Professional Documents
Culture Documents
This section is very IMPORTANT. As part of the evaluation of your application, you are required to attach a one page (please do not exceed the one page limit) of a clear and detailed description of your study objectives. Give your reasons for wanting to pursue them in the U.S. Describe the kind of program you expect to undertake and explain how the proposed field of study fits in with your educational background, your future objectives, and your future involvement in community development.
PARAGRAPH 2: Explain how the description of the plan above fits in with your previous training and your future objectives.
PARAGRAPH 3: Why you need to undertake these studies in the United States as opposed to Indonesia? PARAGRAPH 4: How would getting this scholarship help you when you return with community development or benefiting Indonesian society?
It is important in this section that you are not to request that you be placed at a particular University.
If you mention professors at a graduate school, mention something of substance that reveals you know and appreciate that person's work. Describe what you like most and what you would like to do as your research work if you are admitted.
PARAGRAPH 2: Explain how the description of the plan above in PARAGRAPH 1 fits in with your previous training and your future objectives What experience in your background will assure that you are ready to take coursework of this type.
PARAGRAPH 3: Why do you need to undertake these studies in the United States as opposed to Indonesia? Describe in detail about why you need to undertake your studies in the States, and cannot be just as easily completed at home It is better to make claim through contrast, telling what resources and opportunities you feel might be available to you in the States Talk not only about infrastructure issues (research libraries), but what impact being in a foreign culture might have, and how it will positively impact your future Do not make a general statement and tell how wonderful the university the U.S
PARAGRAPH 4: How would getting this scholarship help you when you return with community development or benefiting Indonesian society? What are your future plans after receiving this degree? Be specific with your career goals.
Explain how your degree and knowledge in the field will benefit the community or society at large. Mention any social/community activities that you might be involved in upon your return Do not show self-interest and self-achievement in career
Dos
Give yourself plenty of time to write and edit. Read the question carefully. Write the length of essay they ask for. As much research on the university as you can. Accentuate your positive qualities. Mention your positive achievements as they apply to your graduate admission.
Dos
Mention your work experience, or volunteer work that you may have done or extra-curricular activities if they relate to your field. Be definite in your application. Make sure your essay is well-organized and everything is linked with continuity and focus. Check your grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization carefully. Ask as many others as possible to proofread your work for writing stylegrammar, spelling, etc. Do multiple drafts and edits
Donts
Flatter the university. Be phony or dishonest about yourself. Use empty, vague, overly-used words like meaningful, beautiful, challenging, rewarding, etc. Use overly common phrases and nonspecific information. Repeat information from the application unless you use it to illustrate a point. Try to be funnyhumor can backfire.
Donts
Use statements like Ive always wanted to be a . . . or other overly common phrases. Make excuses, but you can talk about the mistakes you've made as a learning experience. Use slang, technical jargon, or long quotations. Write in an arrogant manner; do make it clear that you are confident about your ability, but still eager to learn what the program has to offer. Wait till the last minute before the deadline for writing the study objective.
Useful Links
U.S. UNIVERSITIES DIRECTORY
College Navigator ( http://www.nces.ed.gov/ipeds/cool/ )
EducationUSA ( http://www.educationusa.state.gov/ ) If You Want to Study in the United States. ( http://www.educationusa.state.gov/home/publications ) Hobsons U.S. Education Guides ( http://www.useduguides.com/ ) International Education Service ( http://www.ies-ed.com ) Peterson's Guide for International Students ( http://www.petersons.com/college_home.asp?path=ug.home&CMS MemberType=ints ) Study Abroad.com ( http://www.studyabroad.com/ )
Useful Links
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
All About the Graduate Admissions Essay. ( http://gradschool.about.com/od/essaywriting/All_About_the_Graduat e_Admissions_Essay.htm )
Good Luck!
If you plan ahead and take the time to carefully express what the application asks for, your chances for a Fulbright interview are much better.