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I was Homeschooled for most of my childhood until Sophomore year when I decided to
go into public school. I enjoyed staying at home because I could spend more time with my
family. While I was Homeschooled I didnt do much writing. I wasnt very good at putting my
thoughts onto a piece of paper. I would write sometimes but I wasnt very good at it because i
wasnt able to get my point across. I also had bad handwriting so I didnt enjoy writing because
it was hard for me to have good penmanship. My spelling wasnt that great either so I was
always trying to improve at spelling and not worrying about being good at writing. I enjoyed
math and science a lot. I feel like with it being closed ended I could just memorize the steps and
then I would get the problem right. I was much better at doing hands on projects.
When I went into high school I didnt know what to expect, therefore I went into all
academic classes. My last class of the day was English II I was dreading it, but when i met you
Ms. Deal, I felt a lot better. You were really nice and that really helped myself me become more
comfortable and have a better outlook on the class. I started off doing well on the reading and
vocabulary quizzes because it was all memorization, however I did struggle on the writing. Our
writing assignments were done in class which didnt help me. I think I might of performed better
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the most that I could. Because of this I made a lot of grammatical mistakes which I knew would
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though I didnt get a good grade I feel like it was good for me to receive that feedback. This gave
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me a good understanding of what I needed to improve on and gave me hope that I would be able
to do better next time. I took the criticism as a way to help me to improve. I wasnt mad at the
teacher you because I knew my paper wasnt the best. Our teacher told us that people who got
under a certain grade would have a chance to go to a writing tutor and would be able to rewrite
their paper. I was excited to hear this because I had a chance to better my grade. I went to the
tutoring and got some good advice from the people there and realized that a lot of my mistakes
were easy fixes. The tutors showed me that I could improve my sentence structure to make my
papers flow better. I also had many repeating sentences and misspelled words. After I went to the
tutoring and I began to rewrite my paper I took a lot more time writing it. I thought about what
the tutors said and I corrected myself while I was writing it.
I finished writing my paper and turned it in. This time I felt much better about the paper
that i had fixed. I had more time to write and I was very confident that my grade would improve.
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When I got my second grade I saw that you gave me an 85%. I was very proud of myself for
improving so much. This experience increased my interest in my English classes from then on. I
felt like I could become a decent writer in the long run. I improved a lot throughout that class and
ended up eventually taking English Honors my Senior year.