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AITTHOR OF"wMTING THE SHORT-STORT"
"studying the short-story," etc.
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MARY ELEANOR ROBERTS
AUTHOR OF "cloth OF FRIEZE"
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Table of Contents
Page
Foreword xi
/. Poetry Defined 3
2. The Ten Elements of Poetry 4
(a) Thought 5
(b) Emotion 5
(c) Interpretation 6
(d) Imagination 8
(e) Utterance 9
(f) Rhythm 10
(g) Beauty 11
(h) Loftiness 11
(i) Delight 12
(j) Profit 12
J. Poetry and Verse 13
Exercises 13
VI TABLE OF CONTENTS
Page
J. Quantity 41
4. Accent 41
Exercises 45
Chapter V The Foot 47
The Iambus, or Iambic Foot
1. 48
2. The Trochee, or Trochaic Foot 50
J. The Anapcest, or Anapcestic Foot 51
4. The Dactyl, or Dactylic Foot 51
5. Scanning 52
6. The Law of Quantity in English Verse • •
53
Exercises 55
Chapter VI Rhythm . .
59
1. Regular Rhythm Unrhymed 61
2. Regular Rhythm Rhymed 62
Unusual Rhythm Unrhymed
J. 62
Unusual Rhythm Rhymed
4. 63
Exercises 67
Chapter VII Rhyme 69
/. Rhyme Defined 69
2. Imperfect Rhymes 70
3. Kinds of Rhyme 72
4. Location of Rhymes 73
5. Unusual Rhyme Schemes 76
6. Special Cautions 78
Exercises 80
Chapter VIII Assonance and Alliteration .
83
1. Assonance 83
2. Alliteration 85
Exercises 88
Chapter IX Onomatopceia —Sound and Move-
ment 90
1. Sound 90
2. Movement 96
Exercises 98
Chapter X Tone-Color 100
Exercises 108
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APPENDICES
Appendix A Glossary or Metrical Terms . . 288
Appendix B —Some Books for the Study of Ver-
sification 291
Appendix C—Helps in the Study of Poetry .
293
1.General Collections 293
2. British Anthologies 294
2- American Anthologies 295
4. The Theory of Poetry 295
Appendix D —Light Verse 297
Index 298
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FOREWORD
This little treatise does not aim to create poets —Heaven
must do that; but it does seek to furnish those who have
poetic inspirations with the knowledge of how to master
world who have drunk from it, would choke a satirist. His
thoughts of the country must have a savor of Jack Ketch, and
see no beauty but in a hemp-field. Poetry is something to make
us wiser and better, by continually revealing those types of
beauty and truth which God has set in all men's souls; not by
picking out the petty faults of our neighbors to make a mock of.
— James Russell Lowell, Conversations on Some of the Old Poets.
I. Poetry Defined
rise in the scale of poetry. Omit one, and the poem suffers,
lies in things."
To interpret is to stand between and make the utterance
of one clear to the hearing of another. So does the poet
stand, having sensed the sweetness and light and music
and strength and seriousness of all hidden meanings in
all.
Samuel Johnson once said that poetry was the art of "call-
out the eye of the soul into the world of things seen and un-
seen, establishes points of contact for our understandings,
conceives —that is, gives birth to —thoughts and emotions
which it in turn interprets to men. "I saw the heart of
there are who feel but cannot sing, while more live in songs
pleasure. " Nor, " says he, " let this necessity of producing
ities would scarcely say that all poetry is didactic, for the
teaching we receive must be the by-product of truth,
beauty, power, and emotion. Yet nothing humorous or
serious of true poetic quality can come to perfect utterance
but it leaves its profitable impress upon the hearer, for
"a merry heart doeth good like a medicine" as truly as
poems.
11. Select a so-called poem which you consider to be
merely verse.
1 2. Give your reasons, and say if you think there is room
in the world for mere verse.
13. Write a paragraph on the proper subject matter
of poetry.
that as poetry arose and took form in each land and moved
from Orient to Occident, it was shaped and colored by the
national genius of each successive coimtry that at once
contributed to its rise and progress and received the be-
nignant heritage which genuine poetry confers upon any
people that fosters its indwelling. This, then, indicates
the thesis of this necessarily brief and summarial account.
Though the precise origins of poetry are shrouded in
prehistoric mist, we may be tolerably certain that just as
soon as human utterance began to be amplified and made
more effective by the addition of images, poetry was born.
Its use among primitive peoples today is a fair indication
of its first functions — that of communal or group expression.
Afterward came the development of the individual poet
with his increasingly personal expression, culminating in
the lyrical form.
Such was the origin of the primeval ballad, and the epic
poem whose finished verses, ages later, were recited in
7
this, the added element of the North was required with its
J. Poetry Today
today?
7. Is oratory or prose the more closely related to poetry?
Why?
8. Write about one hundred words upon the influence
of the Revival of Learning on literature.
THE ORIGIN AND PROGRESS OF POETRY 21
Beauty.
Expressions like the embattled farmers, the multitudinous
seas incarnadine, the vernal year, and shouldering billows,
etc., and the formal pourest, heareth, and the like. Then,
too, we find contractions such as e'en, oft, starr'd, list, mount,
as distinguished from mere colloquial contractions like
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28 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
5. Imagery
those keys which all may clatter, and which yield their
music to so few. He finds the inevitable word or phrase,
unfoimd before, and it becomes classical in a moment.
