PARAGRAPH ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION

XI MIPA 2
Aldhiya Azmy Bayanaka (02)
Handika Ikram Gerasena (12)
I Gede Radithya Oktora Adiwijaya (12)
kering
Nathan Andira Raditya (25)
Becek (28)
Rizendy Affarin (81)
TEXT EXAMPLE:
HOMESCHOOLING
I do not think that a homeschooling system is the best education system to use. Although parents of homeschooling students think it is
better because of the manageable situation, I think homeschooling system do not wrap all of the learning aspects that formal school
usually reach, such in the learning process, socialization and the self-development of the children.
Learning aspect in the school is not only how to understand the material or the content of a subject, but also how to experience
directly what happens in my surroundings. The homeschooling students decide which pace that they like the most and which thing
that they want to learn deeper on it.
The aspect of the learning process also needed a good socialization of the children. Homeschooling students just socialize with people
around them that they know well and impossible to do something bad to them. They do not experience a good response to react to
something happen around to them which is important as social beings.
Finally, one to one learning that applied in a homeschooling programs does no guarantee that the children have a good development
to face their real future. They do not exactly understand how to control and face a problem that they do not want to have because
their surroundings really comfort them.
The standards of learning in this system make students not educationally successful. This system just likes a controller of the students’
development. It shows that it is not the best way to teach or educate children.
STRUCTURE OF THE TEXT:
HOMESCHOOLING  As the Title
I do not think that a homeschooling system is the best education system to use. Although parents of homeschooling students
think it is better because of the manageable situation, I think homeschooling system do not wrap all of the learning aspects that
formal school usually reach, such in the learning process, socialization and the self-development of the children. As the Thesis
Learning aspect in the school is not only how to understand the material or the content of a subject, but also how to experience
directly what happens in my surroundings. The homeschooling students decide which pace that they like the most and which
thing that they want to learn deeper on it.
The aspect of the learning process also needed a good socialization of the children. Homeschooling students just socialize with
people around them that they know well and impossible to do something bad to them. They do not experience a good response
to react to something happen around to them which is important as social beings.
Finally, one to one learning that applied in a homeschooling programs does no guarantee that the children have a good
development to face their real future. They do not exactly understand how to control and face a problem that they do not want
to have because their surroundings really comfort them. As the Arguments
The standards of learning in this system make students not educationally successful. This system just likes a controller of the
students’ development. It shows that it is not the best way to teach or educate children.  As the Conclusion
LANGUAGE FEATURES:
HOMESCHOOLING
I do not think that a homeschooling system is the best education system to use. Although parents of homeschooling students think it is better because of the
manageable situation, I think homeschooling system do not wrap all of the learning aspects that formal school usually reach, such in the learning process, socialization
and the self-development of the children.

Learning aspect in the school is not only how to understand the material or the content of a subject, but also how to experience directly what happens in my
surroundings. The homeschooling students decide which pace that they like the most and which thing that they want to learn deeper on it.

The aspect of the learning process also needed a good socialization of the children. Homeschooling students just socialize with people around them that they know
well and impossible to do something bad to them. They do not experience a good response to react to something happen around to them which is important as social
beings.

Finally, one to one learning that applied in a homeschooling programs does no guarantee that the children have a good development to face their real future. They do
not exactly understand how to control and face a problem that they do not want to have because their surroundings really comfort them.

In conclusion, the standards of learning in this system make students not educationally successful. This system just likes a controller of the students’ development. It
shows that it is not the best way to teach or educate children.

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