CONCLUSION PARA Success Overseas Education

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THINGS TO REMEMBER WHILE
MAKING A CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH
Conclusion para includes two things essentially:
(1) Summary of what you have just discussed in the body paras
(2) Restate your opinion (only if you are asked for an opinion in the essay – in
intro para you ‘declare’ your opinion, in body para your ‘express’ your inclination
(eg. Majorly agree, so 2 A+ 1 D) and in conclusion, you ‘restate’ your opinion.
You should not introduce a fresh idea point in a conclusion para. The reason is
obvious: you are concluding things, you are at the climax of proving your
thoughts. No point in starting something new.
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1) Computers are being used more and more in education. However, few others
claim that computers have harmful effects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Step 1: For now, think of what you would write in the body paras (few idea
points). This is to decide the content for summary.
Step 2: Recheck whether you are to restate your opinion here or not.
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1) Computers are being used more and more in education. However, few others claim
that computers have harmful effects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In conclusion, computers are primarily responsible towards vision related issues,
addiction to gaming platforms and other illegal/unauthorized websites, thus
exacerbating their health and mental prowess. Still, I firmly believe (restate your
opinion part) that if they are used through measures of appropriate directions and
guidance from parents and teachers, the implementation of computing devices could
enable the doors of helping students explore their fullest potential in the domain of
technology and artificial intelligence, thereby leading to the genesis of innovative and
lucrative products.
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2) The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money.
Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Step 1: For now, think of what you would write in the body paras (few idea
points). This is to decide the content for summary.
Step 2: Recheck whether you are to restate your opinion here or not.
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2) The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money.
Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Sample for opinion: majorly disagree
To conclude, the domain of musical and dramatic arts clearly reflect a decent outcome in
helping individuals in generating a good audience through which they can connect with
the world and showcase national culture, thereby creating lucrative opportunities.
However, my inclination is largely towards the contrary point (restate your opinion), as
many underdeveloped regions across the these nations would lose out on getting even
the basic access to a lot of amenities needed for survival, such as food, clothes and a
house.
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3) More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and
what are the effects?

Step 1: For now, think of what you would write in the body paras (few idea
points). This is to decide the content for summary.
Step 2: Recheck whether you are to restate your opinion here or not.
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3) More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and what
are the effects?

To sum up, the rationale behind the rising trend of kid’s turning towards obesity is
unhealthy and uncontrolled consumption of junk foods. However, government
authorities can give immediate attention in raising awareness through programs and
promoting inexpensive pediatrician consult meetups guiding parents to tackle the
alarming situation/ to tackle the critical consequences/ to mitigate the associated risks.
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4) Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages of this.

Step 1: For now, think of what you would write in the body paras (few idea
points). This is to decide the content for summary.
Step 2: Recheck whether you are to restate your opinion here or not.
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4) Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of this.

In conclusion, the primary benefits of consuming services or products of foreign

manufacture are to enable the customers pick their preferred alternatives from a
broader range of options. However, this inclining pattern also exacerbates/worsens the
economic potential/economic condition of a nation.//However, this could leave a
detrimental impact on the local market as many useful and inexpensive items created
there could go unnoticed.
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