The power of words and the gift of their selection are un-
of common words.
3. See if you can find any words used in a standard poem
which in your opinion do not belong in serious poetry, and
suggest better words.
4. Give prose examples of your own making of all the
figures of speech named on pages 31-32.
X 5. {a) What is a trite, or hackneyed, expression? (6)
CHAPTER IV
2. Meter
J. Quantity
4. Accent
in each line — all the lines are of exactly the same length.
Is that the reason why the verse sounds so smooth and
regular? It is one reason, but not the only one. Let us
see if we can find another reason.
We know, of course, that all the lines in a poem need not
be, like Gray's, of equal length. If we read the second
stanza of another well-known poem, Longfellow's " Psalm
of Life," we shall see that the first and third lines have
eight syllables each, while the second and fourth lines
and we see that the last line does not read quite smoothly
II
The curfew
t
accents.
f
tolls
til
III
the knell of parting day,
/
III
III
o'er the lea,
This, then, is the reason that the verse sounds so smooth and
regular. We have found the first great law governing
English verse, accent.
Let us mark the accents in the second stanza of
Life
And
t
t
/
I
is real!
the grave
lit
til
t
Life
is
is
not
t
earnest!
its goal;
Dust thou
Was
I It
art, to
why.
X 5- Write a stanza containing one or more words of un-
usual emphasis —as a threat, or a cry of fear—and experi-
ment whether a pause (an omission in the regular meter)
after the important word helps or mars the verse.
Note: The whole subject of Irregularities will be
treated later.
6. Try to find one or more poetic lines which give a dis-
CHAPTER V
THE FOOT
The office of the poet as a teacher of the chorus demanded a
that passed under the term " dancing,
'
setting down of the foot, and was placed in the verse where
the heat came in the music. This formed accent, or stress,
in the verse. The other syllable or syllables of the group
tit
| | | |
t t / r /
The low I
ing herd |
winds slow |
ly o'er |
the lea, lo
I >
/ t I t I
And leaves |
the world |
to dark |
ness and |
to me. lo
into groups of two, and each group we call a. foot. The first
/ t t t
Come live |
with me and be my love.| |
—
I
I
did I
but dream.
I
tit
It
Marlowe, The Passionate
( I nev |
er knew
Shepherd.
What charms |
our stern |
est sea |
son wore.
—Whittier, The Clear Vision.
—" :
THE FOOT 49
He
f
ceased; |
f
|
*
It
to |
reply.
—Milton, Paradise
[
Lost.
She dwelt |
alone |
and few could know
|
|
When Lu |
cy ceased |
to be.
I I I I
Life is I
real! |
Life is |
earnest! |
I I t I .
And the ]
grave is |
not its |
goal;
/
Dust thou
Was
f
not
I
I
t
art, to
spoken
tit |
|
t
dust re
of the |
|
tumest,
soul.
I
line).
I t t
Go where glory ]
waits thee
—Moore.
| |
THE FOOT 51
t t t t
Read this |
song of |
Hia watha.|
—^Longfellow,
|
Hiawatha.
t t t I t t
There's a |
lady, |
an earl's |
daughter, |
she is |
proud
and she is |
noble.
—Mrs.
I |
t t t
sea.
—Byron,
I
t t t
I am lord |
of the fowl |
and the brute.
—CowPER, The Solitude of Alexander Selkirk.
Cannon to |
right of them.
Cannon to |
left of them,
Cannon in |
front of them.
—Tennyson, The Charge of the Light Brigade.
52 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
One more un |
fortunate, |
Weary of |
breath,
Rashly im- |
portunate,
Gone to her |
death!
Take her up |
tenderly.
Fashioned so [
slenderly,
Young, and so ]
fair!
—Thomas Hood, The Bridge of Sighs.
5. Scanning
The
ft
cur |
few tolls |
the knell
tit |
of part |
ing day.
In the second?
Find the name for each line by referring to the glossary.
ft
is
And his co |
horts were gleam |
ing with pur |
pie and gold.
Anapcestic.
How many anapaestic feet in the line?
What then shall we call the line?
What is the character of the feet in the first line of
" The Charge of the Light Brigade"?
Dactylic.
Two.
What then shall we call the line?
Dactylic Dimeter.
A vio
/
I
let
II
by a mos sy
] |
I
stone.
third line really equal to the seven of the first? No, they
are not, yet the lines balance. We find that the effect is
THE FOOT 55
Where is Maud—Maud—Maud?
and that these pauses serve to lengthen the line. Tenny-
son uses the same device in the well-known lines,
(b)
As I sat sorrowing,
Love came and bade me sing
A joyous song and meet;
For see (said he) each thing
Is merry for the Spring,
(c)
Loudly the sailors cheered
Svend of the Forked Beard.
—Longfellow, Saga of King Olaf-
y (^
Come live with me and be my love.
—Marlowe, The Passionate Shepherd.
(e)
THE FOOT 57
2. (a) In what two ways might this single line from one
of Shakespeare's sonnets be scanned?
RHYTHM
Measured intervals of time are the basis of all verse, and their
regularitymarks off poetry from prose; so that time is thus the
chief element in poetry, as it is in music and in dancing. From
the idea of measuring these time-intervals, we derive the name
metre; rhythm means pretty much the same thing, "a flow- —
ing," an even, measured motion. This rhythm is found every-
where in nature: the beat of the heart, the ebb and flow of the
sea, the alternation of day and night. Rhythm is not artificial,
not an invention; it lies at the heart of things, and in rhythm
the noblest emotions find their noblest expression.
