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Rule 1 - Different from/ different than & Wordiness/Redundancy
Incorrect: Scholars believe that lowland Mayan rituals were different than those of
other ancient peoples because lowland Mayan culture developed in relative isolation.
Correct: Scholars believe that lowland Mayan rituals were different from those of
other ancient peoples because lowland Mayan culture developed in relative isolation.
The matter was referred back to the expert committee since the solution to the
problem was different from the one proposed earlier.
A. referred back to the expert committee since the solution to the problem was
different from the one proposed earlier
B. referred to the expert committee since the solution to the problem was different
from the one proposed earlier
C. referred back to the expert committee since the solution to the problem was
different than the one proposed earlier
D. referred to committee since the solution to the problem was different than the one
proposed earlier
E. referred back to the committee since the solution for problem was different than
one proposed earlier
B. referred to the expert committee since the solution to the problem was different
from the one proposed earlier
Redundancy-
Repeat again
Referred back
Respond back……….. Re words means doing again…. So extra words unnecessary
Wordiness exercise
The winner of the Man Booker prize was not the author who/whom I expected.
Trick- pick up the words following who or whom and deal with it as a jumbled phrase.
Try to fit in he or him. If he fits, use who, if him fits, use whom.
Stood up against justice- Try to fit in either he or him in between, before or after this
phrase- he or him
1. Research has shown that women who get pregnant when teenagers earn substantially
less money over their lifetime than those for whom pregnancy does not occur until
much later.
Correct: Filled with office buildings dating back to the early 1900s, Los Angeles is also
home to a vast amount of industrial space built from the turn of the twentieth century to
the 1980s.
Correct: Filled with office buildings dating back to the early 1900s, Los Angeles is also
home to a vast number of industrial warehouses built from the turn of the twentieth
century to the 1980s.
1. Raj feels proud about the _______ of pencils in his collection.
2. Karanjeet wondered the _______ of speeding tickets she could get before she went
to jail.
4. Lokesh wants to know the _______ of marbles he can fit in his mouth.
5. Tarun walked out of class to protest the _______ of preference given to athletes.
For example,
A number of the players ARE still injured from the last game.
Correct: Carl Sagan attributed his sense of justice to his father, who helped sooth
tensions between workers and managers in New York’s turbulent garment industry.
Correct: Carl Sagan attributed his sense of justice to his father, who helped sooth
tensions among workers, managers, and union leaders in New York’s turbulent
garment industry.
Of the two candidates for this government position, Joann Harald is the most qualified
because of her experience in the field.
D
Of the two candidates for this government position, Joann Harald is the more qualified
because of her experience in the field.
Rule 2- Of the two candidates for this government position, Joann Harald is the more
qualified. – complete sentence. So because of not due 2
Rule 6 of neither….nor, either… or, not only….. but also= verb is decided by the
subject closest to it.
Neither the earthquakes or the subsequent fire was able to destroy the spirit of the
city dwellers.
Neither the earthquakes nor the subsequent fire was able to destroy the spirit of the
city dwellers.
Neither the subsequent fire nor the earthquakes were able to destroy the spirit of the
city dwellers.
Correct the following-
1. Neither Uma nor her kids likes eggs.
5. Not only the players but also the audience are demanding for a break.
Rule - In either… or, neither… nor, not only… but also, the subject closer to the verb
decides its form… singular or plural.
Correct answers-
5. Not only the players but also the audience is demanding for a break.
Rule 7 of Parallelism– either A or B- A and B have to be parallel.
Choose the 2 tasks or verbs first.
Either you transfer the data that was demanded or file a report explaining why you did
not submit the overall annual figures
You either transfer the data that were demanded or file a report explaining why you
did not submit the overall annual figures.
2. verbs- transfer and file have to be parallel and next to either and or
3. You is the common subject for both. So common words have to be addressed
first.
You (either transfer the data that were demanded or file a report explaining why you
did not submit the overall annual figures).
PARALLELISM Questions
3. I employed a maid who sweeps the floor, cleans the garden and she also does
the washing of the vessels.
5. The purpose of the meeting is to introduce new members and raising funds.
Answers
3. I employed a maid who sweeps the floor, cleans the garden and washes the
vessels.
5. The purpose of the meeting is to introduce new members and to raise funds.
Rule 8 - Parallelism in comparisons- Both parameters of comparison have to be
in same form.
In this particular job we have discovered that to be diligent is more important than
being bright.
(1) by being diligent is important than being bright.
being diligent is more important than being bright is also right but too long . So
choosing the shorter option.
1. redundancy.
2. parallelism
Rule 9- Logical comparisons
In some cases, the comparison is subtle and must be given proper attention.
The climate of Delhi is better than the climate of Mumbai. (Correct) Or The
climate of Ranchi is better than that of Gaya. (Correct)
The products of Reliance are better than those of Suzuki.
The scenery of Kashmir is better than Shimla. (Incorrect)
The scenery of Kashmir is better than that of Shimla. (Correct)
My sister is better than everybody else in solving passages. Correct
My sister is better than everybody in solving passages. Incorrect
This computer is better than any computer. Incorrect
This computer is better than any other computer. Correct.
Logical comparisons exercise-
3. Even though Joe, Pat and Lisa are all neighbors, Joe lives in a house that
is further from Lisa's than it is from Pat's. No error