Designed for Reading and Writing EFL course Target levels intermediate to advance EFL learners in a Preparatory Course Program in Arar, Saudi Arabia
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Introduction: Historically literature in an L2 learning environment was actually the primary focus of the grammar translation approach (Brown, 2007, p.16). Literatures concerning religious or philosophical books were taught base reason for learning another language. However, the main method of learning in this classical method was to translate literature from the target language to the L1 language. Grammar was also explained from in the native language (Lightbrown & Spada, 2006, p. 112). Brown (2007) explains that there was a period of time he describes as the changing winds and shifting sands (p.18). Changing winds and shifting sands describe every quarter century a new method would come about such as the Audiolingual Method. Audiolingual Method (ALM) concentrates on conditioning drills such as mimicry drills. The main similarity between grammar translation and audiolingual method is the effort of memorization that has to be used for both (p 21). On the other hand, literature was the primary focus of grammar translation in the past, whereas dialogue is the main focus of ALM. Through time the trends changed and Grammar translation arose again with less emphasis on literature. Even as various methods and approaches came through the changing winds and shifting sands in the process literature became neglected even in the current trend of integrated pedagogy for ESL/EFL. Gajdusek (2008) points this out the importance of literature for L2 learners. Gajdusek shows that literature should be a valuable tool for teachers since it can open more doors for integrative learning. She not only explains the importance of literature in ESL learning she describes vividly how it can be use in an ESL classroom effectively by using four step approach to literary text. To apply the four Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 3 step approach, Joseph Conrads short story The Secret Share will be explored.
Theme and Rationale: The intention of using the text the Secret Sharer is to show the richness of classic English literature and that such writings are not just confined to native English writers. Joseph Conrad is evidence that non-native speakers can write phenomenal work in their L2. The structure for the outline is arranged for one-hour classrooms. The theme of the short story covers the personal struggles of a novice ship captain. He is confronted with management issues on his boat, such as sailors questioning his judgment to make decisions for his crew. Because he is new to his own ship, he is also battling with feelings of isolation. This is where he begins to question who he truly is and whether or not he can meet the demands of a ship's captain. He finds a fugitive on his ship whom he sympathizes with, and hides the fugitive in his cabin. The twist is the captain is harboring a murder of another sailor from a different ship. There is a struggle between ethics and circumstance once the captain plots to help the fugitive escape. The book should be used for High Intermediate to Advanced students. The Secret Sharer is extremely challenging due to the vocabulary, context and symbolism within the story. It should also be pointed out that the idea of the L2 activities is not to cover the deepness of literary content equivalent to a native speaking class (Hedgecock & Ferris, 2009, p. 244). Instead, the intention is to build activities that can provoke a genuine interaction between the L2 learner and the short story. The activities will provide opportunities for students to share their own personal experiences and opinions in Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 4 connection to the story. Because this story is dealing with making hard decisions and moral dilemmas, it will most likely lead to multiple interpretations. This may be in connection to cultural differences. It is possible for students who come from a collectivist background may sympathize with the captain of the ship, whereas individualist may hold a different view. Such differences could lead into further exploration concerning deeper cultural issues (p.248). Gajduseks (2008) four level sequence which are pre-reading activities, factual in-class work, analysis, and extending activities should aim to achieve the following in connection to The Secret Sharer. Pre-Reading Activities: Day 1 (60 minutes) Instead of focusing on extensive previewing, the short story will focus on vocabulary to incite schema activation (Hedgecock & Ferris, 2009, p. 262). The activities will try to instigate guessing and discussion among the students. A short overview will be given about Joseph Conrad and who he is to English literature and a brief overview of famous stories he has written outside of The Secret Sharer. While the students will eventually be given a vocabulary list this will not happen with all potentially problematic vocabulary in the pre-reading activities. Word meaning and context would be broke down through cloze and clue dialogues. Folse (2006), points out that cloze exercise not only help L2 learners retain words but help them to anticipate words in text (p. 275). 1. Present a) Teacher will present a brief background history about the author Joseph Conrad. Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 5 b) T will open dialogue concerning travel in the past by ship and modern day travel, as well as its pros and cons. Emphasis on the duration of time traveling from place to place and the dangers of traveling by ship will also be discussed. 2. Vocabulary a) T will write a short list of vocabulary words on the board that are exclusive to the text. The students will also have the vocabulary words along with pictures to understand the vocabulary words for the ship on a handout sheet. Using a simple vocabulary lists can yield better vocabulary retention than relying on a list with more information (Folse, 2004, p. 3). b) The teacher will have the class break up in groups to practice cloze exercises from various sentences within the Secret Sharer similar to the pattern Gadjusek (1988) has presented. Example: a hand bell tinkled urgently under the __________________-deck. (Answer: poop) 3. Discussion a) T will incite discussion concerning the time ships were a famous means of travel and if it would be something they would have enjoyed or not. b) T will have the students brainstorm different problems that can potentially happen while traveling on a ship (Hedgcock & Ferris, 2009, p.277). The words will be written on the board as the students Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 6 share their ideas. Example: S, A ship could get shipwrecked. T will write shipwrecked on the board. c) T will present a dialogue from the text on the board then ask the students. To predict what it what is happening in the dialogue in groups. Example: I suppose your captain's turned in?' 'I am sure he is not,' I said. He seemed to struggle with himself, for I heard something like the low, bitter murmur of doubt. 'What's the good?' His next words came out with a hesitating effort. 'Look here, my man. Could you call him out quietly? (Conrad, 2011, p.6). The teacher will ask the students the possible reason of this dialogue. 4. Homework a) Read the text The Secret Sharer. It really helps students assume responsibility for in-class work if they have been given some fairly factual questions to answer (on paper) during a second, at-home reading and before they come to class (Gadjusek, 1988, p.238). Factual In-Class Work: Day 2 (60 minutes) Since the students read the text for homework, the teacher will insure the text is Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 7 fully comprehended by reading the reading aloud, answering specific questions concerning characters in the text, the plot of the story, and purpose. During the reading it will be a good opportunity to ask questions while the students are working through the text using Guide-o-Rama (Hedgcock & Ferris, 2009, p.173). This could be a powerful way for students to get clarification on any assumptions they might have had about the reading as well as provide meaningful dialogue about the text.