—Francis B. Gummere, Handbook of Poetics.
RHYTHM 6
rhjrthmical form.
Rhythm, then, is governed by time and balance, and in
II
Their place of rest and Providence
I
their guide.
II
Through Eden took
III
They, hand in hand, with wandering steps and slow,
We see that these lines are of the same length and balance
each other. Rhythm is thus governed by time and balance.
I
/
2.
of coot
Rhymed
and hem,
I
III
make a sudden sally,
And
To
III
sparkle out
bicker down a
among
I
the fern,
valley.
—Tennyson, The Brook.
In this selection we have four time-beats in the first line
There they
J.
III
Unusual Rhythm Unrhymed
till
are, my fifty men and women
I
Naming me
/
/
/
poems
III
finished!
together:
' '
c
There was never a priest to pray,
When they
/
t
toll
>
of the bay,
/
/
/ / / / r
The
the quickstep play,
ft
regiment's in
II
column, an' they're marchin'
II us
away;
After hangin'
III
their beer today,
/
/ I I I I t
the sea,
r I I I I )
o me;
they say:
I t I I
I I I I I
lit
bells,
recognize theirrhythm in the foregoing refrain.
It
I
They have ridden the low moon out of the sky, their
II
hoofs
drum up
I
like a
the dawn,
II
wounded
I
bull, but the mare
I
The dun he
II
Hke a new-roused fawn.
fell at a water-course
II — in
II
a woeful heap
fell he,
I I > I I
And Kamal has turned the red mare back, and pulled
CHAPTER VII
RHYME
What'er you write of, pleasant or sublime,
Always let sense accompany your rime;
Falsely they seem each other to oppose,
Rime must be made with reason's law to close;
And when to conquer her you band your force,
The mind will triumph in the noble course;
To reason's yoke she quickly will incline.
Which, far from hurting, renders her divine;
But if neglected, will as easily stray.
And master reason, which she should obey.
—
Nicolas Boileau, L'Art Poetique.
I. Rhyme Defined
2. Imperfect Rhymes
RHYME 71
J. Kinds of Rhyme
Rashly importunate.
Gone to her death!
RHYME 73
Fashioned so slenderly,
Young, and so fair!
4. Location of Rhymes
De Contemptu Mundi
Hora novissima, tempora pessima sunt, vigilemus
Ecce minaciter imminet arbiter ille supremus.
Imminet, imminet et mala terminet, aequa coronet,
Recta remuneret, anxia liberet, aethera donet,
Auferat aspera duraque pondera mentes onustae,
Sobria muniat, improba pimiat, utraque juste.
Bugle
The splendor falls on castle walls
And snowy summits old in story:
The long light shakes across the lakes,
And the wild cataract leaps in glory.
Blow, bugle, blow, set the wild echoes flying.
Blow, bugle; answer, echoes, dying, dying, dying.
"
5. Unusual Rhyme-Schemes
Should it even set fire to the castle and bum it, you're
Amply insured both for buildings and furniture.
6. Special Cautions
In a Drear-Nighted December
In a drear-nighted December,
Too happy, happy Tree,
Thy branches ne'er remember
Their green felicity:
In a drear-nighted December
Too happy, happy Brook,
Thy bubblings ne'er remember
Apollo's summer look;
But with a sweet forgetting
They stay their crystal fretting,
Never, never petting
About the frozen time.
RHYME 79
ceeding stanzas of the same poem, but our ears are not so
highly educated, and decline to carry many sounds so far.
If you employ rhyme at all, study to do it properly.
Never be content to leave an imrhymed line unless your
meter requires it, as in simple English ballad meter, or the
quatrains (four-line stanzas) of Omar Khayyam.
In writing stanzas with alternate rhymes, do not use the
same vowel-sound in pairs of adjoining rhymes,— for in-
stance:
hope
stone
grope
alone
hid
led
rid
said
pecially appropriate?
Kitty
Doric simplicities,
Attic felicities,
Art is so tenuous,
Life is so strenuous,
Love such an exquisite trance.
Shall I beware of her?
Or shall I dare for her,
CHAPTER VIII
I. Assonance
Spanish poetry.
——
don:"
Here tolling and Mole in, can and Dame, are not intended
as imperfect rhymes but as assonance. It is also used in
2. Alliteration
Plowman.
Here, we feel that the words were chosen mainly for the
sake of their alliterative quality, and the mind uncon-
sciously resents the fact; and really this charge of arti-
It happened to us
In Holy Russia,
In stone-built Moscow
In the golden Kremlin,
They beat upon the great bell.
imperfect use.
10. (a) Write a quatrain containing as many alliterative
tive words, except those that are so well used that a change
would mar the verse.
I. Sound
Notice the effect of the long o's in this line. Why is it such
an excellent description of the ocean?
Think of the sound of a retreating wave on a pebbly
shore or shingle, and then compare it with Tennyson's line
Homer's line:
Of despair!
How they clang and clash and roar!
What a horror they outpour
On the bosom of the palpitating air!
And recollection,
I often think of
Those Shandon bells,
On this I ponder,
Where'er I wander,
And thus grow fonder.
Sweet Cork, of thee;
With thy bells of Shan don.
That sound so grand on
The pleasant waters
Of the river Lee.
the Bay!
