath towel with an anime character from my work printed on it, dressed
in a more revealing outfit.
Of course, I am attached to my characters but whether I want to wrap
myself in that bath towel is another story.
‘Come to think of it, I’m pretty sure the change of clothes was also a
character print shirt…….No, I think, because Konata said that she had to
replenish my clothes because she didn’t have enough clothes to replace
them. As I’d expect, it’s not like she only have character stuff.’
“…………”
The first category is the same as before, T-shirts with characters printed on
them.
“Redecorating. I have to make sure it’s appropriate for the two of us.”
I’ve seen a lot of changes in my room in the time I’ve been away.
The floor is carpeted with magic circles marked with red and black runes,
and the cushions are covered with open-mouthed, insectivorous monsters.
‘As more and more things are added, my room is eroding into this
colour……’
『 』
I’ve been taken care of by Konata for the past month, and I feel like
I’ve recently moved up a gear.
The door closes and I take a step towards the front door to lock it.
Gacha
『
I have to finish a short story for publication in a web magazine, The
Story of a Manga Artist Locked Up by a Strange High School Girl , 』
exactly as it was written.
It’s a chance I’ve finally seized, even though my work has been rejected
many times.
The editor’s suggestions on my work are used as a guide, and tweaks are
made.
When I am struggling with the main character’s dialogue, the screen goes
dark for a moment.
“Ufuaa!”
My body reacts with a jerk and a strange voice comes out unintentionally.
The screensaver was decorated with cute effects, along with encouraging
『
words such as Good luck with your work . 』
“Why is Konata in her underwear?! If the police raid this place, this can be
called child pornography!”
I hurriedly reset the screensaver to its default display image and delete the
image.
…… 。
…… 。
…… 。
‘It’s impossible. I can’t get the image of Konata in her underwear out of my
head. Let’s take a break.’
I lie on my back with the cushion as a pillow and move my body from side
to side, but…
‘I can’t calm down.’
A hero and heroine who have a firm will and drive the story. Or the
antagonist.
This makes me feel like a prey being preyed upon by insectivorous plants.
Combined with the magic circle on the carpet, I feel as if I were a living
sacrifice offered to the devil.
Apparently, living surrounded by things that don’t suit one’s taste gradually
whittles away at one’s MP, like a slow-acting poison.
‘Right. Let’s go out for a change. There’s no rule that says I have to work
inside the house!’
I disconnect the PC and drawing tablet and put them away in a rucksack.
‘Don’t tell me that I’m feeling anxious about going outside? That I really
liked living in confinement? I…’
I reconsider this.
When I open the fridge, I find onigiri and omelettes on a plate covered with
plastic wrap.
『Soak it in water when you’re done eating. And if you go outside, wear
this pendant top on your choker. It will protect you.』
The pendant top, cooled to a crisp, was a metal disc about 5 cm in diameter.
It was an accessory with a onmyoudou-like design, as if it were a
combination of a black and white magatama.
I see. Although the choker is originally used for confinement, with this on,
it can just barely be seen as a fashion accessory.
‘It’s unexpectedly cute for her age to entrust her feelings to a pendant. I
appreciate her concern, but I wished she would leave the choker key
behind…’
With this in mind, I finish my meal quickly and dip my plate in the water.
I am able to concentrate quite well, but as expected, I feel bad about staying
in one place for too long, so after working for an hour or two, I change
location to the riverbanks.
By the time I leave the last cafe, the sun is already setting.
“Is that so? I’m glad to hear that. Then, we’ll have a light dinner tonight.
I’m making chicken salad and soup.”
“Ee,Aa..un..It’s true that I’m not very hungry, so that helps, but how did
you know?”
When Konata finds out how exactly hungry I am, my body stiffens up.
“Because it’s your personality. When you go into a coffee shop, you can’t
stick with just a cup of coffee, can you? You would order a piece of cake
or something else. If you order four cups of coffee, you must be pretty full,
right?
“Ee? Ee? Ee? How did you know I went to the coffee shops?”
Also, I have uninstalled the tracking app that was installed on my phone
without my permission.
“? You’re wearing that pendant, that’s a given that I know. Your phone
seems to have a glitch, so I’m glad I had it ready just in case..”
‘Is that what Konata mean by 『It will protect you?』 This pendant has a
GPS in it!’
I grip the pendant tightly.
‘Indeed, she’s no ordinary high school girl. She has no hesitation in stalking
my whereabouts…….’
Early afternoon.
I’m still concerned about the unusual interior, but I don’t feel like going out
and working when I think I’m being monitored by a GPS.
‘It’s too early for her to be home and she wouldn’t ring the doorbell. Who is
it?’
I remember that I ordered something, so I rush to the front door and unlock
it.
After inviting a pair of male workers into the house, I suddenly realised.
But they are professionals. I think they might have been a bit taken back
when they went inside, but they didn’t show it in their expressions and went
home after completing their work without any hesitation.
I think they might have used me as a topic for chatting later, but it can’t be
helped.
It’s getting hotter and it’s hard to survive a modern Japanese summer
without air-conditioning.
Usually I would have to open the windows at random, but now I feel more
safe and comfortable.
I don’t care if it’s just me but as long as Konata is here, I don’t want to
sleep with the window open for security reasons.
I reported this to her as I put my chopsticks to the supper she had made for
me – cold pork shabu-shabu.
“I see. That’s good, isn’t it? Now you don’t have to go to the coffee shop.”
Konata speaks as she was mopping up the lettuce.
Well, it’s not like I’m going out of my way to complain about it.
I won’t go so far as to say it’s worn out, but the insulation in this room isn’t
good enough.
It will be hard to sleep and wake up in the kitchen in the coming season.
“……Hmmm. You want me to sleep in the same room as you that badly?
ー
Heh .”
Konata puts down her chopsticks and looks at me with a smirk on her face.
“N-no, I don’t mean that, I mean I’m worried about heat stroke, if I leave
the door open and the air conditioning on, I’m wasting money on
electricity.”
It’s true that this may have been a statement that could have been
misinterpreted.
But Konata should know from the flow of the conversation, right!?
“Okay, okay. You don’t have to force yourself. It’s set up to cover a comic
strip. You know, like JK reflexology, which was popular a while ago.”
Konata squints, the corners of her mouth drop and she gives a [I know, I
know. I do] kind of look.
I am a bit annoyed.
“No, I don’t think it’s a good idea, no matter how many I set up. I mean, I
haven’t had any scenes in my work like that so far.”
“O-kay, o-kay. I’ll leave it at that. I’m going to have a bath now.”
Konata takes my words in stride and goes to the kitchen to wash down the
plate of cold shabu-shabu we finished eating.
‘At this point, [I’m going to have a bath] sounds like a weird thing to say!’
Soon after her bath, Konata returns in her pyjamas. She spreads out her
textbooks on the folding desk and begins to work on her school homework.
I, on the other hand, turn my back to her and face my manga in silence.
Time passes in the blink of an eye, and it’s almost thirty minutes past
twenty-two.
[TL: 10:30pm]
Konata hands over the wash basin to me and I brush my teeth in the
kitchen.
I go back to my room and spread out the futon I folded up. I then place a
piece of cardboard next to it, which I use as a desk, and use it as a boundary
line. The drawing tablet – it will be dangerous if it falls on my face from the
top of the cardboard, so I’ll move it away.
“….These cardboard boxes, don’t they get in the way? Why don’t you put
it up against the wall?”
Before it was a sleeping bag, but now she is using a thin duvet like mine.
Needless to say, the duvet cover and sheets are printed with characters from
my work.
“Sometimes in the middle of the night I’d suddenly come up with an idea.
It’s handy to have a workbench right next to me when I jot them down.”
I made up a lie.
“Hmmm.”
I put the futon down on the other side of the cardboard box.
I know I should sleep early but I can’t help reaching for my phone.
“…..A mangaka is arrested for lewd acts with a minor? The culprit seems to
be claiming it was pure love, but it is not acceptable by the public. As
fellow creators, we have to be careful.”
I mutter to myself.
“Age?”
“Eeh? A first year junior high school student – it says she was twelve at the
time.”
“Case by case… No, no, no, even if you’re 13 years old or older, minors are
usually not allowed, right?”
It is not the world of erotic manga that says it is safe to do erotic things with
minors if they are over 13 years old.
“Well, is that so? Oh, but wasn’t there a cartoonist arrested before for
having a dating relationship with a high school student?”
aids
I remember it was quite a shock, because he was quite a famous mangaka
and I was a fan.
“Those are swimming costumes that you can usually buy by mail order. If
high school girls in swimming costumes are not allowed, then all the
magazines with those kinds of gravure’s photos in them will be out. Have
you heard that the publishers of Mag*n or Sun* have been arrested?”
Eh. Was Konata in that photo wearing a swimming costume? I can’t check
because I’ve already erased it, but if I think about it, bikini type swimming
costumes and underwear don’t have much difference in the area of
exposure.
But is underwear out and swimwear safe? No, then is underwear also safe if
it has more fabric?
Somehow, I don’t really understand.
“Well, but as I recall, that age will soon be eighteen. Isn’t that, after all, the
law changed because it’s not good to get married in high school or
something like that?”
“Rather the opposite. Until now, parental consent was required for
marriages under the age of 20, but now that the age of majority has been
raised to 18, it is possible for a person to get married at the age of 18 simply
on the basis of his or her own will. In view of the trend towards harsher
penalties under the Juvenile Law, the age at which legal capacity to make a
will is declining.”
And it is instantly debunked.
“Hey, how come Konata knows so much about this kind of law?”
I can’t say anything more back to her and ask such a dumb question.
“Because I studied……”
She reaches into her student bag-case, which she keeps by her bedside.
The code pasted on the back cover suggests that she borrowed them from
the library.
I mutter in defeat.
Even now, I still think it’s wrong to have that kind of relationship with a
high school girl.
It’s frustrating.
Konata mutters a meaningful line, gets up and turns off the light.
At that moment, the faint scent of her hair left a strong impression on me.
Chapter 4 - Day 4 of cohabitation
“Summer is the season when you are more prone to heat stroke, so you need
to drink the proper amount of fluids before bed.”
Konata comes all the way from the kitchen, chanting a government
propaganda-like mantra.
She says in a plain flat tone and tilts her cup expressionless on the
cardboard.
In the blink of an eye, the wet cardboard boxes are dyed with a ratty grey.
“Wait, E? Eee…….”
“I’m so clumsy.”
Konata confesses with a somewhat satisfied look on her face. She then
shakes the glass robustly up and down, and water the cardboard to the last
drop.
“No, I don’t blame you for being clumsy, but that was indeed clearly
unnatural.”
Konata ignores my Tsukkomi and puts the glass on the floor and sticks her
hand in the wet and brittle part of the cardboard. She then starts tearing the
cardboard to shreds. In no time at all, the cardboard is no longer able to be
reassembled. It is nothing but a piece of paper. The way she was doing it, as
if she was dealing with her parents’ avenger, makes me lose the will to say
anything more.
“W-well, I can’t keep using cardboard boxes as desks forever, right? I’ll
buy a new one. I can use a folding desk until my work desk arrives.”
I turn away and open an online shopping site on my phone. And I snapped
up the same kind of work desk I was using before I moved in.
It’s not particularly inconvenient once I get used to cardboard but it’s
shabby to say the least and I’ll take this as a good opportunity to use a
better desk.
“…..I don’t think it’s a good idea to keep that folding desk near me when
we sleep.”
“Why?”
“Are you sure? I’ve only ever seen you take notes on the floor, either on
your phone or with a paper sketchbook.”
Indeed, it is a pain to get up every time I need to take a quick note. When I
have an idea for a plot, I use the notepad app on my phone in my sleep and
if it’s a character design, I scribble it down in my sketchbook.
It’s not uncommon for me to get a sudden creative urge in the middle of the
night and want to go to my desk and use the drawing tablet but it’s a rare
case.
“W-well, I guess I could just take it away for now and put it back if it’s
inconvenient.”
“Then okay.”
Konata nods.
“Kohon. Well, let’s go to bed. Working and going to school is like running a
marathon. It’s a long-term battle, and you have to take care of your
rhythm.”
I cough, say something cool and get up to turn off the light.
“True.”
…… ……。 。
Basa.
…… 。
Gororororororo.
…… 。
Pasa.
There’s a pressure close by that I can feel even with my eyes closed.
Tsun.
TsunTsunTsun.
TsunTsunTsunTsun.
Kosho.
Koshoshoshoshoshosho.
Her eyes are so bloodshot that I can see them even in the dark.
‘Does this girl think she can get away with anything if she says she’s
clumsy?’
“But Konata used to sleep in the kitchen that’s smaller than this room and I
had never heard a single noise.”
In the spacious kitchen that Konata can’t even turn over, if she was as bad a
sleeper as she is claiming now, she’d probably hit her body all over the
place and be covered in bruises.
But the sleeping figure of Konata I saw the other day was a sleeping figure
with good posture, as snug as Dracula sleeping in a coffin.
“……It’s summer, it’s hot and I just pulled off the duvet.”
‘Calm down. Calm down, me. What am I going to do if I fall for such a
blatant invitation? I’m giving in to my temporary desires and throwing
away the chance I’ve finally seized!’
Considering the hell of having my projects getting rejected over and over
again, this level of endurance should be nothing to sneeze at.
Tsuntsuntsuntsun.
Koshokoshokoshokoshokosho.
Munyumunyumunyumunyu.
I’m sure this is how Christ must have felt as he endured the temptation of
the devil in the wilderness.
After that, Konata keeps messing around with my body for a while, but
gradually the number of times she messes with me decreases and finally
reaches zero.
“Suuu….Suuu…..”
“Nfuu…”
Rather than being seduced in a strange way, it seems that the atmosphere is
getting weirder.
‘But I won’t lose. If I’m no longer a manga artist, I’ll be the one who will be
saddest.’
I decide to do so.
But that night, I was the one who spent a while agonising over the smell of
her from the futon, although it was better than her and her bed clothes’
smell.
Chapter 5 - Day 5 of cohabitation
In the morning, by the time I woke up, she had already left for school.
When she comes home in the evening, she stands silently in the kitchen
without saying a single word, not even [I’m home].
“Okay.”
I say casually, take the bowl of rice and place it on the desk.
It is a simple bowl of white rice topped with shredded cabbage and a fried
egg, with sauce poured over it.
“O,ouu…then Itadakimasu.”
Of course, it’s not bad. I can’t complain as the food is being made for me,
but as a healthy adult male..it’s a little lacking.
It’s a pretty simple menu for Konata, who’s been trying her hand at some
rather elaborate dishes lately.
‘This morning’s breakfast was also a combo of yoghurt and supplements for
the first time in a while, maybe she’s in a bad mood?’
“…….”
“…….”
Mutual silence.
It would have been nice if she had said something to me, but it seems
unlikely.
“Oh, you know…”
“What?”
“Let’s see…how about if it’s your favourite comic book, after you’ve read it
a dozen times, you get bored of it, as you should, right?”
“Haa? Do you know how many times I have read your comics and that I
never get tired of them?”
“….. I didn’t use a good analogy. I like fried chicken, but that doesn’t mean
I want to eat it every day. I like to have a sudden craving once in a while
and devour it with gusto to the point of heartburn. That’s what fried chicken
is to me. Can you understand?”
“The point is that just because you like someone, if you like them all the
time, it loses its freshness. I just wondered if that may be a part of our
relationship.”
“I see……..That’s why.”
She looks down at the soggy yolk as if thinking for a moment, and
eventually nods in agreement.
I’m not sure what the [That’s why] is, but let’s just push the story right now.
“Aaa, that’s why. I think it may not be a bad idea for both of us to stop
living together and put some physical distance between us.”
I put down my chopsticks, fold my arms and nod slowly and deeply.
“But what about looking after you? You need to have me, don’t you?”
“No, I used to live on my own, you know? You’ve just started school and
I’m sorry to make you spend so much time on me. If you’re worried that
my life is going to get rough, I’ll ask you to make me dinner once in a
while, so come see how things are going.”
I don’t want to completely cut off my relationship with Konata. I just want
to keep a proper distance.
“……If that’s the case, maybe it’s a good idea. The horoscope on TV this
morning also said that Capricorns can fail if they get too passionate.”
“Good. Then it’s settled then.”
“Okay. I want to sort out what I’m taking home with me and what I’m not,
and I’ll pack my things when I get back from school tomorrow.”
I sleep more soundly that day than I have in the past few days.
Chapter 6 - Day 6 of cohabitation
It is evening.
At the doorstep.
Konata says as she slings her Boston bag over her shoulder.
“You have to eat vegetables, even if it’s troublesome. Even if it’s just biting
into a tomato at random, it’s okay.”
Pinpon.
“Who is it? I already received the work desk I ordered from yesterday via
express delivery.”
“Who is it?”
