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Describing participation in a project that reflects interest in a

profession
M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn nh quan tm n mt ngh
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1.

Describe participation in a project that

reflects interest in a profession.
M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn
nh quan tm n mt ngh.

V d
My deep interest in the radiotechnology profession led to
my active participation in a project aimed at developing a
more sound quality assurance system for use in public
construction projects.
Quan tm su sc ca ti trong ngh radiotechnology dn
n tham gia tch cc ca ti trong mt d an nhm phat
trin mt h thng m bo cht lng m thanh hn
s dng trong cac d an cng trnh cng cng.

V d
My active participation in a project aimed at assessing the
quality of a construction firms services reflects my avid
interest in strategic marketing. This undertaking involved
collaborating with other marketing planning personnel,
quality management employees and educational training
staff.
Tham gia tch cc ca ti trong mt d an nhm anh gia
cht lng dch v ca mt cng ty xy dng phn anh s
quan tm cung nhit ca ti trong chin lc tip th. Cam
kt ny lin quan n hp tac vi nhn vin lp k hoch
tip th khac, nhn vin qun l cht lng v o to can
b giao dc.

V d
My recent research emphasis on implementing quality
control measures in construction management allowed me
to grasp the theoretical and practical concepts related to
this discipline as well as future trends.
Ti nhn mnh nghin cu gn y v vic thc hin cac
bin phap kim soat cht lng trong qun l xy dng
cho php ti nm bt cac khai nim l thuyt v thc
tin lin quan n k lut ny cng nh xu hng trong
tng lai.

V d
Although research on construction management practices
in long-term residential communities initially began
overseas, I was able to extend those results and make
them applicable to the needs of Taiwans growing elderly
population.
Mc d nghin cu v phng thc qun l xy dng
trong cng ng dn c lu di nc ngoi ban u bt
u, ti c th m rng nhng kt qu v lm cho h ap
dng i vi cac nhu cu ca ngi cao tui ngy cng
tng ca i Loan.

V d
Given my commitment to the civil engineering profession, I
actively participated in graduate level research to optimize
work productivity on a construction site, having collaborated
with others in related projects.
Cho cam kt ca ti vi ngh cng trnh dn dng, ti tch
cc tham gia nghin cu sau i hc ti u ha nng
sut lm vic trn cng trng xy dng, c cng tac vi
nhng ngi khac trong cac d an lin quan.

2.

Summarize the main results of

that project.
Tm tt cc kt qu chnh ca
d n .

V d
Our collaborative efforts led to the discovery of
N lc hp tac ca chng ti dn n vic phat hin ra
Our results further allowed us to clarify how
Kt qu ca chng ti cho php chng ti tip tc lm r nh th no

My recent research enabled me to discern between

Nghin cu gn y ca ti cho php ti phn bit gia
The results of that project confirmed the effectiveness of our procedure.
Cac kt qu ca d an khng nh hiu qu ca th tc ca chng ti.
Those project results demonstrated the feasibility of
Nhng kt qu d an chng minh tnh kh thi ca

V d
The results of that project confirmed the ability of our
system not only to evaluate precisely bottlenecks in
construction, but also to evaluate immediately the
manufacturing systems status with respect to rescheduling
delayed tasks.
Cac kt qu ca d an khng nh kh nng ca h thng
ca chng ti khng ch anh gia chnh xac vng mc
trong xy dng, m cn anh gia ngay lp tc tnh trng
h thng sn xut ca lin quan n gia hn nhim v b tr
hon vi.

3. Highlight the contribution of that project to

the company or the sector to which it
belongs.
Lm ni bt s ng gp ca d an cho
cng ty hoc ngnh m n thuc v.

V d
Results of that research effort clarified/elucidated/shed
light on/paved the way for/provided a valuable
reference for/facilitated the assessment of/ effectively
addressed specific problems relating to/contributed to
efforts to
Kt qu ca nhng n lc nghin cu lm sang t /
lm sang t / lm sang t / m ng cho / cung cp
mt ti liu tham kho c gia tr cho / to iu kin cho
vic anh gia / gii quyt hiu qu cac vn c th
lin quan n / ng gp vo nhng n lc

V d
Based on the results of that research effort,
several engineering firms attempted to modify
their services in order to increase their
competence in the highly competitive
construction sector.
Da trn kt qu ca nhng n lc nghin
cu, mt s cng ty k thut c gng
thay i dch v ca h tng nng lc ca
h trong lnh vc xy dng cnh tranh cao.

