BENEFIT

OF SAVING
MONEY
IN A BANK
Dessy Natalia (11)
Felicia Difa (15)
Primelshaddai (27)
Putri Muzalifah (28)
Siti Nur Aisyah (35)
ThESI
S

Many people think that their money will be safe whenever it is

close to them. This idea is quite accepted because they need it Opening
every time. However, they don’t think what will happen to them
if they always bring their money wherever and whenever they go.
Remark
One of the best ways of keeping money is keeping it in a
bank.Saving money in a bank benefits people in various
ways.Keeping it safe, avoiding crime, and increasing its amount Thesis
are good reasons to save money in a bank.

Preview
Firstby saving money in a bank, leaving home for
hours is not a problem. Feeling worried of losing
money due to unexpected causes such as fire from
neighbours or robbery can be thrown away.
Argument 2

Second, a crime can be avoided. Walking alone carrying

a lot of money in the wallet or pocket may invite
someone to do a crime. By saving money in a bank
everyone shouldn’t be afraid of going anywhere, and
whenever they need quick cash, ATM card will always
be ready to help them.
Argument 3

Finally, the amount of money in a bank may increase.

All of the banks offer high interest to attract people
to save their money there. Therefore, a bank offering
highest interest is often a good choice.
reiteration

Although saving money in a bank is not very

popular, this way should be reconsidered as
it offers people to keep their money safely.
Thank You