“Indeed. But since I finished my previous job early, I thought I would have
a meeting with you directly after a long time. You’re a very serious person,
so I’m sure that you’ve been waiting in front of your computer for 30
minutes anyway.”
Indeed, as Haruka-san said, after sending Konata off, I am going to wait for
her in front of the computer and think about what I should talk about at the
meeting.
If she sees a high school girl coming out of my room, it can get
complicated.
“Oh, yes, well, the time itself isn’t a problem, but I’m a little embarrassed
by the mess in my room, so I’m sorry, would you mind if I take a moment
to clean up?”
“I see. I just came early on my own, so don’t worry about it. I’m going to
kill some time around here, so when you’re ready, please call me or contact
me on SNS as you see fit.”
“Sorry, it was the editor in charge. She wants to have a meeting with me.”
“──Is that right? She sounded pretty young. How old is she?”
“Eeh? Haruka-san’s age? I’ve never asked her. But she became my
editor when I graduated, and we’ve known each other ever since, so she’s
probably in her mid-twenties.”
With that declaration, Konata takes off her shoes and goes back into the
house.
Well, as they say, 『You can’t hate what comes out and what goes in.』
With this in mind, I wait for her to finish using the bathroom, but even after
ten or twenty minutes, Konata does not come out.
‘As expected, it’s almost time for the original appointment, and I can’t keep
Haruka-san waiting any longer……’
“I’ve got a meeting soon, so I’m going to let Haruka-san in the house. I’m
sorry, but when you get out of the bathroom, can you please leave the room
as inconspicuously as possible? I don’t want Haruka-san to get the wrong
idea. I’ll just explain to her that I have a friend over.”
“………….”
I call out to Konata, but there is no response from inside the bathroom.
I don’t think there is anything on the menu that will give her food
poisoning.
Haruka-san takes off her leather shoes and puts them down neatly.
Many manga editors, even office workers, wear casual clothes, but Haruka-
san is always dressed in a tight-fitting suit.
“I think a house like this is solid and good. In the past, I heard that there
was a pattern of manga artists who were successful enough to build a house
in Kamakura on the spur of the moment, which caused problems later on,
but many of today’s manga artists are stable. Nowadays, most assistants
work remotely, so there is no need to rent an office.”
“I see. A–please sit down. I’ll bring you some barley tea now.”
I offer Haruka-san a cushion while I serve her a cup of barley tea.
“Thank you very much. So, how is it going? How is the manuscript
coming along?”
Haruka-san sits upright on the cushion, sips a little barley tea, and then goes
straight to the point.
“I don’t think it’s bad. It’s a work in progress, but do you want to take a
look at it?”
I point to the drawing tablet and shift my chair a little to the side.
I usually face her even when we have face-to-face meetings, so I’m nervous
when she sits next to me.
“……”
“…….”
I wait for her words as if I were a student waiting for the announcement of
my acceptance.
The first to open their mouth is neither me nor Haruka-san, but a third
person.
“Konata!?”
Konata pokes her head between my shoulder and Haruka’s shoulder and
glares at me.
To begin with, I’ve never cared much about the appearance or age of the
editor in charge.
“It is a basic rule for editors to believe in the artists they are working with,
but it is also part of their job to prepare for the worst case
scenario…….Sometimes we hear of cases where a serious-looking
mangaka has committed an outrageous sex crime……”
『
“ Even if you and I end up like that, does the editor have anything to do
』
with it? Tell her that.”
Konata is whispering in my ear.
No, tell her that in person──I thought. But Konata is a shy person.
『
“ There is. If the mangaka becomes a sex offender, his new series will go
down the drain and his past works will go out of print. If that happens, it
』
will be my responsibility. Please tell her that..”
Haruka-san says as she returns her attention to the drawing tablet and
continues checking my manga.
『
“Tell her that If it’s a sincere relationship, there’s no problem if a high
school student and an adult male have a physical relationship. ”』
『
“Please tell her, I think it is legally correct, but it is the parents, not you,
』
who will decide whether it is sincere or not. Sensei, have you talked to
her parents? Are you planning to get married? Have you tied the knot?”
“No, I’ve never even met her parents, let alone tied the knot with her.”
The calm manner in which Haruka-san speaks makes my blood run cold.
I look at Konata.
“…….”
Seriously?! I knew it was a bad idea! I’m glad I trust my sense of ethics.
“I’m glad I came to see you in person. I thought this was going to happen
anyway.”
“Is it so? I was worried about Sensei because many mangaka are naive and
pure, and they are often tricked by strange religions or caught by bad
women and suffer terrible things. I didn’t expect to see a high school girl in
the house.”
“Th-that’s..not funny..”
I scratch my head.
“Sensei, I’d like to check just to be sure, you didn’t get locked up like in the
manga, do you? It’s just a model, right?”
“Ha,Hahaha. You’re making a joke again. I’m not locked up, although some
parts are based on actual events. I met her when she happened to find me
lying in front of my room and took care of me, and now I employ her as a
housekeeper for meals and cleaning.”
If I told the truth, the earnest Haruka-san would have reported me to the
police without hesitation.
“Well, putting aside the digression, the deadline for the Web version of the
manuscript is coming up next Monday, so let’s get down to business, shall
we? Let’s talk about your housekeeper later, but for now, I’d like you to
leave us alone.”
I get up and try to push her shoulder to get her out of the house- but her
body is as still as a stone statue.
『
“Tell that woman that ……I have a right to be here. ” 』
“Konata, I know you’re not good at talking to people you meet for the first
time, but that’s a bit rude. Let’s talk properly next time.”
“Hmm. Well, you have a point. If this work sells well and becomes well-
known, there is a risk that she will be seen as a stalker of a manga artist and
a psycho who confines him. ──Then why not change the character
design…..? It’s exquisite, isn’t it? This design is exquisite. You really found
a good model, Sensei.”
A normal editor will tell me to change the picture, even if it is a pain in the
ass and the quality will be lowered.
“If that’s the case, I don’t blame her. It will be fine if she stays.”
“………”
I hand over the cushion to her, who is sitting to my left – on the opposite
side of Haruka-san.
“First of all, the big picture of the story is fine. Let’s keep it that way. So,
the first thing I’m concerned about is the nuance of the piece. I would like it
to be more like a romantic comedy. The current work has a 5:5 ratio, so I’d
like to see the ratio of horror to romantic comedy to be about 3:7.”
“I see.”
“The realistic portrayal is her charm, but the horror element, she cuts it
out……”
“If you’re going to pull it toward horror, the trend in manga these days is to
have a set of grotesque depictions…….you don’t like guro that much, do
you, Sensei?”
“How can you ignore the psychology of fans who don’t want to pass the
disease on to their favourite mangaka in case they get sick……?
After that, Haruka’s points continue to be made, but Konata refutes every
now and then.
“I think that’s about it. To sum it up, the framework is already in place, so
it’s just a matter of making some minor adjustments.”
I put down my sketchbook and bow my head, circling the most important
points.
“Then I’ll leave you to it.”
Haruka-san gets up from her cushion and looks at Konata, who is next to
me.
“Oh, ah, Konata? To tell you the truth, she was planning to leave home
before I had a meeting with Haruka-san. R-right? Konata?”
“………..”
“Konata? What’s wrong? Yesterday, you agreed that we should not live
together, didn’t you?”
“…..Haa…I’m more worried about this girl’s issue than the content of the
new series, to be honest……I can’t just continue to turn a blind eye to this.
…..──Ooh, I know. Here’s what I’ll do. I’ll live here myself until I’m sure
that your serialisation is on track and make sure this girl won’t cause any
problems.”
“I’m serious. Our company has introduced remote work, so I can follow up
during the day. I will pay you for electricity, utilities, and other expenses.”
“No, no, I don’t really care about the living expenses or anything, but
Haruka-san has her own private life.”
“In that case, don’t worry about it. I’ve heard that when paper manuscripts
were the norm, it was common for editors to barge into comic book artists’
homes and sleep over, and I’ve always wanted to try it.”
Haruka-san says with a business smile.
“But if we work together outside of business hours, won’t that cause a lot of
problems? I am a man, and you are a woman, and there might be a chance
that a mistake will be made.”
“Oh, uh, hey, excuse me for a moment. ──Konata. come over here.”
I get up and lead her by the hand to the back of the kitchen.
“What?”
“Then help me out. Haruka-san is a nice person, but as expected, being with
the editor in charge 24/7 makes me nervous and I don’t feel like I can draw
properly. If you go back home once, I can persuade Haruka-san. Everything
will be alright.”
“…… Okay, I get it. If your editor is leaving too, I guess I don’t have a
choice.”
“Thanks for the help! Sorry, but may I also ask you to speak to Haruka-san
to get her to trust you?”
“Thank you!”
“Sorry for the wait Haruka-san. There’s something Konata wants to talk to
you about.”
“I’m going back to my house…….So there is no need for you to live with
him.”
“Ha. I promise that when I meet him, it will be outside – in a place where
people will be watching. Is that okay?”
Konata shrugs her shoulders and says a little dismissively.
“I’m sure that won’t be a problem. Would you mind if I put a note to that
effect?”
“I don’t mind.”
Haruka-san tears a blank page out of my sketchbook and has me write down
what I just said with a ballpoint pen and ask Konata to sign her name.
It is hard for me to worry about her, who is busy with other things, not to
mention about mangas.
“No, it’s part of my job. Well then, thank you for your time.”
“…Bye-bye.”
Konata gives me a small wave and heads for the front door.
The sound of the door slamming shut echoes loudly in the solitude of the
room.
‘I know it sounds a little sad, but this is the way it should be.’
I tell myself that. I do some stretching and then face the drawing tablet
again.
Chapter 7 - Day 7 of cohabitation
Since the correction points are clear, there are no dead ends and the work
goes on without any issues.
‘It’s 19:00?’
‘I could eat a convenience store meal if I wanted to, but I promised Konata
that I’d make sure to eat vegetables, too. Then, I’ll use the food delivery
service.’
It’s a bit expensive, but I’ll order from a restaurant that seems to be very
health-conscious.
I tap my phone and am about to make the payment when I hear a
Gachagacha sound coming from the front door.
Eventually, the door opens. I pat my chest in relief as the figure appears.
She wears her hair up, a school cap and a school uniform with a close-
cropped collar and girdle.
“Have you eaten dinner yet? If not, I’ll make you some.”
Konata holds up a supermarket bag and says.
“No, I haven’t yet…I mean, you can’t come here! You just made a
promise to Haruka yesterday. You even signed it.”
“I can do it because the reminder isn’t legally binding. The editor probably
thought that since I was a child, she would scare me off by doing something
like that, but she was too naive.”
“Is that so? No, but the reminder aside, it’s seriously out of line. A high
school girl frequently going in and out of a man’s room is a bad thing, isn’t
it?”
“What are you talking about? That’s why I came dressed as a man, right?”
Konata lowers the brim of her student hat and says so.
Is that a man’s costume?
“The point is, as long as the editor doesn’t find out, it’s fine.”
Konata says in an easygoing manner and stands in the kitchen and begins to
spread out the ingredients.
Bubububububububu.
“Konata. I’m going to talk to Haruka-san now, but please be quiet and don’t
make any noise.”
“I understand.”
“Yes. Hello?”
『
“ Hello, Sensei. Excuse me, this is Haruka. I forgot to tell you something,
so could you give me 30 minutes of your time? ” 』
At first I am worried that she may try to mess with me, but there is no sign
of that.
…… 。
…… 。
…… 。
『
“ ──That would be all. Do you have any questions? ” 』
『
“ Is that so..Then, let me ask you a question of my own. Is the girl named
』
Konata over there? ”
No matter how insightful Haruka-san is, she doesn’t have the psychic power
of clairvoyance.
『
“ Haa, so she’s there after all. Sensei, do you know Konata-chan’s
』
SNS? ”
“Ee, aa..yes”
『
“ Take a look. ”』
“Okay…… 。 ──Uwaaaa..Seriously……?”
『
On her account, there is a picture of my kitchen with the words Cooking
is love♡♡』 . In the background, I can see the chopsticks that we always
use.
『
“ I don’t think it would be obvious that a high school girl and Sensei are
in the same room unless someone entered Sensei’s house. Sensei, did you
let anyone else into the house besides Konata-chan? ”』
“The only possibility would be the real estate agent and the air conditioner
installer.”
『
“ Then it’s probably safe. I don’t think those people remember every
single room of many customers, and even if they do notice, I don’t think the
air conditioning contractor or real estate agent would want to go out of their
』
way to report the customer and get into unnecessary trouble. ”
“I’m glad…..”
『
“ So, as expected, this girl is dangerous, so I will live in with Sensei and
』
monitor her. Please treat me well, okay? ”
“Well then, after business hours, I will pack up my belongings and come
over to your place.”
I run out, open the door and run into the kitchen.
“?? I didn’t make any noise, like you told me to, did I?”
“No,no…That kind of quibble won’t work. Why did you go to the trouble
of doing something that would give us away?”
She turns to the kitchen again and begins nonchalantly chopping vegetables.
“No, I don’t really understand. Now I ended up living with Haruka-san.”
I slump my shoulders.
I think I am getting through to her a little, but there are still many things I
don’t understand about her.
I decide that there is nothing more I can say about this, so I start cleaning
my room so as not to bother Haruka-san as much as possible.
Then, just as I am finishing the dinner that she made for me, the intercom
rings.
Even editing is hard work. I can’t believe that I take away her precious
private time for me. I am beyond sorry.
“You don’t have to be so formal, I understand. The girl probably just barged
in on her own. You’re not the type to lie. I can tell from your work.”
Haruka-san doesn’t seem to mind much and takes off her sneakers, saying
in her usual calm tone.
“No, I’m more embarrassed by the way you call me Sensei on a daily basis,
so I’m fine with you.”
I answer immediately.
“Is that so? Well, let’s just wait and see. We’ll see if we can maintain a
moderate relationship, if there is any negative impact on our creative work,
and so on, we’ll assess the risk to you by the end of the month. In the
meantime, I will make a duplicate key. And what about that girl?”
Haruka-san, who has gone inside the house, looks left and right.
What? I’m not sure. As I recall, if she doesn’t attend today’s make-up
class, her promotion will be in jeopardy, right?
Even if today is a day off, which is Sunday, Konata has been out of school
until recently. She has to take a make-up class to make up for the missing
days from school.
“It’s bad.”
“I know. But you can’t replace your health, can you? Times being what they
are, I’m sure the school will understand if you tell them the
reason.──Hmmm. It doesn’t seem like you have a high fever……”
“Maybe if we put our foreheads together you might feel it more better?”
I don’t want to make any unnecessary contact with Konata which will cause
a strange misunderstanding under Haruka-san’s eyes.
“You don’t have to do that, I have a thermometer right here. Here you go.”
As long as I can draw my work, I can take a day off whenever I want… but
right now, I don’t have the luxury of taking all day off.
Konata says in a sudden barbed tone and turns away from the thermometer
“Ha. That’s not what I’m worried about, but I guess it can’t be helped.
…….I’m off.”
With a sigh, Konata turns on her heel and begins putting on her shoes at the
entrance.
“?? I don’t really know what’s going on but do your best. ──Ah, Haruka-
san, thank you very much for the thermometer.”
I throw the thermometer back to Haruka-san. I then look over at her back as
I put the kettle on the fire to boil water for instant coffee.
“I’ll call you during break time, make sure you reply within a minute.”
“That’s a bit harsh, I can’t promise you that. ──you’re seriously running
out of time.”
Konata looks a little grumpy and pushes the door open with more force.
When Konata leaves, I make a pot of coffee for both of us and go back into
the room.
Haruka-san is facing me, using a desk and chair she transported from her
own home.
“Thank you very much──come to think of it, those uniforms look like a
『 』
Sakuraba right? It’s a pretty good school, isn’t it?”
Haruka-san says admiringly and then sips the coffee she has received from
me.
Then she starts typing on her computer at the same blazing speed as ever.
Not just Haruka, but editors in general get emails at ridiculous hours and it
freaks me out. When on earth are they taking a break?
“Yes, it seems so. Their classes seem to be at a high level, and she’s a high
school student. I’d like her to concentrate on her schoolwork and not worry
about me so much.”
I put my coffee down beside me and face the drawing tablet.
But I think it is healthy for us to meet occasionally on our days off and talk
in cafés.
“It’s easy for boys to grow old and hard to learn, you know. But she’s a fan,
isn’t she, Konata-chan? It’s not hard to understand why she would be so
excited if she had the chance to get close to the manga artist of her dreams.
And girls of that age tend to be attracted to older men….”
“Heee, it’s a situation you often see in mangas, but it happens in real life
too.”
“Is that how it is…….Well, when I was in high school, all I did was doodle
in my notebook, so I can’t say I’m great when it comes to studying.”