2. Movement
lay," reproduces not only the sound but also the rhythm
of a chime of bells.
Tennyson's lullaby,
such as slink.
the sense.
13. Write a quatrain describing a chime of bells ringing
for a wedding.
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its tone-color.
lines — of which one can say: 'These are the pure magic.
"
These are the clear Vision. The rest is only poetry,'
and then he gives us the other two:
TONE-COLOR 103
Here we have the varying a^s again, the m^s and n's, the
—
DsiSodih
That come before the swa//ow (/ares, and take
The winds of March with, beauty; violets, dim,
But sweeter than the lids of Juno's eyes,
Or C3'therea's breath; pa/e prmroses.
That die unmarried, ere they can behold
Bright Phoebus in his strength, a walady
Most incident to msiids; hold oxlips, anJ
The crown imperia,l; lilies of a.11 kinds
The f/ower-de-/uce being one! Oh! these I /ack.
V in violets. Take also the last word of the first line and
the two last words of the third,
daffodils,
violets, dim.
measure.
I. Types of Stanza
* Sweet.
—— "
1 Them.
^ Their hearts.
^ Distant holy men, or saints.
* Known.
' Thomas k Becket.
—
Thus sang the uncouth swain to the rocks and rills, (a)
While the still morn went out with sandals gray, (b)
And now the sun had stretch'd out all the hills, (a)
rhymed.
the stanza.
On Himself
Lost to the world, lost to himself, alone
by coupling his first and fourth lines, and his second and
third. The meter here is iambic tetrameter.
While glow the heavens with the last steps of day, (b)
another, a, b, a, b, b.
And a voice less loud, through its joys and fears, (b)
2. Indenting
of all.
Meaning.
Here Coleridge makes the red leaf dance with his danc-
ing verse. In his introduction to this poem he says,
The vary |
ing year |
with blade |
and sheaf |
Clothes and |
reclothes |
the hap | py plains. |
The chang |
ing year |
with blade |
and sheaf |
Clothes and |
reclothes |
the hap | py plains. |
—Wordsworth.
Contraction is the suppression of an entire syllable.
Some words, like heaven and power, may be pronounced as
one syllable if the meter requires it. Formerly, contracted
words were written heaven, pow'r, but it is now the custom
to print them in full.
—Old Ballad.
EPIC POETRY
Loose and free and of slow growth, the epic poem was for
centuries the dominant story-form. It took the wealth of ma-
terial in which the ancient world abounded and strung the
scattered stories upon a strand of personality. Thus a Ulysses
or an ^neas became the hero of tales originally told of many
another. From prehistoric times down to the years when the
printed page spread the tale open before every eye, the resident
or the traveling story-teller was almost the only purveyor of
fiction, and he was "as welcome as is a visitor with recent maga-
zines to a lighthouse on some distant and lonely island."
— Writing the Short-Story.
barriers, and the fact that poets are not content to remain
Imay assert
| |
eter |
nal Prov |
idence |
' Note also the quotation from Hodgson which introduces this
chapter.
BLANK VERSE I37
at the end of both foot and word, but not always at the end
of the same foot, or an effect of monotony and dull uni-
His on ly Son: I
X on earth he first beheld, etc.
Book III, Line 64.
Among I
sweet dews |
and flowers, X where any row, etc.
And in extin
|
|
guisha|ble rage X all heaven, etc.
blank verse?
3. What is the meaning of the word ccesura?
For Hecuba!
What's Hecuba to him or he to Hecuba,
That he should weep for her?
—Hamlet, Act II, Scene II.
Let's dry our eyes and thus far hear me, Crom [
well;
for, from, if, of, or, which allow no pause after them.
—"for
In those unfledged days was my wife a girl."
—A W interns Tale, Act I, Scene II.
purpose.
7. Using only a summary, like Lamb's "Tales from
Shakespeare, " write one of the speeches made by a leading
character in one of the Comedies, using about twenty
lines. Follow Shakespeare's meter.
8. Do the same for one of the tragedies.
9. Recast one of these, using at least half end-stopped
lines.
A lily of a day
Is fairer far, in May,
Although it fall and die that night;
To me did seem
Apparell'd in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it has been of yore,
Turn wheresoe'er I may.
By night or day.
The things which I have seen I now can see no more
Nightingale.
An ode should be noble in theme and treatment, stately
without pedantry, beautiful without redundant orna-
ment. It should be a sustained flight at a high altitude,
and it is perhaps not to be regretted, in view of these
requirements, that the form is somewhat out of fashion,
her instigation.
"
THE BALLAD 1 55
Luke: "1:46.)
it in ballad form.
8. How would you account for the fact that the fimc-
CHAPTER XVIII
THE LYRIC
However skilled the singer, quality and charm are inborn.
Something of them, therefore, always graces the folk-songs of
a peasantry, the ballads and songs, let us say, of Ireland and
Scotland. Theirs is the wilding flavor which Lowell detects:
"Sometimes it is
the poet in the poem and makes it his and not another's. —
Edmund Clarence Stedman, The Nature and Elements oj Poetry.
largely in its melodious flow that music has fixed its very
name.
—
model.
Sonnet- writing was an accomplishment cultivated by
the great and noble, and Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey,
and Sir Philip Sidney, were the next two English sonnet-
eers. Although these pioneers were familiar with the
Italian structure of inter-lacing rhymes, a simpler system
crept in and became current, but this contained nothing
164 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
THE SONNET 1 65
Fool ! said my muse to me, look in thy heart, and write, (e)
— Sir Philip Sidney.