V d
Results of that study demonstrated that
successfully adopting knowledge management
practices among employees enhance the ability of
company executives to interact with all staff
members.
Kt qu nghin cu chng minh rng vic ap
dng thnh cng phng phap qun l kin thc
gia cac nhn vin nng cao kh nng ca cac
giam c iu hnh cng ty tng tac vi tt c
cac nhn vin.

4. Compliment the company or organization

at which one is seeking employment on its
efforts in this area.
Khen cng ty, t chc m l mt trong
nhng tm kim vic lm trn n lc ca
mnh trong lnh vc ny.

V d
Your company, a leader in this field of
research, could greatly enhance my
capabilities in construction managementrelated topics in civil engineering.
Cng ty ca bn, mt nh lnh o trong
lnh vc nghin cu, c th tng cng
ang k kh nng ca ti trong cac ch
lin quan n qun l xy dng trong cng
trnh dn dng.

V d
Given your companys considerable experience in
developing construction engineering products for national
infrastructure projects, I am especially impressed with
your ability to evaluate the potential commercialization of
various technologies in the Taiwan market.
Vi kinh nghim ang k ca cng ty bn trong vic phat
trin sn phm c kh xy dng cho cac d an c s h
tng quc gia, ti c bit n tng vi kh nng ca bn
anh gia tim nng thng mi ca cac cng ngh
khac nhau trong th trng i Loan.

V d
Given my professional experiences, your company offers
a competitive work environment and highly skilled
professionals: these ingredients are essential to
continually upgrading knowledge skills and expertise in
my chosen career path.
c kinh nghim chuyn mn ca ti, cng ty ca bn
cung cp mt mi trng lm vic cnh tranh v cac
chuyn gia c tay ngh cao: nhng thnh phn ny l rt
cn thit tip tc nng cp cac k nng kin thc v
chuyn mn trong con ng s nghip la chn ca ti.

V d
While offering renowned product brands in the Taiwan
market from the United States, your franchise highly
prioritizes quality assurance and professionals in a
diverse range of engineering fields.
Trong khi cung cp sn phm thng hiu ni ting
trn th trng i Loan t Hoa K, nhng quyn
thng mi ca bn anh gia cao u tin m bo
cht lng v cac chuyn gia trong mt phm vi a
dng ca cac lnh vc k thut.

V d
My profound interest in radiation detection explains
my active participation in a project aimed at
developing a novel method and promoting public
awareness of radiation protection in public buildings
and residential complexes.
Quan tm su sc ca ti trong vic phat hin bc
x gii thch tham gia tch cc ca ti trong mt d
an nhm phat trin mt phng phap mi v nng
cao nhn thc ca cng chng v an ton bc x
trong cac ta nh cng cng v khu dn c.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 1
While working on his Bachelors degree in Chemistry from
National Tsing Hua University, Sam developed a love for
laboratory work and a strong interest in quality control. At his
work in the Quality Assurance Department of ABC company,
he focuses on statistical process control (SPC) and
measurement systems analysis (MSA), and occasionally
performs MASK inspection. As well known, an unstable or
inaccurate measurement system causes errors in process
control and judgment. Sam is especially concerned with
determining whether a measurement system is stable,
ensuring repeatability, reproducibility and matching of a
measurement system, and criteria for assessment.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 2
Electrical engineering has fascinated Mary from an early age,
and she has taken related courses since university. Having
nearly completed a Master's degree in Electronics Engineering
from National Chiao Tung University, her research focuses on
discrete signal process, digital control and VLSI. Graduate
school has taught her innovative ways of solving problems
logically and independently. With her strong interest in the
impact on our lives by integrated circuit technologies, Mary
believes that GHI Corporation would provide the ideal working
environment for her to further pursue her professional interests.
Becoming a member of the GHI family would also allow her to
apply her strong research fundamentals to this exciting industrial
field of integrated circuit design.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 3
John has long been intrigued by science and technology. This interest
culminated in his successful completion of a Master's degree in
Electrical Engineering from National Taiwan University, one of
Taiwan's renowned universities. He then entered the hi-tech IC design
industry, with a particular interest in logic design, communications and
computer networks. While at graduate school, John was involved in a
project in which he simulated an Ethernet protocol. His first
assignment at JKL Corporation was to develop an Ethernet MAC
controller. He is now developing a Serial ATA controller, a computer
network product. John is glad that he has been able to apply his
practical laboratory experience from graduate school to the highly
competitive working environment that JKL Corporation offers.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 4
The intellectual rigor of highly theoretical study over nearly four years in
the Department of Nuclear Science at National Tsing Hua University
equipped Jim with a solid background in independently conducting
experiments. During this period, his extensive laboratory training made
him extremely conscientious and careful in using laboratory instruments,
while ensuring timely completion of tasks. Following his undergraduate
studies, he served as a research assistant in the Institute of
Environmental Engineering at National Taiwan University. As a highly
adept investigator in the laboratory, Jim learned not only how seemingly
disparate fields are related to each other, but also how to succeed in
complex projects that force him to apply theoretical concepts in a
practical context. This practical experience greatly increased his
competence in obtaining pertinent data and analyzing problems
independently. ABC Corporation will hopefully find these qualities to be
invaluable to any research in which he is involved.