“In your case, it must have been a useful student life, because it led to this
job.”
“………”
“………”
The idle chit-chat doesn’t last long, and soon silence descends.
I manage to get myself to move my pen but I can’t seem to make any
progress.
When I stop writing for a moment, I worry that Haruka-san might think I’m
slacking off.
What kind of manga artist can concentrate with their editor nearby?
On the other hand, blatantly going outside might seem like I’m avoiding
Haruka-san….
I scratch my head.
“Also, you’re interested in the content itself, but you’re not the type to
collect merchandise and stuff like that.”
“Yes, that’s right. Konata redecorated it for my sake but even though I love
my work, it’s too blatant…..”
I put my story together and say.
“Why don’t you tell her that? It’s your room, you could be more forceful.”
“Yes, but I don’t know much about fashion or interior design, so I can’t
offer any alternatives and I don’t want to disrespect her hospitality…..”
“Do you take all those flyers they give out on the street?”
When I see how many part-timers are ignored, I feel sorry for them and end
up taking it.
“Eeh? Are you sure? I’d really appreciate it. ─ ─ Ah, but if you
suddenly change everything, it my hurt Konata, so for now, if you can just
do something about the tapestries and curtains on the walls…’”
For the time being, I want to do something about the walls and curtains that
are frequently visible.
“Okay.”
“No, no, I don’t need it. I have plenty left over at home, so I’ll give it to
you. I’ll bring them to you later on when I go back to pick up some
documents.”
I don’t know what’s leftover, but I’m sure Haruka can coordinate it
correctly.
“I don’t mean to say this as an alternative, but, Sensei, don’t you watch
television?”
“Aah. Come to think of it, we don’t have one yet. Shall I buy one?”
“I would like to ask for your help if possible. I’d like to watch the terrestrial
broadcasts of the works I’m in charge of in real time as much as possible.”
“Of course it’s all right. Now…. 『Folia』 – I’ve just ordered it. It should
arrive tomorrow.”
I have met the author once before at a party organised by the publisher, but
for a subtle manga artist like me, he is like a person above the clouds, even
though we are the same manga artist. I envy him.
“Thank you.”
After that, the tense work continues, and I am able to take a breather in the
early afternoon when Haruka returns to pick up her belongings.
When I examine my progress over the lunch I have prepared, I find that my
work is surprisingly efficient, although it must have been slow in terms of
the speed I’ve felt.
The moment she bends over, her ample twin hills sway in a flutter. The
fabric of her thin T-shirt is not enough to support the weight, and her
cleavage is clearly visible through the slightly stretched collar.
“Oh, well, umm..I can put the food away in the fridge. And, but, are you
sure? I can’t make you make me dinner.”
I deliberately lower my gaze and lift the supermarket bag, sorting through
its contents, and ask.
“I don’t mind. It’s my turn to cook. So, before Konata-chan comes back,
let’s change the tapestry. It’s a bit annoying later to her meddling in…”
I know it’s not something to compare, but I can’t help but contrast it with
the clumsy side of me.
I wish I could be like Haruka-san, but I’m on the clumsy side, so that’s
going to be difficult.
“Well, Sensei, please peel off the tapestry. I’ll set it up.”
“Roger tha──!!?”
I am taken aback when I see what Haruka-san has in her hand.
“What’s wrong?”
“N-nothing…..”
‘Is this fashionable? Well, at least it’s less oppressive than a tapestry of my
manga characters.’
I replace the tapestry and the items Haruka-san brings, inwardly questioning
myself.
Thanks to the fact that I no longer have to feel the gaze of my own
characters, I am able to concentrate more and get more involved in my
work.
“Unn, I’m back but you know, I told you to reply in a minute on SNS,
didn’t I? Why didn’t you──Eeht? I mean, this is so lame! It’s !” ー
Konata comes into the room with her phone in one hand and then frowns
and spits the truth out.
It’s been a long time since I’ve been able to agree with Konata’s opinion
with such full force.
The thing that Haruka-san brought with her, was a lantern with the names of
places all over Japan printed on it.
They are the kind of thing that are sold as souvenirs at tourist attractions.
My room is so full of lanterns that I could travel anywhere in Japan just by
looking round the walls.
“Lame? Can’t you see the sibilance that oozes out of this thing?”
Haruka-san shrugs and looks at me like I’m a child who can’t taste beer.
“How old are you…..editor-san? Were you actually born in the Showa
period? Oba-chan?”
“No, no, no, it’s not trending and lame things are lame.”
The more Haruka-san makes the shy Konata speak out, the more lame the
lanterns seem to be.
But the tapestries from anime are no better than the local lanterns, aren’t
they?
As far as I’m concerned, I think they’re both equally lame but for mental
health reasons, I’d rather have the lantern, so I’ll leave it at that.
“──Well, it’s already five o’clock, isn’t it? It’s a bit early, but let’s get
ready for dinner.”
“Haa? Are you trying to get into the kitchen? That’s my place.”
It’s mine.
“But you’re having a hard time with your studies, aren’t you? It’s okay to
be pampered whenever you can. The main thing for a student is to study, at
least until you can afford it.”
I say this in a soothing way.
Haruka-san does not seem offended by Konata’s temper tantrums and heads
for the kitchen.
The table is laid out with hot rice and Chikuzenni, simmered Hijiki and
miso soup with deep-fried tofu.
I say, impressed.
“I just follow the recipe, so it’s not a big deal. Nevertheless, I’m glad it suits
your palate. ─Itadakimasu…….”
Haruka-san begins to eat in silence, with the same cool expression as usual.
‘Even so, Haruka-san likes Japanese style, doesn’t she? That’s a bit
unexpected.’
“I think I’ll manage to finish it by the end of the day. I’m sorry, I ended up
finishing it just before the deadline.”
“Is that so..well, the web magazine is just a trial publication and we have
some flexibility, so don’t worry about it.”
[TL:Green Tea]
Since Haruka-san and I are facing each other, I can’t help but often catch
sight of her figure.
Specifically, her collarbones, her bra that is transparent on her shirt, and the
sexy coughs and gasps that leak out at random times.
There must have been similar situations in previous meetings, so when did I
suddenly start to be aware of Haruka-san as a woman?
I chug my coffee and use the bitterness to drive away insolent thoughts
from my mind.
I work feverishly, pressed for time, and together with Haruka-san, I make
nekomanma with the leftover miso soup from yesterday and scratch it into
the bowl.
[TL: There’s two types of nekomanma : Rice with shavings & Rice with
soup]
I think the last TV that I had was a bit heavier when I bought it before but
now it’s much lighter.
Civilisation has advanced before I realise it.
“Thank you very much. I’m sorry I seemed to have urged you on.”
“─ – Just for the record, a trial run.…… 。……。Good. It’s working fine”
“Sensei, are you the type of person who can work in the presence of sound
and conversation?”
“With or without, it’s fine either way. Sometimes I work in a coffee shop
with music playing.”
“Sure, go ahead.”
BS huh?
Even I, who is not very familiar with historical dramas, know the famous
theme song.
“Mito Koumon is the first generation, after all. I think the withered, navel-
gazing Koumon-sama has more flavour and charm as a human being. From
the fourth generation onwards, I have the feeling that they are
misinterpreted. In particular, I think that the macho Koumon-sama is indeed
not very good.”
I bow my head.
I want to be able to talk about them but I can’t talk about things that I don’t
know.
“No, you are a manga artist, so you need to study manga, there’s no need to
be shy if you don’t know anything about period dramas. But personally, I
think period dramas contain the essence of entertainment that sells, so if
you have time, try watching them.”
I’ve seen a lot of people say that reading only manga and drawing manga
makes one shallow, and it’s certainly better to be exposed to a variety of
creative works.
『 』
“Yes, it is. Famous examples include Ko Zure O Okami which is a
popular web series, and also a family story with road movie elements. If
you have your sights set on a youth magazine in the future, I think it would
『 』
be worth watching Kenkaku Shoubai as it covers all the points that
『
tickle the self-esteem of middle-aged and older men. I think Hissatsu
』
Shigoto Ni is a good reference for creating a spy character. If you want to
『 』
draw yakuza stories, you must watch Shimizu no Jirocho , and if you
『
want to draw noir stories, you must watch Onihei Hankachou . 』
[TL: Yes, all of them are old drama series]
Yikes.
“…..I see. By the way, if it’s a romantic comedy, what should I refer to?”
[TL: Author uses Hallyu for Korean & Fuaryu for Chinese]
It is a rare expression that I have never seen before, and it makes me feel a
little better.
Eventually, the evil magistrate is defeated and the case is closed and another
period drama begins. I finish revising the piece when the assassin’s bandit is
drowned by his wife and the ending theme is played.
Haruka-san turns off the TV and stares at the LCD of the computer.
“Nice! Thank you very much. Please continue to help me with this work.”
I’m still a long way from being serialised in the magazine, but it looks like
I’ve crossed the first hurdle.
Chapter 10 - Day 10 of
cohabitation
I try cleaning the toilet and bath, taking a walk around the neighbourhood
but I can’t kill much time, so I return to my room.
In the end, I settle in front of my drawing tablet and I end up asking such an
obvious question.
I lay down, get up, and circle around like a dog waiting to be fed.
“Sensei, I understand that you are restless, but the result will be the same
whether you are in a hurry or not. So just sit tight and wait.”
“S,sorry..”
I bow my head.
I close the tablet, sit down on the floor and watch TV.
Even though I still don’t know if I will be able to serialise my work in this
magazine, I am very happy that my work will be published in an official
medium by a proper publisher.
I feel like pressing the [support] button for my own work, but it will be too
embarrassing to support myself, so I’ll be patient here.
『
“ I am a fan of your work! Your new work is very interesting! Your
previous work is also divine, but you have broken new ground by
challenging yourself to a new genre! The pictures have evolved even
further and become more emo, and it’s really great! The heroine and the
hero are bound together by a chain called fate! ” 』
‘It’s Konata, isn’t it? ……It’s like half acting, isn’t it?’
I’m convinced.
As if her post has been a priming call, the impressions start pouring in one
after another.
“I see. Even from a data point of view, I would say that this initial response
is superior to other readings.”
“Really?!”
I don’t know how to read a graph in detail but the line is clearly at a steeper
angle than the other recent lines of the new series.
『
‘ Saburo Kitajima Music Office , 』 『Nikko Edomura』,『Ocha no fuku
』
midorien ’
There are names of sites that clearly have nothing to do with manga.
‘Haruka-san is definitely not the type to slack off……. Maybe, like me, she
was so anxious about the response to the new series that she couldn’t get
down to work’
If so, I am happy.
Just because you’re the editor in charge doesn’t mean that everyone loves
your work.
I have corresponded with editors of other magazines, but in the end, the
only one I trust enough to entrust everything to is Haruka-san.
‘But then again, Haruka-san is a human being……’
I feel a little closer to her when I realise that she, who is usually so cool,
gets impatient and anxious as much as anyone else.
It is such an afternoon.
Chapter 11 - Day 11 of cohabitation
I have to have another meeting with Haruka before I can proceed with the
manuscript.
Since it is so long overdue, I cook for the first time in a while, as a way of
repaying my debt of gratitude to Haruka and Konata, who have always been
so kind to me.
“I’m back. Thank you for helping me gather the manuscripts today.”
“Thank you for your hard work…Oh, let me take your jacket.”
“I’m sorry.──Oo.”
Pop.
The moment Haruka-san touches her shirt to loosen the collar, the third
button suddenly pops off. And then, I see a glimpse of light blue underwear.
“……….”
Haruka-san says, covering the gap in her shirt with her left hand.
“No, no. So, uh, that, uh, this might be a reference for a romantic comedy
comic, so thank you? Like that?”
I say flustered.
Haruka-san says in such a calm tone, then turns her back and heads for the
bathroom.
“I-is that so…Are you okay with compliance and all that?”
I think it’s lovely to have that kind of aspect, being professional and all. Not
in a sexual way, but genuinely serious. Even if I were to attend such social
gatherings, I can only imagine myself being awkward.
“Yes, I’ll have some. Thank you for preparing dinner for me.”
After washing her hands, Haruka-san sits down at the dining table.
“Itadakimasu……. ──Oh,that’s right. Your work was well received by the
editor-in-chief. I can’t give you any assurances, but I think there is a good
chance that you will get a serialisation in this magazine if you make some
changes. So, let’s work hard together from now on.”
“Yes! I look forward to working with you. I know you must be tired today,
so let’s have another meeting tomorrow or later, as soon as possible.”
Unlike me, who has a day off, she must be tired. It won’t be right to force
her to work more.
“I understand. I’ll leave the details for tomorrow, but in the big areas, as far
as I can see from the data, it seems that there are quite a few dropouts on
pages 3-5. I was concerned about this myself, but I left it out because I
thought it was a part that Sensei was passionate about, but it seems to be a
tough one. I think we should cut down on the description of the cartoonist’s
slump a bit. I’d like to reduce the monologue and keep it to a maximum of
two pages, preferably one.”
“I see…”
I open my laptop and start taking notes.
Since this manga is straight from my heart, I guess the depression I felt
when I was in a slump came out with it.
I guess the anguish of a depressed manga artist is no fun for readers to read.
“One of the readers pointed out that there was not enough tension in the
story, despite the theme of confinement. This is open for discussion, but it
might be a good idea to create a new third character, or even a simple mob
character, and have him or her suddenly discover the confinement.”
“Fumu..I agree with the idea of creating ups and downs in the story, but I
don’t want to destroy the atmosphere of a world where it is just the two
of──”
“………”
She glances at us from time to time, but never blurts out anything about her
work, as she has done the day she first met Haruka-san.
Is it that she is getting used to Haruka-san or has she seen her work in
practice and recognized her ability?
Anyway, they are both important to me, I’m not saying that they should
continue to get along – but I will be happy if they can come to terms with
each other.
The moment when I feel the biggest difference from the time when I was
confined is during the early morning. Unlike those days where Konata and I
were living alone in a closed space where there was no day or night, with
the new addition of another person, a decent social life gathered together,
the morning is not as busy as it used to be.
“We don’t have any more toilet paper. I forgot the pace of consumption has
changed.”
“That place? Under the sink? But it tends to get damp there, so I moved it
to the storage space above the kitchen. I also put them in baskets because it
will be a shame to leave them bare.”
Haruka-san sips her green tea gracefully and looks diagonally to the right in
the kitchen.
Haruka-san is the earliest to get up, even though she went to bed late
compared to us.
Since I started living with her, I feel like I’m being shown the diligence of
[a respectable working adult who works for a large corporation]. Even
though my editor calls me [sensei] , this a manga artist is still wet behind
the ears.
“Why did this editor take the liberty of arranging things in the room – Aaa,
I’ve got to go. My first period teacher is very strict about tardiness.”
Konata takes a quick glance at her phone, swallows down the words she
was about to argue with Haruka-san and heads for the door.
I wave my hand.
“Oh, please wait a moment. I made a bento while preparing the regular
dishes, so please take it with you.”
Haruka-san stops Konata and runs to the refrigerator and pulls out a lunch
box.
『 』
“I know that Sakuraba doesn’t have a cafeteria, right? Bento from
convenience stores and bread from the purchasing department are not bad,
but since you are growing up, you should take meals with proper nutritional
balance in mind.”
“Huh? Is that so? It’s a famous school, so I thought it had a fancy school
cafeteria.”
“Of course, there are girls’ schools that put a lot of effort into their
cafeterias, but for this private school, girls are designed to suit families that
can prepare homemade lunches.”
“You know a lot about it.”
Many of the editors are highly educated, and that’s the way it is.
“I don’t know which high school you graduated from, but I have no
obligation to be taken care of by Editor-san.”
“If Konata could only get away from Sensei and go back to your parent’s
house, I wouldn’t bother interfering. But as long as you are within my sight,
I will follow my conscience and do what I think is right.”
Haruka-san says and pushes the lunch bag further toward Konata.
While looking away from Haruka-san, Konata grabs the lunch bag and
leaves the room.
Even when she is in a bad mood, she is unable to ignore the kindness of
others, which is a glimpse of the goodness and gentleness of her
upbringing.
“I wonder what kind of family she grew up in. Have you heard anything
about her background, Sensei?”
“I see. If they don’t care that their daughter leaves their own home, I can
infer that they are the kind of parent who is not qualified to be a guardian.
But I think they are equipped with at least a minimum sense of
responsibility to the extent that they pay the tuition, which is not cheap. If
that’s the case, it’s in her best interest to stay quiet and not make waves at
least until she is an adult – until she leaves for college. Even if she doesn’t
like it inwardly, I think it would be better for her to compromise where she
can and take advantage of it.”
“I see…..”
Just the other day, I was feeling guilty for seeing Haruka-san as the opposite
sex, but now that I’ve come full circle, I’m starting to see her as my mom.
