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Always Always
Singular Plural
anybody everything both
anyone neither few
anything nobody many
each no one several
either nothing
everybody somebody
everyone someone
Indefinite Pronouns as
Antecedents
When indefinite pronouns function as antecedents of pronouns,
make certain that the pronoun agrees with its antecedent. Do not
let prepositional phrases obscure the true antecedent.
Somebody in the men’s league left his lights on.
Each of the corporations had its own home office.
Few of the vendors missed the show to demonstrate their
equipment.
Several of our branches communicate their documents
electronically.
Collective Nouns as Antecedents
Collective nouns refer to a collection of people, animals, or objects.
Such words may be either singular or plural. When a collective noun
operates as a unit, it is singular. When the elements of a collective
noun operate separately, the collective noun is plural.
Our staff reaffirmed its position on bargaining.
(Staff operating as one unit)
The jury were divided by their opinions.
(Jury operating as individual)
However, if a collective noun is to be in a plural sense, the sentence
can often be made to sound less awkward by the addition of plural
noun.
The jury members were divided in their opinions.
If and Wish Clauses
When a statement that is doubtful or contrary to fact is
introduced by if, as if, or wish, the subjunctive form were is
substituted for the indicative form was.
If Lori were here, we could proceed. (Lori is not here.)
She acts as if she were the boos. (She is not the boss.)
Jose wishes he were able to type. (Jose is not able to type.)
But if the statement could possibly be true, use the indicative
form.
If Chris was in the audience, I missed him.
(Chris might have been in the audience.)
Wordy Phrases Concise Substitutes
at the present time now
at this point in time now
due to the fact that because
for the purpose of to
in all probability probably
in connection with for
in spite of the fact that even though
in the amount of for
in the event that if
in the near future soon
in the neighborhood of about
in view of the fact that since
with regard to about
Revising Wordy Phrases
Revise wordy sentences to make them more concise.
Wordy: Due to the fact that fire damaged our
distribution center, we must delay some
shipments.
Revised: Because fire damaged our distribution center,
we must delay some shipments.
Wordy: My family will visit your place in the near
future.
Revised: My family will visit your place soon.
Redundant Phrases
advance warning each and every last and final
alter or change end result new changes
assemble together few in number past history
basic fundamentals great majority personal opinion
collect together integral part true facts
free gifts proposed plan refer back
return back red in color visible to the eye
attached herewith first and foremost short in size
Eliminating Redundant Words
Eliminate repetitive or redundant words.
Wordy: We studied the past history of each and every
potential donor.
Revised: We studied the history of every potential
donor.
Wordy: Please collect together all the true facts
before proceeding.
Revised: Please collect all the facts before proceeding.
Double Comparison
This is the use of two comparative forms together.
Alexander is more taller than Franklin.
Alexander is taller than Franklin.
This brownie is more sweeter than this cookie.
This brownie is sweeter than this cookie.
A leopard runs more faster than a deer.
A leopard runs faster than a deer.
Double Negatives
To correct double negatives, eliminate one of the
negatives.
Incorrect: Calling her won’t do no good.
Correct: Calling her will do no good.
Correct: Calling her won’t do any good.
Incorrect: We couldn’t hardly believe the news report.
Correct: We couldn’t believe the news report.
Correct: We could hardly believe the news report.
Special Cases
The following adjectives and adverbs cause difficulty for some writers
and speakers.
almost (adv.-nearly): Almost (not Most) everybody wants to work.
most (adj.-greatest in amount): Most people want to work.
farther (adv.-actual distance): How much farther is the market?
further (adv.-additionally): To argue the matter further is fruitless.
sure (adj.-certain): He is sure to victory.
surely (adv.-undoubtedly): He will surely be victorious.
later (adv.-after expected time): The contract arrived later in the day.
latter (adj.-the second of two things): Of the two options, I prefer the
latter.
fewer (adj.-refers to numbers): Fewer requests for tour were
granted this year.
less (adj.-refers to mass items that cannot be counted and to
singular nouns): Less remains than we anticipated.
real (adj.-actual, genuine): The real power in the company lies with
the CEO.
really (adv.-actually, truly): Jan wondered whether she could really
learn to operate the equipment in five hours.
good (adj.-desirable): A number of good plans were submitted.
well (adv.-satisfactorily): Amy did well on the test.
well (adj.-healthy): Jamel feels quite well since the operation.
Absolute Modifiers
Adjectives and adverbs that name perfect complete
(absolute) qualities cannot logically be compared.
round dead complete
perfect true right
unique correct straight
perpendicular endless unanimous
Use of Preposition
addicted to
Janet was addicted to gummy bears.
agree to (a proposal)
Did they agree to the plan for splitting shifts?
agree with (a person)
In this matter, I certainly agree with you.
angry at (a thing)
Customers are understandably angry at the delay.
angry with (a person)
How can you be angry with the child?
buy from
You may buy from any one of several vendors.
capable of
She is capable of remarkable accomplishments.
comply with
We must comply with governmental regulations.
contrast with
The white boat contrasts with the blue ocean.
desire for
A desire for wealth may create greed.
differ from (things)
Checking accounts differ from savings accounts.
differ with (person)
I differ with you in small points only.
disagree with
Do you disagree with him?
guard against
Guard against infection by covering wounds.
interest in
Jerry has a great interest in personal computers.
prefer to
Do you prefer to work four-day week?
responsible for
William is responsible for locking the building.
sensitive to
Mrs. Choy is unusually sensitive to cold.
similar to
Your term paper topic is similar to mine.
standing in (not on) line
How long have you been standing in line?
talk to (tell something)
The speaker talked to the large group.
talk with (exchange remarks)
After his lecture, the speaker talked with the club members
informally.
Parallelism
Words in a pair or a series should have a parallel
structure. By balancing the items in a pair or a series so
that they have the same structure, you will make your
sentences clearer and easier to read.
x Fran spends her free time reading books, listening to music,
and she works in the garden.
Fran spends her free time reading books, listening to music,
and working in the garden.
(A balanced series of –ing words: reading, listening, working)
x After the camping trip I was exhausted, irritable, and wanted
to eat.
After the camping trip I was exhausted, irritable, and hungry.
(A balanced series of descriptive words: exhausted, irritable,
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