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Unit7 Writing Student
Unit7 Writing Student
It is clear that (5) participation in any performance and crafts were the most popular for all age
groups while the least favorite ones were (6)computer-based and writing activities. overview
The highest participation in any activities was seen in the (7)16-24 age group, doing (8)
performance (35%) and (9) visual arts (30%), respectively . In contrast, (10) other activities were
much lower, particularly (11) those computer-based, at only (12) 10%. A rate of (13) 22% was
evident for the most popular activity for the 45-74 age group, which was (14) crafts. Besides, the body 1
popularity of (15) computers was very low for all those who were 25 plus, while (16) any
performance was the most popular among people in this age group.
Taking all age groups together,(17) performance and crafts were the most popular, at over 19%,
whereas (18) cultural purchases and (19)visual arts were slightly less popular at 16% and 15%
respectively. Finally, little interest was shown in (20)writing and (21) computing.
body 2
Match the correct strategies to each part of the report
1. Introduction
B. Paraphrase the topic
A. Report important
3. Body 1 + 2 changes and trends.
Cohesive devices
Example:
In terms of food, drinks, and tobacco, Turkey spent the
most at 32.14%.
Regarding the percentage of chicken, it was the highest
BRAINSTORM
WORK IN GROUPS. DISCUSS THESE QUESTIONS
6. Based on question 5,
What are the overall trends
of total employees and
factories?
WORK IN GROUPS. DISCUSS THESE QUESTIONS
1. illustrates the number of
employees and factories in
England and Wales from ...
to...
2. category: male /female
employees, total
employees, factories
3. units of measurement:
people/ employees,
factories
4. time period: 1851 - 1901
kind of table: dynamic
5. trend in male employees,
female employees. total
employees : decrease
factories : increase then
decrease / fluctuate
6. overall trends: the
number of total employees
decreased while that of
factories fluctuated
INTRODUCTION
Introduction:
body 2: factories
DISCUSS:
which year you will pick
to report in the writing? Increase Decrease fluctuate
Body 2:
factories
sentence 1:
The number of factories
was at 225 in 1851, then (1)
this number (verb) ↑ to ....
in 1871, reach (verb) a
peak at ... in 1881.
Body 2:
factories
sentence 1:
The number of factories
was at 225 in 1851, then
this number jumped
sharply to 622 in 1871 and
reached a peak at 721 in
1881.
sentence 2:
However, this figure
slightly dropped to 600
after 20 years
WORK IN GROUPS. DISCUSS THESE QUESTIONS
Body 2:
major (adj) A major expansion of the company's marketing department is expected in the
next few years.
UP OR DOWN MORE
SLOWLY
steadily (adv) The number of tourists visiting the park rose
steadily.
steady (adj) The park experienced a steady increase in
the number of tourists.
gradually (adv) The population of the province gradually
declined.
gradual (adj) There was a gradual decline in the
population of the province.
slightly (adv) Bus fares may go up slightly.
slight (adj) A slight increase in bus fares is expected.
minor (adj) There were minor fluctuations in the value
of raw materials.