Homeric Unity
The sacred keep of Ilion is rent (a)
THE SONNET 1 67
How should this be? Art thou then so much more (b)
Than they who sowed, that thou shouldst reap therby? (a)
Miles and miles distant though the last line be, (d)
1 68 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
And though thy soul sail leagues and leagues beyond, — (c)
—ROSSETTI.
This is a noble and impressive sonnet; it is absolutely
regular in form and beautifully illustrates what we have
just said — the octave contains the proposition, the appli-
cation is made in the sestet. The octave is written in
enclosed rhyme, and contains but two rhymes, while
the sestet is written with alternate rhyme, and also
contains two.
The greatest two English poets of the Nineteenth
Century, Tennyson and Browning, did not excel in the
sonnet. Of those which Tennyson cared to preserve,
All that thou hadst, thy life, thy very name, (d)
Nell Gwyn
Sweet heart, that no taint of the throne or the stage (a)
All England, whose sons are the sons of the sea, (c)
And thy lover she cannot but love by the token — (e)
That thy name was the last on the lips of King Charles, (d)
—Swinburne.
The following also contains an interesting variation
of rhyming order followed in the sestet —a variation
condemned by the purist:
The Odyssey
As one that for a weary space has lain
last sonnet was the same as the opening line of the first.
The Sonnet
A Sonnet is a moment's monument,
Memorial from the Soul's eternity
To one dead deathless hour. Look that it be.
Whether for lustral rite or dire portent,
THE SONNET 1 75
venience.
" Eighthly, it must not have a word out of its place.
"Ninthly, it must have no very long word, or any other
1 Leigh Hunt, " The Book of the Sonnet.
"
CHAPTER XX
IMITATIONS OF CLASSICAL METERS
I. Hexameters
lit
t
out of the I
Pundits |
/ /
Why
ft
in the
ask? |
|
mud
Who
t
of the
ever |
|
yet
III
Frog-pond?
saw |
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money made |
I
out
IIor a downright
IIold
of I
fat 1
II
upright
II
nutmegs
I
out of a
Jew, I
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pine-knot? |
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Strongly it |
bears us a |
long in |
swelling and [
limitless |
billows, I
Nothing be [
fore and nothing be hind but the
] | |
sky
Much as old meters delight me, 'tis only where first they
were nurtured,
In their own clime, their own speech; than pamper them
here, I would rather
Tie up my Pegasus tight to the scanty-fed rack of a sonnet.
.
/ / / /
This is the ]
forest pri |
meval. The ]
murmuring |
Bearded with
pines and the
|
moss and
/
|
hemlocks
in |
[
garments
III |
green, indi- |
I II
Stand
II stinct in the
like ]
Druids of
I
|
twilight,
|
II eld,
|
with |
III
voices |
sad and
Stand
II pro
like
I
phetic,
|
harpers
II
]
|
hoar, with
II |
I
beards that
II |
rest
I I
on their bosoms. |
|
In the hex |
I
ameter |
rises
I
the |
It!
fountain's |
silvery |
III
I I
In the pen
column
|
tameter
I
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aye
'
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falling in |
II
melody back 1
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\
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The csesural pause is marked '
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II
These lame |
I
hexame | ters,
II the |
II
strong-winged |
/ II
/
No—but
music of
a I
I
most bur
III
Homer?
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lesque " |
barbarous
I
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experi |
ment. |
2. Lyrical Measures
III
O you chorus of
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indo
I
III I
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lent re |
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viewers, |
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IIIcome
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sponsible, |
indo |
lent re
I
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II
viewers, |
III
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II Ca
test, a |
tiny ]
poem,
I
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III
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of
I
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tullus;
I
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III
All in
Like the
I
quantity,
|
skater on
|
careful
|
I
ice that
|
of
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my
II
hardly bears him,
|
motion,
|
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fall una |
wares be ]
fore the |
people, |
Waking laughter |
in |
indo |
lent re |
viewers.
—Tennyson,
|
Hendecasyllabics .
IMITATIONS OF CLASSICAL METERS 1 83
and that the last line reverses the order of the feet of the
first two lines, beginning with two dactyls and ending with
two trochees:
0| mighty |
mouth'd in |
ventor of |
harmonics,
/ / / /
0| skill'd to
God- I
ft
gifted
I
sing of
|
|
organ-
Time
|
/
voice of
or E
|
|
ternity,
/
England,
|
Milton a |
name to re i
soimd for |
ages; |
/ I t t t t
Saw the |
white im [
placable |
Aphro |
dite, |
|
fire
lit on
of |
|
sunset |
t
western
|
|
t
waters;
|
|
t It |
Saw the re |
luctant |
/ t t t § t
Feet, the |
straining |
plumes of the |
doves that [
drew
her I
Looking
Back
/
to I
|
always
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tit |
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looking with
back to the |
|
necks re
hills
t
where
]
verted,
|
I
under
|
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lene;
trochee.
—
IMITATIONS OF CLASSICAL METERS 185
It
t
II
Love, what
III
t
lovely,
|
f
ailed
we thought,
thee to leave
II
|
with love?
I
]
life
|
that was
I
I
made |
What sweet |
visions of sleep |
lured thee away, |
/ f I
Lured or led thee, alas, out of the sun, down to the sunless
grave?
— Swinburne.
