Cory Dennis English 1102 4/4/12 Journal #13 The strongest part of my concept is the ideas I want to put

t into my movie. I have dates and times as well as characters and bases over seas that were used in World War 2. I believe the weakest part of my concept is the vagueness, I know what I want to do but I havent thought it through all the way. I believe that I will be successful a=in having a good pitch it just isnt where I would like it to be quite yet. I chose this entry because it shows one of my weaker journal entries. I dont want to put journals into my eportfolio that I think I did well on because I dont want to send the message that I believe I am a complete writer and have nothing to improve on because I know I have a lot of improvements to make. This was a day where I came to class and was not in the mood to do anything so I typed one or two sentences for each point. I wasnt enthusiastic