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Sensory details
- include sight, sound, touch, smell, and taste. Writers employ the
five senses to engage a reader's interest. If you want your writing
to jump off the page, then bring your reader into the world you are
creating. When describing a past event, try and remember what
you saw, heard, touched, smelled, and tasted, then incorporate that
into your writing.
Sensory Details in Writing : Definition
The
writer's ability to create a gripping and memorable story has
much to do with engaging our five senses.
Tips on using sensory
details in your writing
1. Identify the thing to describe. Keep it simple. It’s difficult to
describe something that is diffuse or abstract. If possible, name the
thing you want to describe.
2. State what the thing does. Sometimes it’s not necessary to compare
the smell or taste to something else. A clear statement of what the
thing does (cooking in its own grease) can clearly evoke the thing—
and sometimes it can suggest sensory details. So, explain in close
detail what the thing does. When and where do you find it? How do
you know it’s there? What is it doing? How do people react?
3. Describe the thing with a few senses. Perhaps you can use more, or
even all; if so, great.
4. Connect the senses to story.
How does it affect your behavior?
As you consider this, remember the sensory details.
Examples:
The smell of bacon made it difficult for Haider to hide the fact that he’d
eaten it. How does one of the sensory details you wrote make the thing
difficult to ignore?
Sight
flash of lights in the night sky
deep blue of the ocean
the roads had begun to glisten underneath headlights
the sun was setting behind low, gray-blue storm clouds
a heavenly hue to the layers of ice and snow accumulating on rooftops and tree limbs.
her shadow shaky behind a slight flame stemming from a candle she carried
sparks lit up the dusk of day
a blinking red light from the truck’s turn-signal illuminated our darkened home
Sound
The walls shook and vibrated like the tail of a rattle snake
Ice crackled and pinged against the family room window
Wind swirled around our beach house whistling loudly to a
terrible tune
The television buzzed as it shut off, and the furnace sighed one
last time before the house fell silent.
The cracking of wood splitting punctuated each burst of fire like
an exclamation point.
the sounds of emergency sirens awakened the still roads
the howling of wind and branches creaking under the weight of ice
Smell
sweet aroma of baking corn bread
cinnamon-scented candle - pungent
odor of smoke.
salty beach air
rotting leaves and crispness of air
Touch
We sat still, huddled underneath the quilt
Car tires gripped the ice with fearful intensity
The power lines, heavy from the thickness of
ice had snapped
soft tufts of fur
stick my toes in the warm and grainy sand
Taste
ice-cold strawberries
tall, frosted glass of sweet yet bitter lemonade
salty chips
juicy tartness of orange
rancid butter
Online Resources:
https
://study.com/academy/lesson/sensory-details-in-writing-definition-examples.html
http://mrbeland.weebly.com/uploads/3/0/5/5/30558007/23-sensory-details1.pdf
https://readtowritestories.com/2014/11/26/how-to-use-sensory-details/