Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Product
5th Edition
Steven M. Gerson
Sharon J. Gerson
Pearson Education/Prentice Hall
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Chapter 12: Instructions and
User’s Manuals
This chapter discusses the following:
Objectives
Process
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Objective
People use equipment or make products
that require instructions—every day.
Examples: NOTE:
operating machinery troubleshooting a mechanism
A primary job of
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (1-3 pages)
Title
Topic
Function (purpose of the instruction)
Topic
Function
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Organization
Introduction
Name the product
State the purpose of the instruction
List the number of steps
Product name Purpose
# of steps
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Organization (cont.)
Optional components
Required tools
Include graphics to help lay readers
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Organization (cont.)
Optional components
Hazards notations
Danger—the potential for death
Warning—the potential for injury
Caution—the potential for damage to equipment
Include icons for visual impact
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Sample hazard alert
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Organization (cont.)
Body
Organize steps chronologically
Develop points thoroughly
Conclusion
State warranties
Sell the product
Repeat the products uses
Provide corporate credentials or contact information
Provide a troubleshooting guide
Answer FAQs (frequently asked questions)
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Audience Recognition
Is your audience High-tech, Low-tech, Lay, or
combinations of all (Multiple)?
Write to your audience’s level of understanding.
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Graphics
People read instructions when they are
unfamiliar with a product.
Graphics help them visualize the steps.
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
Style
1. Number the steps (for future reference)
2. Use highlighting techniques (color for
hazards; graphics for visualization, for
example)
3. Don’t overload steps—one action per step
is enough.
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
4. Develop points thoroughly.
Define terms
Provide detailed steps
Personalized pronoun
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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
Long User’s Manuals include all of the
topics already discussed:
Graphics
Hazards
Required tools
Detailed information geared toward the
audience
An appropriate style (numbered steps,
articles, verbs, personalization, etc.)
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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
Long User’s Manuals include the
following additional information:
Cover page
Topic
Function (purpose)
Graphic
Table of contents
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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
Introduction
Personalized, positive tone
Emphasizing the value and importance of the
instruction
Glossary—defining acronyms,
abbreviations, and high-tech terms
Technical descriptions (optional)
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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
Warranties/guarantees (optional)
Parts lists/accessories (optional)
FAQs (optional)
Corporate Contact information
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Process
To ensure the success of your
instruction,
Prewrite
Write
Rewrite
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Process (cont.)
Prewriting techniques
Gather data, determine your audience,
decide on goals, and envision layout as
follows:
Brainstorm/list the components of your topic
Create a flowchart itemizing the steps in
chronological order
Use storyboarding to determine layout
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Process (cont.)
Writing
Review the criteria for successful
instruction.
Review your prewriting.
Draft your text.
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Process (cont.)
Rewriting
Revise the rough draft by
Adding detail for clarity
Deleting dead words and phrases for conciseness
Simplifying terms for easy understanding
Moving text for emphasis
Reformatting for easy access
Enhancing the tone
Correcting errors for professionalism
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