I t t t t
So I
in ire I
she spake |
adjust |
ing " dis |
uni |
tedly then |
her yoke. |
I t t I
At I
his own |
rebuke |
the li |
on " doth |
his heart ]
to a f u ry
I
spur,
Trochee: — '
Amphibrach:
Anapaest: '
Amphimacer: — '
'
Dactyl: — '
of one stanza.
CHAPTER XXI
FRENCH FORMS
The charm of these strictly written verses is undoubtedly in-
creasedby some knowledge of their technical rules. Every
quality that poetry demands, whether clearness of thought, ele-
gance of expression, harmonious sound, or faultless rhythm, is
needed as much in these shapes as in unfettered verse. Gleeson
White, Introduction to Ballades and Rondeaus.
That highten balades, roundels, virelaies. Chaucer, The
Legend of Good Women.
the last line of each stanza and the last line of the envoy.
The sense of each stanza must be continuous, and the re-
frain should complete the sense naturally and without
awkwardness. The refrain should recur each time without
The old French poets insisted that the length of the refrain
should govern not only the length of the line but also the
number of lines in the stanza —that is, that a ten-syllable
refrain necessitated a ten-line stanza, and an eight-syllable
(After Villon)
ENVOY
ENVOY
Sad eyes! The blue sea laughs, as heretofore.
Oh! singing birds your happy music pour!
Ah, poets, leave the sordid earth awhile;
Flit to these ancient gods we still adore
"It may be we shall touch the happy isle!"
FRENCH FORMS 1 93
Then hey !
— for the ripple of laughing rhyme
ENVOY
french forms 1 95
What is to Come
(Rondeau)
What is to come we know not. But we know
That what has been was good was good to show,—
Better to hide, and best of all to bear,
We are the masters of the days that were:
We have lived, we have loved, we have suffered—even so.
refrain.
In Vain Today
(Rondeau)
In vain today I scrape and blot:
The nimble words, the phrases neat.
Decline to mingle and to meet.
My skill is all forgone, forgot.
— "
In vain to-day.
Envoi
(Roundel)
a, a, b, or a, b, a, b, — b, a, a, b, — a, b, a, b, a, b. The two
first lines are repeated as the seventh and eighth, and
again as the thirteenth and fourteenth lines. The effect
Rondelet
"Which way he went?"
I —
know not how should I go spy
Which way he went?
I only know him gone. "Relent?"
—
He never will unless I die!
And then, what will it signify
Which way he went?
—May Probyn.
The Rondeau Redouble has little in common with the
rondeau but the name. It consists of six four-line stanzas
rhymed alternately on two rhymes, and its intricacy is
caused by the use in turn of the f oiir lines of the first stanza
Rondeau Redouble
Villanelle
Triolet
The Pavilion
(Kyrielle)
&, —a, a, b,
— a, a, b, in multiples of three for the first
stanza, b, b, c,
— b, b, c,
— b, b, c, in the second, c, c,
Spring Sadness
(Virelai)
As I sat sorrowing.
Love came and bade me sing
A joyous song and meet.
For see (said he) each thing
Virelai Nouveau
Good-bye to the Town ! good-bye
Hurrah! for the sea and the sky!
In the street the flower-girls cry;
In the street the water carts ply:
And a fluter, with features awry.
Plays fitfully, "Scots wha hae"
And the throat of that fluter is dry;
Good-bye to the Town! good-bye!
******
Hurrah for the sea
******
and the sky.
FRENCH FORMS 20$
Chant Royal
To F. H. W.
The royal songs that men have simg abide.
Look down the cloudy vista of the years,
And where huge wars dim phantom kings divide,
The hostage was the singer, so appears
At last a gilded helm from out the gloom
And Agamemnon rises, and a plume
;
ENVOY
When thine shall be, with all the good and great,
—M. E. R.
The Sestina originated in Provence at the end of the
thirteenth century, and was one of the intricate measures
in which the Troubadours delighted.
It was invented by that Arnaut Daniel whom Dante
praises in the " Purgatorio, " and whom Petrarch calls the
"great master of love."
The sestina is the most complicated and arbitrary of all
The same six words are repeated in the middle of the line
1 stanza 123456
2 " 615243
"
3 364125
4
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532614
"
5 451362
"
6 246531
In the concluding three-line stanza they run 2, 5, — 4, 3,
-6, I.
Sestina
(Pantoum)
poem and
this chapter, write the introductory stanzas of a
give an idea of how you would handle the body of the poem
and its conclusion.
11. If time affords, complete the poem.
12. Transfer the same theme to some other French form,
if practicable.
CHAPTER XXII
SONG-WRITING
poets who
Think to climb Parnassus
By dint of Greek.
The reason is that the writers had not in mind the require-
ments of the singing voice, and too often grouped words
which read well, but did not sing well.
General Hints
sing it.
SONG- WRITING 21
Kathleen Mavourneen
The lark from her light wing the bright dew is shaking-
Kathleen Mavourneen! what, slumbering still?
Serenade
My lady sleeps
Sleeps
My lady sleeps!
Sleeps!
My lady sleeps!
Sleeps
!
My lady sleeps
Sleeps!
—Henry Wadsworth Longfellow.
Exercises for Class Use and Self-Instruction
sustained note?
5. What other vowel sounds are desirable there?
6. What class of sounds should be avoided at the ends
of lines?
7. Is alliteration desirable in the lines of a song? Give
reasons supporting your answer.