“Nothing, even though I’m an adult, I’m still immature and childish
compared to the average member of society, that was what I thought.”
“I think Sensei is a decent person. You keep up with your deadlines and
keep your reports in order. I think it is rather an advantage for a manga
artist that he has not forgotten his boyish spirit.”
I feel that Haruka-san’s follow-up was written with the proviso 『for a
』
manga artist , but let’s just take it as a sincere compliment.
“Then it’s time to get the meeting started, shall we?”
“Please.”
After a light lunch of rice and side dishes that Haruka-san has prepared for
me, I go back to work, and the evening comes quickly.
“I’m home.”
Konata takes the lunch box out of her bag and puts it in the sink. She then
unbuttons her sleeves, rolls up her arms and begins to wash.
“I don’t know, Haruka seems busy. Maybe I’ll make store-bought food.”
Konata scoots her chin towards the front door. There is a bag from the
neighbourhood supermarket there.
“If it’s a menu I’m familiar with, it won’t take much time and I’ll be fine.”
Konata nods.
I make myself a cup of coffee and go back into the room. Right back to
work.
After a while, my dinner is ready and I pull the drawing tablet into a corner.
…… 。
…… 。
“……Maybe it doesn’t taste good?”
“Nnn? N-no, it’s delicious. I’ve just been doing some thinking. I’m stuck on
a manuscript.”
When I eat, when I go to the toilet, when I take a bath, I always have work
in the back of my mind.
Haruka-san asks.
“I just can’t seem to keep the dating scenes realistic. I’ve had a few
comments here and there from readers that the dates are too old-fashioned
and not realistic, so I’m trying to do something about that.”
The dating scene is an event that did not exist in the actual confinement but
was added at Haruka-san’s request.
Outside dating. The hero has plenty of chances to be free physically but still
he cannot escape.
“Ah, that part huh…Indeed, there were some opinions like that, but as I
mentioned during the meeting, I don’t think it requires such significant
changes that must be made.”
“I understand, but I don’t want to cut corners if I can help it. However, I’m
ashamed to say that I have very little experience in romance, so I don’t have
a lot to draw from. On the other hand, I think it’s also a bit cliché to easily
cover it up with trendy goods and food.”
“I see… If you’re that particular about it, I think as your assigned editor, I
should come up with some ideas. Unfortunately, I have led a life that has
been devoid of such alluring events, so nothing comes to mind immediately.
Give me a moment to research and gather some materials, please.”
Haruka-san says apologetically.
Haruka-san and I are all in trouble, and suddenly Konata sighs and mutters.
“Eeh?”
“No, I’ve never been on a date either, so I don’t really have any good ideas
right now.”
I see, so Konata has never been on a date either? I’m relieved – not.
“…….”
Konata’s cheeks turn a shade of red and she gives a small nod.
“It’s for the sake of your manga, so it’s only natural. You don’t need to
thank me for something like this.”
I’ve been busy lately and with Haruka’s eyes on me, I haven’t had much
time to get to know her.
“Fufu, you’re welcome. I’ll see you tomorrow after school, then. I’m sure
the……editor-san won’t have a problem with this story, right?”
“Good. Then I guess you’ll be staying at home alone and lonely tomorrow
night.”
“…you’re a wimp.”
There’s no way I’d wear anime characters or chuuni clothes but at the same
time I have no fashionable clothes for an outing.
In the end, I decide to wear the mass-market clothes I’d recently bought, but
I wonder if it is okay to dress in such a dowdy way.
“Isn’t that a part of going on a date? In the first place, consulting another
woman about what to wear on a date is…..”
I mumble in determination.
Rather than being nervous about being dressed in strange and unfamiliar
clothes, it is better to concentrate on the date, even if the outfit is out of
place.
I walk past the main gate of Sakuraba and head towards the park nearby.
In the standard manga book situation, we would probably meet at the school
gate. However, a security guard is stationed in front of the school gate in
Sakuraba, so we may be treated as suspicious.
‘Oh, by the way, what should I do about the date course? It was a sudden
decision, so I hadn’t thought of anything……’
『
I quickly take out my phone and look up date course standard and』
『 』
high school girl dating , but the result is a thin summary websites or
dubious pornographic websites.
In the meantime, the sound of a chime echoes in the distance. Students who
are leaving school crossed the Chirahora Park.
Right now, she’s hiding behind a tree at the edge of the park, pointing the
camera at us.
“Is that so? Then can we go with the date plan I had in mind?”
“O-of course.”
‘It’s a bit pathetic, isn’t it? I’m a man and I’m older than her, and she is
taking the lead. ──No, but I guess it’s no longer the era that guys should
take the lead.’
We take each stop and head out to the busiest area in the neighbourhood.
Compared to before, there are more people around, but it’s not crowded to
the extent of being overly crowded.
When I think of a date, I have the image of hanging out and window
shopping, but apparently, Konata has a clear target point.
Eventually, the lift comes down.
“What floor?”
I say, settling into a spot in front of the button, trying to look as good as
possible.
“Fifth floor.”
“OK”
Soon the doors close and the lift rises without stopping, sending us to the
floor we want to go to.
“This way.”
“Of course. After all, every time a new book comes out, he makes an
exhilarating tweet.”
Speaking of how much I love it, even in the worst times when I was in a
slump and didn’t even want to read mangas, I love it so much that I buy the
new issue on the day it goes on sale.
As expected, I’ve been so busy with my own manga in the last few months
that I haven’t been able to follow up on events.
“Here’s a pamphlet!”
At the entrance, an information worker offers me a pamphlet.
“I’ll take it. Where can I buy tickets for the event?”
I look left and right for a payment window, but I don’t see one.
“No, it’s free. It was decided by the author of the book, who said, 『Maris
would never charge money at a time like this, when everyone is
』
depressed .”
“I see! That’s what I’d expect from Miro Sensei! ──Look, since we’re
here, let’s get a pamphlet from him too!……Aree?”
Then I look to the side, but before I know it, Konata is gone.
The first thing that drew my attention was Miro sensei’s handwritten
manuscripts lined up in a glass case.
This script, too, is amazing; a fictional language created from scratch for his
work.
『 』
The level of elaboration is similar to Tolkien’s Lord of the Rings and
not many authors, even in the world of mangas, have created a worldview
to this extent.
Konata suddenly inserts her face into the space between me and the glass
case.
『 』
Before ’Foria having a female protagonist in a shonen magazine was
considered a huge challenge. Moreover, setting the story in an Oriental-
inspired fantasy world rather than a Western one was commercially
『 』
avoided. However, disregarding such handicaps, ’Foria showcased
overwhelming quality and became a massive hit, selling like crazy.
I think that even if I came up with an idea, if the editor in charge was a bit
against it, I would have pulled it back immediately.
I once asked Haruka-san about this, but she said she didn’t know much
about it, because she wasn’t the editor who started the work, she took over
halfway through.
“………”
Konata listens intently to what I say and occasionally nods in a ministerial
way.
A fast-talking manga book nerd is the worst move I can make on a date.
“Well, I can say I like it, but not as much as your mangas.”
『 』
My work has lost out to Foria in the eyes of the public, but I guess it’s
thanks to readers like her that I’m somehow able to continue as a manga
artist.
Afterwards, I enjoy visiting the original exhibition and enter the adjacent
『
collaboration café of Foria . 』
They’re well prepared, but there’s a panel of menus set up in front of the
restaurant and on the table.
With a persistent and strong pen pressure, it’s being twisted round and
round, emanating an intimidating silent pressure that leaves no room for
objections. It gives off an atmosphere where requesting anything else is
simply not allowed.
“Ah, um, excuse-me. I’d like a glass of 『Maris and Halim’s Lovey-Dovey
』
Hermes Rod Juice , please.”
The Hermes rod is a magic wand in the shape of two intertwined snakes.
『 』
In the Maris and Halim’s Lovey-Dovey Hermes Rod Juice a tropical-
like juice is served with a straw designed to resemble the Hermes Rod.
Each snake head acts as a drinking spout. As the name suggests, it is a
menu item exclusively crafted for couples, offering a 120% romantic
experience.
It’s the kind where two people share a drink and sip nectar while staring at
each other.
It may be a beautiful page of youth for two high school students, but as an
adult, I can’t help but feel a sense of embarrassment.
“Okay. Would you like to borrow a Maris doll for the shoot?”
“Huh? Uh, yes? For a photoshoot? Well, I’m actually here with
someone.”
“Yes. Aah, no, but this is for research, I have nothing to hide.”
I look in front.
‘Huh? Am I starting to look like one of those people who pretend to have
company even though they’re alone?’
I can;t find Konata, so I have no choice but to sit down at a suitable table.
As if at the right moment, Konata appears out of nowhere and sits down in
the chair in front of me.
“I see.”
Konata says this and puts her mouth on one end of the straw – the head of
the snake on the right.
“Right. Well, then, let’s have a drink.”
Konata’s forehead and mine are so close together that they seem to be
sticking.
If I had been an active high school student, I would have been able to
honestly say it was the latter but as an adult, my thoughts are subject to all
sorts of unnecessary brakes.
I feel like a frog being stared at by a snake and nervous in a different way, I
hurriedly gulp down my drink, using my lung capacity to the maximum.
I take my mouth off the straw and wipe my mouth with a nearby paper
napkin.
“Not enough.”
“What?”
“…That’s right. If those two don’t fall victim to the curse there, the story
will come to an end.”
When we come to a collaboration café, it’s good manners to leave my
shame behind and immerse myself in its worldview.
“Right?──Nnn.”
Konata puts the end of the straw in her mouth and urges me to do the same.
The straw, which has been soaked in the drink and wet, moderately
moistens her lips, making them glistening and glossy.
『 』
‘To someone who doesn’t know Foria , it would look like a common
pokie game at a party or something…..’
With that thought in the corner of my head, I nibble on the two snakes.
Naturally, one of the two snakes is the one that I just put my mouth on……
‘Oh, is this an indirect kiss? …No, no, no. What am I thinking? Remember
the scene from the original work. It wasn’t such a carefree situation!’
Maris is pushed into a situation where she must bear the curse of two
snakes to suppress the rampaging Hermes’ Staff. If left as it is, she would
die. However, her partner, Halim, rushes to her side and consumes one of
the snakes. As a result, the curse is dispersed and Maris manages to survive.
The relationship between Maris and Halim was ambiguous, whether they
were friends or lovers. However, through the profound curse they share,
which they will carry with them for the rest of their lives, they come to
realise paradoxically that they loved each other and it was an important
scene to watch.
In other words, what I was saying earlier is that if we don’t fully consume
this snake’s straw, it would be a disappointment to the fans of the original
work.
Sakusaku sakusaku.
‘Wh-what do I do when we reach the end? Should I just stop at the right
moment? But in the original story, it’s a bad idea to stop halfway through.’
While I am hesitating to stop eating, Konata’s lips are coming closer and
closer to mine.
I shudder down my spine, grab it with my left hand, and open it.
『
“ Lip-to-lip contact is treated as lewd behaviour and may be against the
』
law. ”
“If we don’t both finish the drink at the same time, the world will end…”
Konata puts the cookie she is about to eat on the palm of her hand and
mutters in frustration.
“HaHaHa, well, we’re not heroes like Maris and Halim. We’re just not
equipped to take on a curse that will determine the fate of the world.”
Konata nods a little, throws the cookie into her mouth and chews it to bits.
“Next, we’ll visit the art supply store on the third floor, and then we’ll go
around Jun*o Bookstore. For dinner, we’ll have the all-you-can-eat at
Kenta*o.”
What if the date is for the both of us, but we only go to places where only I
can enjoy myself?
“No, I appreciate that you’ve put thought into planning a date route that I
can enjoy. I’m truly grateful and happy about it. However, let’s also go to
the places you want to visit. It’s a date for both of us, right?”
“It’s not a problem. Your desired places are my desired places as well.”
“In that case, please tell me more about the places you want to go and
things you want to try. It seems like you know a lot about me, but I also
want to know more about you just as much.”
。 。 。
“…… …… …… Okay”
Konata, who swims her gaze from side to side, is silent for a moment and
then nods deeply.
I can’t see her mouth because she’s wearing a mask, but her eyes are
smiling.
“Unn..”
Konata gets up and stands quickly beside me, folding her arms naturally.
“Ar-aren’t you a bit too close?”
“……Ouu”
We exit the building onto a small, fashionable boulevard lined with beauty
salons and cafés.
“I-It’s not for my girlfriend, but I still want to give her a present.”
Thanks to Konata, I’ve been able to draw manga again, and I also got to see
『 』
the original exhibition of Foria . I can at least thank her in this way.
The shopkeeper is a bit creeped out by me, but I do my best to pick out
clothes that look good on Konata and buy them.
“Thank you.”
“Well, I’ve been indebted to you, you know. ──By the way, Konata hasn’t
been around lately. Can it be that you’re not feeling well? In that case, you
don’t have to push yourself.”
When Konata disappeared like this so many times, I really start to worry.
As we stroll through the city, feeling a slight indigestion, the phone vibrate
once again.
『
“ According to regulations, minors are subject to apprehension if they are
found loitering in the downtown area after 11 PM. It is currently 9:30 PM,
so considering travel time, we should probably start heading back with
some leeway… ” 』
“Looks like it’s almost time for us to go. Let’s finish up at the next shop.”
“──Then, I want to go to the store located just around the corner in that
alley. I like it, and I think you’ll like it too.”
“Okay.”
It is a bookshop, flanked on either side by bars.
In the case of Comiket, they are the kind of reference books that are
distributed on the first day, not the third day.
“Yes. They have some interesting books that you can’t buy online.”
『
Konata mutters as she covers her own face with a book titled How to
Make an Aphrodisiac . 』
『
‘ Solomon’s Book of Spells , 』 『The Technique of the Roman
』
Gladiators …..’
When I see a title that tickles my kitchen fancy, I end up picking it up.
I’m excited, and I’m absorbed in rummaging through the various shelves.
It take a little while for me to realise that the pen name I heard was actually
my own, after not hearing it for a long time.
I reflexively bow.
I was interviewed when it was made into an anime, so if someone google it,
they’ll find an image of my face, but if they’re not interested, they probably
won’t know about it.
“Shaking hands──that’s a no-no in this day and age. Um, can I ask you to
sign my notebook?”
Soon after, these people from the manga research club came and are excited
to see me.
I sign all of their notebooks and answer their questions, as best I can.
To be honest, half of them don’t seem to have read my comics, but, well,
this is a good opportunity to get them interested.
“Well, I’ve got someone waiting who’s coming with me, so it’s about time.”
Even if they are my fans, I can’t let them take up any more of my precious
date time with this guy.
“Oh, I’m sorry. I didn’t realise you’re with a companion. I thought you were
alone.”
“Eeh….”
I look around.
Sure, it’s possible to explain it away once or twice by saying she went to the
bathroom, but is it really possible for her to completely disappear only
when there are other people around?
‘No, no, no. But it’s really unlikely, right? Haruka-san can see me, and she
even messages me like this.’
Even though we live in an era of gender equality, more than 90% of manga
editors in shounen magazines are men.
In the midst of all this, my editor is a beautiful young woman. And how is it
possible that she has such a good personality that she would be so kind to
such a shabby mangaka?
It’s a grade down from arm-holding and hand-holding, maybe she feels
guilty for leaving me alone.
“Just to confirm, the reason you disappeared today when I was talking to
someone was because you were shy?”
Konata kicks a pebble on the asphalt with the tip of her shoe and mutters.
“I see. You don’t have to push yourself, but please spare me the
disappearing act without saying a word or making your presence unknown.
It’s worrisome in many ways. When you don’t feel like talking, at least give
me a signal, like tugging on my sleeve or something.”
I’m glad nothing happened this time, but I can’t help but feel uneasy when I
imagine Konata getting involved in an accident.
“Sorry.”
“No, I just hope you understand. – I mean, are you okay with your regular
shopping? A few days ago, you bought groceries at the supermarket, right?
『
They would have asked you things like, Do you need a bag? or Do』 『
』
you have a loyalty card? at the checkout, wouldn’t they?”
“Because, you know, supermarkets have self-checkouts.”
“Haircuts?”
『 』
“I look up at hairdressers and gave a look don’t talk to me . I just show
them a random image of a model and they do a nice job.”
『
“Seriously? In manga, if you say something like Show me a photo of the
』
model and cut it exactly like that the usual punchline is that it doesn’t suit
you and you end up disappointed. But in your case, since you’re good-
looking, does that actually work normally…?”
“Disappointed?”
“Disappointed in what?”
“I’m not disappointed, but I think for your future, you should be able to talk
to more people.”
“──But to be honest, part of me is a little happy to think that I’m the only
one who Konata talks to.”
I won’t know that until I draw a comic book from now on.
Chapter 14 - Day 14 of
cohabitation
I’m not an athletic person and I am still tired from walking around the city
for a bit yesterday.