1. Point of View a) Teacher will insure they did their homework by asking questions concerning who is telling the story. Then the teacher will ask if the person tell the story is telling the story in first person, omniscient third person or limited third person narrator. T will provide examples through demonstrations (Gadjusek, 1988, p.239). 2. Characters a) T will question who is the main character of the story and how is he represented in the story. b) Questions will be asked to create discussions about the characters in the short story. Example: Who escaped from the Sephora? (Answer: Legatt). 3. Setting, Time, Place a) Teacher will explain the time as for as what was happening as a Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 8 historical context when The Secret Sharer was written. When necessary, the teacher may need to step in as cultural informant and provide a very brief comment (Gadjusek, 1988, p.242). b) T will ask questions to the possible route the ship was taking and what area was Legatt found. c) A review concern the parts of the ship will be done on an overhead along with vocabulary worksheets with pictures. 4. Action a) Through timelines of the story the T will ask students to identify events in a chronological sequence (Gadjusek, 1988, p.244). The students should be able to identify when the Captain starts to feel confident based on his decisions he is making with Legatt. 5. Homework a) Students will be given a worksheet assignment that will deal with Identifying vocabulary words through a matching exercise (see appendix). b) The Secret Sharer was written as if the captain was reading his journal. The students will write one journal entry concerning qualities of a leader.
Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 9 Analysis: Day 3 (60 minutes) At this point the students should have the ability to comprehend the story in its entirety. Having established the facts, students can now begin to ask why and to develop their own attitudes toward the characters, values, and situations of the story, in short, to move beyond information to involvement an experience (Gadjusek, 1988, p.244). This is where students should be able to identify the plot, conflict, and climax (p.246). The teacher will also play the audiobook version of the book to highlight certain parts of the book. 1) Review of vocabulary: The teacher will have a part of the short story on an overhead. Some of the vocabulary words they had in prior lesson will be highlighted. The students will be asked to identify and define them in context. 2) Discussion: a) Stages T will ask the students how the author describes the captains feelings when he first boarded the ship. In connection to the question, the students will also be asked about their own experiences embarking on new challenges. Other questions for discussion: How does the author use symbolism to describe the captains feelings? What does the captain mean by feeling like he is the odd man out? What is the name of the nearby ship described to the main officers of the Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 10 ship and how is it significant?
When the captain discovers a rope ladder over the edge of the ship where are the rest of the ship crew? What conversation takes place between Leggatt and the captain when they first meet? How does Leggatt describe is incident on the Saphora? What efforts does the captain take to hide Leggatt and was he justified in doing so? The skipper of the Sephora enters the ship looking for Leggatt, how does the captain handle the situation? Homework: The students will have to answer the following questions in an essay for using at least 40 words for each question. 1. What plan do Legatt and the captain make for Legatts escape? 2. What does the captain give to Legatt as they part ways? What is the significance of the item? 3. The author gives the reader one example of the captains determination and ability to stand his ground when making a decision. What is it?
Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 11 Extending Activities: The purpose of extending activities is to go beyond the text. Some activities that can be helpful to EFL students are word recognition and role-playing. Word recognition is important because many EFL students' dont have a lot of access to spoken English language. Role-playing will allow the students to practice speaking using proper pronunciation and intonation. The extended activities may take longer than a day because it requires preparation from the students for the role-playing activity. In-Class: 1) Writing script for role play a) Students will work in-group to create a scripted dialogue between the captain and Leggatt. They will have to choose one of the three incidents. -The captain meeting Leggatt for the first time. -The captain and Leggatt planning the escape. -The conversation between the captain and Leggatt. b) The students will act out the scripts through role playing. 2) Word recognition a) T will play the audiobook version of The Secret Sharer. b) The students will be given a worksheet with words that have a similar sound. Example: Nay/ May Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 12 The students will have to choose the right word. This maybe simple to some students, but the pace of the reader may difficult even a intermediate student to catch in the first listening. Conclusion: Using literature in an EFL/ESL classroom clearly increases the L2 learners knowledge of various language features. Outside of reading comprehension, integrated language skills can also be developed through using literature as shown in this module. Unlike past methods such as Grammar Translation, the proper use of literature recognizes what reading can bring to the EFL/ESL classroom. According to Gadjusek (1988), Reading is an active, two-way process of matching incoming data with our existing knowledge, not only of language system, but of the world (p. 231). Gadjuseks four-level sequence provides a great format to ensure that literature can be used practically.
