Plot - Retribution

Kyle Whitton Mitchell Hall Jonathan Riley

Plotline

Our plot revolves around the routine of what first seems an average person at first with a simple daily routine such as coming off the train, reading the paper, and living in a middle class house. He is revealed to have a dark side when we are shown the inside of his house with a wide list of his 'targets' who are people who have caused in trouble in his past with vocal flash backs. Pictures of random people with X's across their face are shown in a very quick camera pan until eventually it stops on a picture with no X around it at all where the main character stops and circles the person and begins laughing when the opening ends.

Location / Props / Costume

The train scenes will be filmed in both Becontree and Heathway situation. The house & room scenes will be filmed in Jonathan's house. The character will have a newspaper which will feature a custom made article on a man found dead which will be someone who our character killed Scissors to cut the articles Pen Just a suit for costume

Questions

In terms of plot line, do you believe there's anything that you feel needs to be changed in order to make this seem more of a thriller movie? Or does the opening sequence communicate its genre well enough?