I eat the brunch Haruka-san has left for me and briefly summarise the plot
of the improvement plan based on the date interview with Konata on a
single A4 sheet. I submitted it to Haruka-san, who is at work, via email.
She changes from her school uniform into the clothes I bought at the shop
yesterday, and shows them off.
I compliment her on how good she looks in it and we have a relaxed time,
doing what we can while talking about the books we bought yesterday.
When the evening time signal rings, we start preparing dinner.
“Sorry to keep you waiting. If you don’t mind, may I explain the item while
I eat?”
“Aa, yes. I’m totally fine, but you should at least take your time to eat……”
Haruka-san carries the cold pepper steak into the room without even heating
it up and begins to eat it.
“So, I’m thinking of portraying the date scenes in a way where the heroine
takes the lead and keeps the protagonist on their toes… It seems that lately
there is a demand for heroines who lead and spoil the main character.”
I sit down opposite her and tell her, based on the research I had with Konata
yesterday, and supplementing the information I submitted.
“Hmm…I see. It’s true that heroines with a maternal instinct who spoil the
protagonist are popular, but that doesn’t mean we should neglect the
protagonist’s independence. Shonen magazines are constructed with
somewhat conservative values, so I think it will be best to stick to a classic
development where the protagonist wholeheartedly escorts the heroine
without introducing any unnecessary sex appeal. If the protagonist is
dominated both at home and outside, it becomes too predictable of a
storyline.”
“I see. I think you’re right but if we follow that approach, it may give the
impression that the protagonist is being mentally controlled by the heroine.”
“In that case, it won’t hold up as it is. Therefore, it may be more effective to
initially create the appearance that the protagonist is leading, but reveal at
the end that it is all orchestrated by the heroine through manipulation and
coercion. This way, we can incorporate a sense of surprise and express the
heroine’s madness.”
Konata next to me says in a more forceful tone, and places a cup of barley
tea on the table as if to slam it down.
She’s been quiet lately, why has she suddenly started to rebel so much?
“Hmm. Maybe Konata-chan would do that, but the character in this manga
is not Konata-chan, even if she is modelled on Konata-chan. If the manga
were to develop as Konata-chan said, the heroine’s character would be
diluted, both as a horror and romantic comedy. Therefore, I reject it.”
“Isn’t it the job of an editor to respect the intentions of the mangaka? From
what I’ve seen, editor-san never seems to support his ideas and doesn’t
show any willingness to let him draw whatever he likes.”
“But in the end, he’s at the mercy of editor-san. Taking advantage of his
good nature…──”
“Konata. I’m not sure what you’re talking about but this meeting is between
me and Haruka-san.”
I have a feeling that if I leave her alone any longer, she is going to go on
one hell of a rant.
“But…..”
“Konata. You may be my biggest fan. But even so, you’re still just a fan. If
I were to allow myself to go beyond that boundary, I wouldn’t be able to
consider myself a professional mangaka anymore.”
“……….”
Konata remains silent, but it’s evident from the protruding lips even through
the mask that she is dissatisfied.
Haruka-san says so, takes the plate she has finished eating and leaves the
room.
“So I’m no longer of any use to you now that you’ve got a woman out there
who cooks better than me, is more dexterous and knows more about comic
books than I do?”
“Don’t say things that don’t make sense. Haruka-san is not a replacement
for you, and you are not a replacement for Haruka-san. That’s obvious,
isn’t it?”
“Then…..why are you at the mercy of your editor? It’s your work. It’s not
the editor’s.”
『 』
“…Well, yeah, if you’re just suddenly told I trust you without any
context, it’s hard to understand. ──Haaa… It’s a story that’s embarrassing
for me, so I didn’t want to tell anyone, but would you listen? It might end
up being a boring monologue about myself, though.”
“I want to hear.”
* * *
The first one I brought in was, like many aspiring manga artists, to a certain
label that was best known for its shounen magazines.
The glasses-wearing, slightly overweight editor arrived thirty minutes late
for our meeting. He glanced through my manga and immediately said,
『 The art and story have reached the minimum level expected of a
professional, but it lacks individuality and is mediocre, we have high
』
standards here .
I was a bit bummed at the time, but not so much that I was depressed yet.
To be honest, except for the first one, it was difficult to distinguish the
quality among the various publishing labels, so I just went from one to
another based on who agreed to meet with me.
『
And then, he left behind the words, It’s neither good nor bad. It feels like
a typical manga drawn by someone who just reads manga. I don’t sense the
author’s background, so as someone looking for potential in newcomers, it’s
』
tough to consider adopting this. He then said, [My lunch break is over]
and left.
I didn’t remember the face of the editor from the third company because the
meeting time was too short. However, I still vividly remember being told,
『 We don’t need manga that simply follow the trends without any
substance.』
And by the time the fourth editor came and cancelled the appointment, I
had lost all confidence.
All the editors turned me down for the same reason, and I was devastated
that it was impossible for someone like me to become a professional
mangaka.
Haruka-san, who spent about five times longer reading the manuscript than
other editors, finally spoke.
“Thank you very much. To cut to the chase, I believe you have something
special..”
“Seriously!?”
“Um, when you [submit] it, it means it’s your most confident work, right?
Why are you surprised?”
“N–no, you’re right, but I’ve been told by editors at other publishers that I
have no personality, that I’m not growing, that I’m just following the top
trends and so on, and I’ve lost confidence.”
“This manga isn’t just a haphazard depiction of a typical story, right? It’s
just that the theme you wanted to portray had already been overused. The
mediocrity of the art is a result of aligning with the world setting, but it
doesn’t mean you can’t draw anything else, right? The draughtsmanship is
done properly, and I don’t think you took shortcuts with these designs.
Perhaps you were too skillful, and as a result, it was seen as a generic
copy?”
“I, I’m not sure if I’m skillful, but it’s not like I’m fixated only on this
genre. There are various things I want to draw. The story may not be well-
developed, but when it comes to character designs, there’s this one, and this
one too!”
I took out a sketchbook from my bag and appealed to Haruka-san.
When I saw her enveloping, gentle smile, I decided to follow her for the
rest of my life.
But in the end, my debut novel, which was based on that manuscript, didn’t
sell so well that I laughed.
Actually, I heard from other people that my debut work was the first project
for Haruka-san since joining the company, and I deeply regretted tarnishing
her career. I vowed to throw away my pride and attachments and draw a
work that would sell no matter what.
The debut work that I drew the way I wanted was not appreciated. So for
my next work, I suppressed my own opinions as much as possible and fully
embraced Haruka-san’s suggestions. I had no choice but to rely on what she
praised as my [honesty] and give it a try.
It wasn’t a complete failure, but the sales weren’t enough to sustain it for a
long time and I could only continue up to the third volume.”
* * *
“I particularly enjoy your first and third works where you express yourself
strongly.”
“….Still, I want you to paint what you want to paint, however you want to
paint it.”
“I’m really happy to have fans who say that, but I’m a full-time mangaka. I
can’t make a living unless I sell a certain amount.”
In fact, this is not the first time I have received this kind of feedback.
It’s a strange thing about comics, the more unsuccessful a comic is, the
more it is supported by a strong fanbase.
“Then I’ll feed you.”
“If that’s the case, then I’m not a manga artist, but just a freeloader. Will
you continue to be a fan of mine, even though I’m no longer a manga artist
but just a freeloader?”
“…That’s.”
“Anyway, it’s great that you provide your honest opinions as a fan of my
work. In fact, I welcome it. However, when it comes to commercial
serialization, I will listen to what Haruka-san says. Not for Haruka-san’s
sake, but for my own sake, this is something I cannot compromise on.
Understand?”
“──Okay.”
From the start, it is more like fine-tuning rather than fundamental revisions
to the overall work. And the concerns I had about the dating scenes are
resolved through firsthand experience during my research. I can understand
the emotions people feel when going on a date, not just intellectually but
also through a sense of intuition. Additionally, thanks to the reference
materials that Haruka-san provides, I am able to visualise the scenes more
easily.
Looking at her, I feel as if I can’t leave her alone like a puppy that has been
abandoned.
‘But I can’t let her be directly involved in the serialisation project… No,
wait. Maybe I don’t have to get involved?’
“Ummm, Haruka-san.”
In order to realise the idea that suddenly struck me, I call Haruka-san.
“What is it?”
“Yes, it is. We have a deadline in two weeks’ time, but I think we have
roughly a week to play around with.”
Haruka-san nods.
“If that’s the case, I have a suggestion. How about publishing an [alternate
『
route] of the story titled A Manga Artist Kidnapped by an Unknown
』
High School Girl on my social media as a hobby project, completely
separate from the commercial serialisation? Would it be okay?”
“An alternate route, huh… I see. Indeed, in recent times, web marketing is
crucial for manga as well. If you have the capacity, I would appreciate it if
you could take on that project. Thank you very much.”
“Thank you for your permission. Then I’ll draw it in my spare time from
work.”
I say this and glance at Konata, but she doesn’t seem to have noticed my
intention.
“Oh, but I’m a little worried. Even though it’s a hobby, it’s something that
will be shown to everyone, so I wish I had someone to seek advice from.
But I can’t exactly consult with Haruka-san about non-work matters. Is
there anyone out there, someone like a devoted fan of mine, perhaps?”
Konata sits up and throws herself in front of me, acting like an expert karuta
player.
“I see. That’s a relief. I feel reassured knowing that a dedicated fan like you
will provide advice.”
“Ouu. I’ll do my best. But only to the extent that it doesn’t interfere with
your schoolwork, okay?”
“Okay……And Editor-san.”
Konata stands up there, puts her hands on her hips and glares at Haruka.
“What is it?”
“Compete?”
“If his manga, which I supervised, gets 10,000 likes on social media, I want
him to let me draw it a little more as he likes.”
“I know. I’m not necessarily asking for specific changes to the content of
the serialisation. I just want you to recognize that your own uniqueness is
even more wonderful than you think, both from the perspective of the editor
and from your own perspective.”
Konata says pleadingly.
“Fine.”
I ask her.
“Of course. There’s no real harm in the conditions Konata-chan set out and
even if it’s not your main job, you should still have a target.”
“Um, well, should we get on with it and come up with a concept for the
web version?”
I ask Konata.
In the end, it is agreed that I will draw the manuscript for the main
serialisation during the day and work on the web version after Konata
comes home from school.
“I want a reason why the high school girl becomes obsessed with the manga
artist. Just being a fan seems a bit weak to lead to confinement. I think there
should be something special that sets her apart from other fans.”
Night.
『 』
“Reincarnation. It’s a classic, not to mention Phoenix . Personally, I
like it because it has a distinct Japanese feel, with a sense of impermanence
and transience. There’s a lingering quality to it.”
“Yes. If it’s a reincarnation thing, it’s all the rage these days and I think it’s
going to be popular.”
“Fu…..”
“What”
“Like what?”
“To emphasise the horror elements, don’t you think there’s a lack of
『 』
enemies as it is now?”
“Not enough enemies? The main character’s enemies are the high school
girls who lock him up, right?”
“No, the viewpoint character in this story is the hero, so he don’t realise
until the middle of the story that the heroine is locking him up to save him”’
“Even if it is…..isn’t it standard in battle stories that after facing one enemy,
new and stronger enemies appear one after another?”
“Well, yeah, that could work. So, I guess it would be like this. At first, the
protagonist thinks the heroine is the enemy, but then realises that she is
actually an ally, while being attacked by various other people.”
“That’s right. For example, a former classmates who still contact him
regularly even though it’s been more than five years since they graduated
from high school, the woman at the flower shop who persistently sends him
message cards even though he only bought a bouquet of flowers once two
years ago for a drawing, the waitress at Kentucky’s who remembers this
manga artist’s favourite part and serves him every time he goes there. The
waitress, the editor and all the women around this mangaka, except the
heroine, are enemies.”
『
“You mean like The Truman Show? 』 The whole thing was a set-up? It
could work as a horror story.”
“Right? The protagonist is chosen by a six-dimensional life form as a
messianic figure to elevate humanity to higher dimensions. The opposing
Baal faction, wanting to hinder this, sets honey traps to strengthen the
chains of the physical body. However, the heroine is connected by fate,
capable of guiding the protagonist with true love, and──…”
Well, it seems that some excessive elements will need to be cut, but the
general direction seems to align with what Konata is saying… I can’t say
for certain, but the benefit of posting the manga on SNS is that I can easily
give it a try. If it doesn’t work out, I can always take it down. So, for now,
why not give it a shot and see how it goes?
Chapter 17 - Day 17 of
cohabitation
Well, since jumping right into the main story is a bit daunting, I decide to
work on a digest version of the story that captures the atmosphere I
mentioned yesterday. It’s a short manga, about two pages long, crafted in
the style of a typical movie trailer.
I immediately upload the manga to social networking sites with the words
『 』
experimenting .
『
“ I’m slightly concerned about his mental state. ” 』
『
“ I think he might like Tump or something like that. 』”
[TL: I don’t know what to make of ト○ンプ]
Many commented that they are more puzzled than disapproving of it.
“──so it doesn’t look like it’s a good idea to go with the concept as it is.”
“Is that so. ──sorry. To be honest, I don’t really know much about social
networking trends and stuff.”
“Okay. I’ll study what comics are popular on……social networking sites,
just give me a minute.”
“Sensei, it seems that your conversation over there has finished. May I go
back now?”
“Oh, yes. Of course. Work takes priority, don’t worry about us and feel free
to come in anytime.”
“No, checking the manuscript didn’t take up much time. As for the
manuscript, what you submitted is almost okay. I’ve made some comments
directly on the manuscript regarding the finer details, so if you can take a
look at those, it will be great.”
“……….”
It is the kind of scene that, in a manga, will make you want to add the sound
『
effect Gununu….. . 』
Immediately, Konata starts studying the tips for creating manga that go viral
on social media, putting her words into action.
She has been fiddling with her phone with a piece of bread in her hand
since morning, and after coming home from school, she has been staring at
social networking sites, taking notes on a loose-leaf paper.
Konata glances at her phone and tilts her head every so often.
“What’s wrong?”
“I’ve been comparing some of the more buzz-worthy mangas with some of
the less buzz-worthy ones, and there’s one that I just can’t agree with.”
“Well, let me see it.”
I turn my body to the side and turn to face Konata sitting next to me.
I can’t give any advice when it comes to fashion or study, but I am indeed
confident when it comes to mangas.
“I’ll start with this one. The drawings are beautiful, and the story has a clear
beginning and end.”
I nod my head as I flip through the pages. The subtle and delicate moments
of excitement that one feels in everyday encounters with the opposite sex
are well expressed.
“Unlike the previous one, the artwork is mediocre, and the ending is abrupt.
Yet, this one is overwhelmingly going viral. Why is that?”
“Well, indeed, the drawing itself is more precise than the previous one. But
in this one, the colouring is skillfully done… As for the story, it deliberately
leaves out certain details, allowing the readers to use their imagination to
fill in the gaps.”
Well, in the first place, the popularity of erotic content doesn’t necessarily
correlate with the skill of the artwork. Even if the drawing is slightly off, it
can be compensated by the colouring. Moreover, there’s often a focus on
the situation and ideas rather than just the art itself.
“But wouldn’t the average reader not understand those details like colouring
techniques or technical aspects? And when it comes to the story, shouldn’t
manga that focus on clarity and provide detailed explanations be more
popular these days?”
“Well, that may be true for general comics, but in this case it’s a special
case……”
“I think so.”
“I understand why there’s a buzz about it. But his comics can be read by a
lot of people without resorting to such easy means.”
“I agree with you on that point. Eroticism is strong, but there is also a fixed
upper limit to sales, so I want Sensei to push through to even greater
heights. That’s the first time we’ve ever agreed on something.”
“If it has come to this, then let’s stick with it until the end.”
Chapter 19 - Day 19 of
cohabitation
“AruAruNeta?”
Judging from how she approached me with great vigour upon returning, it
seems she has quite a bit of confidence.
“Yes. AruAruNeta. It’s popular on video sites and social networking sites,
right?”
『 』
“Indeed, AruAruNeta’s mangaka jokes have a reliable popularity. Will
you be including it in your work as well?”
“According to the survey results, it is found that there are too many rivals in
『 』
the MangakaAruAru genre. Manga artists who are struggling for
『 』
material tend to resort to MangakaAruAru as a quick solution, right?”
It’s true that they tend to draw it because it doesn’t require any research and
it’s popular with editors and peers in the inner circle.
“…My ears hurt. What are you going to make it into then?”
‘Konata, that ‘s something you may think but shouldn’t say out loud.’
“Well, in order to make the characters realistic and relatable, it might not be
『
a bad idea to include some high school girl stuff .”』
“Right? So I’ve compiled the certain stories I’ve thought of into that report,
so feel free to use them.”