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Appendix Vocabulary Worksheet Pre-Reading Practice Recognize the words on and around ships. Study the following definitions and try to find corresponding pictures or part(s) of the pictures. foreyards - the lowest yards on the foremast (the mast nearest the bow, or front, of a ship), from which the foresail is set. (A "yard" is a slender rod or spar, tapering toward the ends and fastened at right angles across a mast to support a sail.) "She's round" - the ship has passed around the land and is clear of danger. the poop - on sailing ships, a raised deck at the stern, sometimes forming the roof of a cabin. taffrail - the rail around the stern of a ship. (The "stern" is the back end of a ship.) mainyard - the lowest yard on the mainmast (the principal mast of a vessel),from which the mainsail is set. (A "yard" is a slender rod or spar, tapering toward the ends and fastened at right angles across a mast to support a sail.) Sunda Straits - straits running between a group of islands in the Malay Archipelago, consisting of two smaller groups; Greater Sunda Islands (Sumatra, Java, Borneo, Sulawesi, and small nearby islands) and Lesser Sunda Islands (Bali and islands stretching east through Timor). unplayful cub - the second mate; a "cub" is an inexperienced, awkward youth. Cochin-China - historic region and former French colony in Southeast Indochina; the southern part of Vietnam. Koh-ring - the prefix "Koh" connotes an island; the island of Koh-ring is Conrad's creation. Cambodge - Cambodian. campstool - a lightweight, folding stool. bo's'n - phonetic spelling of "boatswain," a ship's warrant officer or petty officer in charge of the deck crew, the rigging, anchors, boats, and so on. Bullock - a young bull. Cain - in the Bible, the oldest son of Adam and Eve; he killed his brother Abel. halter - hangman's noose. Java Head - the westernmost point of Java, a large island of Indonesia, southeast of Sumatra. gimbals - a pair of rings pivoted on axes at right angles to each other so that one is free to swing within the other; a ship's compass, pelorus, and so on, will remain horizontal at all times when suspended in gimbals. mizzen - the mast that is third from the bow of a ship with three or more masts. (The "bow" is the front part of a ship.) Gulf of Siam - "Siam" is the old name of Thailand; the Gulf of Siam is the arm of the South China Sea, between the Malay and Indochinese peninsulas. cuddy - the cook's galley on a small ship. Cardiff - seaport in Southeast Wales, on the Bristol Channel; capital of Wales and county seat of South Glamorgan. Akenyele Jones-Short Story Module Page 14 Malay Archipelago - large group of islands between Southeast Asia and Australia, including Indonesia, the Philippines, and sometimes New Guinea. beyond my ken - beyond my range of knowledge. binnacle - the upright, cylindrical stand holding a ship's compass, usually located near the helm. Conway boy - sailor who trained on the British battleship Conway. Norfolk - county of East England, on the North Sea. ratlines - any of the small, relatively thin pieces of tarred rope that join the shrouds of a ship and serve as the steps of a ladder for climbing the rigging. "Shrouds" are sets of ropes or wires stretched from a ship's side to a masthead to offset lateral strain on the mast. islet - a little island block houses - small easily defended buildings for protection from enemy fire shore - the land bordering a usually large body of water brusque - blunt in manner or speech often to the point of ungracious harshness murmurs - a half-suppressed or muttered complaint nay - no
Pre-Reading Exercise Chose the correct word for the blank using the vocabulary reference sheet.
1) a hand bell tinkled urgently under the _______________-deck.
2) To the left a group of barren ______________, suggesting ruins of the stonewalls.
3) I inquired, in hardy audible ________________, we used, after he had told me something more of the proceedings on the Sephora on the bad weather was over.
4) The _________________ran round with a great noise amidst cheery cries.
5) For some reason he too wished to look at the lighthouse, but his back was toward the far ____________ and the waves were important.
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A) Islet
B)Cuddy C)Campstool D)Bullock E)Mizzen E) Shore
F)Halter G) Poop H) Java Head E)Gimbals
Match the words above with the proper definition.
1) _____the mast that is third from the bow of a ship with three or more masts. (The "bow" is the front part of a ship.) 2)_______he cook's galley on a small ship.
3)______ on sailing ships, a raised deck at the stern, sometimes forming the roof of a cabin.
4)________ a lightweight, folding stool.
5)_______ the upright, cylindrical stand holding a ship's compass, usually located near the helm.
6)________ a little island
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