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Things to consider before Monday

Persuasive #1Inventions
1. What problem/situation is your invention attempting to solve or deal with? Describe it in 1st person language, like it happened to you. (ethos)
Every time, whenever I go to school, the weather would be so good but when I return home, it will start raining heavily, and having an umbrella in my bag always has been a problem, so I have been thinking, I'm sure this has happened to other people before! So why not create a revolutionary product, the umbrella vest.

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How does it work? (logos) It is going to be an umbrella attached umbrella around them, so that whenever your head. The product will look likes to activate the umbrella, open it like like how you would close an umbrella. What can it do? What cant it do?

to a vest, so that people can always have an it rain, you will always have a shelter over an umbrella attached to a vest, so when u want how you open a normal umbrella, and close it

It would be able to do all the functions a normal umbrella would be able to, however it will not be able to retract the head of the umbrella protruding out of the vest. It would be able to work and perform like a normal umbrella.

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What kind of people will use your product? Who is the products intended consumer? It is suitable for literally anyone, but it's targeted more for the adults, in my opinion teenagers will not need this invention because, I feel that rainy days are teenagers best friend, making use of the rain as an opportunity to help your guy/girl friend to hold an umbrella, or buy the most stylish umbrella to outshine your friends, this umbrella on the other hand, is very simple hence I feel that it is more directed to the adults. How will you show your audience ethos?
I'm going to show the Audience how to do it, and how it should be used, I will also show the audience how it would look like on me, so I will be the first model working on the product, I will tell them that it is not just a scam, and it actually works.

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How will you show your audience logos? I will be telling them how the umbrella vest actually works, the basic logic about the umbrella vest how the Umbrella is going to be activated from the vest. How will you show your audience pathos?
I would like to make this invention directed to handicap male/female who only have 1hand, so what happen when it rains, how do they carry their bag and umbrella at the same time! With this product it will allow them to carry an umbrella and also carry their bag! It can also work for people with no hands,or lazy people with two hands, who are lazy to carry the umbrella, so appealing to the disabled is the pathos. How will you construct your prototype/model? What will it look like? I will be attaching a medium sized umbrella to a vest. As simple as that and no one even thought of it before! Once this item is famous, the vest can come in all kind of sizes and colour. It going to look like a umbrella together with a vest.

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What are you going to put on your (required) poster?

I'm going to draw a vest on the poster and demonstrate how to attach the umbrella to the vest. I will also draw roughly how the end product will look like.

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