『
“ High school girls’ AruAru Part 1: They tend to worry about their
』
fortune-telling. ”
『They tend to investigate the identity of the fortune-teller when the result
is unfavourable. And they tend to believe in curses.』
『
“ High school girls’ AruAru Part 2: High school girls tend to cause traffic
jams with their chauffeured Benzes in front of the school gate.
』
Occasionally, the sight of a Prius is cute and comforting. ”
『They tend to become curious about every aspect of him and collect things
like his hair or used tissues.』
‘No, no, this one’s crazy too, isn’t it? Come to think of it, when I was locked
up, Konata used to stuff my hair in a plastic bag with a zip.’
After that, this girl’s 『High school girls’ AruAru』 goes on until about 20
of them.
I personally don’t feel that any of them really fit, but since I have no
knowledge of the life of a high school girl, maybe this is how it actually is.
『Experiment #2: High School Girl’s AruAru Tropes. Might delete soon.』
『
“ Is this really a high school girl’s AruAru……? 』”
『
“ There was a buzz for a while about an essay comic about being a
』
psycho, wasn’t there? Is it a variant of that? ”
『
“ If an Ojou-sama of a high school girl stalker is real, I can dream. 』”
『
“ So, there is a possibility that Omana Sensei is a black-haired, long-
』
haired beautiful high school girl? ”
『 』
“ But in reality, (*attachment of video clippings of my interview) ”
『
“ That’s because Omona-sensei is shy and didn’t want their face to be
exposed to the public, so Omona-sensei hired a substitute who looks similar
』
to take their place. ”
『 』
“ Kouudonajyouhousen. ”
『
“ If the author is really a high school girl, then she’s completely
』
inexperienced in life. ”
It seems that while it may work as a four-panel comic, it’s not well-received
『 』
as an AruAru joke.
I should delete this comment soon, as it may hurt Konata’s feelings since it
was she who created it.
Soon after, our food is ready and we sit down at the table.
Today, it’s meat and potatoes. It looks delicious. The fact that the menu is
slightly Japanese is probably in response to Haruka-san.
『
And from Haruka-san, I receive a message saying, I’m not sure if I can
come back tonight, so please don’t worry about me and go to sleep. 』
“Aaa. I tried turning Konata’s ideas into a four-panel comic and uploaded
them, but it seems to be somewhat underwhelming. Even though they’re all
referred to as [high school girls] there are regional differences and
variations based on whether it’s a prestigious school or not, so there are
various different perspectives and positions.”
“That’s true. I’m sure high school girls in rural areas are different from
those in urban areas, and even among Kansai and Kanto regions, there are
differences…Sorry. I failed again.”
Konata cracks open a chunky potato with chopsticks and looks down on it.
“No, I don’t think the concept itself was bad. In fact, the response from
readers was better compared to the first one about reincarnation. There has
been gradual improvement, so things are getting better.”
She is always so aloof that it is difficult for her fatigue to show, but even so
she cannot hide her red, bloodshot eyes.
“I apologise for causing you concern. It may be sudden, but it seems I won’t
be able to return for a while. I’m truly sorry.”
The atmosphere is unusual. I’m not sure if there’s some kind of trouble.
“The thing about living together is totally fine, but the manuscript is……”
“The manuscript from Sensei is already at a level where it can be presented
in the planning meeting, so if you can just fix the parts that were changed
previously, there should be no problem. If anything, the fact that we have
been living together has increased the frequency of our interactions, and I
may have ended up interfering too much…”
“I understand. Um, would you like to have at least the sandwich Konata
made before you go?”
While bowing again, she pulls her carry-on bag and hurriedly leaves the
house.
However, I’m not an editor but just one of the manga artists she works with.
‘The most I can do is to give her the manuscript as soon as possible and
reassure her……’
It’s not my phone and it’s not Konata’s phone either. Then, by process of
elimination, it can only be Haruka-san’s.
Judging from the location, it must have fallen from her pocket when she
was sitting at the entrance trying to put on her shoes.
She must have been in a great hurry. What should I do? Haruka-san must be
in trouble.
I check the email sent by Haruka-san and call the contact number listed at
the end, just to make sure it hasn’t changed.
『
“ Halo. This is the Flare Comics editorial department. 』”
“Excuse me. My name is Kimito Omona. Could you please put me through
to the editor in charge, Haruka Tanaka?”
『
“ Yes, I understand. Please wait a moment. ”』
『
“ [Yes. This is Tanaka. ” 』
“Um, excuse me, but you’re not Haruka-san, right? Are you Shuji Tanaka,
by any chance?”
I guessed.
There are two Tanaka-san in Flare Comics. That’s why I mentioned Haruka-
san by her full name.
『
“ Yes, that’s right! I guess the new assistant misunderstood and gave you
『 』
my contact information when you asked for Tanaka . Sorry about that.
It seems like many young people these days struggle with phone
conversations. I even thought of [Why did Omona-sensei call me?] ” 』
“I see, maybe my voice was a bit quiet too……So, um, where’s Haruka-
san?”
『
“ She’s currently unavailable. If you have a message, I can relay it to her.
』
What’s the matter? ”
“Thank you very much. Um, after our meeting at my place, it seems like
Haruka-san forgot her smartphone here, so I thought it would be best to
contact her as soon as possible.”
I’m not sure if Haruka-san has mentioned that we’re living together, so I
give a safe excuse to him.
『
“ I see! I’m sorry you went to the trouble of contacting her. That’s an
』
unusual mistake for her. ”
『
“ Well, that’s true. Well, it seems like Orio-sensei has it harder, so these
』
things can happen, right? ”
『
“ Aah, did I say something I shouldn’t have? My bad. Can you pretend
』
you didn’t hear it? ”
『 ー
“ That’s right . Well, actually, between you and me, it seems that Orio-
』
sensei’s manuscript is about to drop. ”
『
While it’s rare for regular manga artists to take a break citing author
』
interviews , Orio-Sensei is famous for never having dropped a
manuscript in the ten years he has been serialising his work.
『
“ Well, I haven’t heard the details but it seems that the chief assistant
suddenly left with a veteran assistant, causing quite a commotion. ” 』
“Uwaa…… I see. That must be tough.”
Not all manga artists rely on assistants, but in the case of Orio-sensei’s
work, which is a high-cost fantasy with intricate details, it would be
difficult to maintain the serialisation without assistants. So it seems that
Haruka-san is doing her best to support him in that aspect.
『
“ Yeah, it would be a big problem. If a flagship author like Orio-sensei
were to have their serialisation dropped, it wouldn’t be surprising for our
circulation to drop by 20%, and it could become a matter of responsibility
』
for the editor in charge. Oh, by the way, please keep this off the record. ”
“No problem.”
『
“ Then, I’ll let her know about the smartphone when she comes back. Is
』
there anything else? ”
“Thank you.”
“It must be challenging to find an assistant for Orio-sensei. I wish there was
something I could do to help, but I’m not a well-connected person.…”
Embarrassingly, I’m not particularly skilled in communication either.
Despite occasionally forgetting due to my current situation, I’m ultimately
an indoor recluse with a tendency to be extremely shy.
“Why did you bring up the matter about Orio-sensei… ──Oh, was it
Tanaka who answered the phone…? In that case, I suppose he wasn’t very
discreet.”
“Just to clarify, since this is off the record, please don’t blame Tanaka. But
speaking of Orio-sensei’s assistant, I remember the conditions being quite
favourable…Oh, here it is. Uwaa, the hourly rate has increased since the
last time I saw it. It’s about three times the market average. With these
terms, there should be plenty of applicants, right?”
Nowadays, manga assistants, like other professions, can find jobs on the
internet.
I can only offer such clichéd words of comfort because I don’t know the
details of the situation.
Haruka-san chuckles.
It’s hard to believe that she would make such a mistake that would cause all
the assistants to resign simultaneously. However, I don’t have the right to
delve any further into the matter.
“I apologize for the inconvenience. I’ve been quite busy, but may I take my
leave now?”
“Aah, yes. I’m the one who’s sorry. I’ve held you up with idle chatter.”
“No problem, I’m glad you can help with the smartphone. Well then, take
care.”
She puts the phone to her ear and heads for the doorway.
“…Yes. No. Well, yes. I understand your feelings, but that’s a bit too
much──…”
I can only watch in silence as her strained voice gradually fades away.
…… 。
…… 。
“──That’s why Haruka-san might not come back to this house anymore.”
Evening.
I report what had just happened to Konata, who has returned from school.
Konata does not react in any particular way, but spreads her textbook on the
desk.
“…..You don’t seem very happy. I thought you would be even more
delighted when she left, considering that you don’t get along with Haruka-
san.”
“……TonTon”
“TonTon?”
“I’m glad editor-san is gone, but seeing you looking sad makes me sad too.
So, it’s fifty-fifty.”
“Yes.”
After working on the serialisation for a while, eating the dinner Konata
prepared and discussing the webcomic version on social media, it is already
past 10 o’clock.
‘Let’s check my email before I go to bed…..’
I open my computer.
『Hello there. It’s me, Milo.Yeah, it’s been a while, but we talked at the
award ceremony party, right? And that after-party at the cheap, mass-
produced izakaya that the publishing company booked—the Ishikari Nabe
was absolutely terrible, wasn’t it? I still have nightmares about it
occasionally. Well, back then, I remember you saying that you really liked
Foria. So, are you still a fan of my work, Omona-sensei? If you are, I’d like
you to be my assistant. It’s a hassle to type emails, you can add me as a
friend on Discord using the account below. See you later! 』
I am convinced.
I didn’t have much complaint since I have a simple palate, but there were
discussions among some manga artists about the precarious financial
situation of Flare Comics. However, I cannot confirm whether these
discussions actually took place or not.
Well, knowing this implies that I was at least involved in some capacity.
“Seriously……”
“What happened?”
Konata rinses out her mouth, spits it out into the sink and says.
I can just see Haruka-san saying something like, [I can’t let the Sensei cover
my own mistake.]
The next day, after seeing off Konata, I find myself lost on when to contact
Orio-sensei as I absentmindedly continue my tasks.
『
“ Hey there. It’s been a long time. About five years, I guess? 』”
The cheerful voice I hear over the call is as easy going as if it were that of a
close friend from school.
It’s true that it’s been about five years, just as Orio-sensei said.
In the past two years, social circumstances haven’t allowed for parties to be
held, and three or four years ago, I was busy with illustrating anime
adaptations, so there was no time for parties.
“Ha, yes. To be honest, I was surprised when I got the email out of the
blue.”
『
“ Is that so? I can relate to that. I’ve asked Haruka several times to
introduce you as my assistant, but she turned me down. So, I thought, why
』
not just tell you directly? ”
『 ー
“ Nn , for now, can you read this? ” 』
Orio-sensei attaches an image to the chat bar.
‘──But that’s not it. I just got carried away with excitement.’
I answer immediately.
『
“ Yes, yes! You understand this much, right? Of course you do, if you’re a
』
fan of mine, right? ”
“Wh–who knows.”
I’m a big fan of Orio-sensei, so I bought fan books and stuff, and I could
『 』
answer because I understand the linguistic principles of Folia . But this
is about general assistants, right? This one.
『
“ Alright, how about this one next? Try translating it from Japanese to
』
Alskub language and draw it in that style. ”
Orio-sensei sent the message 『The king shall not let the people starve』 in
the chat.
…… 。
‘Hmm, in the Arsclabian language, it’s said that the first emperor had
dyslexia and could only write in mirror writing, and the loyal subjects who
admired him inherited the use of mirror writing. So, if we reverse the
Middle Common language in 『 』
Foria would that work?’
First, extract the radicals from kanji as kun’yomi, extract the non-radical
parts as on’yomi and divide katakana in half vertically for conjunctions…
and then use a tool to reverse it.
I scribble in illustration software and upload the image to the chat room.
『
“ Correct! See, it’s an easy test, right? But even with this, about 70% of
applicants fail. It’s strange, though, because I clearly stated in the
application requirements that applicants must have read and mastered all
』
the latest chapters of Orio Milo’s [Foria]. ”
Even if they’ve read through 『Foria』, they may not necessarily have
grasped its language system.
I thought the same, but I, a struggling manga artist desperately aiming for a
serialisation, can’t possibly make objections to the great Orio-sensei.
At that hourly rate, there must be a lot of applicants, and just hiring 30 per
cent would be a lot.
Losing a chief assistant can certainly be painful, but it seems like there
should be replacements available quickly as well.
『
“ Yes! I try to hire them right away and give them more and more work,
but they all kind of run away saying, [I can’t do it!’ I can’t do it!] I don’t
understand why. ”』
“Well, do you mind if I take a look at the manuscript with the instructions
for the assistants?”
『 』
“ Sure ”
『The background: It’s like vomit mixed with the finest champagne, spat
onto a shop window after a host from Shinjuku’s Number 2 club became
Number 1 for the first time in the morning and then finished a bowl of
extra-large ramen with sheer determination. 』
What is this.
『
“ What? No way, really? The same thing was said by you and Haruka.
』
Déjà vu? ”
『
“ You know, I can definitely provide specific instructions if I want to. But
if I did that, only about 70% of the nuance I conveyed would come across.
』
To convey it 100%, I have no choice but to write it like this. ”
If you use an assistant, it’s highly unlikely that the artwork will come out
exactly as you envisioned it.
“That may be true….On the contrary, the former assistants, especially the
Chief Assistant, were able to draw well with these instructions.”
『
“ Well, I don’t know. As expected of the first editor. ”』
“Eh?”
『
“ Yeah. That’s why the first editor-in-chief originally aspired to be a
manga artist. Before [Foria] came out, they used to look down on me,
insisting on things like [Make the protagonist a male] or [Make it a
reincarnation in another world]. I ignored all of that and went straight to the
editor-in-chief to push my own ideas, which eventually led to success. It
made things uncomfortable in the editorial department, so the editor-in-
chief suggested, [Why don’t you become my assistant?] and I quit the
company. ”』
『
“ Oh, but you know..When I became the Chief Assistant, my salary tripled
』
compared to my time as an editor, and I was thrilled! ”
“Why did the Chief Assistant, who had such a good relationship with you,
suddenly quit?”
『
“ I’m not really sure about that. If I had to say, hmm… Maybe it was
because I said I wanted to scrap and redo the entire manuscript when the
deadline was approaching. It was indeed a bit challenging, but you know, if
』
it’s for the sake of improving the work, it can’t be helped, right? ”
『
“ Yeah? ” 』
“I see……”
『
“ So, what about it? Will you be my assistant? You will, right? I mean,
』
you’re not busy right now, are you? ”
“I’m sorry. I asked for this meeting, but could you please give me a little
more time? I need to consider whether I will be able to assist Orio-sensei or
not, and if there is someone I need to consult with.”
『
“ Is it Haruka? ”』
『
“ I don’t fully understand, but okay. However, Omona-sensei, you will be
』
my assistant. ”
『
I send a message to Konata and Haruka-san saying, I would like to
discuss the matter of becoming an assistant for Orio-sensei. If possible,
please gather at my room around 2 p.m. 』
What would be the reaction of Konata and Haruka-san, if I say I will take
on the role of assistant to Orio-sensei?
While I’m thinking about this and that, time passes in the blink of an eye.
“I’m home.”
『
“Haa…Haa…Haa…Sensei! Orio-sensei said, It’s going to be fine
』
because Omona-sensei will take on the assistant role . Is that true?”
Haruka-san, out of breath, opens the front door a few seconds behind
Konata.
Forcing emotional goodwill upon her will only deepen Haruka-san’s sense
of guilt.
“That is certainly true. However, right now you should be focusing on your
own serialised manuscript, and I don’t see any reason for you to assist
another mangaka.”
Haruka-san approaches me with her arms folded and puts pressure on me.
“Sensei, you are not the type to be wasteful, and I can’t believe that you are
in need of money. I assume you still have sufficient savings from the
previous anime adaptation, right?”
“I won’t be fired. While in fictional manga stories, someone may lose their
job over a mistake, in reality, there is a shortage of editors. Even if it’s a
series by Orio-sensei, they can’t afford to dismiss someone just for making
a single mistake, it will disrupt the workflow.”
『
Flare Comics may claim to have a motto of Anything goes as long as it’s
』
interesting on the surface, but like many other manga magazines, the
positions of the editors are not necessarily equal.
It is only natural that successful editors are more likely to get their projects
through than less successful editors, as the company is a commercial
enterprise.
“Kuh, I can’t say for sure that’s not true, but – is it okay if KonataKonoha-
chan doesn’t stop her Sensei either? Konata Konoha-chan’s precious
Sensei is about to be thrown out of his job because of an incompetent
editor? Deep down inside, Konata-chan’s gut must be boiling.”
“….Well, of course it’s frustrating, isn’t it? Why is it that the editors, who
are supposed to support him, end up causing trouble for him instead? It’s
unbelievable.”
