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Chinglish
horse horse tiger tiger
open water
watch sister
up street buy things
give you some colour see see
heart flower angry open
I call Li old big. toyear 25.
American Chinese not enough


You see no see people mountain people
sea
You ask me , me ask who ?
How are you ? How old are you?
You no see, I now very busy. One side
play go!!!
We two who and who
You give me stop!!


I this morning eat breakfast.
Have you eat meal?
I'm a larger school student.
I'm very like play basketball.
We should hard study.
But I better like listen music.
Live to old, study to old.

I had breakfast this morning.
Good morning/afternoon/evening!
Im a college student.
We must work/ study hard.
Its never too old to learn.
But I like listening to music better.
I like playing basketball very much.







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, Peter

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1. 100
2.
3.
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive
your letter. I will tell you
something about my English
study and hometown. .
read and write
find it hard
fluent English to write Great changes
roads

had taken place in my hometown
buildings
widened It will be wonderful when
you come to China if you are free
show you around
I will be glad to
;;13
progress
it
well

widened
roads
My hometown is becoming more and more
are
;;20.
learn
of the teachers and my
progress
read and write
it hard to learn
hard work.
write letters in fluent English
found
had become
Welcome to China if you have time
show you around
;;15.

1.My hometown had big change, build many
houses,
2. My hometown has great changes.




Great changes had taken place in my hometown
there. For example, many new houses had been
built and roads had been widened.
3. If you get to China that have time, me with
you look my hometown.

4. I will welcome to you.

,
Under my teacher and classmates all help
to me ,.


I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill
show you around my hometown if you are free .
Welcome to China.
With the help of my teachers and classmates,

1. I will visit my hometown with you.
2. If you have time, I will take you to
travel around my hometown.

I will show you around my hometown if
you are free.

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One possible versions:
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something
about my English study and hometown.
It is six years since I began to learn English.
With the help of my teachers and classmates, I
have made some progress in English. However I
still find English hard to learn, such as some
difficult idioms which made me confused. No
matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind
to master this useful language by my hard work.

Not long ago I returned to my hometown
and found great changes had taken place
there. Many new houses had been built and
roads had been widened. My hometown is
getting modern and more and more
beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to
come to China and I ll show you around
my hometown when you are on leave.
Best wishes,
Li Hua


Six steps for writing (
1. Cross-question()
Main idea Style
Verb tense Person
2. Seize the major points
/key words ()
3.Arrangement()
4. Sentences connection()

Words/phrases Sentences
6. Error correcting
( )
5. Express your opinion (

Conjunctions/ conjunctive adverbs
sentences
passage

1.
3.

2.
1. Because the weather was good, our journey
was comfortable.

2.We all think he is a great man.

3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.


Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.
I.
We all think highly of him .
A good idea occurred to me.
/ A good idea suddenly struck me.
4.The students there neednt pay for their books.

5. She went to Australia in order to study music.


6. When he spoke, he felt more and more
excited.

She went to Australia for the purpose of studying
music.
The more he spoke, the more excited he
felt.
Books are free for the students there.
II. (



1.
How happy I was when I received your letter!

2.
It was this young boy who helped the old granny.

3.
Only in this way can you solve this problem.

4.
They read while walking or riding on a bus.





5with
I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street
with a handbag in her hand.
6
Lets come to the main teaching building, at
the back of which stands the school library.
7
Thats what I should do.
8
Time passed quickly before we knew it.





III.
1. ;
whats more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition
2.
but; however; yet;
instead; on the other hand;
on the contrary.
3.
: since; as;
because (of ); so; thus; therefore;
as a result;

4.
: if ;on condition ( that );
as long as
: unless : or else

5.
: when ; while
: after : before
: until
: notuntil
: as soon as
: later; afterwards
: soon : lately; recently
:since : from then on
6.
:firstly : above all
: secondly : then; next
: finally; in the end

7.
: in other words;
that is to say;

8.
: for instance; for example;
like; such as that is to say, namely,
actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
9.
: in fact; actually;
as a matter of fact
: to tell you the truth

10.
:
on the whole; in short; all in all;
in general; in a word, finally, in
conclusion, generally speaking, as
you know, in the end ,
11.
therefore ; otherwise ; finally ;
furthermore ;Thus ; namely ;
although ; afterwards ; personally;

12. thus, therefore, so, as a
result, seeing that, luckily,
unfortunately
13. above all, indeed, surely,
certainly, of course, after all, without
any delay, at least, at most , most
important, undoubtedly

Practice


1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street
___________ he heard someone cry for help.
2. It was not long _______ the police came .
3.___________he heard the cry for help, he
jumped into the water to save the girl.


when
before
As soon as
4. We can go downtown and do some
shopping. __________, we can pay a
visit to some places of interest.
5.I shared the cost of the gas with my
friends .___________, I saved $80.
6. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth.
___________ , it may make us fat.
In addition
As a result
Whats worse
Pre-writing --- Fill in the blanks with the proper
words or phrases according to the meaning of the
passage:
World Englishes come from those countries
where English _____ ____ _____ ____ ,
either because of foreign rule _____ because
of its special role as an i___________
language. Today, more people speak English
____ their first , second or foreign language
t____ ____ _____.
plays an important role
or
international
as
than ever before
China may have the l________ number
of English speakers. Native English
speakers can understand each other
_____ ______ they dont speak the
same kind of English. English has
changed ____ time. Nowadays the
number of people ______ ()
English in China _____ increasing
_______ () .
largest
even if
over
learning
is
rapidly


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Writing




1. 100-120
2.
3.
November 26, 2008
Dear Zhang,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my
advice on how to learn English well.

___________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua




Why should we
learn English?
to use for business
to use in school
to write to pen friends
to talk to
native speakers
to read
English
books
to listen to English
music and watch movies
to take a spoken English course;
read more English newspapers and
magazines ;
watch more English TV programmes;
to learn and sing English songs;
make more English friends/ make
friends with the people who speak English
as their first language/mother tongue
Brainstorming


youd better; I think;
I suggest that.;
first/ at first/first of all;
secondly; then; as a matter of
fact; generally speaking;
I wish/I hopeetc.