Alex Sherman Ms Weaver Rhetoric 101 15 November 2013 Among The Rest I hope the reader gains understanding

g as to who I am as a literate individual. I believe every literate individual to be unique, and I hope to prove myself to be one of a kind through my upbringing and social life. I also intend for the reader to understand that I have not fully comprehended my literary identity. I am, like most everything around us, changing at this very moment. My strengths in this paper mostly revolve around being personal. I believe the order of my paper is helpful since it is chronological. I actually enjoyed writing this paper, and I hope that enjoyment was translated into quality through my writing. I believe my paper is weak in terms of sentence structure, and comma usage. There are very many complex and compound sentences, and very few simple sentences. I would like the reader to focus on my thesis, my comma usage, and my overall grammar. If you cannot find my thesis, (Hint: it isnt in the introduction paragraph) please let me know.