Konata drinks a cup of barley tea in one gulp while saying so.
“No sound of agreement, huh? Please, feel free to say whatever you want. I
feel like I can accept any kind of criticism right now. And once you’re done,
please ask Sensei to reconsider from Konata-chan side as well….”
“….I can think of plenty of bad things to say, but whether I should stop him
is another matter. ──I’ll ask again, do you want to be Orio-Sensei’s
assistant?”
Konata puts the cup in the sink and then approaches me in the room.
“Why?”
“As I mentioned before, I can’t imagine having any editor other than
Haruka-san. If by any chance my editor becomes someone other than her, it
would be troublesome. Of course, I also have the desire to help Haruka-san,
but it’s not just volunteering, it’s because I need her for myself. That’s why
I want to do it.”
“That’s it?”
“To be honest, I’m curious about how Orio-sensei creates his works. There
must be challenges involved, but there’s also a lot to learn from the work
process of a genius. That experience will definitely be a valuable resource
for my own creative endeavours.”
“I-is it okay?”
Haruka-san’s reaction is within my imagination, but this reaction on my
part is unexpected.
“If you weren’t prioritising yourself, I would definitely oppose it. But if
you’re doing it for your own sake, I’ll support you no matter what. Even if
it means becoming an assistant for another manga.”
“You can always do that later, right? We have to focus on the present
situation, don’t we?”
“Don’t worry about it. I just want you to draw what you want to draw, in
your own style.”
“……I understand. If you are so determined, I won’t say anything else. I’m
sorry….No, thank you very much. I will secure an assistant as soon as
possible, so please take care of Orio-Sensei.”
Haruka-san bows deeply.
I scratch my head and say. [What if I say all this great stuff and it doesn’t
help?]
I don’t know why they have such confidence in me, but I want to live up to
that trust.
『
“ Looks pretty good. Just there, at the border between the desert and the
forest, change it to [the department head who is aware of being outdated but
deliberately maintains a 70-30 split hairstyle]. The current version feels
more like [a self-proclaimed bachelor aristocrat with pomade who thinks he
』
can still get by without realising he’s out of touch]. ”
『
“ Yes! That’s right!…and when you’re done, this is the next one… ” 』
Manuscripts come in one after another, and I get a reply almost in no time.
When I saw the instructions for the manuscript, I couldn’t believe my eyes,
but it would be possible for me to assist him with questions like this. Of
course, this assumes that I have considerable drawing skills and can
understand the sense of Orio-sensei.
‘However, working while being on call all the time… This would likely be
disliked by assistants hired on a temporary basis.’
Some people may appreciate being able to ask questions freely, but it seems
that there would be more people who feel suffocated by the constant sense
of being monitored by Orio-Sensei, making it difficult to breathe.
If communication is to be so closely maintained, it will be necessary to
directly employ an assistant and train them to the level of dedicating their
heart and soul.
『
“ You have to redraw all these clothes. We can’t send them out like
』
this. ”
This is the scene where Maris and Halim are shopping in the second-hand
clothing district.
“I’m sorry. I’m embarrassed to say that fashion is not my area of expertise
and I haven’t studied it very much.”
『
“ No, if it’s just for regular clothes, it’s not that bad. But this is a scene
where I want to emphasise some specific details….It lacks the nobility,
even though it may have the luxury. I’m planning to incorporate some of
this fabric into Maris’ bridal gown in the future, so anything mediocre or
halfway won’t do. ” 』
This is on the same level as asking about the true identity of One Pi○ce .
『
“ Huh? Are you saying that Omana-sensei doesn’t like spoilers? Well, I’m
』
the type who can still enjoy it even if I’m spoiled. ”
“An-anway, I’m going to check out some resources… how about this one?”
I’ll do an image search on the internet for wedding costumes and send it to
Orio-Sensei.
『
“ Hmm, that’s not quite it. Going all the way to imperial families or royal
weddings in the UK would be going too far. This outfit is meant to evoke
the image of a local noble family or a princess from a small kingdom who
』
has fallen from grace. ”
“Well, I think I understand it somehow, but I can’t find any good material.
Give me some time.”
『 』
The world of Foria is set in a unique cultural realm that can be likened
to the intersection of the Middle East and the Western world. With the
addition of Japanese nuances, capturing the essence of that fusion can
indeed be quite challenging in terms of design.
I put together some images of a little rich wedding and send them to Orio-
Sensei again.
『
“ Hmm, none of those quite capture it. The Hare costume represents
celebration, but in this culture, they also wear the same garments during
times of mourning. So, it carries a subtle nuance of sadness as well. To give
you an analogy, it’s like the dress worn by a daughter of a prestigious
family in Shirogane who, against her wishes, is sent to a public school to
broaden her horizons but ends up feeling out of place and unattended at her
』
own birthday party. ”
After that, I redraw the drawings several times, but in the end I don’t get an
OK.
I save the rejected costume for the time being and proceed with other work.
『
“ Thanks a lot. I’ve made a lot of progress. See you tomorrow. ” 』
“Yes, I’ll see you tomorrow. I look forward to working with you.”
I really want to taste the food, but I don’t have the time to do so and stuff it
into my stomach as if I were scraping it down.
“Yeah, the basics are going well, but there’s something I just can’t get
right.”
“The costumes?”
After she came back from remedial classes, she stayed close to me and
studied.
“Eh? Sakuraba is a prestigious academic school, right? Did they also have a
home economics department?”
“It’s primarily a school for advanced education, but they also have a home
economics department, specifically designed for what you might call the
[elite class]. People who want the prestige of attending Sakuraba but may
not excel academically will donate large sums of money to gain admission.”
“….I see. I guess prestigious schools have a lot on their plate too.”
“So, do you want to see it? Or do you not want to see it?”
“Well, of course I want to see it, but are you okay with that? If we start
taking pictures of those outfits, I think we’ll probably attract attention and
stand out from the crowd.”
“…It’s embarrassing, but this is the only thing I can do for you.”
“Fufu, you seem really enjoying it even though it’s not for your own work.”
I take my hand away from Konata, stare at the tip of the chopsticks and
mutter.
Konata says and pours some more barley tea into my cup.
Chapter 23 - Day 23 of
cohabitation
The next day, after working on my manuscript until dawn, I take a two-hour
nap and start assisting Orio-sensei again.
Soon, after twelve o’clock, a video call came from this side.
『
“ That one! The one in the middle with the Sari-like style!
UuuHyoOOOO! That’s probably a fabric from over 200 years ago! It’s a
rare item that’s not widely available even in the home country! Take lots of
photos of it later. Oh, and make sure to capture the sleeves and the back
』
too. ”
As she jumps, the top of her neck occasionally frames out from the
computer screen.
“Alright.”
『
“ Please do so! Oh, and don’t forget to take photos of that Celtic-inspired
costume too! By the way, isn’t it amazing? I mean, I can understand if they
have traditional Japanese bridal costumes like the Bunkin Takashimada, but
why do they have foreign wedding dresses? ” 』
[TL: Hard to explain what is Bunkin Takashimada,so here’s the pic]
“Sakuraba Academy has deep connections because they accept foreign
royalty and wealthy individuals as exchange students.”
『
“ What’s that? It’s a school set up like a manga! Throw in the only
other male student and you’ve got yourself a harem romantic comedy! ” 』
“I heard that they don’t allow boys to enter, but they’ve decided to accept
transgender men on their register.”
『
“ A transgender man! It’s the best! Oh, hey, hey. Does an all-girls high
school mean there’s yuri? Yuri. Do the girls drink tea with each other and
get all chirpy and frizzy? And while you’re at it, can you take some
』
photos of the JKs in class? ”
“……”
In the face of that overwhelming momentum, I fall silent.
“Sensei, I’m afraid I might get in trouble with the school if I start taking
pictures of other students, so please refrain from suggesting so…”
『
“ Eh? But Omona-sensei is good friends with that Sakuraba student,
right? That means you can draw all the real JKs you want, right? Isn’t
that unfair? Can I report you for envy and request the death penalty? ” 』
If I had the energy to spare, I would be able to go along, but I don’t have the
energy to do so as I’ve been up all night.
No, is it because she’s being driven into a corner that she’s so high-strung?
“Please, Sensei, spare me….I’m starting to feel like running away from
being your assistant too.”
『
“ A threat? Are you threatening me? Then I have a bargaining chip
』
against you! ”
“Bargaining chip?”
While she may be aware that Konata and I know each other, she is not
aware that we are living together
『
“ Yeah! Because if Omona-sensei gets off, my serialisation will drop!
Are you still okay with that? ”』
This mentality is probably the thing I should learn the most from.
『
“ Yeah, that’s right! Um, the base will be that Sari fabric, and the design
will have a Celtic costume vibe. Something like a Celtic priestess who was
destroyed by the Romans… ” 』
In the end, Orio-Sensei makes the final alterations herself and the costume
in question is finally completed.
Chapter 24 - Day 24 of
cohabitation
『
“ At this pace, we’ll manage to meet tomorrow’s deadline. ” 』
Whether it’s my inherent subordinate nature or it’s just the third day, I
already feel like I’ve been at her beck and call for years. It’s tough, but
strangely comforting, with a peculiar sense of stability.
『
“ That voice just now, is it Haruka? 』”
“Yes. Thank you for your hard work, Orio-Sensei. I will visit you later…”
『
“ Okay. Let’s take a short break for about thirty minutes then. The way to
the completion of the book is also in sight, and I feel like I’m getting close
to that borderline point of being a proper lady with a scent that’s just on the
edge, probably because I haven’t taken a bath for a week. ” 』
Haruka-san sits upright on the floor and murmurs in a voice full of emotion.
“I see. I’m glad to hear that… Oh, I’ll have this. May I?”
I open the nutritional drink that Haruka-san brought and drink it down in
one gulp.
It smells medicinal, but I feel that this unique aroma is somehow effective.
I put the bottle of energy drink on the floor and relax the muscles between
my neck and shoulder blades with my fingers.
After all, staying up late at night is hard on the eyes and shoulders.
If this is the case in my twenties, I wonder what will happen when I’m
older.
“No, I don’t want you to do that much for me──……. …….You’re good.”
The skillful fingering relaxes the core of the body and induces drowsiness.
。 。 。
…… …… ……
“Nothing, it’s just a small service. I simply wanted the Sensei to have a
brief moment of relaxation during his limited break time.”
Konata pushes Haruka-san out of the way and stands behind me.
‘Ouch, ouch’
The force is too strong, and maybe her nails are stinging a bit too.
She is completely clumsy.
“I see… If it’s alright with you, would you like some sweets? It seems that
you have contributed significantly to Orio-Sensei’s manuscript. Since you
have been a great help to my assigned work, I should give you something as
well.”
Haruka-san takes out gummy bears and cookies from a convenience store
bag and offers them to Konata.
“I don’t want……”
“Is that so? Well, I had a feeling you might say that. I brought an exclusive
non-sale POP item featuring Orio-sensei’s works that I made for a specialty
store’s promotion. Would you like it?”
“I do.”
In swift, cat-like movements, Konata swiftly snatched the POP from
Haruka’s hand and stowed it away in her school bag. Then, she returned to
massaging my shoulders.
“In that case, I’ll leave Sensei’s shoulders to you and I’ll take care of the
leg. Sitting for extended periods can pose a risk of developing economy
class syndrome, so it’s important to address it.”
“Ha, yes.”
MomiMomiMomi
MomiMomiMomiMomiMomi
MomiMomiMomiMomiMomiMomiMomi
‘I appreciate their concern for me, but deep down, I really just want to take
a short nap, even if it’s just for thirty minutes.’
『
“ Okay. Mm-hmm. Mm-hmm.──OK. There are some minor adjustments
to be made, but I can handle it from here. You’ve done well.Thanks for your
hard work! ”』
I answer immediately.
I’m glad Orio-sensei praised me, but this is the only answer I don’t hesitate
to give.
『
“ Eeeh? Five million more than my former chief assistant? ” 』
『 ー
“ I see . In that case, it seems unlikely for a lifetime. Rather than Haruka
abandoning Omana-sensei, there’s a higher chance of Omana-sensei
disappearing due to the pressure of not being able to meet Haruka’s
』
demands. ”
“Stop talking about a possible future. It’s not a good joke to do.”
『
“ Hahaha, I’m just kidding. I’m sure you’ll be fine, Sensei. When you’re
in trouble, someone will surely come to help. I believe you were born under
』
that kind of star. ”
“Another hunch?”
『
“ Yeah. A hunch. ” 』
As usual, Orio-Sensei is being casual about it. But since her intuition tends
to be accurate, I’ll leave it at that.
『
“ What is it? ”』
On this rare opportunity to talk to Orio-sensei, I ask the question I’ve been
keeping inside my heart.
『
“ Isn’t it obvious? Do you have to ask me about that? ” 』
Orio-sensei immediately replies.
『
“ Well, typically, the second generation or later editors who take over a
successful series tend to become more like robots receiving manuscripts
from manga artists. After all, if the work improves with their advice, it’s
credited to the manga artist’s skills, but if sales decline after their
intervention, they become responsible for interfering unnecessarily.
Besides, editors are human too, and they naturally prioritise promoting the
works they themselves have launched, putting more effort into that
direction. But Haruka is different. Even with the series I inherited, she
approaches it without hesitation and challenges me head-on. It’s rare to find
』
an editor like her. I truly appreciate her dedication and support. ”
“I see… I understand that feeling. While I may not be a super popular artist
like Orio-sensei, whenever my works didn’t sell well, when they got
adapted into anime, or even when they faced cancellation, Haruka-san has
always approached me with the same sincere attitude.”
An editor who approaches the works of all assigned artists with sincerity.
It is easy to say with words, but being able to practise it is truly, truly
precious.
『
“ So? After confirming how amazing Haruka is, let’s get back to work-
related matters. Where should I transfer my assistant’s payment this time?
A Swiss bank account, perhaps? ” 』
“I’m not a legendary hitman, so… Um, if it’s alright, could I receive the
assistant fee in goods instead of money?”
『
“ Goods ? Not cash? ” 』
“Yes. Um, I’d be happy to get an autograph or something from you, with an
illustration of Maris.”
I say modestly.
『
“ Eh, yeah. I’m totally fine with it, but is that how you want it? ” 』
“That would be fine. Oh, of course, I understand that you’re busy right now,
so it’s okay to send it anytime.”
『
“ No, I’ll draw it right away. I’ll probably forget about it afterwards when
I’ve finished the editing and a good night’s sleep. But I see! Omona-
』
sensei really loves me! ”
I’m the type of person who separates the work from the creator when it
comes to my preferences. In other words, it’s more accurate to say that I
love [Foria] rather than loving Orio-sensei specifically.
But there is no need for me to make such a rude remark, so I simply choose
to be happy about it.
『
“ OK! I’ll send it to you when it’s done, so please wait for about an
』
hour. ”
Orio-sensei says in a light tone and then hangs up the call.
At this point, I don’t have the energy to work on my own creations. Instead,
I do some tasks like eating, brushing my teeth and handling miscellaneous
chores. In between, I find myself checking for any new messages that may
have arrived.
『
“ Thank you! If anything comes up, please let me know. Take care! ” 』
‘Waaa! She really drew it! The heroine is wearing the outfit from my work!
Collaboration! Collaboration!’
It’s definitely the only one of its kind in the world, my very own Maris.
Just by looking at this one piece, I feel like all the hard work I put in as an
assistant has paid off.
I print the image at A3, the maximum printable size, and buy some double-
sided tape that I can peel off while I am at it, and go back home.
I stare at it blankly.
I hear a voice.
I turn around and see Konata, who has finished her bath, looking at me with
a doubtful face.
“Look, Konata, here! Orio-sensei drew this for me! Maris! My very own
Maris!”
“No.”
“Why?!”
Konata mutters a few words and carefully folds my Maris and puts it in her
bag.
‘Aaa, I can’t do it. When my maris is taken away from me, I feel distracted,
and I suddenly feel sleepy.’
——-
ED : 🤣
Chapter 26 - Day 26 of
cohabitation
I wake up once in the morning, at about ten o’clock, but I am still feeling
lazy and sleepy.
“Nnn ….”
“Guegghh!”
A sensation of being grabbed by the neck and pulled back causes me to
stumble and fall backward.
“No, you can’t. If you catch a cold and collapse like you did before, you’ll
be screwed.”
Konata makes an X with her hand in a stern tone and goes back into the
kitchen.
The white blade of the knife glints in the light of the electric lamp.
But there is just one little bottleneck and that is, I can’t come up with ideas
for it.
In other words, if the job is to come up with ideas without facing the desk, I
can do it while I’m resting.
As Konata says, it’s better to take a proper rest and get better than to get
down with a bad case of the flu.
“It’s done.”
It’s zaru udon topped with cucumber, tomato, ham, and other toppings.
