Band5 DT1 E1 Learning Outcome Band Performance Standard 2.3 Present information to different audiences by vii.

Writing recount 5 B5 Demonstrate the ability to use language in a variety of situations using largely appropriate language conventions. B5 DT1 Writing a narrative B5 DT1 E1 Able to write an account of an incident/ event using correct grammar and mechanics of writing with guidance

Descriptor Evidence

Students copy Band5 DT1 E1 Last Saturday, you went out for a walk. The fortunate and unfortunate events happened. You wish to write a recount about your fortunate and unfortunate experience.
I went out for a walk.

Unfortunately,
It began to rain.

Fortunately, 3. had an umbrella. I 8.30

Unfortunately,
It was broken.

Fortunately,
I met a friend in her car.

Unfortunately When writing your recount:

You may use all the notes Elaborate on the given notes to make it more interesting Add any other relevant information Make sure it is not less than 120 words

Accept any relevant answer

Teachers copy Band5 DT1 E1 Last Saturday, you went out for a walk. The fortunate and unfortunate events happened. You wish to write a recount about your fortunate and unfortunate experience.
I went out for a walk. It was a bright Saturday morning. The birds chirping their songs and I thought to myself, it was another beautiful day.

Unfortunately,
It began to rain. Everyone was having a good time at the park when suddenly it began to rain. People was scattered all over to find a safe place.

Fortunately, 3. had an umbrella. I 8.30

Its a purple umbrella. How blessed am I to carried the umbrella with me.

Unfortunately,
It was broken. And I was soaked in the rain. Its a heavy rain and I started to feel cold. I went out to the street.

Fortunately,
I met a friend in her car. She invited me to go inside the car and she asked what I am doing in the park alone. I told her I just want to have a walk, and I asked her the same thing too. She didnt reply me and started her car engine.

Unfortunately, her car ran out of petrol. We waited patiently for the rain to stop and while waiting, we chatted about the fortunate and unfortunate events happened to us and laughed about the unexpected things that came in our life. When writing your recount: Accept any relevant answer You may use all the notes Elaborate on the given notes to make it more interesting Add any other relevant information Make sure it is not less than 120 words