WRITTEN COMMUNICATION:

E-MAIL, TEXTING, AND OTHER

WRITING TIPS
By
Doris England, CAP-OM
Presented to:
Roanoke Chapter APW Event
April 15, 2014
 E-MAIL ETIQUETTE
• Be informal, but not sloppy.

• Keep messages brief and to the point

• Use sentence case.

• Use the blind copy and courtesy copy

appropriately.
 E-MAIL ETIQUETTE
• Don’t use e-mail to avoid personal contact.

• Remember that e-mail isn’t private.

• Be sparing with group e-mail.

• Use the subject field to indicate content and

purpose.
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• Don’t send chain letters or junk mail.

• Your tone cannot be heard in an e-mail.

• Use a signature that includes contact

information.

• Summarize long discussions (replies).

 TEXTING ETIQUETTE
• Be careful with abbreviations.

• Be aware of your perceived tone.

• Never send bad news via text.

 TEXTING ETIQUETTE
• Don’t change meeting times or venues in a
text.

• Always double check when using the voice-to-

text feature.
8 KEYS TO BETTER BUSINESS WRITING

1. KNOW WHY YOU’RE WRITING:

• Be clear about objectives.

• Address your audience appropriately.

• State the goals you want to achieve.

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2. UNDERSTAND YOUR READERS:

• Get to the point quickly.

• Focus on what’s relevant.

• Use a tone that fits your audience.

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3. WRITE YOUR FIRST DRAFT IN 4 PARTS:

• Madman – Research
• Architect – Organizes the material
• Carpenter – Writes first draft
• Judge – Edits and tightens
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4.REVISE AND EDIT:

• Do I have a clear, concise opening?
• Have I said all I need to say?
• Have I proved my point with specifics?
• Have I avoided repetitions?
• Have I closed smoothly?
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5.BE RELENTLESSLY CLEAR:

• Illustrate your points with specifics –
SHOW – DON’T TELL

6.DON’T WASTE WORDS:

• Trim wordy passages
• Get rid of “filler words”
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7.NEVER USE BUSINESS-SPEAK:

• Stay away from trite expressions, such as
“mission-critical” or words like “enormity.”
• Avoid jargon that others might not
understand.
• Watch the use of abbreviations such as APW,
PDS, SOP, CEU, etc.
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8. RELAX AND FIND THE RIGHT TONE:

• Avoid stuffiness by using contractions.
• Vary the length and structure of your
sentences.
• Use courtesies like “thank you” and “we
appreciate.”
• Use personal pronouns instead of formal
language.
 OTHER WRITING TIPS
• Paragraph structure - The topic of a
paragraph is stated in one sentence. This is
called the topic sentence. The rest of the
paragraph consists of sentences that develop
or explain the main idea. Every sentence in a
paragraph should support the main idea
expressed in the topic sentence.
 CAPITALIZATION
• Capitalize the first word of a quoted sentence.

He said, "Treat her as you would your own

daughter."
"Look out!" she screamed. "You almost ran
into my child.“
• Capitalize a proper noun.
Golden Gate Bridge
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• Capitalize a person’s title when it precedes the
name. Do not capitalize when the title is acting
as a description following the name.
Chairperson Smith
Ms. Smith, the chairperson of the company, will
address us at noon.
• Capitalize the person's title when it follows the
name on the address or signature line. Sincerely,
Ms. Haines, Chairperson
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• Capitalize the titles of high-ranking
government officials when used before their
names. Do not capitalize the civil title if it is
used instead of the name.

The president will address Congress.

The speaker is Governor Terry McAuliffe.
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• Capitalize any title when used as a direct
address.
Will you take my temperature, Doctor?
• Capitalize points of the compass only when they
refer to specific regions.
We have had three relatives visit from the South.
Go south three blocks and then turn left.
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• Always capitalize the first and last words of
titles of publications regardless of their parts of
speech. Capitalize other words within titles,
including the short verb forms Is, Are, and Be.
Exception: Do not capitalize little words within
titles such as a, an, the, but, as, if, and, or, nor,
or prepositions, regardless of their length.
The Day of the Jackal
What Color Is Your Parachute?
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• Capitalize federal or state when used as part of an official
agency name or in government documents where these
terms represent an official name. If they are being used as
general terms, you may use lowercase letters.
The state has evidence to the contrary.
That is a federal offense.
The State Board of Equalization collects sales taxes.
The Federal Bureau of Investigation has been subject to much
scrutiny.
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• You may capitalize words such as department,
bureau, and office if you have prepared your
text in the following way:
Example:
The Bureau of Land Management (Bureau)
has some jurisdiction over Indian lands. The
Bureau is finding its administrative role to be
challenging.
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• Do not capitalize names of seasons.
Example:
I love autumn colors and spring flowers.
• Capitalize the first word of a salutation and the
first word of a complimentary close.
Examples:
Dear Ms. Mohamed:
My dear Mr. Sanchez:
Very truly yours,
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• Capitalize words derived from proper nouns.
Example:
I must take English and math.
English is capitalized because it comes from the
proper noun England, but math does not come
from Mathland.
• Capitalize the names of specific course titles.
Example:
I must take history and Algebra 2.
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• After a sentence ending with a colon, do not
capitalize the first word if it begins a list.
Example:
These are my favorite foods: chocolate cake, lobster,
and artichokes. Do not capitalize when only one
sentence follows a sentence ending with a colon.
Example:
I love Jane Smiley's writing: her book, A Thousand
Acres, was beautiful.
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• Capitalize when two or more sentences follow
a sentence ending with a colon.
Example:
I love James Patterson’s writing: His book,
Along Came a Spider, was a thriller. Also,
NYPD Red kept me on the edge of my seat.
 WHO / WHOM
• Use the he/him method to decide which word is
correct.
he = who
him = whom
Who/Whom wrote the letter?
He wrote the letter. Therefore, who is correct.
For who/whom should I vote?
Should I vote for him? Therefore, whom is correct.
 WHO / WHOM
• We all know who/whom pulled that prank.
This sentence contains two clauses: We all
know and who/whom pulled that prank. We
are interested in the second clause because it
contains the who/whom. He pulled that prank.
Therefore, who is correct. (Are you starting to
sound like a hooting owl yet?)
 WHO / WHOM
• We want to know on who/whom the prank
was pulled.
This sentence contains two clauses: We want
to know and the prank was pulled on
who/whom. Again, we are interested in the
second clause because it contains the
who/whom. The prank was pulled on him.
Therefore, whom is correct.
 SOURCES
• http://www.forbes.com/sites/susanadams/2013/
01/18/8-keys-to-better-business-writing/
• https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Proofreading
.html
• http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/outlet-help
• http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/

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