Sherman Alex Sherman Ms.

Weaver Rhetoric 101 18 September 2013 Stephanie I would like for the reader to walk away with a firm grasp on why the Globe Geminon was constructed and what it was constructed to do. I intend for the paper to inform and assess the boards overall performance, per say, as a text. The analysis as a whole should present the Globe Geminon as a successful text in terms of certain rhetorical elements. In terms of strengths, I use descriptive language well to compliment the overall essay. The analysis also has a personal touch to it, which I believe adds a little extra flair to it. My paper seems to be rather repetitive in terms of the word board. I think my rhetorical analysis could be structured better and present separate ideas more clearly. The reader should focus on certain aspects of the paper as they examine it and read through it. The beginning and the end of the paper are both a short story line, in that they show the longboard in action and give the reader a feeling for what they are about to read/have just read. Another focal point for the reader to examine would be the actual description of each rhetorical element, and how well I express these subjects.