M t s tham gia trong mt d

n phn nh quan tm n mt
ngh : V d 5

Owing to a deep interest in biotechnology, Jane has actively

participated in projects aimed at establishing a humane leukemia
disease model in zebrafish embryos. Her experimental results
demonstrated the effectiveness of her proposed model. This
disease model provided a formation mechanism of use in other
animal models. This model is also a valuable reference for
physicians when they treat patients. After carefully reading DEF
Company's on-line promotional material, Jane is especially
interested in its innovative product development strategy and in
its laboratory, which are responsible for the companys leading
its field. She is confident of DEFs ability to give her the
opportunity to build upon her previous experience in the above
area.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 6
Following graduation from university, Sam joined the army as a professional soldier
and officer. He was initially responsible for handling the administration of the physical
examinations of six thousand new soldiers out of a large squadron of around ten
thousand military personnel. In this capacity, he was directly responsible to a
general. The environment provided him with many opportunities not only to come
into contact with hospital staff and physicians, but also to familiarize himself with
large-scale operations. These valuable experiences enabled Sam to comprehend
not only why confusion often arose in a health-related environment, but also why
health-care administration students become discouraged with many management
methods that are neither applicable to practical business nor innovative. His second
job involved managing the activities of nearly 160 soldiers. Applying his previous
experiences to the tasks at hand, Sam realized how students lack experience in
implementing various models and conducting operations in medium-sized and largescale organizations. His experiences have allowed him to understand fundamental
concepts of importance to any professional in the health care and management
sector. LMN Corporation can provide him with a unique opportunity to build upon his
previous experiences in the above areas.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 7
Max is concerned with the needs and satisfaction of hospital
emergency patients, as evidenced by his recent collaboration with
colleagues in a study that involved a questionnaire given to family
members. It contained 125 queries on the level of treatment provided
by physicians and emergency staff. The level of satisfaction with the
emergency units treatment of their relatives was only 80%, reflecting
how public health personnel cannot satisfy the medical consumers
demand for quality healthcare. The results of that study provide a
valuable reference for hospital administrators regarding how to
increase the standard of care offered by public health personnel. If
Max were employed at the Veterans General Hospital in Taipei, the
medical center would offer him comprehensive training and
challenges that would greatly enhance his professional skills.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 8
When at undergraduate school, Karen participated in a National Science
Council-sponsored research project, which led to her subsequent graduate
study of Chinese herbal medicine. The findings of her research have been
published in domestic and international journals. She has also participated in
developing an undergraduate enzymology curriculum, which received praise
from both teachers and students. While researching enzyme-related topics in
graduate school, she also became adept at conducting experiments on microbe
development, genetic engineering and agent analysis. Having both participated
in curriculum development and mastered several laboratory skills, Karen was
also actively engaged in food science research aimed at the genetic
modification of microbes and analysis of related properties and agents. In
summary, her research skills acquired as an undergraduate in the Food Science
Department and as a graduate student at the Institute of Biotechnology reflect
her commitment to pursuing a biotechnology-related career in the food science
sector. Karen is confident in her ability to contribute significantly to product
development efforts at GHI Corporation, to create healthy food and medicine.

M t s tham gia trong mt d n phn

nh quan tm n mt ngh : V d 9
Ellens strong desire constantly to strengthen her statistical capabilities is
reflected by her active participation in a collaborative project with an
ophthalmologist at Kuo General Hospital in analyzing medical data and
storing them in a novel database for statistical software. Carefully analyzing
the data revealed unique phenomena related to the hospitals particular
circumstances, providing a valuable reference for administrators who are
making marketing-related decisions about the medical sector. The project
involved the use of data mining approaches to identify patients particular
needs. This project made Ellen aware that a hospital must distinguish itself
from others by its marketing practices to gain a competitive edge. Having
paid considerable attention to effective hospital management, IJK
Corporation has played a leading role in the medical sector. Extensive onthe-job training is a notable example of its commitment to quality excellence.
Such training could provide Ellen with the latest knowledge required to build
on her previous experiences in the above area.

Ti liu tham kho

Knoy, T (2005) Writing Effective
Employment Application Statements. Taipei:
Yang Chih Publishing

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