AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL NARRATIVE

PEER REVISION FORM

Author: _______________________________

Peer Reviser: __________________________

1. Did the story make sense to you? Y N

2. Did the author use dialogue in the story? Y N
3. Is the story divided into logical paragraphs? Y N
4. Find one place in the paper where the author could add more description. Explain below.
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5. Did the author clearly identify the lesson he/she learned. If yes, what was the lesson.

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6. Make editing changes to the paper in a different color ink.

7. Refer to the rubric on the back of this page and fill out the following chart.

Categories the author does well Categories that need another look

FOR THE AUTHOR:

What changes did you make between your rough and final drafts? Briefly explain your changes below.
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