8. As liberal awards await writers of successful "popu-
lar" songs, it is well to study the words of such songs, and
to determine the qualities in which they frequently re-
semble one another; as, for instance, in a chorus composed
largely of dactyls appropriate to waltz music. Therefore
write an analysis of a "song hit" of the day.
doors theme.
220 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
livelier sentiments.
15. Make a scrap-book collection of as many hymn
meters as you can gather, affixing to each an analysis of
the accents, or beats of the musical rhythm.
CHAPTER XXIII
LIGHT VERSE
And
hold melting rhymes as an insult to art,
For oh! the sweet swing of it, oh! the dear ring of it.
Oh! the strong pulse of it, right from the heart,
Art or no art.
—
Ella Wheeler Wilcox, in Lippincotf s Magazine.
verse is poetry.
Light verse offers a wider range of form than does even
real poetry, for it is obvious that, on the one hand, the
parodist may imitate every form known to the poets while
the whimsical rhymster will invent new conceits every
day. At once the broadest and highest-grade group of
I. Vers de Societe
utmost importance.
"The qualities of brevity are absolutely essential. The
poem may be tinctured with a well-bred philosophy, it may
be whimsically sad, it may be gay and gallant, it may be
> Carolyn Wells, Brander Matthews, Frederick Locker-Lamp-
son, Austin Dobson, and W. Davenport Adams, among others.
224 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
Beware
Beware! Beware!
Trust her not,
She is fooling thee!
Take care!
It's a fool's cap for thee to wear.
Beware ! Beware
Trust her not.
She is fooling thee
—Henry Wadsworth Longfellow.
My Chaperon
No Dragon is my chaperon
She's full of life and charm.
226 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
«
Is her hand so soft and pure?
Imust press it, to be sure;
2. Satirical Verse
subtlety and turn wit into assault. All genuine wits scorn
LIGHT VERSE 23
Satire that goes too far defeats itself, for it loses the
A Man's Requirements
Woman's Will
To Be or Not To Be
" You wish to wed my daughter?" said
The father of fair Flo.
" What are your prospects? " George replied
No More
I played with Maude in days of yore,
When Bridge became her craze;
But now I play with her no more,
She has such winning ways!
—La Touche Hancock.
The Typical Topical Song
In the midst of the craze for these musical plays
Which hold such remarkable sway,
When an item like plot doesn't matter a jot,
Women's Chorus
One or T'other
An acrobat I chanced to meet,
And these wise words he said
"We must be light upon our feet,
A Nature Faker
The tadpole is a curious beast,
A paradox complete;
For he is but four inches long.
When he has grown four feet.
— E. F. MOBERLY.
Other rhymesters a-plenty adopt other metrical forms
for their punning verse.
Pyro-Technique
Miss Isabel Smith is the maid that we hire,
light verse 24
I am out.
—James H. Hubbard.
Sometimes a bit of punning verse like the following will
—Topeka Capital.
:
— Denver Post.
Now here we have the daily rhyme,
Though not as fierce as some,
Penned by the office bum-pkin, with
The accent on the bum.
—Atlanta Georgian.
If I were a copy-reader,
Forced to suffer such attacks,
The Suicide
Christmas
Come, draw yo' cheers up, I's sho' I do' min' it.
(a) Word-renderings.
The Bat
(After Jane Taylor)
{b) Form-renderings
(After Poe)
Silver flute!
How it demi-semi-quavers
On the maddened air of night
And defieth all endeavors
To escape the sound or sigh
Of the flute, flute, flute.
Golden flute.
As he plays.
All the days!
How he'll stop us on our ways
With its praise!
(After Chaucer)
LIGHT VERSE 25
— J. G. Neumarker.
252 the art of versification
Reverse Engush
A Chain of Parodies
The Original
man of renown,
In our quiet old town lived a
And he was exceedingly wise.
He made a mad rush at a blackberry bush
And jumped in and scratched out his eyes.
When he saw they were out, he hunted about
Till that bush's twin brother he found,
Which he quickly jumped in, sadly scarring his skin,
And emerged with his eyes safe and sound.
—Edmund Moberly.
5. Nonsense Verse
outside the zoo; Miss Wells, who makes good verse as well
as judges it; and several other scarcely less ingenious and
graceful rhymesters.
Jabberwocky
nation utterly.
Observe now the lilting quality of these lines by Lear:
The Misanthrope
I wisht he'd climb an' climb, an' madly shout he had one
I'd burst my shell,
LIGHT VERSE 26
—Robert T. Hardy.
A lachrymose lady from Sioux
Whose lover was sadly untrioux,
Refused to believe
She could not retrieve
Her lover by crying, "bioux, hioux!''
—J. B. E.
6. Whimsical Verse
memory helps.
Ye Deceitful Balladist
that
old
and
fra-
grant
friend
which makes my
life worth while!
Sweet peace it's very
sure to lend, till I
find worry's at an
end, and stretch
back with a
smile.
— Charles C. Jones.
;
At Yule Time
It's
now the
time for
Christmas trees,
and
swear
by all
the
saints
above
that
everything's exquisite
gifts to make to
every one, and
that's the very reason
—Charles La Tourette.
— — :
he
gait
the
is
This
the
he
'
CO
• .22 • W3 • -3
• ^• • -^ •
—J. B. E.
