The essay is well-

organized (introduction,
body and conclusion)
-> clear and easy to follow
 Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Not always
Yes
• are saying – say
• explained – will explain
• people less active – people are less active
• go – went/ used to go
• we playing – we play
• were walking – walked/ used to walk
• do – did/ used to do
• are become – are becoming
• are not going – don’t go
• took – takes
• I am agree – I agree
 Present Past
now before
nowadays in the past
in today’s world several years ago
these days there used to be
 In my opinion, In my view
On the other hand, However
There are points for and against this idea.

To sum up
The main reason
Think of 3 advantages and 3 disadvantages
 my own opinion
Firstly

Thirdly
Unfortunately One reason is that
In addition
also
My own view is