THE GUIDELINE FOR PEER COMMENTS 1) What do you like best about the paragraph?

2) Is the format (title, indenting, double spacing, margin) correct? 3) Is there a clear topic sentence? Does it have controlling idea? 4) Is the main idea clear? Does the writer need to add more details to explain it? ... 5) Is there a concluding sentence? Does it begin with an appropriate end of paragraph signal? 6) Are there any unclear sentences? Can the learner suggest a way to improve them? 7) Are there any errors in grammar and mechanics (spelling, punctuation, and capitalization)?

Sources: Oshima, A. & Hogue, A.. 1999. Writing academic English (3rd ed.). New York, NY: Adison-Wesley Longman.

The Internet is a global system of interconnected computer networks that use the standard Internet protocol suite (often called TCP/IP, although not all applications use TCP) to serve billions of users worldwide. It is a network of networks that consists of millions of private, public, academic, business, and government networks, of local to global scope, that are linked by a broad array of electronic, wireless and optical networking technologies. The Internet carries an extensive range of information resources and services, such as the inter-linked hypertext documents of the World Wide Web (WWW) and the infrastructure to support email.

Internet Internet is one of global system of interconnected computer networks that use the standard internet protocol suite (often called TCP/IP, although not all applications use TCP) to serve billions of users in worldwide. It is a network that consists of millions of private, public, academic, business, and government networks, of local to global scope linked by a broad array of wireless and optical networking technologies. Some people assume that the internet has a position impact on students by providing a variety resources of their studies. Internet will bring some bad effects in students such as internet addicts and the reliance too much on internet related to their homework. Firstly, Students will become internet addicts if they spend more and more time on playing computer games or just surfing the net without any particular reasons. The time that used to study has reduced. Moreover , most of them go to the extreme, become serious internet addicts and refuse to go to school as they cant escape from internet traps. Secondly, Students will get reliance too much on internet related to their homework. Theyll say thanks to internet because they can obtain the information they need with a great way by simply clicking the button. However this great accessibility to any kind of information will be abused. In fact when students are given an assignment by teachers, many of them do is just go on the websites or the blogs where they can get the information. It will be easy for them to download, copy and paste it without looking the material throughly later. They use or claim this as their own mind. In Conclusion, Internet is clear that has serious bad effects on students. For one thing, Students are so easy to become addicted to internet, additionally they will do their homework not with their own efforts but take from internet resources, Hopefully, Students should use internet with great cautions to prevent bad effects.