— ; 1
LIGHT VERSE 27
(S) Acrostics
Single Acrostic
Special Acrostic
A Valentine
(4) Enigma
The Letter O
A Man or Letters
My Widespread Indebtedness
Iowa Tenn. to my Cousin Cal.
I'll. Pa. it as soon as I Kan.
Del. Johnsing (Col.) I owe for the Wash.
And Mo. to the cook, Miss. Anne!
— Augustine W. Breedin.
(8) Lipograms
Beginning Rhyme
Rat-tat it went upon the lion's chin;
" That hat, I know it " cried the joyful
!
girl
The Purist
mice and rats, and with nice long sticks of stovewood he'd
play solos on my slats. Thus I gained a deep devotion for
our language undefiled, and it drives me nearly batty when
I hear my only child springing wads of hard-boiled lan-
guage such as dips and yeggmen use, and I want a reforma-
tion or I'll stroke you with my shoes. Using slang is just a
habit, just a cheap and dopey trick ; if you hump yourself
and try to, you can shake it pretty quick. Watch my
curves and imitate them, weigh your words before they're
spnmg, and in age you'll bless the habit that you formed
when you were young."
—Walt Mason.
(12) Alphabetical
(13) Monorhymes
Chain of Phrases
—Barnaby Googe.
;
Betty bit.
—Anonymous.
(17) Equivocal
UGHT VERSE 28
Echo
Asked of Echo, t'other day
(Whose words are few and often funny),
What to a novice, she could say
Of courtship, love and matrimony.
Quoth Echo, plain: "Matter-o'-money!"
Telegram
Though but a late germ, with a wondrous elation,
Yet like a great elm it o'ershadows each station,
Et malgre the oflSce is still a large free mart.
So joyous the crowd was, you'd thought it a glee marl,
But they raged at no news from the nations belligerent,
And I said, "Let 'em rage, since the air is refrigerant. " Etc.
—
Dr. John Abernkthy.
Bertha
(The italicized words are made up of the same letters.)
Anonymous.
;
(21) Charade
Disconsolate
Dithyramb to an Aeroplane
O!
Aeroplane
Thou product of the mighty modern brain,
Whose flight is faster than a railroad train.
To thee I sing!
For thee I set my Pegasus a-wing
And bring
A meed of praise. Although
Just how much is a meed I do not know.
But that's nor here nor there.
Aeroplane,
O!
Must I
O Aeroplane,
These wonderings are vain!
So much I want to know.
Aeroplane, O!
Things thou alone canst tell
That —well
With thee I fain would chin;
So, if thou'rt passing by — drop in
—Carolyn Wells.
I
286 the art of versification
poetry in general.
APPENDICES 289
—
'Note. Nearly all English meters may be scanned by the use of one or other
of the four kinds of metrical feet first mentioned above, viz.: iambus,
trochee, anapsst, or dactyl.
290 THE ART OF VERSIFICATION
APPENDIX B
Some Books for the Further Study of Versification
I . General Collections
2. British Anthologies
APPENDICES 295
J. American Anthologies
scholarship.
300 IKDEX
Hexameter, 115, 179, 289, Iambus, 37, 40, 41, 48, 52,
290. no, III, 1X2, 113, 186, 288,
Hiawatha, 51. 289.
HiGGINSON, T. W., 100. Ich bin Dein, 267.
His Plan, 239. / count my time, etc., 174.
Hodgson, S. H., 133. Idyls of the King, 145.
Holmes, 0. W., 121, 222, Iliad, 114, 131.
234- Imagery, 28.
Homer, 15, 25, 38, 92, 107, Imagination, 8, 23, 29.
i3i> 134. Imperfect rhymes, 70.
304 INDEX
Lyrics, 20, 69, 73, 138, 157- Miller's Daughter, The, 32.
162, 214. Milliken, R. a., 84.
'
3o6 INDEX
Vision, 32.
Whimsical shapes, 268.
Vision Concerning Piers the
Whimsical verse, 265-285.
Plowman, The, 85. White, Gleeson, 188.
Vision of Jtidgment, A, 32.
Whitman, Walt, 60.
Whittier, J. G., 48, 251.
Vision of Sir Launfal, The,
Wilcox, Ella Wheeler,
6.
221-222.
Voice of the East to the Voice
Wilson, McLandburgh,
of the West, 243.
243-
Voice of the West to the Voice
Winter's Tale, A, 105, 124,
of the East, 243. 144.
VoiTURE, Vincent, 194. Wit, 227.
Voltaire, A., 229. Winthrup, Anne W., 226.
Von Kraft, Karl, 262. Wolfe, Charles, 248.
Vowel-rhyme, 83. Woman's Will, 235.
Women's Chorus, 237.
W Words, 22, 100-108.
Wagner, Richard, 85. Wordsworth, William,
Warning, 244. 7. 12, 33, 54, 126, 145,
War-Song of Dinas Vawr, 150, 151, 171, 173, 180,
77- 266.
"Washington Herald," 261. World is too mu^h unth us.
Watts-Dunton, Theo- The, 174.
dore, 6, 172. Wreck, The, 22.
Ways of Death. The, 197. Wreck of the Hesperus, 155.
Weak endings, 144. Wrenched accent, 127.
Weak syllables, 41. "Writing the Short-Story,"
Wells, Carolyn, 223, 231, 130.
246, 253, 256, 257, 263, Wyatt, Sir Thomas, 163.
284, 285.
Whateley, Archbishop,
II. Yawp, 284.
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