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• Introduction (起) / Causes(承) /Climax(轉)/ Conclusion (合)
Pic 1-2 Background Six W (Where/When/What/Who/Why)
• Where:
• When:
• What:
• Who:
• Why:
Five senses Five senses (see/smell/touch/hear)
Feeling (with
reason)
Pic 3-4 Topic • All of a sudden, ________________
sentence • Out of surprise, _________________
Feeling • Nervous + (Reason)
• Scared + (Reason)
• Terrified + (Reason)
Pic 3-4 Topic
sentence
Feelings/ • Yourself:
Reactions • Your family:
• The owner:
Conclusion What did you
do?
Feelings/what
you have
learnt
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Starting a passage
Background
• Someone’s birthday
• School Open Day
• Holiday
• Celebration/Party
• Ordinary day for school
• Family Dat
Outdoor With the beautiful weather, today was
activities a perfect day for __________________
Opening
(outdoor activities) and time in the
fresh air.
Simple opening Today was an ordinary day for
with a twist ____________________, until an
unexpected event turned everything
upside down.
Bad Day Today was the worst day of my life, and
I hope I will never have to experience it
again
Bad day -> Today started out really bad, but then
good day something amazing happened.
Sentences pattern
Relative Clause • Miss Chan is my English Teacher who is always
(which/that/who/where) friendly to her students
As well as (and) • I enjoy hiking in the mountains as well as
swimming in the lake during the summer.
用 participle phrase 開頭 • Walked along the street, he met his neighbour.
• Worried about the test, I study very hard
Using simile (比喻) • Like a leopard, Jimmy kept running and won the
competition
Use of connectives • Moreover
• In addition
• Furthermore
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• Also
Use of connectives • Therefore /so / so that
• Because / since
• Although
• But / However
• Consequently (as a result)
• Fortunately/Luckily
Vocabulary / phrase describe feelings
Happy • Delighted (eg. I am delighted)
• Jump for joy (I jumped for joy)
• I'm over the moon about it. (very happy)
Sad • Gloomy (Feeling gloomy all day)
• Cry my eyes out (very very sad)
• I am feeling blue
Angry • Furious (My mum is furious about my exam grade)
• Irritated (The noise irritates me)
Scared • Terrified
• Frightened
• I'm trembling with fear.
Nervous • Anxious
• My heart is racing with anxiety.
• My stomach is in knots
Tired • Exhausted