“What are you talking about? I’ll feed you, so you don’t need chopsticks or
plates, right?”
“You’re done with cooking now, so don’t you need the knife, right?”
I think so, but well, since she’s doing it for my sake, I guess I can go along
with the little game for a while.
“Aa–nn”
“Aa–nn?”
I open my mouth and Konata picks up the udon with her chopsticks,
dipping it into the dipping sauce and I chew on the chewy noodles.
Unlike with dishes like omurice, when eating udon, the dipping sauce
splash onto my mouth and collar, making me feel embarrassingly childish.
“Sensei! Thank you for your hard work! It’s been officially decided that the
chief assistant will return back to assist Orio-sensei──Now, what are you
up to?”
“I see. You’re quite eager for an interview, aren’t you? ──Anyway, with
your manuscript submitted and the assistant situation sorted out, I’ll be able
to return to directing your manga starting tomorrow. Thank you so much for
everything. Let’s give it our all for the final stretch!”
I straighten my back and swallow the spit that smells of bonito broth.
Chapter 27 - Day 27 of
cohabitation
After a good 1-day rest, I’m back in top form and feel like I can produce the
best possible manuscript.
“I’ll read it… Yes. I think it’s good. Um… Sensei, your art skills seem to
have improved while I wasn’t looking.”
“I agree. But I just can’t come up with a good line for the heroine’s final
dialogue.”
“Well, if it’s just the dialogue, I can tweak it at the last minute, so let’s focus
on finishing up the other parts first.”
“Alright.”
While Haruka-san takes her lunch break, I eat the rice balls Konata has
prepared and left for me in advance.
“About Konata-chan…”
Haruka-san takes one look at the rice ball in my hand and mutters.
“Yeah..?”
“At first, I actually had suspicions that Konata-chan was actually keeping
the sensei captive.”
I laugh dryly.
I tilt my head.
“Well, sensei’s works may not have a particularly sharp style, but they do
have an atmosphere that makes it easy for enthusiasts to push them as
『 』
works that should be more appreciated . Of course, fans themselves are
appreciated, but there are also those types of people who use a manga
artist’s work for their own self-aggrandisement. When these distorted
individuals go too far and encounter developments they don’t like, they can
turn into intense anti-fans. It’s like an excessive amount of cuteness turns
into a thousand times more hatred…And even without that, there are manga
artists who, surrounded by strange believers who unconditionally affirm
everything they do, become like the Naked Emperor, right?”
I chuckle.
“Sad?”
“No, I’m the editor in charge, so I thought I was the one who understood
you the best, but I’d lose out to the passion of the real fans.”
“I don’t think it’s about winning or losing… It’s not related to the story
about the Naked Emperor, but if Konata is the only one by my side, I feel
like I’ll be spoiled too much. So I think it’s better for Haruka-san to be strict
with me to maintain a balance.”
I answer with all my heart.
While it may be true that I can draw as I please if that’s what Konata
desires, simply drawing whatever I want won’t make me a professional
manga artist.
“……I see. Then may I take your word for it and give you a little dry
feedback?”
I nod.
一
“… Well, it’s done for now.”
“Yes. At the current stage, it’s already at a passing level, so we can submit it
for the meeting the day after tomorrow. However, if possible, I’d like to
come up with a more fitting final line for the heroine’s dialogue.”
But the hero is already controlled by the heroine to the spirit, and he begs
the heroine himself to lock him up again.
The heroine smiles and does as the hero wishes, putting the chains on again
『
and saying, Don’t worry, I’m with you . 』
“It’s not bad, but it’s rather ordinary, isn’t it? It feels quite predictable and
lacks surprise.”
“Yeah, I think it’s preferable to have lines that leave a lasting impression.”
‘The heroine’s last line was taken almost verbatim from the actual line of
Konata, but the comic storyline is different from what I experienced…’
In other words, the situation is different from what I experienced in real life,
so the line as it is doesn’t quite fit.
『 』
“ You’re mine , no, it doesn’t fit.”
『
“ We’ll always be together. …. 』 This is also too normal…”
“I’m home.”
“Welcome back. ──Oh, by the way! If you’re interested, would you like to
read my manga and share your thoughts? I’m having trouble with the final
line, and I’d appreciate your input.”
I’d love to hear what she has to say about it, as Konata who can best
understand the heroine’s feelings.
“….Wasn’t it our agreement that I wouldn’t interfere with the main story?”
Konata says with concern.
“Okay……”
After washing her hands and gargling, she sits down in front of my
computer and turns the pages.
Konata mutters after about twenty minutes, never once taking his eyes off
the screen.
“How is it? What would you recommend for the heroine to say in her last
line?”
『
“ I need to change the chains. ”』
“What do I mean….? The thing is, this manga is set to transition from
autumn to winter. While it’s fine for summer, using iron chains in winter
would be cold and pitiful for the skin, right? So, I think I should replace the
chains with a different material, like wood or plastic.”
Now that I’ve heard this explanation, I can’t think of anything other than
this line.
By all means, I want to use this line.
“I agree. I think a line that surprises the readers would be great. However, it
may need some explanation since it can be a bit confusing. While we
shouldn’t make the final line too long as it might lose its impact, providing
some context would be necessary.”
“You could simply depict it by having the character hold an iron chain in
『
one hand and a different chain in the other. You can even write for
』
winter or something similar to convey the intention. Since it’s a manga,
you have the flexibility to stylize it a bit, so you can convey the idea
through visuals.”
“Thank you! I’m glad I asked for your opinion. It feels like the final puzzle
piece has fallen into place thanks to your input.”
While saying so, Konata’s eyes were narrow with a hint of delight, contrary
to the words spoken.
I entrust the polished work, which has reached a level where I can
confidently say it won’t be embarrassing no matter where it’s published, to
Haruka-san.
That night, I am able to fall asleep more comfortably than ever before.
Chapter 29 - Day 29 of
cohabitation
Once I’ve finished my work draft, there’s only one thing for me to do.
“Politics, food, animals. Especially cats. Those are the quick and easy
topics that go viral on social media.”
She seems to still be determined to pursue the manga for the social media
version, as she hands me an even thicker report than before.
She has already finished her make-up classes and is very motivated this
morning.
“I, um, would appreciate it if we can skip the political topics. I don’t have
much knowledge in that area.”
“I may not be well-informed, but I have this image that political topics tend
to generate controversies. I don’t want my account to have that kind of
contentious atmosphere.”
“Food and cats, huh… In that case, how about depicting the heroine dressed
in a cat cosplay enjoying some sweets?”
“……aren’t illustrations like that too common and too irrelevant to the
worldview of this comic?”
“The protagonist.”
“Eeh?”
“The protagonist dresses up as a cat, crawls on the floor and eats cat food
straight from the pet food bowl.”
“You can count on it. It’s time for men to dress up in cute outfits.”
‘Is it though…’
Are there people who prefer to see the protagonist rather than the heroine in
a male-oriented romantic comedy?
No, but in a good romantic comedy, it’s also important for the protagonist to
be loved.
“Well, let’s give it a try.”
Today, I’m fully focused on creating content for social media, so I prefer to
go for something quick and easy to eat.
“How is it?”
“Hmm, this is interesting. It seems like I’m getting likes from a different
audience than my usual readers, which is quite intriguing.”
I’m chugging down cold water and hitting the refresh button on my social
networking sites.
Looking at the icons that have given me likes, I’m getting a good response
from people who like BL.
“So……”
“Well, it’s not really the point if people are liking it just to get money.
Besides, I’m not rich enough to give money to others.”
…… 。
…… 。
“If it goes like this, I may have no choice but to go for it.”
“I’m going to lift the ban on drawing erotic illustrations of the heroine. I’ve
done some research since then, and it seems like this has the highest
potential to go viral in a short period of time.—”
“—Indeed, that might be the most realistic strategy….But honestly, I’m not
very enthusiastic about it.”
I look down.
“Why?”
“I want you to appreciate the comics I’ve created with you, but I don’t want
to cheapen the heroine for that. I want the heroine to be lovable, but I don’t
want her to be reduced to a purely sexual object. Well, I know this is my
selfishness. Moreover, I understand that the heroine in my manga and
Konata are different, but still, it feels unpleasant to treat you as a woman
with only sexual appeal just because you look similar.”
“….If you say so, then I guess there’s no helping it. Let’s think of other
methods.”
Despite having my grand plan rejected, Konata seems somewhat happy and
pleased about it.
Chapter 30 - Day 30 of
cohabitation
10 am.
I try to draw a SNS version of my manga based on her idea, but I can’t
seem to get into it.
Today, they are going to decide whether my manga will be serialised in the
magazine or not.
I know it’s no use being impatient in the morning, but I can’t help feeling
nervous.
I tell myself that this is also work, so I organise the receipts for my tax
return and open my PC to sort out the data I don’t need.
I try to forcibly draw the SNS version of the manga, but I keep making
mistakes and it doesn’t go well.
“……can’t concentrate?”
For a moment, I thought about covering it up, but then I felt like that would
be rude, so I told Konata truthly.
“Okay. Then I’ll go and buy the ingredients for our festive feast.”
Konata stands up quietly.
“You don’t even know if my work is going to get through the meeting and
you’re already preparing a celebration?”
“Of course. If you pass, of course it’s a celebration. Even if you don’t pass,
you’ve completed a work that you’re satisfied with, so that’s a celebration.”
When I first finished my own manga, I was happy just for that.
When did it become impossible for me to be happy unless the comic was
serialised in a commercial magazine?
When I turn on the power, I can’t help but worry if there’s any contact from
Haruka.
…… 。
…… 。
…… 。
Gacha.
Dadadadadadadadadadadadadadada.
Ban!
“Sensei! Why are you turning your phone off? I’ve tried calling you so
many times!”
“Eh! Oh, sorry! Was it that time already? I was going to turn it back on
at the end of the meeting, I seemed to have forgotten.”
“Aaa I see──never mind about that! Your serialisation in this magazine got
approved! Congratulations! Sensei!”
“Tha-thank you…..”
“You did a great job! Honestly, I was worried that you might give up or be
crushed, Sensei. But you’ve overcome it! Manga artists who have
experienced rock bottom once will become strong. Amazing! Truly
amazing! You’re as great as Kan-san from Enzan no Kawa!”
[period drama]
Haruka-san rushes towards me with an excited voice.
In her mind, giving such high praise is probably the greatest compliment,
on par with being the protagonist of a period drama.
I try to hug her back, but unsure where to touch, I lightly tap her shoulder
with my finger.
“Ex-excuse me. What I did with myself was neither common sense nor
compliant behaviour.”
Haruka-san takes a step back and straightens the collar of her suit.
“….No, I don’t have time, I’m going to draw the SNS version.”
“Yes, we can celebrate anytime. But the competition for gaining likes on the
social media version has a deadline tomorrow.”
“Well then, let’s order sushi for dinner instead. I’ll treat you.”
Haruka-san sips her beer and watches over us with a warm smile.
Chapter 31 - Day 31 of
cohabitation
“Konata. This is the final manga for the time being.. I’m going to submit
it.”
“I understand….”
Konata put her hands together as if she was praying.
I press the left button, check that the image has been uploaded and close the
computer.
“…I have to catch the last train, so I’ll have to excuse myself at 12:15 a.m.
So, for now, I’ll be here until the date changes.”
In other words, it means that she is willing to accompany me until the end
of her manga competition with Konata.
I wonder what it is. It feels like a strange mix of resignation and impatience,
like waiting for the lottery results or the announcement of entrance exam
success.
Haruka-san calmly continues packing her belongings.
Konata is checking her belongings for tomorrow’s school and doing some
minor cleaning around the kitchen.
I take a bath, brush my teeth and start getting ready for bed.
For a nocturnal manga artist, this time of day would still be considered
early evening, but now that I’m striving for a regular human lifestyle,
staying up too late will be considered a bit of a late night.
I pick up my phone with my left hand while running the hair dryer through
my hair.
‘Impossible!?’
I look twice at the numbers in my own eyes and recount them just to be
sure.
“It’s over…”
“Eh?”
“Really?!”
Konata snaps the tip of her pencil lead and reaches for my phone.
It seems that Orio-sensei retweeted various works that I have uploaded, and
that sparked a sudden popularity.
。 。
“…… …… .. Seriously.”
The more I read through the details of Orio-sensei’s retweets, the more my
suspicions deepen.
『
“ Wait, why isn’t this getting attention? Did the concept of manga
disappear from the world while I was busy for a moment? ” 』
『
“ Well, it seems like many readers have become too accustomed to the
soft, baby food-like manga of recent times, so let me explain. The first
panel is like a fake movie trailer, right? But the content is occult-like,
something that wouldn’t be possible in a real movie trailer. This signifies
the protagonist’s disproportionate and extremely inflated self-approval
』
desires. ”
『
“ ──And why is the heroine, who is the holder of the chain, deliberately
omitted in this romantic comedy-like scene where the protagonist is eating
cat food? That’s because this chain symbolises not only the physical
confinement but also the mental constraints that bind the protagonist. ” 』
『
“ ──And finally, the last manga that was posted. Both the protagonist and
the heroine cease to be human. By depicting them as deformed animals, the
gender difference is omitted. In other words, the boundaries between the
two disappear, and the cruel reality is presented to the readers that the
heroine was nothing more than a figment of the protagonist’s imagination.
However, the protagonist continues to turn a blind eye to this and keeps
drawing manga that has no demand. ” 』
『
“ ..So, in other words, this manga is a semi-autobiographical depiction of
a struggling artist whose mental state deteriorates, a mockumentary of sorts.
In the past, it might have been serialised in publications like Garo, but now
the fact that it can be read for free is truly a testament to how great the times
have become, right? ”』
Thanks for assisting me──I don’t think I’ll ever be able to thank you for
assisting me.
Considering Orio-sensei’s style, it seems highly unlikely that she would
resort to flattery when it comes to manga.
“Um, Sensei. Are you intentionally trying to achieve the effect that truly
resembles Orio-sensei’s writing?”
“No, not at all. It’s just that Orio-sensei read it nice and deep. It’s just a
coincidence.”
Orio-sensei’s manga skills are so advanced that she goes beyond any
author’s expectations and makes her own interpretations.
The majority of the likes are probably from Orio-sensei’s fans, or at the
very least, it’s undeniable that they have been influenced by him.
“…A draw?”
“Yes, that’s right. Honestly, this time it was my mistake, and I can’t say that
Sensei had enough time for his creativity. Since Sensei, as the author, hasn’t
felt a sense of accomplishment or satisfaction, I don’t think we can
determine a clear winner. So, let’s consider it a draw”
“So, as Sensei’s editor, I will freely voice my opinions on his work, and
Konata-chan can also provide your thoughts as a fan. Shall we make a
compromise based on our input? Ultimately, it’s up to you, Sensei, to decide
how to incorporate our feedback into your work.”
I nod my head.
I don’t think it’s good for me to continue living together with a high school
girl indefinitely.
I believe that we need to settle things properly, no matter what form it takes.
And then she rolls out her carry-on bag and begins to walk towards the
entrance.
“Wait.”
“Yes?”
“I initially thought that editor-san was just getting in the way of Sensei’s
manga, but after spending a month together, I realised that wasn’t the case.
Editor-san is necessary for Sensei’s manga. Personally, it doesn’t sit well
with me, but I acknowledge that. Of course, it’s strictly in the capacity of
being an editor.”
She takes two steps towards Haruka and then mutters in a small voice.
And in that moment of closing the door, she turned back towards us once
again.
“──Well, it’s not uncommon in the industry for editors and mangakas to
get married.”
“…………”
“Um, Konata? I’m telling you, Haruka-san’s last remark was a joke,
okay?”
“Salt.”
“Huh?”
Konata quickly rushes to the entrance with her socks still on, closes the
door and locks it with a chain.
“Oh,ouuu.”
“………….”
Taking the salt from me, Konata begins scattering it at the entrance as if
performing a sumo wrestler’s ring-entering ritual, all in silence.
A humid summer night.
Afterword
『
Thank you very much for reading The Story of a Manga Artist Who Was
Imprisoned by a Strange High School Girl 2 .』
In the second volume, we introduced not only Konata and the protagonist
but also a beautiful editor and a genius manga artist, creating a much
livelier development. How did you find it? Personally, I feel proud that we
were able to include stories involving dates with Konata and discussions on
creativity, making it a content that is both passionate and meaningful in
multiple ways.
Now, I will leave you with the dream of seeing you again somewhere and
leave you with this issue.
Hozumi Moguri.
The story in the first volume was based on my own ideas, but from here on,
I’m extremely satisfied with the stories that were written, which were
beyond my original concept. I never imagined that from my simple
synopsis, I would see such lively and dynamic characters come to life. As a
reader, I hope this story can continue a little longer.
Credits
Epub&Pdf: EsNovels