Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Ethos=Credibility
and Persona
EthosEthics
Starting
You actually have to take the time to sit
down and edit your writing.
2 Resources: Purdues OWL; The Writers
Digest Grammar Desk Reference
Editing Categories
Formatting
Quotation Marks: Chapters, articles, poems, small things inside bigger things
Your Papers Title: Should tell me what your paper is about. Specific. Not just
Assignment 2.
Numbers vs. Bullets: Use numbered lists when what you are listing something that
has some order (first, second, third).
Abbreviations: Spell things out the first time with the abbreviation in parentheses.
Use the abbreviation thereafter.
In the second issue of the journal College Composition and Communication (CCC) Bob
Markus discusses style as key to all writing courses. CCC, however, has not always lived
up to this credo.
Page Numbers: If its more than one page, include them. Generally, its also a good
idea to include some description before the page number, either an abbreviated
report title or the authors last name.
Formatting: Scannability
Mechanics
Quotations
George Smith, another supporter of cloning and the President of the Human Cloning Foundation,
believes that science fiction works have created hysteria in the popular media. Smith argues,
From Frankenstein to The Sixth Day, our popular media has done nothing but stir up the publics
anxiety about monsters (25). His views on the popular media tell us . . .
Introduce: A quote needs to introduce the author and their credentials, and place them in the
context of your argument. Generally, you must use a comma if what comes before the quote is an
incomplete sentence and a colon if what comes before the quote is a complete sentence.
Exit: After the quote you need to analyze how this quote relates to your topic and what is
meaningful within the quote.
Punctuation Inside Quote: If not including citation, commas and periods should go inside
quotation marks, not outside. Semicolons, colons, and question marks go outside.
Rhetorical theorist James Porter calls such an audience a discourse community, or the group of
individuals bound by a common interest who communicate through approved channels (38).
Ellipses: if you are removing a few words from a quote use three periods to indicate If
you are removing entire sentences from your quote, use four ellipses..
Citation: Actually citein and out of text. Dont just paste a URL at the end.
Mechanics
Em Dash vs. Colon: Use an em dash (two hyphens) in the same way you might use
parentheses. Except that where parentheses and commas tend to hide things in a
sentence, em dashes tend to highlight them.
Punctuating Bulleted Lists: If you begin a bulleted list with a colon you should
punctuate it like you would any other sentence, using commas and ending with a
period.
It is my responsibility to:
and customize the workshop to match individuals and the groups needs.
Incorrect: Butter is a great food, and sometimes can even go in coffee. (this sentence
is missing a subject after the and so doesnt receive a comma).
Mechanics
Example: Bobby is the allest kid in class and, therefore, deserves a gold star.
Apostrophes: Use apostrophes for contractions and to indicate possession, not to make
things plural.
The readers book. The readers books. The bosss wife. Kurlinkuss tree. The childrens dolls.
Romeo and Juliets story. Romeos and Juliets feuding families. The United States land claims.
Capitalization: In a title, all you should not capitalize are articles (a, an, the), prepositions
of under four letters (of, at, on, as), to, and coordinating conjunctions (and, or, for but, yet).
Grammar
While, Although, Whereas: Use while to indicate time; use although and whereas for
comparisons.
Correct: Time measurements were taken while the 1018 samples air cooled.
Incorrect: While the 1018 should have been the softest because of phase transformation, it was actually
the hardest.
Hyphenating: Hyphenate compound adjectives. This is the only time a hyphen should be used.
Generally, a hyphen should be used when you have a two-word adjective coupled to a noun like aircooled (adj) martensite (noun) or water-quenched sample. But not when the adjective comes after
the noun: the martensite was air cooled. Or when the adjectival pair is used by itself: There were
three processes: air cooling, water quenching, and tempering.
Personal Pronouns: Avoid using you in formal papers. Rather use a more specific term like the
author, the audience, the experimenter, or if one of these wont due, use one.
Simplifying Tenses: Look for places where you are using compound tenses (-ing, will be, would
have) where simple past, present, or future will do.
The tacos can vary in flavor, from spicy to mild. The tacos are varying in flavor, from spicy to mild. The
tacos vary in flavor
Free-Floating This: This was the cause of the deaths. This error in calculation was the cause of
the deaths. This error in calculation caused the deaths.
1.
Introduction: What is this paper about? What will I get from it? Why is it being written? Scannability
charthow can I get to what I want?
2.
Body Paragraph: Topic sentence, examples illustrating that topic claim, analysis of that evidence.
3.
Conclusion: Why is this information important? Applications? What to do next? Room for further
research? Recommendations.
P.E.A.: Point (claim), Evidence (quotation, description, statistic), analysis (how your
evidence relates to your claim).
What is Missing? Ethos matters a lot in lab reports. Scientists often rely on the ranking of the journal to
judge whether or not they should trust research. That is why ethos matters so much.
Purpose: State your purpose and why you are writing in your introduction. Even if its
the simplest of documents or assignments. In this analysis I will look at x,y,z in hopes
that a,b,c will happen. All texts, even memos, should have a statement like this.
Pretend everything you write is a professional document with a purpose.
Avoid Student Language: In this lab we were asked to collect and analyzes samples of
dirt from around the preserve and then analyze it in room 405 of Gittinger Hall.