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Letter to Friend Greeting Dear ____, Hope this letter find you in good health and spirit. I am writing to update you Hope this letter find you in good health and spirit. I am writing to share Hope this letter find you in good health and spirit. I am writing to inform You see, I am glad to share, I am happy to share, I would be grateful, I will be really happy Looking forward to your reply Hoping to hear back from you soon See you soon
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For complain or concern To the management of ___________ To the editor of ___________ I am writing to you regarding a problem ________ I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction _________ I am writing to bring to your attention __________ I am writing in regards to Last week, Unfortunately I would be grateful, I expect action to be taken
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Looking forward to your reply Hoping to hear back from you soon
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For one Firstly On the one hand For example For instance An instance illustrating this in action is This makes in clear Thus Additional evidence As this shows <link to thesis> It is obvious from this that
Para 2
Secondly, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition to this On the other hand For example For instance An instance illustrating this in action is This makes in clear Thus As this shows <link to thesis>
Conclusion
Following this look at In conclusion It has been proven that It has been shown that Thus, it is recommended Thus, it is predicted
Discussion Essay Background Statement Detailed Background statement Statement of points of view to be analyzed Both views will be analyzed Statement of first point of view Sentence 2 - Example Sentence 3 - Discussion Sentence 4 - Conclusion
Outline Sentence
(summary of supporting para1 and para2 that follow
Supporting Para 1
Supporting Para 2
Sentence 1 - Topic sentence Sentence 2 - Example Sentence 3 - Discussion Sentence 4 - Conclusion Summary Restatement of Thesis Prediction or recommendation
Statement of second point of view Sentence 2 - Example Sentence 3 - Discussion Sentence 4 - Conclusion Summary Writer's opinion Prediction or recommendation
Conclusion
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Task Achievement comment Band 6 Presents evidence but conclusions may be unclear presents evidence and comes to conclusions but evidence lacks focus presents evidence and comes to conclusions but evidence has focus Specific countries instead of "Many countries" Specific persons instead of "Famous peoples" For instance, number of cars being used today causes pollution For instance, there are too many cars on the road in big cities and this causes pollution problems For instance, big cities like Shanghai experience pollution problems due to high volume of traffic
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Band 6
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Grammar few error-free sentences mixture of simple and complex sentence structures Many error-free sentences (50%) variety of complex sentence structures link ideas with grammatical accuracy majority error-free sentences
Lexical Resource Band 6 Band 7 Band 8 Less common words, complicated word forms not legitimate illegitimate
Band 6
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Coherence and Cohesion cohesive phrases may be faulty/repetitive cohesive phrases used appropriately. Ocassional underuse/overuse each paragraph has a central role and topic