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2. The wording of the headings may differ. For example, you could title the third
section Findings or Main findings. However, the structure of all reports is generally
the same: a description of the background situation and purpose of the report
• details of how the study was conducted
• the main findings
• recommendations based on those findings.
A REPORT ON A RESEARCH STUDY
This study was conducted with over 500 employees of Girox Foods between March and
August 2018, with the aim of understanding their experience and expectations of the
workplace. The study covered the 80 branches of Girox Foods located in 20 European
countries. In addition to the 500 questionnaires filled out by Girox employees, 120 also
participated in ten separate focus groups where participants took part in discussions about
their levels of engagement in Girox and their hopes for the future.
A REPORT ON A RESEARCH STUDY
The top reason for employee disengagement given by 35 per cent of those surveyed is the
lack of challenging work, followed by having too many working hours (34 per cent).
59 per cent felt that their commitment to the company would improve if they were given
training opportunities to improve their business skills.
A REPORT ON A RESEARCH STUDY
On the basis of these findings, we recommend that Girox Foods adopt a more people-oriented
management style. As part of this, we should explore ways of offering more flexible working
hours to our employees and consider how we can enable employees to work from their
chosen locations.
A MUSIC REVIEW
1. The first paragraph should be a general introduction to what you're reviewing. Include
the title, artist, and an interesting fact about its success or how it was made.
I'm certainly not alone with my choice of favourite album. In fact, Bruce Springsteen's Born
in the USA has sold 30 million copies worldwide since its release in 1984. Nearly 30 years
later, in 2013, Springsteen performed the complete album in concert to the delight of some of
his many die-hard fans.
A MUSIC REVIEW
2. The main body of the review needs detailed observations. Use specific vocabulary
(e.g. lyrics, fast-paced, catchy melodies) to comment on particular songs and parts of the
music.
A fast-paced, foot-tapping rock album, Born in the USA's lyrics nevertheless carry emotional
weight.
A MUSIC REVIEW
3. It is also important to give context. Link the music to the artist's life, or what inspired them,
and the political or social context of the album.
Many tracks deal with the struggles of hard-working ordinary people and the bitterness and
anger they feel as life doesn't bring them riches or glory.
A MUSIC REVIEW
4. Try to make the review interesting and relevant to the reader. You can relate the artist's
work to real-life experience (yours or that of people in general).
It's not hard to imagine that the artist is channelling real people he knew and the life he might
have had if he hadn't become a star.
A MUSIC REVIEW
5. Use compound adjectives (e.g. fast-paced, foot-tapping, best-selling) to make your writing
highly descriptive.
Unlike many other best-selling album artists, Springsteen is still releasing chart-topping,
stadium-filling new music and remains at the top of his game in his late 60s.
A MUSIC REVIEW
This is a man who tells us our most fundamental stories about ourselves and, when you listen
to Born in the USA, those stories are as relevant today as they ever were.
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