What are the things we need to

look for when revising and

editing our writing?
Lets find the mistakes in this
writing
123 Funnypiece.
Drive.
Geelong, 3216.

I am writing to let you know how thankful I am to have yo as a Mum. When I

was a kid, you raised me and gave me whatever I needed. You put me threw
school always and provided me with everything I could have wanted.

as a family, we always had so much fun on our holidays to echuca I will

never forgot the feeling of steering the houseboat for the first time

Your the best Mum anyone could ask for. You are my hero and a role model
for other Mums. You helped me become who I am today and I am very thankful
for that I love you very much.

Love
Your son.
What do I do now?
Finish draft.
Revise (check spelling, punctuation, capital letters and does it makes
sense).
Complete checklist.
Check with me.
Write a good copy.
You can now decorate and make an envelope for the letter.
Hand in Finished work along with rubric.

MAKE SURE YOU DO YOUR SELF ASSESSMENT.