I think that this project is one of my better pieces of writing.

I put a lot of time into this project and really tried hard to keep in mind what the goal was. I think that one of my major problems is that it was hard for me to add to the argument without having to write more than what was acceptable. I think that if I had more time and no word count I could have written for days and days and days on this topic. Despite feeling that I could have added more I think that the project is more than complete the way that it is. Any argument can be strengthened further even a professionals but I am really proud of this project. For the revision I tried to focus a little more on a problem involving communication and language within the discourse community as I was directed to in the comments that were left after my final draft. I changed the example I gave regarding the Zeus computer system and showed an example where the computer outperformed the coaches. This was something I thought added to the argument. Also I showed that the computer was a solution to the problem experienced within this discourse community. Overall this was my favorite project over the course of the semester and it taught me a lot. I put a lot of work into this project and really enjoyed the process. I had never thought of what makes up a discourse community and analyzing one that I was a part of was a lot of fun.