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Technical Writing: Process and

Product
5th Edition

Steven M. Gerson
Sharon J. Gerson
Pearson Education/Prentice Hall

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Chapter 12: Instructions and
User’s Manuals
This chapter discusses the following:
 Objectives

 Criteria for Writing Short Instructions

 Criteria for Writing a User’s Manual

 Process

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Objective
 People use equipment or make products
that require instructions—every day.
 Examples: NOTE:
operating machinery troubleshooting a mechanism
A primary job of
 

 installing equipment  caring for livestock


 maintaining  caring for plants technical writers
equipment  setting up a system is to write
 testing components  assembling a product instructions.
 cleaning a product  building a deck
 monitoring a system  making a cake
 repairing equipment

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (1-3 pages)
 Title
 Topic
 Function (purpose of the instruction)
Topic

X320Z Radon Extractor


Installation Procedures

Function

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Organization
 Introduction
 Name the product
 State the purpose of the instruction
 List the number of steps
Product name Purpose

The X320Z Radon Extractor removes hazardous gases from your


house. Installing this mechanism requires only 10 simple steps.

# of steps
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Organization (cont.)
 Optional components
 Required tools
 Include graphics to help lay readers

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Organization (cont.)
 Optional components
 Hazards notations
 Danger—the potential for death
 Warning—the potential for injury
 Caution—the potential for damage to equipment
 Include icons for visual impact

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Sample hazard alert

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Organization (cont.)
 Body
 Organize steps chronologically
 Develop points thoroughly
 Conclusion
 State warranties
 Sell the product
 Repeat the products uses
 Provide corporate credentials or contact information
 Provide a troubleshooting guide
 Answer FAQs (frequently asked questions)

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Audience Recognition
 Is your audience High-tech, Low-tech, Lay, or
combinations of all (Multiple)?
 Write to your audience’s level of understanding.

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Graphics
 People read instructions when they are
unfamiliar with a product.
 Graphics help them visualize the steps.

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
 Style
1. Number the steps (for future reference)
2. Use highlighting techniques (color for
hazards; graphics for visualization, for
example)
3. Don’t overload steps—one action per step
is enough.

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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
4. Develop points thoroughly.
 Define terms
 Provide detailed steps

BAD—too vague Good Detail


Add enough air to Add air up to 32 psi (pounds per
inflate the tire. square inch) to inflate the tire.

How much is “Enough” is 32


“enough”? psi (defined
parenthetically)
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
5. Write concisely (short words, phrases,
and sentences).
6. Begin steps with verbs.
BAD GOOD

1. You might want to 1. Tighten the clamp.


consider tightening the
clamp.
The verb “Tighten”
Without a verb, this is makes the step a
not a required action. required action.
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Criteria for Writing Short
Instructions (cont.)
7. Personalize text with pronouns.
8. Do not omit articles (“a,” “an,” “the”).
Article

1. Use the 2” angle-edge brush to paint


your window ledges.

Personalized pronoun

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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
 Long User’s Manuals include all of the
topics already discussed:
 Graphics
 Hazards
 Required tools
 Detailed information geared toward the
audience
 An appropriate style (numbered steps,
articles, verbs, personalization, etc.)
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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
 Long User’s Manuals include the
following additional information:
 Cover page
 Topic
 Function (purpose)
 Graphic
 Table of contents

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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
 Introduction
 Personalized, positive tone
 Emphasizing the value and importance of the
instruction
 Glossary—defining acronyms,
abbreviations, and high-tech terms
 Technical descriptions (optional)

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Criteria for Writing a User’s
Manual (longer instructions)
 Warranties/guarantees (optional)
 Parts lists/accessories (optional)
 FAQs (optional)
 Corporate Contact information

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Process
 To ensure the success of your
instruction,
 Prewrite
 Write
 Rewrite

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Process (cont.)
 Prewriting techniques
 Gather data, determine your audience,
decide on goals, and envision layout as
follows:
 Brainstorm/list the components of your topic
 Create a flowchart itemizing the steps in
chronological order
 Use storyboarding to determine layout

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Process (cont.)
 Writing
 Review the criteria for successful
instruction.
 Review your prewriting.
 Draft your text.

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Process (cont.)
 Rewriting
 Revise the rough draft by
 Adding detail for clarity
 Deleting dead words and phrases for conciseness
 Simplifying terms for easy understanding
 Moving text for emphasis
 Reformatting for easy access
 Enhancing the tone
 Correcting errors for professionalism

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